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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #1845 on: August 26, 2011, 07:56:48 PM »
Eshen grinned at Al's imitations of her, but jumped as suddenly, Al vanished.  But no....it was some kind of android.  "Wow," she said, and mentally noted that.  Androids probably had access to lots of information, and that could...

<<Eshen,>> Sydney suddenly said.  <<Drink.  Enjoy yourself.  I'm not the only thing in the universe.>>

<<You're the only reason I'm here,>> Eshen said stubbornly.  <<I might as well focus.>>

When one of the Yeerks spoke to her, Eshen raised her eyebrows at the lack of...formality.  "May the Kandrona shine and strengthen you and all that bull," she mused.  "I like it."  She smirked for a second, but it faded as someone else walked into the bar.  Here to kill her.  No.  Paranoia.  Ignore it.
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #1846 on: August 26, 2011, 08:18:19 PM »
Terenia winces when Reven's face appears on screen. <<Well, here goes nothing,>> she says to Mike, wishing it were him -the person whose memories she had immediate access to - that she had to imitate rather than Corliss.

"Sorry, mate," she says, rubbing the back of Mike's neck and cringing at the floor. She does what she can to imitate Mike's accent completely, trying to keep her own Midwestern lilt out of the mix. "We're, uh, still at the bar. Been trying to leave for awhile now, but..." she shrugs helplessly. "This bloody place can't seem to let us go. I, uh, listen, Rev. I reckon we can leave pretty much immediately. The Andalite girl and, uh, Ossanlin need to talk to you first, though."

<<Holy hell this is hard. How the hell do Yeerks do this all the time? Damn.>> She tries to still Mike's shaking hands.



Efaen waits, standing nearly perfectly still. Her impatience is only evidenced by the slight shifting from one back hoof to the other.


Zorish laughs a little, his sullen expression fading slightly. "Yeah, well. A place like this hardly requires the usual formalities, don't you think?" The corner of Tamora's lips twitch.

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #1847 on: August 26, 2011, 08:51:02 PM »
"First the lot of you won't stop calling me, then Myitt comes back with no word of when you're going to leave, and now you've been gone for two weeks!" Reven cries.  "That bar isn't a vacation spot and you are not on leave, do you understand me?"  He huffs and runs a hand through his messy mop of red hair.  "What does Ossanlin want?  I've already told Terenia and Efaen all they needed to hear from me, I'll address the War-Prince."



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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #1848 on: August 26, 2011, 09:12:44 PM »
"Yeah, alright, then," Terenia says, more than happy to let someone else speak. She glances back towards where Ossanlin and Efaen are standing. "All yours," she says, moving to the side to allow the War-Prince to take charge of the conversation.

<<He can totally tell that I'm not Corliss,>> Terenia says nervously, watching with wide eyes.

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #1849 on: August 26, 2011, 09:38:55 PM »
<<You know what? I'm not feeling eager to talk to the big boss if he's not in a good mood. Unless that only extends to Corliss for wasting time.>> Derrel said. Though obviously when he originally tried to get Efaen to leave with them, he thought she'd just let Terenia back into her head and they would leave. Not that she'd refuse and make sure she's treated like a person instead of Terenia's property. <<And what if he finds out Terenia's been using Mike? What if he asks me something that causes me to have to tell him. I learned not to keep secrets from the big boss for lesser bosses the day I saw a guy beaten to death with a crobar in front of everyone for doing something behind the big boss' back.>>


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #1850 on: August 26, 2011, 09:48:30 PM »
Artemis appeared as though she were prepared to say something, but she became unconscious. Vogefac caught her body, barely missing his claws.

"Artemis? Artemis? Can you hear me?"

Vogefac growled under his breath. Just because it was frustrating. He found the nearest table and placed her on it.

"Artemis, wake up. You are unconscious...", he turned to grab a s.e.n.s.o.r. To see if a small dosage of a familiar drug would help, but found himself utterly helpless in an Analite ship with no familiar technology. He sat down and waited for Artemis to come to as he thought.:.

What did that human female mean about Reptilinod being absent on her ship? Of course thery were; the Reptilinod were not part of the Alliance. How COULD they be on an Astrofleet ship?...


Catie smiled back at Ewa, "Why thank you. I need a little adventure. I've been cooped up in a med bay for 4 years of Astrofleet service. If this wasn't shore leave, I'm sure my adventures was get me twice the promotions in the same time it took me to become a Lieutenant."

She thought for a moment. She hadn't been on any adventures yet...maybe Ewa would just go with it.

