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Animorphs Section => Animorphs Fan Fiction & Art => Topic started by: musicman88 on July 20, 2008, 10:12:32 PM
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I know that everybody's been waiting for weeks for this story, and since I finished my other one it's time that I finally got around to starting this one. The title just about says it all. This is the tale of what happens when Ax realizes the pleasures of human sex. If you think he gets crazy around food just wait until he learns about sex.
Due to some members expressing their concerns about having the story posted here due to it's content I've decided just to post a link to the story on fanfiction.net. You can leave comments both here and on ff.net. I'll bump this topic every time I post a new chapter.
And now, for the link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4410668/1/
I've only posted a short prologue for now to give some basis to the story. I'll start writing the first chapter tomorrow and I hope to have it up soon. Open up your minds and enjoy!
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As bawdy as this sounds, it is a very interesting idea. I'll be certain to read it. :)
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y'know, i actually kinda like the idea... lolz... i can't wait for more...
eww Ax morphing human to have sex... would that be like, beastiality?.... lolz
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lol, sounds interesting. Just don't make me regret reading this musicman. ;)
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y'know, i actually kinda like the idea... lolz... i can't wait for more...
eww Ax morphing human to have sex... would that be like, beastiality?.... lolz
It's inter-species erotica! *has seen Clerks II far too many times*
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eww Ax morphing human to have sex... would that be like, beastiality?.... lolz
You know, I never really thought about that...
And I'm hoping to get the first chapter up by Friday, but no promises! If it's not on Friday than I'll try to get it up during the weekend sometime.
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I'll try to get it up during the weekend sometime.
thats what she said
this sounds interesting but im a little worried, im sure ill read it tho lol
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No offense, but the title sounds rather disturbing. :-\
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No offense, but the title sounds rather disturbing. :-\
No offense taken. Reaction thoroughly expected.
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As semi-promised, the first real chapter is up. Enjoy!
*braces himself for a broad array of comments*
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I read it. Out of morbid curiosity, I read it. It wasn't too bad. It was weird, though, the way it was done. Why doggie style? Why not the real way?
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I read it. Out of morbid curiosity, I read it. It wasn't too bad. It was weird, though, the way it was done. Why doggie style? Why not the real way?
Well, would you really want Ax looking straight at you and what was going on while asking a million different stupid questions while you were trying to just enjoy the sex?
And what exactly do you mean by it wasn't too bad? Are you talking about how good the actual story was or how disgusted you were feeling?
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.....eeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeew!!!!! :hide: :sign0069: :wow: :o
I'm sorry but tht was the most disturbing thing I've ever read. Everyone knows MArco had a thing for Rachel but.....OMG tht was wrong :explode:
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Not entirely sure why I read that, but...Um...Marco's a little sick...
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Marco getting Ax to morph into Rachel is definitely wrong in every way...Then again, that adds another interesting moral dimension to the story. I'm interested to read the consequences of this.
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*falls off chair, somewhere between inane laughter and nauseous gagging*
1. This is actually quite well-written, from a critical standpoint.
(In other words, THANK YOU for NOT making this a bloody Harlequin novel.)
2. *giggle SNORT!* >:D
3. *GASP* EUUUGHHH!!! *choke* :o
4. I could SO psychoanalyze this within an inch of its life, but I'll resist the urge to do so...for now. ;) ^-^
And now, something to disturb you all a bit:
What if Marco'd told Ax to morph CASSIE?!
*shriek!*
Anyway, good job! (I think?)
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Due to the fact that I am a Christian, part of me is thinking, :barf:
Interesting idea, but rather disturbing subject.
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I'm a Christian, and just about as devout as they come, but I STILL find this appallingly hilarious.
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Glad you liked it Estelore. I'm glad that someone finally got it... I think.
And thank you all for reading and posting your thoughts as well. Any sort of reaction is appreciated.
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Warning: Someday I might have difficulties in preventing myself from psychoanalyzing this thing. If that should occur, I suggest that you run.
Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter...I think...maybe...pro bably...oh, whatever. ::)
???
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well, Ax's point of view about sex in that fic made me fall on the floor laughing than anything else...
he's just too scientic at times...
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Poor Ax can't use the self-service pump...x3 Like I said in my ff review, it's kind of creepy on Marco's part (if Rachel found out I think she'd go nuclear!), but Ax has a good point...why the big taboo about "human mating" in general? ::) It's interesting to read about an alien perspective on sex.
And haha, Duff, "that's what she said"...xDXD
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So I read it, thinking that I'd probably regret it. And yes, I regret it.
I agree with blue22. That was so wrong, and very disturbing... why why why did I read it?
Marco and Ax? Marco and Ax? Are you on drugs? No offence or anything, but that's Marco and Ax... going at it... ewww.... I know Ax morphed Rachel, which adds another grossness to the mix.... ew.
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I just read it...
wow.
It actually makes sense Marco would do something like this. It's a stretch for his character for sure, but anyone else introducing Ax to sex would've been just ridiculous. :P
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When is the next chapter going to be up? I wonder if Ax will get employed by a pimp.
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Next chapter will be up probably maybe hopefully on Saturday. I'll warn you ahead of time that there isn't a ton of plot development since it's mostly description, but it should be an interesting read nevertheless...
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New chapter is up. As I said before it doesn't contain much story progression, but it provides some details about what Marco and Ax have been up to. If you liked Ax's descriptions of sex then you'll love this chapter. I'm not exactly sure what I'm going to include in the next chapter (I know where I want the story to go, but I'm still figuring out how to space the entries), but it will definitely feature more story progression. We can't have a story called Ax the Prostitute without Ax truly becoming a prostitute, can we?
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Okay, I just have to say, that I read that right after watching a few zero punctuation videos (http://www.escapistmagazine.com/videos/view/zero-punctuation (http://www.escapistmagazine.com/videos/view/zero-punctuation)), and thus I kept imagining Ax's voice sounding like Yahtzee's. Which fit Ax so well that I found myself wondering why there was a lack of British terms until I remembered that duh, this isn't set in England.
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I die a little inside as my two favourite characters get corrupted by every chapter.... together *shudder*
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Man, that was long. I didn't even read all of it. It was still somewhat interesting, though.
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Man, that was long. I didn't even read all of it. It was still somewhat interesting, though.
Yeah, sorry about that. It came out a lot longer than I had anticipated. But you don't have to read it all in one sitting. I would suggest breaking it in half or something.
And thank you everybody for continuing to read. I obviously didn't scare you off with the first chapter, so I've got to try a bit harder.
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I liked the second chapter even better than the first. It was a riot. xDDD
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A riot, indeed. ;D
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Alright, the third chapter is up. It's more of a setup for the next chapter than anything else so there's not much to it, but it's necessary to mention a few things before heading into the meat of the story (pun sort of intended, um, I guess?).
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idk i dont find it funny anymore, but im still reading it.
its pretty good i guess but im still a little distubred by it, keep it up though.
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dude there are probably 10 yr olds on fanfiction.net doing...things while reading ur story. I thought this would be funny it's actually really disturbing. :-\
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Eh. It's only disturbing if you let it disturb you.
(Of course, it COULD just be that I have an unhealthy dose of open-mindedness.)
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I'm reading the first chapter right now. MANNN that's so wrong D:!!!
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Eh. It's only disturbing if you let it disturb you.
Estelore hit it right on the head.
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Thank you, Musicman. :)
I meant what I said, folks. You can approach this like a piece of fiction and read it with open minds and humourous intent, or you can approach it expecting it to have some shred of pity for your sensibilities.
If you choose the latter option, you'll be sorely disappointed, but if you go the first road, you might just enjoy yourself to a certain extent. It's all in how you greet the opportunities that are presented to you.
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Thank you, Musicman. :)
I meant what I said, folks. You can approach this like a piece of fiction and read it with open minds and humourous intent, or you can approach it expecting it to have some shred of pity for your sensibilities.
If you choose the latter option, you'll be sorely disappointed, but if you go the first road, you might just enjoy yourself to a certain extent. It's all in how you greet the opportunities that are presented to you.
but the only really funny thing about this fic is ax how ax decsribes stuff but tht doesnt make up for the fact tht it sounds more like an erotic novel then a comedy. I did read this with an open mind and still didn't really care for this fanfic although it is well written
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its still good, i think its a little healthy to be disturbed, the parts about the shady part of town are still funny i just think the sex isnt so much
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You can approach this like a piece of fiction and read it with open minds and humourous intent, or you can approach it expecting it to have some shred of pity for your sensibilities.
If you choose the latter option, you'll be sorely disappointed, but if you go the first road, you might just enjoy yourself to a certain extent. It's all in how you greet the opportunities that are presented to you.
