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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #120 on: October 03, 2008, 07:44:31 AM »
I didn't think of that. He has seen two women do a man, but has he seen lesbian sex?
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #121 on: October 03, 2008, 08:54:12 AM »
Probably.  The playboy channel doesn't just have straight sex... um, I mean I don't think it has just straight sex... Yeah, that's what I meant!  Anyway, Ax probably knows what Lesbians are but I don't think he'd consider it as "sex" technically since it's far from what a male and female would do to mate.  He'd probably just think that they were pleasuring each other and nothing more.  And as for something like that being in the story... maybe.  But it's probably not going to happen how you're thinking it might...
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #122 on: October 03, 2008, 01:59:26 PM »
That was a good chapter. I liked it.
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #123 on: October 03, 2008, 07:36:55 PM »
i'm still looking forward to part where Rachel finds out about it..

also, WTH is tobias? from all the books i have read, he visited (as in dropping by to talk.. not to do what Ax is doing now) Ax's scoop quite reguarly and he's been gone for a while..
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #124 on: October 03, 2008, 09:35:59 PM »
Yeah, I know Tobias has kinda been MIA, but you can just imagine that he visits whenever Ax isn't out being a prostitute or writing anything.  It would be so common for Tobias to visit by this point in the war that I guess Ax wouldn't write anything down about it.  And since there's only 2 chapters left Rachel is going to find out about it fairly soon.  (Story-wise anyway.  At the rate I'm writing it could take a few years in real time...)
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #125 on: October 03, 2008, 09:42:10 PM »
hurry up bro
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #126 on: October 03, 2008, 09:42:53 PM »
So she is going to find out? That should be priceless.

I can think of several scenarios. The funniest of which would be Rachel actually convinced to have Ax morph Marco and having sex with him. Then Marco comes by and sees them.

Extremely unlikely, though.
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #127 on: October 04, 2008, 03:12:44 AM »
Quote from: Nohensen on October 03, 2008, 09:42:53 PM
So she is going to find out? That should be priceless.

I can think of several scenarios. The funniest of which would be Rachel actually convinced to have Ax morph Marco and having sex with him. Then Marco comes by and sees them.

Extremely unlikely, though.

Hahahahaha, that would be so funny. Totally do this! haha

I know I said I wouldn't continue to read this, but you are an actually pretty good writer, and you have Ax's personality done really well.

It'd be interesting to see how Rachel reacts. My gosh, Ax is totally gonna die! :P

edit: I also remembered, it would have been funny to see Ax morph his normal male human and go up to a random girl asking if they wanted his services, XD he'd get a slap I'm sure.
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #128 on: October 05, 2008, 12:14:16 AM »
Quote from: Sylaire on October 04, 2008, 03:12:44 AM
edit: I also remembered, it would have been funny to see Ax morph his normal male human and go up to a random girl asking if they wanted his services, XD he'd get a slap I'm sure.

I'd love to see that, haha.

I can't wait for the next update, I'm really excited to see what will happen with Rachel!  This is why I usually only read completed fanfics, I can't stand the suspense. xDD
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #129 on: October 06, 2008, 09:29:14 PM »
ZOMG!  NEW CHAPTER ALREADY?!?

Yep, second to last chapter is up.  It is, of course, sort of a set-up chapter so it's kinda short (which is why it's up so quick).  The next and final chapter will be up... who the hell knows?  I'll try to get it up quick so I can finish this story but it's probably going to be fairly long so... yeah...
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #130 on: October 07, 2008, 04:11:55 PM »
aw come on man its so close to being finished
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #131 on: October 07, 2008, 08:39:05 PM »
I'M WORKING ON IT!  YOU WANNA DO MY CHEMISTRY, PHYSICS, AND MATH HOMEWORK WHILE I WRITE?!?
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #132 on: October 08, 2008, 06:20:31 AM »
I could, but I have moral standards about things like that.

Also, I'd have to pay the postage to send it to you. ;)
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #133 on: October 08, 2008, 08:54:15 AM »
You... you have moral standards?  Since when?

I agree about the postage though.
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #134 on: October 08, 2008, 08:59:57 AM »
I'm already getting ideas in my head about how this will go.
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