"Well, I came down with an injured man our doctor fixed up. But he wasn't part of our crew or anything. And I didn't come with anyone but him...well, now he's hanging out with someone else so I thought I'd go exploring while I searched for you and Van. Oh, but no I don't expect them back that soon...galaxy-shattering news and all, plus a major tech refit for the Urtahn. but I can't wait until it does get back. At least to try out the new transporter I've heard so many rumors about.." she trailed off there.
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #1851 on: August 27, 2011, 11:39:43 AM »
It sounds more like being stranded than getting shore leave, Ewa thought.  Ogreon had not seemed the type of person to abandon one of his own on a strange planet with no idea when he could come back for her.  But if Catie was new she could be making this up on the fly.... So which is it?  A new insert scrambling for a backstory, or a real character who did something to get herself marooned?  Ewa lit on a sudden idea.  Maybe she's more of a deserter--got tired of being cooped up, like she said, and decided to take matters into her own hands.

"I saw that man when he first arrived here.  Glad to hear you guys managed to patch him up.  I was the most useless person there."  Ewa quirked her lips.  "What's so interesting about this new transporter?  Here, why don't you come in and we can sit down."  She walked back up the ramp, motioning for Catie to follow her into the sitting room with its white and blue furniture and cushions.
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #1852 on: August 27, 2011, 03:27:59 PM »
Al gave a cool smile and shrugged at Zorish, "Even if you're not gonna get excited about the whole 'long dead sister' thing, you could always just do what I do and take it as an excuse for having some fun." He smirked, "Am I gonna have to teach all you Yeerks how to enjoy yourselves? Besides," he shrugged and gave a look of innocence, "if your host really wants to speak with her, how much harm could it do?"

Al laughed in response to Keshin, "Y'know, I think Salem might take offense to that assessment of his... business, or whatever he wants to call it, but yeah, that's pretty accurate. As for the new crowd..." he laughed again, "I might not be the best person to ask about that kind of thing. Your business isn't really something I'm used to dealing with. There are some interesting characters, but I'd have no idea how to tell if there are potential... like, clients, or whatever it is you hunty-types call them." He shrugged apologetically.

He turned to the Andalite and nodded, "Yeah, I agree, better safe than sorry." He shook Jade's and smiled, "Pleasure to meet you. Did you two want to try the magical healing thing first, or should I grab some medical supplies now just in case?"

He smiled at Eshen, "Yeah, I get that reaction a lot. Actually, you're one of the less crazy ones about it. I get stuff thrown at me all the time." He shrugged, "Apparently we robots are something of a novelty in this area. Once the novelty wears off, though, we're really not much different from you squishy organic things." He laughed and gave a grin that said he was only joking.

He looked from Eshen to Zorish, "'May the Kandrona shine and strenthen you' is a greeting of yours?" He grinned, "I like it. I might have to start using that. Think it'd catch on with non-Yeerks?"



Salem nodded and watched as the shape... it could represent Mar, he supposed, in a fuzzy, surreal kind of way he wasn't really used to seeing yet... was manipulated by some of the tendrils. He opened his eyes for a moment and noted Mar actually floating off the ground. Amazing how unsurprised he was by that.

He nodded, "Alright, so I just need to move these things and pick myself up. You make it look so easy, Highest."

He closed his eyes again- this new world, these new sensations... they'd still been there with his eyes open, he realized with a start. It was just that closing his eyes allowed him to block out the distraction of sight. That was probably Mar's reasoning behind that. He wondered if he'd be able to feel this without Mar's help... or if he'd be able to stop feeling it. He'd have to ask the Highest about it.

He picked one tendril and concentrated on it, willing it to slow and to stop. It slowed, but in only a moment he lost it, and it went back to doing its own thing. He tried again, and managed to hold one in check for a few moments before again losing it. He tried once more, trying to really want the tendril to behave as he willed. Success, it seemed. It slowed and stopped, and seemed, with some hesitation, to move back and forth where he wanted it to. He experimented with waving it slightly, afraid to make big movements lest he lose it again. He tried to get it to bend, willing it to as if it were his own limb. To his surprise, it did. Sort of. It curled around itself, flexing and undulating slightly. Not quite like the elbow he'd been intending, but at least he'd managed to get it to do something.

Now to find himself... doing his best to keep control over the 'tendril,' he started to look around for the glowing shape... 'mana-based soul,' Mar had called it... that he had to pick up and move. With surprising difficulty, he managed to find it, a glowing shape in the dark... his mind was beginning to get used to seeing things this way- it almost seemed to have form now. So now all he had to do was wrap the tendril around it and lift it into the air. Easy enough, right?

The tendril! He'd been distracted enough by his thoughts about the 'light' that he'd lost track of it. Damn it! Trying to keep the light in sight, he grasped wildly for another tendril, and managed to bring it under his control... but nearly lost sight of the light as he did so. No! He reached wildly for the light with his mind, this time determined to keep a grip on the shape in the darkness as well... but he could feel that grip slipping. On impulse, he mentally tightened his control over the tendril, and swung it quickly towards the light...