Wow, Estelore is like my mental twin. That's exactly it. And even if you really don't like the story I'm okay with that as well. I knew that I was going to have a pretty split opinion on it and I'm totally cool with that. Thanks for reading it though and at least giving it a chance. That's all I can really ask for. Now, back to writing the next chapter which is turning out to be really looooooooooooooong. ...
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;D
We're RAFtwins! Just like Jen and me.
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Does that make us RAFTriplets?
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Only if you, Jen, are also freakishly similar to Musicman.
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Does that make us RAFTriplets?
Did musicman just score a threesome without even trying?
;)
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I'd say 'EEEUUUGHH!!', but, considering the subject, it would be inappropriate to find that inappropriate.
How very confusing!
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I dunno, to be quite honest. Interesting, though.
Eewww, Lol Truth
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That's a RAFthreesome, everybody. :P ;)
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Did musicman just score a threesome without even trying?
;)
I never need to try. Threesomes just sort of happen around me. I guess it's just because I'm so sexy...
8)
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That's a RAFthreesome, everybody. :P ;)
Congrats Musicman, you've just scored with two of the RAFhotties(aka RAF girls who are very popular) ;D LOL Now all u need is an RAFgoddess(Anna) an ur set 4 life
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*sighs* ::) boys...
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Indeed. Boys. ::)
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LOL *sigh* girls r pretty :drunk: :droolfactor10:
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Duuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhh hhhhh, they sure are there! :drunk: :droolfactor10: :crazy2: :wiggle:
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:sign18: -- and completely ridiculous
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:sign18: -- and completely ridiculous
LOL sorry u know i was kidding, u guys arent hot...o wait :-X sorry, u guys are hot for not being hot cuz ur not hot but ur so hot tht ur not and me no even know wut u look like so u cnt be hot...ugly...hot... hot chocolate...gravy toes....baby back ribs....AAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH :explode:
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See what happens when people open their minds to read this story?!?
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their heads explode?
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whens that next chapter up? i like long chapters in fics the story doesn't feel so short
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Ah, don't pressure the guy. :)
It must be hard enough to think of new things for Ax to 'discover'. ;)
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Actually, I've known what I wanted to happen in the story before I ever started writing the beginning. It's not coming up with new ideas that's time consuming, it's actually getting it all into Microsoft Word. But the good news is that I'm nearing the end of this chapter (finally) and I hope to have it up soon. I'm not going to give a specific timetable since I'm still not sure exactly how long it'll take me but it should definitely be up within a week. Be advised that it's going to be a looooooooooooooooon g chapter. I wanted to split it in half actually, but it's kind of hard to do that with contiguous diary entries.
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No offense, but I can't see Marco doing that to Ax.
Don't get me wrong, the idea of Ax discovering human sexuality is hilarious, and even probable within the canon of the series. He's an adolescent male, alone, with no women around...not far fetched at all, actually. Not anything that Scholastic would ever publish, but it's an interesting story.
I had never thought about Ax having human sex, but I think there should have been a different beginning other than having Marco oscillate Ax. Maybe Ax accidentally discovers Playboy TV and wants to find out more, or he morphs Rachel to experience being a female, goes to the mall, and finds a male who is attractive. Who knows? Slightly revolting beginning, hilarious concept, hope this gets finished! I don't mind waiting a long time between installments (I read Megatokyo, I've gotten used to it) but not having it ever get finished would be a waste. Keep up the good work! 10/10 for originality, 7/10 for execution and 11/10 for shock value. 28/30 = A-. I love it!
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Thanks, I'm glad you like it. I was originally playing around with how Ax would find out and at first I was going to use the "found the playboy channel" idea, but it just seemed like an overused and simple explanation. I wanted to have something different happen for a change, so I decided to have one of the Animorphs bring it up. And who better than the girlfriendless Marco to get things rolling (although Tobias asking Ax to morph into Rachel was another possibility). It was no secret that Marco liked Rachel and there was definitely something between the two, but Marco could never act on it. That's why he decided to act on it with Ax, and hilarity ensued...
And in other news: THE NEXT CHAPTER IS FINALLY UP! Now you'll finally all get see why this story is called Ax the Prostitute. But beware. As I have mentioned numerous times it is loooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooo oooooong. So be ready to split it in half or in quarters or into whatever you want. Or, you could just go crazy and read the whole thing in one shot. It's really up to you.
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So Ax is now a $10 **** and is planning on getting gang banged in the next chapter? Ugh, no offense to you, but I'll be avoiding this story from now on. I'm not asking you to stop or anything, but this story is just not my thing. Sorry. :-\
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Alright, that's cool with me. I know that some people don't like stories like this and I knew that way before I even started. But I just have one question. What exactly made you want to stop? You made it through the other chapters...
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I think this chapter is way more...extreme than the previous ones? Not really sure how to put it.
As for me, I'm conflicted. Can't decide whether I like this fic or hate it. xD
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not bad for 10 dollars lol jk, i actually think this was bringing it back to what i expected, i thought it was pretty funny how he thought that people actually cared about their "profressional maters" experiences and how their services would be. Its still pretty graphic though, and i cant even imagine what the next one would be like
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When I read the words 'foliage adjusters', I nearly fell out of my chair.
CRAZY, but well-done. :)
Sheesh, I need to get my brain out of the septic tank! ::)
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Mirienne: It doesn't really seem more extreme than any of the previous chapters to me really since it actually moves along the story quite a bit instead of just having a bunch of descriptions about different sexual things (like the second chapter). And it doesn't matter to me whether you love it or hate it as long as you continue to read it.
Esplin 9466: I know what you mean. I was looking forward to getting the story back to progression as well, but there were just some things that had to be taken care of first in order for the story to make sense. It is pretty graphic but when you're dealing with such a topic that's bound to happen. I'm not sure how graphic the next chapters will be, but I don't think that they'll be getting much worse really.
Estelore: Thanks, I'm glad your enjoying yourself.
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Mirienne: It doesn't really seem more extreme than any of the previous chapters to me really since it actually moves along the story quite a bit instead of just having a bunch of descriptions about different sexual things (like the second chapter). And it doesn't matter to me whether you love it or hate it as long as you continue to read it.
Esplin 9466: I know what you mean. I was looking forward to getting the story back to progression as well, but there were just some things that had to be taken care of first in order for the story to make sense. It is pretty graphic but when you're dealing with such a topic that's bound to happen. I'm not sure how graphic the next chapters will be, but I don't think that they'll be getting much worse really.
Estelore: Thanks, I'm glad your enjoying yourself.
well i can deal with that then, idk what to exactly say but i think this fic should be successful
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I've gotten over the feeling of weirdness that I felt at first. I'm glad this chapter progressed the story along, as that should be important.
I wonder what he'll think about having multiple guys doing him? I wonder how surprised he'd be if all of them wanted to do it at the same time?
I have had this vision of Tobias and Marco doing him while he's in Rachel morph, Rachel doing him while he's in Marco morph because he doesn't have a Tobias morph, Cassie doing him while he's in Jake morph, and Jake doing him while he's in Cassie morph. Ax lives erotically ever after...
I wonder if Ax will be hired by a pimp. I may have brought that up before, but I don't recall if that question was answered. And will he get some loose, skimpy clothes for his Rachel morph?
I'm enjoying this. Keep it up.
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Isn't anyone else disturbed by the fact that Ax is using Rachel's 13 year old body to pimp himself out? Where did all of Cassie's morals fly off to? Did they fall on deaf ears, or is Ax just above that? :-\
Alright, that's cool with me. I know that some people don't like stories like this and I knew that way before I even started. But I just have one question. What exactly made you want to stop? You made it through the other chapters...
The concept itself is hilarious to imagine when mentioned, which is what got me to start reading your fan fic, but the thing is that when it really comes down to it, I really don't need to know all the details, you know? I'm trying to think up of a good example of this, but I'm coming up blank. Basically it's like taking an idea too far, and too literally for it's own good.
Besides, the entire thing is written entirely way too much like porn (I'm not trying to offend you or anything, but that's just my opinion) and I'm too uncomfortable with characters from my favourite kids series written into something like that. *shrugs*
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some of the humor is that how ax has no idea how morally wrong what hes doing is, but i do understand exactly where you are coming from truth.
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Isn't anyone else disturbed by the fact that Ax is using Rachel's 13 year old body to pimp himself out? Where did all of Cassie's morals fly off to? Did they fall on deaf ears, or is Ax just above that? :-\
Ax isn't really moral like that. To him, it's just doing something pleasurable that had no obvious downsides. He can't get any STDs, or get pregnant, or anything like that.
Now, there is the problem that he can't trust stangers to be gentle and kind. He may find that out, though. Which may lead to him finding someone who can offer some protection. That's why I keep thinking he might get a pimp or something.
