Author Topic: Enter RAF  (Read 33057 times)

0 Members and 2 Guests are viewing this topic.

Offline Blazing Angel

  • God
  • ********
  • Posts: 7258
  • Karma: 94
  • Gender: Male
  • Back to the original.
Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #75 on: June 08, 2012, 10:04:23 AM »
This is going to be horrible for the swisses reputation for staying neutral...
I am a Blazing Angel. Master of deviant traps and authentic barbecue. Brothers to Rukh the banner maker, Squall the Lionhearted and Underseen the generally sort of okay.


Offline Darth Revan

  • Master of the Star Forge!
  • Gold Donor
  • *********
  • Posts: 15291
  • Karma: 408
  • Gender: Male
  • Now you see the true Dark Lord of the Sith!
Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #76 on: June 08, 2012, 07:41:25 PM »
I'd respond; but it may turn into a spoiler. PM'd.
RAFengaged to Midnight_Huntress


Offline DinosaurNothlit

  • Pixellated Prehistoric Paradox
  • Gold Donor
  • *********
  • Posts: 14066
  • Karma: 521
  • Gender: Female
  • RAWR!
Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #77 on: June 12, 2012, 10:12:40 PM »
Heh, sorry if it's been a bit.  My muse has lately been getting ahead of herself.  I keep suddenly having inspiration to write stuff that isn't happening yet.  Which, hey, means that some of the later chapters should happen more quickly, but it doesn't bode well for the ones I'm writing now:P

Chapter Seventeen

<What the heck just happened?> Dino wondered out loud.  And she wasn't the only RAFian wondering.  Everybody had just seen Lumy throw . . . something . . . to Tony, who then abruptly disappeared.  And nobody knew why.

Lumy did a little victory fist-pump, while Goom just glared worriedly at Richard.  It was almost as though Goom were expecting Richard to violently react to . . . whatever had just happened.

He didn't, though.  Richard merely stood there, stock still, expression vacant.  Then, after a moment or two, he vanished.  He had to have logged off, Dino presumed, since he was an outerworlder.  But, why?  Why would he suddenly log off like that?

Goom looked surprised, too.  Although he seemed to have been expecting Richard to react somehow, he certainly wasn't expecting that particular reaction.  He looked anxious, as though now worrying whether Richard might suddenly log on again.

"What's going on?" somebody shouted from the audience.  Others nodded in agreement, to the question that was on everyone's minds.

Goom sighed, and resigned himself to speaking, even though he didn't look enthusiastic at all about the prospect.  He looked like he would much rather stay silent and alert for whatever Richard might do next.

"Richard was . . . hacked," Goom began cautiously.

The crowd gasped, a few rising gasps trailing behind the others as each of them realized the terrifying implications of what Goom had said.  If Richard's account had been hacked . . . then who was that who had just vanished?  And how vulnerable were the RAFians, when RAF's own creator was the enemy?

"Furthermore, that was a tracking device that Lumy just threw to Tony-" Goom started.

"Oh, so that's what it was!" Lumy said loudly to himself from the audience.

"Yep," Goom affirmed hastily.  "Invented by Aquilai before he vanished.  See, I found Ax.  You know, the Animorph?"  There were a couple noises of glee from within the audience at this statement.  "Ax was able to pinpoint the signal from Richard's account.  But, he would only be able to tell who the hacker was targeting, in the very brief seconds before they vanished.  Which is why I had Lumy, with his ninja reflexes, throw the tracker to whoever Ax called out."

"So, why didn't you tell anyone about this before?" somebody in the audience sharply accused.

"Richard is an outerworlder," Goom explained.  "He can see our posts.  Anything we said, he could potentially have seen.  Which is why I saved the element of surprise until this moment."  Goom was fidgeting more and more nervously as he went on.  "Now, if you'll excuse me, I think I need to get to Aquilai's profile," he finally said.  "That's where the other half of the tracking device is, and that will tell us where Tony went to."

He turned to leave, and suddenly the entire crowd got up from their seats to follow.  Goom was not, after all, the only person who desperately wanted to know where the missing RAFians had vanished to.  The goomba heard the multitude of footsteps behind him, and turned around to give the crowd of RAFians a quizzical look, but then he seemed to decide that they might as well come along.

The entire population of RAF squeezed itself through the Social Board and crowded around Aquilai's profile, as they eagerly waited for a verdict.  A few of them had pushed their way into the room, but most of them were forced to wait in the hallway.

Goom held his breath as he fired up the instrument, Blue and Blaze watching the goomba impatiently from uncomfortably close behind him.  It was pretty easy to operate the device, Goom simply flipped the switch to 'on' and watched the map-like readout.  Aquilai had done a good job making his inventions user-friendly, it seemed.  Goom waited anxiously for a signal, as the device warmed up.

But, as it slowly came to full power, he soon realized something was wrong.  Where there should have been an indicator light, there was instead an error message.

"Locator not found?" Goom whispered aloud, reading the text that was displayed.  "What's that supposed to mean?  What's taking it so long?"

The RAFians began to murmur anxiously, the bleak news quickly rippling backwards to the edges of the crowd waiting outside the room.  In the course of the past few days, it had become a matter of dire importance, to everyone, to know where the missing RAFians had gone.  Not only because they missed their friends, but also because they knew all too well that they were all in danger.  Whatever had taken their friends, could take any one of them next.

The anxious murmur began to rise again to panic as various RAFians began to speculate, as many of them had already believed, that maybe the missing RAFians had been deleted completely.  Where they really just . . . gone?  Could that be why the tracking device had vanished?

