.......*is quiet after reading the story.*......
I read the first few chapters as well.
Sure, it took me by surprise, but not for long. Cerulean does have a point though. There aren't many ways to misinterperet the topic title
While the age and... quantity of participants seemed a little excessive to me (or, rather, understandable for a species that just realised that mating could be done for fun... and money) I
have read and seen worse fanfics/fan art/erotica. You should have seen the things we sold when I worked at a bookstore... Made the Kama Sutra look like the Book of Mormon
And surely this can't be too much of a surprise to you? I am yet to find
anything to do with novels or
any form of media (video games, movies, anime, etc) that hasn't been 'tainted' by fan erotica. It's usually called Rule 34... If it exists, there is erotica of it.
Personally, my only criticism is this. If
I was (single and) propositioned with a night with a (legal) Rachael, morph or not, I would certainly pay more than US$10
And I certainly wouldn't share.