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I can't help finding this concept humourous:
Say that fellow and his 'buddies' decide to get a bit too rough with Ax...
Think how EASY it would be for Ax to just demorph and...
well, they wouldn't be giving ANY females trouble in the future. >:D
*At this point, all males in the audience perform a testosticross.*
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I'm kinda feeling the same way as Truth here, I mean.. thats Rachel's 13 yr old body..
and I'm not really liking where this fic is going..
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I'm not sure how this is going to come out so I'll apologize upfront just in case it comes out wrong, but I think that those of you who say "I don't like where this is going" and "this just seems plain wrong" need to stop taking this fic so seriously. It's not supposed to be taken so seriously. It's meant to provide humor in the way that Ax is completely oblivious to what he's doing and also the way that he describes his new experiences. The main focus shouldn't be on what he's doing wrong, but the way he thinks he's doing it right.
I'm not angry or frustrated or disappointed or anything else like that even though it might come out that way. If you truly want to take everything seriously then by all means go ahead. I'm just trying to say that it's not intended to be taken seriously and if you change the way you read it then I think it'll be more enjoyable.
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Imagine if someone tried to explain certain curses to Ax:
"Well, go mate yourself, you unattractive professional mater! Oscillate YOU!!"
;D
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Imagine if someone tried to explain certain curses to Ax:
"Well, go mate yourself, you unattractive professional mater! Oscillate YOU!!"
;D
I don't know why I found that so funny, but I did. :-)
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he knows some yeerk curses
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Alright, new chapter is up. Again it's kind of a setup chapter so there's not a whole lot going on, but for continuity and believability it needs to be written.
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I just realized that usually I absolutely hate Marco/Ax fic, but I don't mind it in this case. I guess cause it's so cracky.
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yeah idk why theyre paired together alot just because theyre the two without a boyfriend or girlfriend in the group
waiting for the next chapter though :]
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Wouldn't Andalites mate anyway and thus have their own version? I can't believe he would go that nuts. And I can't believe I am talking about the mating habits of Andalites.
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Wouldn't Andalites mate anyway and thus have their own version? I can't believe he would go that nuts. And I can't believe I am talking about the mating habits of Andalites.
Lol yea, they probably would, but I suppose it'd be way different, and only done for breeding purposes
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Next chapter please
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Wouldn't Andalites mate anyway and thus have their own version? I can't believe he would go that nuts. And I can't believe I am talking about the mating habits of Andalites.
Probably, but that doesn't mean that he knows a lot about it. If it's just for reproductive purposes then he probably doesn't know the details or even some of the important things about it since he's basically a kid.
And the next chapter is coming, eventually. The past few days I've been busy moving into my dorm for the year, but now I can finally get back to writing since I'm kinda settled.
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this one has a ton of views
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this one has a ton of views
Well, if you want people to read your stories then make them about sex. That's my advice...
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LMAO!
I like alot of your other stuff too musicman... but for the love of god get the next chapter out!`
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Okay, two things wrong with this fanfic. One morally wrong, one just my own issue.
1) Rachel is a 13 year old girl!!!! Lol. Dude, thats molestation you're promoting in your story. Seriously, when she told the guy she was 13 thats when i flipped and remembered how old these kids were. And it is kinda sickening. I didn't want to imagine a 13 yr old Rachel having sex with an older guy, and then get gangbanged, come on!
Here's a suggestion. Y not have Ax acquire the DNA of another chic? Another hooker on the street, or someone he accidently runs into during a mission, or at the mall or SOMETHING. Rachel the 13 yr old is soo so sooo wrong. Im not feelin the idea of him using Rachel up like that. Especially when some dude on the steet will be able to recognize her and mistake her for Ax the ****. That would actually be a funny scene to write in. Rachel would go off on him. Please give Ax a different chic morph. Thats all Im askin man. I remember Tobias morphing Taylor. Somethin like that...
2) Im African-American, so i was a bit disappointed to see you describe the "shady side of town" as being populated by "dark-skinned like Cassie and light skinned like Marco" people. Its like saying all blks and latinos are prostitutes, pimps, drug dealers but whites and everyone else are squeaky clean. Seems a bit wrong.
And finally...
“I asked whether you were looking to mate or not,” I said back to him. “If so, I would like you to mate with me. I don’t have much experience, but I should be able to satisfy you. The males that I have mated with before always seemed satisfied afterwards.”
“Talking is by far my worst component when it comes to mating,” I replied, “I promise that I’ll do much better with the other components.” I gave a small pause before saying, “So, do you want to mate with me?”
^^^Which is by far the funniest **** I've ever heard. I nearly died. Almost fell out of my chair laughing. Imagining Ax in Rachel morph saying this **** to a thug. Priceless.
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1) Rachel is a 13 year old girl!!!! Lol. Dude, thats molestation you're promoting in your story. Seriously, when she told the guy she was 13 thats when i flipped and remembered how old these kids were. And it is kinda sickening. I didn't want to imagine a 13 yr old Rachel having sex with an older guy, and then get gangbanged, come on!
Here's a suggestion. Y not have Ax acquire the DNA of another chic? Another hooker on the street, or someone he accidently runs into during a mission, or at the mall or SOMETHING. Rachel the 13 yr old is soo so sooo wrong. Im not feelin the idea of him using Rachel up like that. Especially when some dude on the steet will be able to recognize her and mistake her for Ax the ****. That would actually be a funny scene to write in. Rachel would go off on him. Please give Ax a different chic morph. Thats all Im askin man. I remember Tobias morphing Taylor. Somethin like that...
2) Im African-American, so i was a bit disappointed to see you describe the "shady side of town" as being populated by "dark-skinned like Cassie and light skinned like Marco" people. Its like saying all blks and latinos are prostitutes, pimps, drug dealers but whites and everyone else are squeaky clean. Seems a bit wrong.
1. Yeah, that's kind of the point. Ax isn't supposed to be aware of what he's actually doing. That's why this story is supposed to be comical.
2. Hm, I don't really have a good explanation for that; It just kinda worked out that way. Maybe I'll make one of the guy's friends white. Would that make it better?
Edit: Also, I never said that whites were squeaky clean or even that all black and mexican people are ****s and drug dealers. Perhaps the original prostitute Ax saw was white...
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FilmStu, please do NOT take this the wrong way, okay? Have you BEEN to East St. Louis? It is the 'shady' part of town. There is a MUCH higher concentration of non-white people there than in any other part of St. Louis. I'm not saying that blacks and latinos CAUSE an area to be shady. They just seem to be more likely to be willing to live in such a place, and eventually most of the whites who WOULD live there are terrified that they'll be raped-mugged-murdered if they enter such an area, and those that stay are typically involved in gangs, or they are well below the poverty line. Over time, the numbers shift in such a way that there are many times MORE non-whites than whites in the area. MusicMan was just being realistic, NOT racist.
If you want to call me racist and disbelieve what I say, then I invite you to VISIT the 'shady' side of any large city (like the one in which Jake & company live). Count how many whites you see. THEN argue with me. THEN call us racist.
I have NOTHING at ALL against you or anyone of any other race. I am simply stating my own observations of urban environments.
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Never labeled anyone racist. That word never appeared in my post. Still, the story depicts the image of a stereotypical black male molesting a 13 yr old WHITE girl. Uh.....Sorry if i cant help but see this story in the light it's in.
But I find it pretty interesting that most of the "clients" rolling through such 'red light districts' are your everyday white males looking to bust a nut with a chic on sale because they cant get any satisfaction at home from their wives... Just saying.
And musicman, if you wantto add a white guy to the gangcrew when they gangbang Rachel, be my guest. Not like it'll change anything...
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I don't see much problem with people having sex with a 13 year old, if she enjoys it and there's no chance of her getting pregnant or contracting an STD. There are no negative effects, as long as those guys never see the real Rachel.
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Lol, dude that just sounds wrong. 13 yr old girls have barely reached puberty! How much more having sex with a guy who's way older than them. It would feel like rape. A 13 yr old doesn't know what she's getting herself into. No kid ever does at that age. And when they get older and mature and ripen, then sure they can do it. But at 13? Even if its only Ax in morph, its still weird.
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DOnt give me that load of Rubbish. GIrls know what they are doing. Yes,maybe that are approaching it stupidil;y, but they know what they are doing when they are 13. Hell I know a ten year old who knows that if she has sex she'd become pregant and did it for that reason.
So.... yes... they know what they are doing.
IN most cultures your considered an adult at 13.
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Yeah, the main reason many young teens don't know what they're doing is because their parents are still trying to shelter them from it instead of teaching them about it.
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new chapter soon, maybe?
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New chapter maybe soon... depending on your definition of soon. I haven't had a whole lot of time to work on it recently, but I'm going as fast as I can.