And suddenly, he was thrown sideways, towards the wall of the ship. His eyes opened wide in surprise just in time to register Mar's receding face, and he had just enough time to think Yes! before his back smashed into the wall with a sickening Thud. A second later, he found himself lying, dazed, on the floor, all the air knocked from his lungs and a throbbing pain in the back of his skull. He coughed violently for a few moments and pressed his hands to the back of his head, lying face-down on the floor of the ship. Soon, the pain had died down a bit and he sat up, hand still pressed to the back of his head. His hair was now a wild mess, and he could see his hat tucked neatly under one of the shelves that he'd narrowly avoided hitting.

"That felt like progress," he said hoarsely to Mar with a weak smile.
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #1853 on: August 27, 2011, 03:42:44 PM »
<You may bring your supplies to my ship now, whether we use one thing first or not. Having everything possible at hand would be best. thank you.> Claxter said.


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #1854 on: August 27, 2011, 06:26:03 PM »
Jade nodded in agreement. "It would be best. Come let us not waste time. Show me this human named Silver." She said and followed Claxter along with Al to the odd creators ship.
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #1855 on: August 27, 2011, 06:31:08 PM »
Claxter trotted towards his ship, showing the direction of it to Al so he could go by his ship and bring supplies there. Unless he already had a few with him. He entered the ship, and saw Silver was unconscious. <I have returned with help, Vogefac.> He said. He put a hand to Silver's forehead to see if she felt too hot or cold.


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #1856 on: August 27, 2011, 08:34:07 PM »
~Ossanlin~

Ossanlin looks at Reven with his main eyes, raising an eyebrow.  <I do apologize for the disturbance Reven, it was not my intention to contact you.  I considered the matter closed, but my Warrior Efaen requested permission to continue seeking admission into your organization.  She wishes to discuss the matter with you.  I am merely an observer, present because Corliss felt uncomfortable contacting you without my presence.>

<<Also I needed to hear the conversation for myself as Efaen is not entirely trustworthy.>>  The last thought is in private through the comm only.
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #1857 on: August 28, 2011, 03:37:00 PM »
Eshen chuckled slightly at Zorish and Al's comments.  "I suppose you're right," she admitted to Zorish.  "This place is probably anything but formal, even from the little I've seen." 

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<<Crap,>> Sydney whispered, terrified.  <<I thought the meds...>>

<<You knew they weren't perfect,>> Eshen snapped, though she could still feel Sydney's fear...she was afraid too.  The one voice--cold and deadly--was the only one that was constantly there.  Sydney and Eshen both knew it, even when he didn't speak.  It called itself Eternity, and they knew whenever something happened, it was their fault.  Because they couldn't stop Eternity.

<<Stop it!>> Eshen snapped at Sydney.  <<We both know that's not right!  Eternity isn't real!  Not everything is our fault!  Stop!>>

That didn't help much, and Eshen realized that she had let her facial expressions slip.  Dammit.  She wiped the slightly horrified look off her face, stopped staring at nothing, and forced a smile.  "Sorry," she said.  When Al offered to help whoever was injured, she tapped a finger on the table.  Ignoring Sydney's twisted mind, which was telling her that of course she was leaving, he was only pretending to befriend her in the first place so he could betray her, she said, "Talk to you later, then.  Assuming you don't mind spending more time with us squishy organic things."  Eshen grinned back, matching his joking demeanor.  She had to keep that up as long as she could.
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #1858 on: August 28, 2011, 09:30:55 PM »
Illim sits back down in the unyielding titanium alloy copilot chair, as he watches Reven's face on the holoscreen. The young man looks anything but intimidating, though, despite his clear irritation with the situation.

<<You sure?>> Illim asks, taking a moment to leaf through the particular memory Derrel's thoughts have brought up. He gives an external wince at the violence and pushes the thought away. <<I really don't think the rebels are that type, though they do hold their cards close to their chest. I wouldn't mind meeting Reven, though.>>

He leans forward to get a better view of the redheaded man before realizing Reven can probably see him from this angle. Illim's immediate reaction, of course, is to raise his eyebrows and give an overly friendly grin before sitting back in the seat again.
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #1859 on: August 28, 2011, 09:57:06 PM »
Illim didn't seem too intimidated by the guy, so maybe Derrel was just getting too antsy. <<Well, I should probably try to talk to him anyway. I'm going to have to eventually. Why couldn't Corliss just leave without Efaen and pick her up later again?>>


Jocun had been silent for a bit, thinking and drinking. "Many individuals that probably should have been tried for war crimes died in the last battles against the Andalite Homeworld. The ones that survived may or may not have been punished, but either way they are dead. Now there are still crimes, as there always will be, and captured criminals are put to trial. There is still controversy regarding hosts, as I have said. Things are getting better for all species, and it is my hope that they continue to do so. Perhaps if I could find a member of the rebels, I could help them somehow. Not with information of the future, but surely there are other ways to help them along."
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