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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #60 on: August 13, 2008, 12:02:23 PM »
whens that next chapter up? i like long chapters in fics the story doesn't feel so short
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« Reply #61 on: August 13, 2008, 12:41:02 PM »
Ah, don't pressure the guy.  :)
It must be hard enough to think of new things for Ax to 'discover'. ;)
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« Reply #62 on: August 13, 2008, 04:14:52 PM »
Actually, I've known what I wanted to happen in the story before I ever started writing the beginning.  It's not coming up with new ideas that's time consuming, it's actually getting it all into Microsoft Word.  But the good news is that I'm nearing the end of this chapter (finally) and I hope to have it up soon.  I'm not going to give a specific timetable since I'm still not sure exactly how long it'll take me but it should definitely be up within a week.  Be advised that it's going to be a looooooooooooooooon g chapter.  I wanted to split it in half actually, but it's kind of hard to do that with contiguous diary entries.
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« Reply #63 on: August 15, 2008, 06:57:05 PM »
No offense, but I can't see Marco doing that to Ax.

Don't get me wrong, the idea of Ax discovering human sexuality is hilarious, and even probable within the canon of the series.  He's an adolescent male, alone, with no women around...not far fetched at all, actually.  Not anything that Scholastic would ever publish, but it's an interesting story.

I had never thought about Ax having human sex, but I think there should have been a different beginning other than having Marco oscillate Ax.  Maybe Ax accidentally discovers Playboy TV and wants to find out more, or he morphs Rachel to experience being a female, goes to the mall, and finds a male who is attractive.  Who knows?  Slightly revolting beginning, hilarious concept, hope this gets finished!  I don't mind waiting a long time between installments (I read Megatokyo, I've gotten used to it) but not having it ever get finished would be a waste.  Keep up the good work!  10/10 for originality, 7/10 for execution and 11/10 for shock value.  28/30 = A-.  I love it!
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« Reply #64 on: August 15, 2008, 10:48:58 PM »
Thanks, I'm glad you like it.  I was originally playing around with how Ax would find out and at first I was going to use the "found the playboy channel" idea, but it just seemed like an overused and simple explanation.  I wanted to have something different happen for a change, so I decided to have one of the Animorphs bring it up.  And who better than the girlfriendless Marco to get things rolling (although Tobias asking Ax to morph into Rachel was another possibility).  It was no secret that Marco liked Rachel and there was definitely something between the two, but Marco could never act on it.  That's why he decided to act on it with Ax, and hilarity ensued...



And in other news:  THE NEXT CHAPTER IS FINALLY UP!  Now you'll finally all get see why this story is called Ax the Prostitute.  But beware.  As I have mentioned numerous times it is loooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooo oooooong.  So be ready to split it in half or in quarters or into whatever you want.  Or, you could just go crazy and read the whole thing in one shot.  It's really up to you.
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #65 on: August 17, 2008, 03:06:25 PM »
So Ax is now a $10 **** and is planning on getting gang banged in the next chapter? Ugh, no offense to you, but I'll be avoiding this story from now on. I'm not asking you to stop or anything, but this story is just not my thing.  Sorry. :-\
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« Reply #66 on: August 17, 2008, 03:44:03 PM »
Alright, that's cool with me.  I know that some people don't like stories like this and I knew that way before I even started.  But I just have one question.  What exactly made you want to stop?  You made it through the other chapters...
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« Reply #67 on: August 17, 2008, 03:46:45 PM »
I think this chapter is way more...extreme than the previous ones?  Not really sure how to put it.

As for me, I'm conflicted.  Can't decide whether I like this fic or hate it. xD
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« Reply #68 on: August 17, 2008, 05:52:11 PM »
not bad for 10 dollars lol jk, i actually think this was bringing it back to what i expected, i thought it was pretty funny how he thought that people actually cared about their "profressional maters" experiences and how their services would be.  Its still pretty graphic though, and i cant even imagine what the next one would be like
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #69 on: August 17, 2008, 07:28:17 PM »
When I read the words 'foliage adjusters', I nearly fell out of my chair.
CRAZY, but well-done. :)

Sheesh, I need to get my brain out of the septic tank! ::)
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #70 on: August 17, 2008, 08:23:46 PM »
Mirienne:  It doesn't really seem more extreme than any of the previous chapters to me really since it actually moves along the story quite a bit instead of just having a bunch of descriptions about different sexual things (like the second chapter).  And it doesn't matter to me whether you love it or hate it as long as you continue to read it.

Esplin 9466:  I know what you mean.  I was looking forward to getting the story back to progression as well, but there were just some things that had to be taken care of first in order for the story to make sense.  It is pretty graphic but when you're dealing with such a topic that's bound to happen.  I'm not sure how graphic the next chapters will be, but I don't think that they'll be getting much worse really.

Estelore: Thanks, I'm glad your enjoying yourself.
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« Reply #71 on: August 18, 2008, 02:43:33 PM »
Quote from: musicman88 on August 17, 2008, 08:23:46 PM
Mirienne:  It doesn't really seem more extreme than any of the previous chapters to me really since it actually moves along the story quite a bit instead of just having a bunch of descriptions about different sexual things (like the second chapter).  And it doesn't matter to me whether you love it or hate it as long as you continue to read it.

Esplin 9466:  I know what you mean.  I was looking forward to getting the story back to progression as well, but there were just some things that had to be taken care of first in order for the story to make sense.  It is pretty graphic but when you're dealing with such a topic that's bound to happen.  I'm not sure how graphic the next chapters will be, but I don't think that they'll be getting much worse really.

Estelore: Thanks, I'm glad your enjoying yourself.


well i can deal with that then, idk what to exactly say but i think this fic should be successful
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #72 on: August 18, 2008, 02:53:14 PM »
I've gotten over the feeling of weirdness that I felt at first. I'm glad this chapter progressed the story along, as that should be important.

I wonder what he'll think about having multiple guys doing him? I wonder how surprised he'd be if all of them wanted to do it at the same time?

I have had this vision of Tobias and Marco doing him while he's in Rachel morph, Rachel doing him while he's in Marco morph because he doesn't have a Tobias morph, Cassie doing him while he's in Jake morph, and Jake doing him while he's in Cassie morph. Ax lives erotically ever after...

I wonder if Ax will be hired by a pimp. I may have brought that up before, but I don't recall if that question was answered. And will he get some loose, skimpy clothes for his Rachel morph?

I'm enjoying this. Keep it up.
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #73 on: August 18, 2008, 03:06:37 PM »
Isn't anyone else disturbed by the fact that Ax is using Rachel's 13 year old body to pimp himself out? Where did all of Cassie's morals fly off to? Did they fall on deaf ears, or is Ax just above that?  :-\

Quote from: musicman88 on August 17, 2008, 03:44:03 PM
Alright, that's cool with me.  I know that some people don't like stories like this and I knew that way before I even started.  But I just have one question.  What exactly made you want to stop?  You made it through the other chapters...

The concept itself is hilarious to imagine when mentioned, which is what got me to start reading your fan fic, but the thing is that when it really comes down to it, I really don't need to know all the details, you know? I'm trying to think up of a good example of this, but I'm coming up blank. Basically it's like taking an idea too far, and too literally for it's own good.

Besides, the entire thing is written entirely way too much like porn (I'm not trying to offend you or anything, but that's just my opinion) and I'm too uncomfortable with characters from my favourite kids series written into something like that. *shrugs*
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« Reply #74 on: August 18, 2008, 03:11:48 PM »
some of the humor is that how ax has no idea how morally wrong what hes doing is, but i do understand exactly where you are coming from truth.
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