As for the whole "they don't know what they're getting into" thing, well, that's life. Most adults don't know what they're getting into most of the time. And I'm not just talking about sex, that goes for basically everything.
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alright sounds good man
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Alright, new chapter is up! (Finally!). I'm sorry it took so long, but both moving into my college dorm along with getting everything settled took some time and it is another long chapter. Enjoy!
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Well, I guess what filmstu was saying was that if you heard a stranger at the mall who is clearly older saying "I wouldn't mind having sex with a 13 year old girl" wouldn't that sound a little creepy? I mean, still being open-minded and all, but how would you feel if you had a 13 year daughter at the mall? I guess society creates barriers for a reason.
I read it, and I did find it interesting. I guess from a fan fiction view and "open-minded" view it's great. I guess we should study the evils AND the good if we want both sides of the story huh?
The only danger I see is this, when you begin dwelving too much into this stuff you get addicted like Ax...and then it starts effecting how you think and especially how you think of other people...and in your own view of girls. From the view point of the world today we see that. Everyone wants the pretty, thin, athletic, HOT girl and that's all most guys think about. Kinda sad for girls that that pressure is put on them.
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Alright, new chapter! It's another setup chapter and I've kinda gotten into a rhythm of setup chapter -->big chapter--->setup chapter...etc.
Believe it or not I only have 3 more chapters (tentatively) until I finish the story (at least finish it for the time being anyway).
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This chapter brings up a problem I wasn't thinking about. Sure, Ax could just say he needed to go to the bathroom near the two hour limit. But after he demorphs and remorphs, his orifices go back to being tight. I'm not sure how far he'd get with the "I tightened myself back up" excuse, but I can't really think of anything better.
Maybe there will be drinks there, and the guys will be too drunk and horny to notice or care.
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This chapter brings up a problem I wasn't thinking about. Sure, Ax could just say he needed to go to the bathroom near the two hour limit. But after he demorphs and remorphs, his orifices go back to being tight. I'm not sure how far he'd get with the "I tightened myself back up" excuse, but I can't really think of anything better.
Maybe there will be drinks there, and the guys will be too drunk and horny to notice or care.
well obviously they'll think its weird but they're not exactly going to be like "HOLY **** ANDALITE SCUM!"
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lol
this reminds me of a fanfic i had in mind now that i think about it, there was more love behind the sex but still, you seem to have the same idea that i did and that was that andalites would enjoy it
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lol
this reminds me of a fanfic i had in mind now that i think about it, there was more love behind the sex but still, you seem to have the same idea that i did and that was that andalites would enjoy it
That's kinda scary actually...
And yeah, the morphing would definitely be a problem. It is a party though, so there's no reason that drugs couldn't be involved.
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Never labeled anyone racist. That word never appeared in my post. Still, the story depicts the image of a stereotypical black male molesting a 13 yr old WHITE girl. Uh.....Sorry if i cant help but see this story in the light it's in.
But I find it pretty interesting that most of the "clients" rolling through such 'red light districts' are your everyday white males looking to bust a nut with a chic on sale because they cant get any satisfaction at home from their wives... Just saying.
And musicman, if you wantto add a white guy to the gangcrew when they gangbang Rachel, be my guest. Not like it'll change anything...
Film dont take it so seriously. im black too, I've had no problem with this story(other than the fact tht it is...gross), it's just for entertainment there's no need to get offended
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well obviously they'll think its weird but they're not exactly going to be like "HOLY **** ANDALITE SCUM!"
I seriously lol'ed at that.
Hahaha, just imagine, undercover Controllers at the party? xD
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Now, that'd be a scene that I'd like to read in the story XD lmao *hint musicman hint hint* ;)
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What, with controllers at the party? Do you really think that the Yeerks would be interested in controlling, no offense to anyone, gang members who live in the ghetto? And if they were at the party they'd probably either be high or drunk or something else so that they wouldn't be able to put two and two together.
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Not to mention that it's a really long shot to start off with. Why would an Andalite want to be a prostitute. That's even less likely than Andalites trying to get into a slaughterhouse by morphing cows. The Yeerks didn't believe they'd do that either.
Though I have been wondering if there will be anyone at the party to recognizes Rachel.
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it's still kinda weird that they say Rachel is hot....
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Most thirteen year olds aren't quite developed enough to be truly hot, but Rachel is often said to look good in the series. I find it odd that Miss Fashion says looks aren't important at one point. That's a little off topic, though.
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Alright, I'm really sorry for the big time gap but I don't really have much free time this semester. I blame my Chem lab which meets twice per week for 4 hours not to mention the pre and post lab stuff I have to do. Anyway, a new chapter is up! Only two more to go! I'll try hard to get the next chapter up quick, but I'm not making any promises other than I WILL finish this story eventually!
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I was wondering at some point if Ax was going to get a female customer... that'd be interesting. Wonder how he'd handle that?
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oh my.
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I didn't think of that. He has seen two women do a man, but has he seen lesbian sex?
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Probably. The playboy channel doesn't just have straight sex... um, I mean I don't think it has just straight sex... Yeah, that's what I meant! Anyway, Ax probably knows what Lesbians are but I don't think he'd consider it as "sex" technically since it's far from what a male and female would do to mate. He'd probably just think that they were pleasuring each other and nothing more. And as for something like that being in the story... maybe. But it's probably not going to happen how you're thinking it might...
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That was a good chapter. I liked it.
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i'm still looking forward to part where Rachel finds out about it..
also, WTH is tobias? from all the books i have read, he visited (as in dropping by to talk.. not to do what Ax is doing now) Ax's scoop quite reguarly and he's been gone for a while..
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Yeah, I know Tobias has kinda been MIA, but you can just imagine that he visits whenever Ax isn't out being a prostitute or writing anything. It would be so common for Tobias to visit by this point in the war that I guess Ax wouldn't write anything down about it. And since there's only 2 chapters left Rachel is going to find out about it fairly soon. (Story-wise anyway. At the rate I'm writing it could take a few years in real time...)
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hurry up bro
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So she is going to find out? That should be priceless.
I can think of several scenarios. The funniest of which would be Rachel actually convinced to have Ax morph Marco and having sex with him. Then Marco comes by and sees them.
Extremely unlikely, though.
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So she is going to find out? That should be priceless.
I can think of several scenarios. The funniest of which would be Rachel actually convinced to have Ax morph Marco and having sex with him. Then Marco comes by and sees them.
Extremely unlikely, though.
Hahahahaha, that would be so funny. Totally do this! haha
I know I said I wouldn't continue to read this, but you are an actually pretty good writer, and you have Ax's personality done really well.
It'd be interesting to see how Rachel reacts. My gosh, Ax is totally gonna die! :P
edit: I also remembered, it would have been funny to see Ax morph his normal male human and go up to a random girl asking if they wanted his services, XD he'd get a slap I'm sure.
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edit: I also remembered, it would have been funny to see Ax morph his normal male human and go up to a random girl asking if they wanted his services, XD he'd get a slap I'm sure.
I'd love to see that, haha.
I can't wait for the next update, I'm really excited to see what will happen with Rachel! This is why I usually only read completed fanfics, I can't stand the suspense. xDD
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ZOMG! NEW CHAPTER ALREADY?!?
Yep, second to last chapter is up. It is, of course, sort of a set-up chapter so it's kinda short (which is why it's up so quick). The next and final chapter will be up... who the hell knows? I'll try to get it up quick so I can finish this story but it's probably going to be fairly long so... yeah...
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aw come on man its so close to being finished
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I'M WORKING ON IT! YOU WANNA DO MY CHEMISTRY, PHYSICS, AND MATH HOMEWORK WHILE I WRITE?!?
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I could, but I have moral standards about things like that.
Also, I'd have to pay the postage to send it to you. ;)
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You... you have moral standards? Since when?
I agree about the postage though.
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I'm already getting ideas in my head about how this will go.
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I'M WORKING ON IT! YOU WANNA DO MY CHEMISTRY, PHYSICS, AND MATH HOMEWORK WHILE I WRITE?!?
YES I WOULD LOVE TO :P
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Musicman, I am going to assume that you were being sarcastic about my moral standards, which simply could not be anything less than precisely what they should be.
RIGHT? *stern look*
^-^
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music man, do not give in to Estelore!
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But...she's...a girl. Guys... can't... resist...girls....
No, you're right Estelore. You're always right. I was being completely sarcastic. You are a very moral and decent individual.
And Esplin, do you have any experience with Thermodynamics, Differential Equations, and/or Carboxyl group reactivity?
And Nohensen, planning out what might happen might not be a good thing. What if you weren't expecting what actually happens? Then you'll be disappointed at the ending.
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I can't help that. I'm sure it will be good, though. This has been quite the interesting story.
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But...she's...a girl. Guys... can't... resist...girls....
