What if Ax started dating someone?

[Darth Revan]

eh, I think the date should be her idea. I like the idea of Marco trying to score with her and she shuts him down and goes after Ax.

[baldolera]

yeah, and in the tv show episode tobias, he could have hooked up with that girl who gave him free ice cream, just as tobias said.

[Darth Revan]

Okay, so far these are the details:


The girl's name is Alexa Marie Fisher

She'd have to be a redhead
An assistant manager of Cinnabon
She's approx. 16

Marco and Ax go to the mall checking on a reserved game at GameStop. They stop to eat at Cinnabon and Marco starts hitting on the girl behind the counter.  She doesn't take any interest in him and starts chatting it up with Ax.  Marco eventually gets the hint and leaves.



This seems to be the consensus of the thread. Any thoughts?

[Chad32]

That looks sound to me.

[Darth Revan]

Any other features? (i.e. build, height, "built"?, pretty, plain, etc.)


I was thinking 5' 3", maybe 5' 5". A little taller than average, def taller than Marco.

[Yarin]

good

[Galladerotom]

No gamestop.
A) Did it even exsist back then?
B) It probably wouldn't suit her nature. The idea is that she has a bright personality gamestop is kind of dark and noisey.
C) Ax would understand the concept of a video game making it less funny.
(Yes, the andalites have holographic games it is mentioned in the Hork-bajir cronicles)

When did we decide she had red hair?
(Is it striking red hair because only about 2% of the population has that)

[Yarin]

lets make a list of what we are doing so i know

[Yarin]

should i make a reference to him sounding British as a tribute to the animorphs the radio drama guys? lol

[Darth Revan]

No gamestop.

A) Did it even exsist back then?

Software Etc. in 1994 Is that better?

B) It probably wouldn't suit her nature. The idea is that she has a bright personality gamestop is kind of dark and noisey.

You need to actually read the whole post. I said they go to the mall so Marco can check on a game reserve, they then move on to Cinnabon, where Alexa works. Gamestop (Software Etc.) was a reason for them to be at the mall in the first place.

C) Ax would understand the concept of a video game making it less funny. 

Marco and Jake are gamers, Ax is going with Marco to check on a game. Ax isn't going to Gamestop (Software Etc.) for himself.


When did we decide she had red hair?

Early on. check page two or three

lets make a list of what we are doing so i know

What do you mean? A list of what?

should i make a reference to him sounding British as a tribute to the animorphs the radio drama guys? lol

I think it's best to let the reader divine what Ax sounds like. Forcing accents can turn some people off.

[EscafilDevice]

She should have red hair and blue eyes, that's pretty unusual. You don't want her to turn into a Lily Evans-in-fanon knockoff Sue.

Why not Radio Shack? Ax likes Radio Shack a lot.

Maybe he can take her on a date there.

[Yarin]

a date to radio shack? why not

[Darth Revan]

A date to another store in the same mall she works at? Well, he is an alien.

[Yarin]

That might add some comic relief

[Darth Revan]

Yeah, he thinks a cool date is going to RadioShack, she gets all bummed out 'cause of the lame venue, then he buys some stuff and creates a cool device for her.