No, you're right Estelore. You're always right. I was being completely sarcastic. You are a very moral and decent individual.
*slaps forehead* "you're always right"? man...you gave in completely. :P
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But she's a girl...
She has boobies...
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oh my gosh. Estelore isn't a girl! She's a freakin star!
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Well, stars are pretty hot...
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Uh....well....hmm.. ..can't argue with you there. haha
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WOW. :o
Look what I miss when my modem is down! HAhahahaha!
Yes, I am female. Boobies? Jeeze. Yes, that, too.
I am also a freakin' star, as Azguard put it.
Pretty hot? I leave that to individual opinion. Hotness is relative and subjective. :)
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Anything above 400 kelvins for me. Considering her qualifications, that puts Este as top tier hotness.
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Anything above 373 Kelvens is hot for me, and stars are definitely much hotter than that.
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yes, look what you missed.
Estelore: Girl, boobies, freakin star, hot, and everything above.
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Bah, why talk about Estelore's supposed hotness when you can talk about traycon3's indisputable, inalienable hotness? Not to mention creativity, quirkyness, and other things I have barely skimmed the top of.
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hey, don't try to earn points here lover boy. ;D :P
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Bah, why talk about Estelore's supposed hotness when you can talk about traycon3's indisputable, inalienable hotness? Not to mention creativity, quirkyness, and other things I have barely skimmed the top of.
You're so getting laid for that.
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Bah, why talk about Estelore's supposed hotness when you can talk about traycon3's indisputable, inalienable hotness? Not to mention creativity, quirkyness, and other things I have barely skimmed the top of.
You're so getting laid for that.
I agree. In fact, it would be a travesty if you didn't get laid.
(now, where's my $20 that you promised me for saying that which just about forces traycon3 to have sex with you)
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*slips $20 to musicman88.*
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:o
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almost done with that last chapter?
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It's only been a few days. Give him some time. He's already shouting at us with all caps.
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:[ srry
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SHOUTS AT YOU WITH MORE CAPS!
And no, I'm not done. Heck, I'm not all that far into it really. I'm working as quick as I can though. This is probably gonna be a long chapter so don't expect it to be done any time soon.
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alright i dont mind if it takes long i just like status updates
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Well, since you wanted status updates that's just what you'll get, status updates. I am maybe sort of kind of hopefully about halfway through writing the final chapter (roughly) and I figured that since it'll be a bit longer then I would like before I post the entire final chapter up I'd give all my devoted fans an RAF sneak peak at a portion of the new chapter. So, enjoy! The full chapter is gonna be up when it's done.
<So?> I said back in response. <That still does not prove anything!>
With a strange facial expression, some sort of mixture between frustration and disappointment, Prince Jake continued. “But it did get me to start wondering. And to get a definitive answer I asked Tobias to keep an eye on you for a few nights just to see if anything weird was going on.”
I had both stalk eyes pointed at Tobias the entire time while my two main eyes were pointed at Prince Jake. It was only when Prince Jake reached this point that Tobias finally began to look back down at me from the rafters. And all he had to say in his defense was, <Sorry Ax.>
I was now quite angry with him. So angry in fact that I hadn’t even really heard the last thing that Prince Jake had said. But he continued on regardless.
“The first night nothing happened, but on the second night he saw you leave your scoop around 10:30 and begin flying towards town. Once you got there he said that you flew into an alley and eventually morphed into Rachel. And once you did that you went into a nearby building and didn’t come out for quite awhile.”
It was then that I knew I was defeated. My gamble had not paid off. Prince Jake had known even before he called this meeting that I was the one professionally mating.
I felt a great deal of emotion at that moment. I was still angry at Tobias for doing what he did. I was also angry at Prince Jake for trying to trap me in a lie (although now I realize he was just trying to give me an opportunity to be honest about the situation). I was also frightened about what my failed gamble had done to the other Animorph’s views about me. Did they trust me less now than before? Would Prince Jake enact some sort of punishment on me for my actions? And finally I was disappointed that I would probably never mate again. I had grown so fond of it over the past Human month or so that I didn’t think I could just stop doing it all of a sudden.
I was quiet for quite a long time and Prince Jake just waited patiently for my response. Eventually some of my anger and other emotions began to slowly fade away and I finally, very weakly, said, <I am very sorry for trying to deceive you Prince Jake. I have been the one who has been professionally mating over the past few Earth weeks.>
I didn’t have a chance to continue any further though. As soon as those words were transmitted to the other Animorphs I heard Rachel say, “I’m gonna kill him. I’m gonna ****ing kill him.”
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Oh man I'm excited! Go Rachel, kick his butt!
Hahaha, looks like thats gonna be a great chapter, I can't wait!
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isn't it kind of strange that marco would want to mate with ax?
i mean, 'Rachel-ax', but still ax nevertheless.
interesting story, read the first page so far. good writing.
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Wow, what a teaser. Thanks for showing.
@goom: Marco has the hots for Rachel. He'd never get any with the real Rachel, though, so he went to Ax. It is kind of a stretch for his character, but less so for him than with the other Anis.
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awesome lol!
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Think how EASY it would be for Ax to just demorph and...
well, they wouldn't be giving ANY females trouble in the future. >:D
that would be freaking hilarious.
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all i could do when reading this was lol the entire time.
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all i could do when reading this was lol the entire time.
That's pretty much the idea.
And thanks for the support guys. I'm working on it whenever I have time and I'm hoping to have it up as quick as possible.
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looking forward to it
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i'm wondering why aximili, who is so obviously obsessed with sex, hasn't tried it as a male yet?
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i kinda wondered the same thign
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It could be a whole 'nother story really and I just don't feel like getting into that right now. But in story terms I rationalize it by saying that Ax still doesn't have much of an idea what he's doing. He's only ever mated as a female and he has a lot of experience having sex as a female. He enjoys it a lot so why bother worrying about how being a male is like?
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i guess we'll see huh?
hows the chapter going?
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It's... eh... going... kinda. Last week and this week are sort of like the second midterm weeks so I've had a few tests that I had to study for. But, I'm working on it when I can. This chapter's going to be VERY long. I'd split it up if I could, but how exactly do you split up a journal entry?
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idk if you have to split it, imean it is the last chapter its ok for that one to be long, IMO
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But it's gonna be obscenely long if I don't. I'm already past 14 pages in Microsoft Word...
Screw it, I'll split it. You guys have been waiting too long.
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its ok were willing to wait if you rush it might not come out the way you want it to
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i don't think musicman will rush anything, he'll just release half of the story prematurely (rather than doing the whole thing as one bit).
i like that idea, anyways. it'll work fine.
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i don't think musicman will rush anything, he'll just release half of the story prematurely (rather than doing the whole thing as one bit).
i like that idea, anyways. it'll work fine.
This. I didn't rush anything; I already had a large portion written out. I'm just uploading what I have now and I'll finish up the rest when I have time so you all have something to read. So enjoy the second to last chapter which is up now!
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alright sweet :]
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Wow...tbh, I can't imagine the character's reactions actually being like that, but I'm still excited to see what'll happen next. Great new chapter!
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i like how Jake doesn't want to do it because Rachel is his cousin.
that'd just be sick.
speaking of which, it'd also be wrong for Tobias, partially because he loves Rachel, partly because Ax is his uncle.
either way, great writing. you need to make more stories :D
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Ummmmm I am so not happy with their reactions.
Ew. I read it and I happened to be on skype with Adam, I just kept repeating ew over and over.
The Animorphs! what have you done to theeeeeeeeeeeem!
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and omg it was sooo annoying
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lol Adam, I'm sure it was.
I'm gonna continue reading, because I am keeping an open mind. So now I will give an open minded comment:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, omg. This is hilarious. and soooo creepy.
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To those of you who didn't like/expect their reactions how exactly would you know what their reactions would be in this situation? None of them have ever mentioned anything like this before. And it's not always necessarily true that a person's normal demeanor carries over to sexually related things either. That nerd who always sits alone in his room playing WoW all day could potentially be a wild beast when it comes to sex.
And don't forget that there is also one final chapter to come, so if things haven't been resolved the way you like them yet they still potentially could be. Anyway, thanks for reading and caring enough to comment so far.
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im interested to see what happens next
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haha, who knows, maybe ax gave marco an alien STD? >:D
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Wow. So Ax really did convince the others to join in on the sex. Jake and Tobias, at least. I expected rachel to respond like that, but it's hard to tell how the others would respond. Neither relationship got very intimate during the course of the series.
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......after reading the last chapter....im gonna go throw up for a while and never look at an Animorphs book the same way ever again. LOL but u get +1 fo creativity
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the chat is getting interesting ;)
lol.
The Random Room
[21:19:39] SKyE: la la la la la la la la la
[21:20:03] ANna FiLTh: Liiike, I neverrr wannnted too picturrre Jake saaaying “You… you want us to have sex with you Ax?”
[21:20:23] SKyE: marshmellows with chocolate tastes kinda good
[21:21:01] goom: marshmallows are good with anything.
[21:21:08] ANna FiLTh: ewww
[21:21:14] goom: yeah, they totally warped the animoprhs.
[21:21:15] SKyE: yup i agree goom
[21:21:24] ANna FiLTh: I'mmm maaaking sticky bunnnsss!
[21:21:32] ANna FiLTh: I hope they'rrre done sooooon.
[21:21:36] SKyE: yummm
[21:22:02] demos666: i want one :unhappy: but food cant be sent into a computer
[21:22:31] goom: wanna bet?
[21:22:39] goom: you have tons of cookies stored in your computer :)
[21:22:46] SKyE: i think chocolate is the best with almost anything
[21:22:47] demos666: to another person
[21:24:01] ANna FiLTh: haahaa
[21:24:05] ANna FiLTh: niiiice, gooom
[21:24:08] Blue: ....well, Im officially disgusted
[21:24:09] ANna FiLTh: that wasss funnny
[21:24:15] ANna FiLTh: mee tooo.
[21:24:21] goom: sorry, couldn't resist.
[21:24:25] ANna FiLTh: lol
[21:24:28] ANna FiLTh: it wasss funny
[21:24:30] ANna FiLTh: brb
[21:24:46] Blue: lol a 4 ay between Ax, Jake, tobias, and Marco....... :cursing: :bored: :unhappy: :unsure: :blink: :huh: :mellow:
[21:24:53] Blue: *way
[21:25:29] Blue: im scarred for life now
[21:25:45] Blue: and im pissed tht Rachel didt kick Ax's ass
[21:25:51] SuperClaire: ugh the phone rang, interupting heroes.
[21:26:04] ANna FiLTh: Sooo un-rrrachel.
[21:26:09] ANna FiLTh: duude.
[21:26:13] ANna FiLTh: these arrre awesssome!
[21:26:18] SuperClaire: hahaha anna. are you guys talking about ax the prositute?
[21:26:27] SuperClaire: haha it was scary before, now its just SCARY
[21:26:39] Blue: .......read the last chapter Claire
[21:26:44] SuperClaire: i did.
[21:26:49] SuperClaire: its freaking sick.
[21:26:52] demos666: i love it
[21:26:59] Blue: I'll never look at an Animorphs book the same way again
[21:27:08] SuperClaire: and cassie said it would make a mess!
[21:27:12] SuperClaire: bahahahahahaha!
[21:27:12] ANna FiLTh: It isss sick.
[21:27:13] ANna FiLTh: hahaha
[21:27:15] SuperClaire: ewwwwwww!
[21:27:17] ANna FiLTh: I knoooow
[21:27:18] Blue: and who knew Rachel hd such a....colorful vocabulary
[21:27:26] ANna FiLTh: a serrrious mess
[21:27:29] ANna FiLTh: I'mm liiike
[21:27:31] ANna FiLTh: ewwww
[21:27:46] SuperClaire: i know!
[21:27:48] demos666: i liked it but everyone else didn't
[21:27:53] SuperClaire: musicman88 is soooo gross.
[21:27:56] Blue: lol the fact tht jake and tobias agreed to it made me eve more sick
[21:28:05] SuperClaire: i know!
[21:28:19] Blue: lol Tobias ***ed his uncle
[21:28:21] SuperClaire: jake will be looking into the eyes of his cousin, and technically tobias is ax's nephew.
[21:28:24] demos666: tobias is ok jake is the ify one
[21:28:24] SuperClaire: guh-rosss.
[21:28:31] SuperClaire: okay, time to watch heroes again
[21:28:33] SuperClaire: brb
[21:28:46] goom: jake will be looking into the eyes
[21:28:52] Blue: Elfangor frowns upon them LOL "This is who I left the fate of the world with?"
[21:28:53] goom: of his 13-year-old version of his cousin
[21:29:05] ANna FiLTh: hahahaha
[21:29:08] ANna FiLTh: ewwww
[21:29:32] goom: Cassie is always about morals. She'd never allow this.
[21:29:38] Blue: ....I bet Cassie as secretly watching them
[21:29:47] Blue: *was
[21:29:55] demos666: what do you think cassie and rachel did
[21:30:02] goom: talked..?
[21:30:03] demos666: lesbian?
[21:30:12] goom: no.
[21:30:13] Blue: ew no
[21:30:23] goom: not even close.
[21:30:26] demos666: i would fit
[21:30:29] ANna FiLTh: Hiii Danial!!!
[21:30:30] SKyE: la la la la la la la
[21:30:33] Blue: but I bet they did watch the.....gross foursome
[21:30:37] goom: you would lol
[21:30:41] ANna FiLTh: Ewwwww
[21:30:46] ANna FiLTh: lalalalalalalalalal ala
[21:30:51] goom: interracial relationships topic would have a fit if cassie and rachel did it.
[21:31:03] Shanker: uhhh... odd convo to enter into
[21:31:03] SKyE: im gonna be back later
[21:31:09] ANna FiLTh: Yeah
[21:31:10] goom: indeed.
[21:31:10] ANna FiLTh: awww
[21:31:13] ANna FiLTh: byeee
[21:31:13] Blue: ......the fact tht ey're like 13 makes me even more sick
[21:31:13] goom: bye
[21:31:21] Blue: especially is Musicman is an adult
[21:31:24] Blue: *if
[21:31:29] demos666: at least there all 13
[21:31:31] goom: well, i think they're about 14/15
[21:31:35] ANna FiLTh: Letsss change theee topic?
[21:31:37] ANna FiLTh: Sooo
[21:31:40] goom: ax's morph is younger
[21:31:40] ANna FiLTh: Who liiikes pie?
[21:31:41] Blue: lol plz
[21:31:47] ANna FiLTh: I liiike pie.
[21:31:52] Blue: lol I love cheeseburger pie
[21:31:53] ANna FiLTh: Pie iss goood.
[21:31:53] goom: i thought you wanted to CHANGE the topic.
[21:32:01] goom: :happy:
[21:32:03] ANna FiLTh: Oooh
[21:32:04] Shanker: heh rachel likes pie
[21:32:05] ANna FiLTh: Rrright
[21:32:06] Blue: ROFL
[21:32:07] ANna FiLTh: hahahaha
[21:32:09] ANna FiLTh: man
[21:32:22] ANna FiLTh: now I cannnt useee that as a topic changerrr!
[21:32:36] Shanker: change pie to pi
[21:32:41] goom: that works.
[21:32:47] Shanker: then i'll say that i liked pi
[21:32:50] Shanker: *like
[21:32:53] ANna FiLTh: Okaaay
[21:32:58] goom: how many digits do you remember?
[21:32:58] ANna FiLTh: Whoo liiikes pi?
[21:33:08] goom: miii!
[21:33:36] Shanker: ooh i do
[21:33:46] Shanker: pi=3.1415926....
[21:34:19] Blue: lol "DISNEY B ITCHES UNITE!"
[21:34:39] SuperClaire: gah another pause.
[21:35:43] Shanker: hey claire
[21:35:47] Shanker: your looking well
[21:35:56] goom: pi = 3.14 is good enough for me. i had this one kid in my class freshman year
[21:36:03] goom: who could remember like 50 places. he was insane.
[21:36:06] Blue: goom just postd our litle conersaton about a certain fanfic
[21:36:19] goom: lol couldn't resist.
[21:36:21] SuperClaire: lol shanker... same to you?
[21:36:33] goom: i'm guessing the chat is going to fill up soon.
[21:36:36] Blue: lol RAFawkward
[21:36:40] ANna FiLTh: duuude.
[21:36:42] ANna FiLTh: not coool!
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lol of course u copied tht entire conversation....wel l...more like a quarter of it
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fix'd. now the whole thing (as far as history goes) is there.
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lol
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i defend you musicman88 do what you want
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Thanks demos, but I think I'm fine. I'm not going to deny that I'm a sick and twisted person. I found that conversation pretty hilarious actually.
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haha, i love your story though.
you write an excellent ax.
make more fanfics plox :)
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Thanks demos, but I think I'm fine. I'm not going to deny that I'm a sick and twisted person. I found that conversation pretty hilarious actually.
i wanna see the end of this
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i wanna see the end of this
hehe, me too. It's such a funny idea. I just told my Mum, just because, and she thought it was funny.
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i wanna see the end of this
hehe, me too. It's such a funny idea. I just told my Mum, just because, and she thought it was funny.
i would never tell my mum about this! XD
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I have a fairly cool Mum :)
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yeah you do..
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or shes just crazy :P
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My parents barely know that RAF even exists.
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mine know i'm on a forum, but they don't know the name of it.
they do know it's an animorph forum however.
and yeah, i don't think i'd show this fanfic to either one of them. (or that skype chat log LOL)
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uh...definately not this fanfic,.
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Hahaha, She just happened to be nearby as I was about to check this thread out, so I was like "look Mum, Ax the prositute!" and explained a bit about it.
Haha.
By the way people, we better not fill this thread up with this.
:)
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WOW. :o
Look what I miss when my modem is down! HAhahahaha!
Yes, I am female. Boobies? Jeeze. Yes, that, too.
I am also a freakin' star, as Azguard put it.
Pretty hot? I leave that to individual opinion. Hotness is relative and subjective. :)
/laugh
Hmm...the story was funny in the context you use as funny, but I still can't see the Ani's reactions being that way (other than her explosion). . .
9/10 for the *OMG* factor, 10/10 for originality, 6/10 for believability. Good job ;)
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Don't forget that there's still 1 chapter to go. Some things have the potential to be explained a bit better during the falling action.
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Don't forget that there's still 1 chapter to go. Some things have the potential to be explained a bit better during the falling action.
Then don't waste time posting, and hurry p finishing it, eh? :P
Lol, jk. Take your time, don't lower your...quality? /shudders
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It's coming... eventually. School work, friends, and Guitar Hero World Tour have been sucking up my time as usual, but I'm making some progress nevertheless.
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I don't mean to be off topic, but I sent you a PM, musicman88. I don't know if you've seen it or not, because on my end nothing pops up to tell me I have a message.
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Yeah, nothing popped up telling me I had a message either which is why I haven't replied yet. Sorry about that. I just sent my response though.
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8. Animorphs: The Experience (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3915593/1/Animorphs_The_Experience) reviews
Alright, time for some erotic fiction. No one under 18 allowed or 21 if that's the law where you live. Contains multiple pairings and eventually turns into one big orgy. Everyone and everything is fair game.
LOL that was freaking hilarious!
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That was my pre-erotic fiction erotic fiction attempt. It took me forever to write all that.
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Oh dude, YOU wrote that? I found that ages ago and thought it was absolute genius. And now I have found the author, how fortituous. xD
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*blushes*
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you're famous!
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yea i had read the description on ff.net i was searching for another fiction that was animorphs/rated M and i found that lol
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On a sad note that fic got pulled today. I received an email about it. I believe it was because it was only 3 words long and not because it had to do with "adult content" so this story should still be safe. Let's all have a moment of silence for that fic, shall we?
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We shall miss you :'( :'( :'(
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On a sad note that fic got pulled today. I received an email about it. I believe it was because it was only 3 words long and not because it had to do with "adult content" so this story should still be safe. Let's all have a moment of silence for that fic, shall we?
sad.
some people just don't understand humor.
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What? That sucks. If they don't want 3 word long fic why don't they make a minimum word limit when you submit or something? >(
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What? That sucks. If they don't want 3 word long fic why don't they make a minimum word limit when you submit or something? >(
They did. It was in the rules somewhere. It said no one or two line stories, paraphrasing of course.
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How do you have a story that's only three words long? No wonder they got rid of it.
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What? That sucks. If they don't want 3 word long fic why don't they make a minimum word limit when you submit or something? >(
They did. It was in the rules somewhere. It said no one or two line stories, paraphrasing of course.
Oh. Pfft. I'm all for concision, myself. xD
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any news on the last chapter of this story?
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It's coming. I recently finished the actual mating part and all I really have left is to wrap some stuff up. I don't think it should take that long, but I always underestimate things like that. And since I'm going to see Blue Oyster Cult tomorrow it kind of screws up my week a bit, but I'm working as fast as I can.
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im not trying to rush you just wondering where things are, thanks
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ALRIGHT! THE FINAL CHAPTER IS UP! It's about damn time! Read and enjoy!
I just want to thank everyone who waited patiently for me to finish writing and everyone who thoroughly enjoyed the story and understood (at least partly) what it was all about. And even if you didn't like it for whatever reason I still thank you for at least giving it a chance. I was tired of everyone doing the same "brand new Animorph" or "if Rachel lived" stories, so I wanted to mix it up a bit. And judging by everyone's responses I sure did that pretty well...
So, what's next for me? Well, Nohensen and I have something planned that you'll be hearing about shortly no doubt. We have a little story competition that's slated to begin. It won't be anything mature rated though, I promise. But that doesn't necessarily mean that I'm done with mature rated stories (although I really need a break. My mind's starting to scare me...). There's always the possibility that I can go back and write a scenario where Ax learns something new. Take for example everyone asking why he didn't want to mate as a male and some other things like that. Also, I've been thinking recently (Uh oh...) that we've seen what Macro and Ax do to mate (kinda I guess), but what about R/T and J/C? Perhaps a few weird things worth writing about go on there as well... But for now I really want to get back to "normal" stories for a bit and that's what you can expect from me next. Hope to see you all there!
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nice work. i liked your story, ax is an interesting character.
hahaha!
You sick bastard!” Tobias interrupted quite suddenly. “What the hell is wrong with you Marco?!?”
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lol, rachel and cassie. :-*
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Great end to the story!
I have a lot of other comments to make, but I guess I'll wait till later to post them so I don't spoil it for others. xD
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I liked it. You wrapped things up well. Good job.
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not a bad ending, i predicted the rachel cassie thing. I figured you play the marco ax thing up a little more but it was kinda subtle. Not a bad end to the story, jake made me lol, I kinda predicted that as well. Tobias though, was the pure gem of the end though, I was loling quite alot.
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I was laughing so much through this chapter.
*keeping open mind*
I didn't picture any of their reactions being like that, but meh its your story, lol.
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Thanks guys, glad you liked it. I don't think I'm all that great with endings, but as I was reading through this one I actually liked it myself (that almost never happens with anything I write).
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The whole Tobias thing is so freaking hilarious.
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I found the Jake thing even more hilarious, myself.
He's our fearless leader, it stands to reason he would be good at everything! xDD
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Well, Rachel began with a happier tone, let’s just say that Cassie and I found our own way to have a good time…
I was about to inquire a bit further, but I suddenly realized what Rachel most likely meant. The only thing powerful enough to take Rachel’s mind off something that serious was mating
I so called this on the chat room one day
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WOW. :o
Look what I miss when my modem is down! HAhahahaha!
Yes, I am female. Boobies? Jeeze. Yes, that, too.
I am also a freakin' star, as Azguard put it.
Pretty hot? I leave that to individual opinion. Hotness is relative and subjective. :)
/laugh
Hmm...the story was funny in the context you use as funny, but I still can't see the Ani's reactions being that way (other than her explosion). . .
9/10 for the *shocked* factor, 10/10 for originality, 6/10 for believability. Good job ;)
I maintain my earlier observations, only modifying the believability from 6/10 to 5/10.
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I read the whole thing last week. It was really funny, yet quite disturbing...
I still loved it XD
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oh my. . . .although Im not really into this kinda thing it was very realistic. You are very good at understanding the characters, it was like a AO KA Applegate book, weldone!
Lol poor Jake, and Tobias not being any good! And gotta love Marco, he so would have anyway.
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Lol, thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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oh yeah, i remember that story.
a bit.. wrong (only 13 years old!).. but it was pretty funny.
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yeah...a lot of controversy with this one. lol
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The sad thing is, this one doesn't hold a candle to the disturbingness of his other fics *shudders* ugh. Despite the stories freaking me out(and that's definitely saying something lol) I gotta give you your props on your excellent writing though
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Yeah, I definitely have a few problems... ^-^
But thanks for the compliment!
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wow i am totally reading this later, put it on my favorites.
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You should pm this fic to KA
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You should pm this fic to KA
how about no?
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i cant
stop
readign
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Lol I just finished reading the whole thing.
Pretty interesting, definitely kept me entertained. I once had an idea for a fic that was kind of similar, involving a seventh Animorph (like David) using the morphing ability for their own personal gain, but only sexually. Even though there's a lot of dirty fanfiction involve the canonical (and non-canonical) pairings, I feel that the idea of using morphing specifically as a sexual tool is a fanfiction market that, much unlike Ax's ass, remains largely untapped.
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You should pm this fic to KA
how about no?
I have to agree with this. I don't think KA would... appreciate it very much.
And thank you everyone that liked it. I appreciate your kind words.
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Disturbing, but so funny. It actually read like Ax, for which I must give you props.
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*nostalgia*
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I started writing this a year and a half ago... Is that enough time for Nostalgia to kick in?
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hahaha! i will definitely read this one.
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One thing I kept hoping while reading this story is that Ax would discover the joys of human sex in his male human morph as well. But then when I realized the author was a (presumably) straight male, I figured that was less likely. :P
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lol, I'm sorry to disappoint you. I actually though about it for a bit, but then I decided that there just wasn't enough difference to write an entirely new story about it.
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I am really, really bored. So, I might as well dig in, neh?
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Marco: "Here, Ax. Read this." *sends Ax to FFN to read Ax the Prostitute*
Ax: <This is an excellent idea, Marco. Thank you! I have always wondered about your human reproduction.> *morphs human without clothes*
Marco: "Oh, sh*t! Ax, I didn't mean--"
You can guess what happens next.
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is there anyone who HASN'T read that fan fic? :facepalm:
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I only read Chapter 1. But I think the others are calling to me...
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is there anyone who HASN'T read that fan fic? :facepalm:
Well... There was...
But after this post and my initial "WTF?!" reaction, I am sad to say that as of now, I have read it...
WHAT. THE. HELL... :o
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I didn't read it, yet... because I don't read a lot of Fanfictions in English ^^' I'm just too lazy... But Ax the prostitute would be the first I read...
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I read it. It's a guilty pleasure. It was well done, though. Very out there.
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:P I've stealthily avoided it so far.
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I read the first chapter and that was it. It's well written, but I don't really like Animorph Slash Fics.
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where do ppl keep finding this fic? is the link still posted in the fan fic thread?
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Uhh...yeah!
http://animorphsforum.com/forum/index.php?topic=613.0
I first found it through FanFiction.Net though.
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keep the AtP discussion in here, please.
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Thx for reminding me I never finished the story!
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lol, I love you guys. I'm glad I could bring so much... *insert proper word here* to the fandom!
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.......*is quiet after reading the story.*......<T...>is speachless. :thumbsdown: :cry: :shrug: :facepalm2:
Comes back a few minutes later.<I...have to be honest,as I always am here,that was the weridest and the grosses story as well...that personally has almost ruined the Animorphs series for me completely...>shivers and wants to cry but can't for being a red-tailed hawk.
(Sorry for being so..down/rude/mean on it or that...but...urgggg,that seriously has set me back on likeing Animorphs anymore.)
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1: You shouldn't let a piece of fanfiction change your feelings about the books themselves. It's not like Applegate deemed this to be canon. It's just a story. If you don't like it, don't read it. Saying that it 'sets you back on liking animorphs anymore' is both melodramatic and ridiculous.
2: You read a story titled 'Ax The Prostitute' and were SHOCKED by the contents? It's not like he named the story 'Ax And The Veleek's Secret' or 'Ax And Absolutely Nothing Raunchy Have A Nice Day'. It's called Ax The Prostitute for crepe's sake. You can't have been THAT surprised.
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Awww, I'm sorry Tobias. I didn't mean to "taint" the series for you. But, Cerulean certainly has a good point...
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.......*is quiet after reading the story.*......
I read the first few chapters as well.
Sure, it took me by surprise, but not for long. Cerulean does have a point though. There aren't many ways to misinterperet the topic title :P
While the age and... quantity of participants seemed a little excessive to me (or, rather, understandable for a species that just realised that mating could be done for fun... and money) I have read and seen worse fanfics/fan art/erotica. You should have seen the things we sold when I worked at a bookstore... Made the Kama Sutra look like the Book of Mormon :o
And surely this can't be too much of a surprise to you? I am yet to find anything to do with novels or any form of media (video games, movies, anime, etc) that hasn't been 'tainted' by fan erotica. It's usually called Rule 34... If it exists, there is erotica of it.
Personally, my only criticism is this. If I was (single and) propositioned with a night with a (legal) Rachael, morph or not, I would certainly pay more than US$10 :P
And I certainly wouldn't share. ::)
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I've been waiting for the Animorphs fans to start getting a bit more mature (or twisted) to start drawing Animorph porn. After all, every other series has it ... why not this one?
All they would need to do is photoshop the mouths off all their Avatar/Na'vi erotica, give them stalk eyes and turn them into Centaurs...
Also... It's not that hard to make Animorphs erotica. You probably didn't even know what it was...
Girl with a dog, girl with a horse, girl with a tiger... ::) :o
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Ok,I've had time to think about this all.
I'm sorry for being so down on it,its not as bad as I thought,but its still a tad bit still werid and gross to me.
And it won't "ruin"my animorphs views,just add a sitback as I will just forget I read it.And its a pretty cool story thought to write it.
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I'm sorry for being so down on it
No probs, T-Man. To each their own, and the like.
Also, in regard to fan art erotica. Cancel that.
After a quick shout of "RULE 34 ON ANIMORPHS! GOGOGO!!!" on a certain imageboard, I can honestly say I've seen it all.
I could have gone the rest of my life without seeing Andalite Ax mating with Rachael... :facepalm:
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Knowing rule 34, this likely isn't even the first erotic Animorphs fanfic. Or the last.
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eh...i guess everyone is entitled to their own opinions...so that's tobias'.
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Well honestly I didn't mind the others in it...just reading Tobias...it sort of makes the edge off him.
But Asmodeus...I...uh wouldn't mind seeing that drawing of an Andalite from the backside as I've always had curious questions after what was said in the books.
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I'll give you my address in a PM.
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Thanks,and now we can get back on topic of this thread.
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Back to the topic? A prequel! Elfangor the Prostitute!
Tobias: *looks at pictures* "MOM!?"
ELLIMIST: "Actually, that would be your father."
Tobias: :drunk: :explode:
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haha yeah
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And surely this can't be too much of a surprise to you? I am yet to find anything to do with novels or any form of media (video games, movies, anime, etc) that hasn't been 'tainted' by fan erotica. It's usually called Rule 34... If it exists, there is erotica of it.
Yeah, there's a few Animorphs Erotica pics I've seen as well...
*goes to looks for more... for research purposes of course*
Oh god! I... I had no idea... If you think this story is bad...
Personally, my only criticism is this. If I was (single and) propositioned with a night with a (legal) Rachael, morph or not, I would certainly pay more than US$10 :P
And I certainly wouldn't share. ::)
I'd have to agree with you on that one...
Ok,I've had time to think about this all.
I'm sorry for being so down on it,its not as bad as I thought,but its still a tad bit still werid and gross to me.
No offense taken, don't worry about it. I realize that this isn't exactly the most... palatable story out there.
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Ah its ok buddy,I was...I guess more shocked to actually be like that with the title,I should have known but..its ok it is good work though on the terms of..th..that stuff.
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xDD I
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xD This is amazing, honestly. I can't remember my ff.net login details, or I would have favorited it; but it's nice to find more literate fiction, with a good sense of humor. xD oh Aximili, Axmili...
I am still getting through it, but I have also read the male version. x'DD Jeebus, you're enough to make a girl blush.
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lol, thanks! I appreciate the comments!
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Comes back a few minutes later.<I...have to be honest,as I always am here,that was the weridest and the grosses story as well...that personally has almost ruined the Animorphs series for me completely...>shivers and wants to cry but can't for being a red-tailed hawk.
(Sorry for being so..down/rude/mean on it or that...but...urgggg,that seriously has set me back on likeing Animorphs anymore.)
a. it wasn't written by KA applegate
b. if you thought it was gross and disturbing, why did you continue reading? quit while you're ahead.
Also... It's not that hard to make Animorphs erotica. You probably didn't even know what it was...
Girl with a dog, girl with a horse, girl with a tiger... ::) :o
that's called bestiality. :thumbsdown:
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I still haven't read this. :facepalm: Only here because somebody merged posts. D:
...Actually, I think my post was about not having read this... Darn my inability to walk away from off-topicness. D: They really need therapy groups for that.
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I've been waiting for the Animorphs fans to start getting a bit more mature (or twisted) to start drawing Animorph porn. After all, every other series has it ... why not this one?
All they would need to do is photoshop the mouths off all their Avatar/Na'vi erotica, give them stalk eyes and turn them into Centaurs...
Also... It's not that hard to make Animorphs erotica. You probably didn't even know what it was...
Girl with a dog, girl with a horse, girl with a tiger... ::) :o
Seen it, loved it... I've even requested it once.
You'd be amazed at how much Animorphs porn is out there, especially on FurAffinity (FA).
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Gaaaaaa, I have the worst timing! I started reading chapter2 while eating hot dogs :-X Gaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!
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Gaaaaaa, I have the worst timing! I started reading chapter2(2 after the prologue, so really #3) while eating hot dogs :-X Gaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!
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LOL weirdest thing I've ever read. Can't say it was bad, can't say it was good either. You're a good writer that's for sure, sounds a lot like Ax. Couldn't manage to finish chapter 1, feels kinda wrong. Gotta be honest tho, totally thought of morphing Rachel when I was reading the books lol (I mean, any straight guy probably thought of that).
But with Ax? that's just... sorta gay. ughhh..