"Calm down, calm down," Goom called out, determined to reign in the nervous crowd before a full-scale panic broke out.  "I'm sure it's just a glitch."

"Listen, people," Phoenix shouted out over the crowd, and the RAFians quieted somewhat to hear what he had to say.  "Goom and I will stay here and keep an eye on the readout, but for the rest of you, this meeting is adjourned.  Feel free to go ahead and start pairing yourselves up with newbies, older RAFians, as we planned earlier.  Introduce yourselves, and keep an eye on one another.  That's the best we can do, right now.  We'll let you all know if there are any new developments.  Go, and be sure to get some rest tonight.  Combat training officially begins tomorrow."

Goom didn't look quite so sure about adjourning the meeting, still not knowing what Richard might be up to.  But he saw that this was the best way to keep the crowd under control.  If they were forced to stay here any longer, the ambient tension of the situation at hand would only keep building up until someone finally gave way.  So he nodded his agreement, and the crowd slowly and almost reluctantly began to disperse.

Dino sighed, crestfallen by this latest turn of events.  She, like everyone else, had already been so worried for the missing RAFians, and the latest development did not do anything to ease those fears.

Dino was beginning to feel crushed under the overwhelming weight of everything that had happened.  There was so much to be worried about, she didn't even know where to start anymore.  Pootang had been an intimidating threat all by himself.  And then the missing RAFians, which included at least two of the more powerful members of the forum, had disappeared with no trace.  And now Richard, he was a bad guy somehow.  And where was the real Richard?  Was he in trouble, too?

It was too much.  Several levels past 'too much.'  Dino couldn't deal with it.  She stalked off, alone, towards her own profile thread.  She spotted several other members doing the same.  There was an atmosphere of unease as the crowd dissolved, a barely masked panic churning away beneath the surface.

Threatening to tear RAF apart.

Offline Darth Revan

  • Master of the Star Forge!
  • Gold Donor
  • *********
  • Posts: 15291
  • Karma: 408
  • Gender: Male
  • Now you see the true Dark Lord of the Sith!
Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #78 on: June 13, 2012, 08:34:12 AM »
Oh ****, the beans have been spilled!!!
RAFengaged to Midnight_Huntress


Offline Noelle

  • Jr. Xtreme Member
  • ******
  • Posts: 1417
  • Karma: 89
  • Gender: Female
  • *Insert random text*
Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #79 on: June 13, 2012, 04:15:26 PM »
*Feed's Dino's Muse*

Heh, I do that all the time too, skip ahead to write other chapters and never no where to go with the 'inbetween' ones.   :XD:

Offline Darth Revan

  • Master of the Star Forge!
  • Gold Donor
  • *********
  • Posts: 15291
  • Karma: 408
  • Gender: Male
  • Now you see the true Dark Lord of the Sith!
Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #80 on: June 13, 2012, 05:18:31 PM »
My problem is two-fold.

1st, I'm not sure which direction to take my characters, either pick up the rest of the team, or have a fight scene before they reach them.

2nd, I don't think many people were reading the fic, so the inspiration to continue wasn't really there.
RAFengaged to Midnight_Huntress


Offline DinosaurNothlit

  • Pixellated Prehistoric Paradox
  • Gold Donor
  • *********
  • Posts: 14066
  • Karma: 521
  • Gender: Female
  • RAWR!
Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #81 on: June 16, 2012, 02:43:57 PM »
Chapter Eighteen

The rest of that day was almost alarmingly uneventful.  The search for the missing RAFians had been all but called off, even the most stubborn RAFians being forced to concede that it was a hopeless effort at this point.  But nobody really wanted to start training yet, for some looming future battle against their other pressing concerns.  Pootang and Richard.

Well, that wasn't quite true.  A few RAFians were happy to practice with their newfound abilities, with Parker eagerly making the most of the dangers to be found within his HALO thread, and Cloaky quietly practicing his powers within the confines of his profile.

Richard never logged back on.  The tension across the forum was palpable, now that everyone knew what he was.  But nobody had any idea what he was doing now.  Was he planning something?  Or had knowing his secret somehow foiled his plans, leaving him to retreat from the forum, defeated?  Everyone hoped for the latter, but the uncertainty was far worse than anything else he could have done.  And there was a general consensus that it couldn't possibly be that easy.  A sense of foreboding, a vague notion that a confrontation was looming.

After spending a few brooding hours in her profile that afternoon, Dino eventually decided to 'surf, which was the term that a few RAFians had come up with for traveling between websites.

RAF was just not the place that Dino wanted to be right now.

She closed her eyes and focused, thinking the address for Youtube.  She opened her eyes in a gaudy red-trimmed cineplex, a ludicrously large poster in front of her displaying the names of the thousands of movies playing.  The numbered theatres that were listed, went up into the millions.  As she looked at certain parts of the poster, the image itself seemed to change, as it zoomed in on wherever she had looked.

Dino quickly realized that she felt different, and she looked down.  She was almost surprised to see her human body again.  That's right, she remembered.  Her RAFsona only existed within RAF itself.  Here, she would appear as human.

"Hey, Dino!" a familiar voice called out from nearby.  Dino quickly recognized Bear's human form, standing next to Rad and Blue, and smiled a greeting to the three of them.  She hadn't been expecting to see other RAFians here, away from the forum, but it then occurred to her that she had been too quick to assume that she would be the only one feeling that uneasiness that seemed to pervade the forum.  That strain of the fight-or-flight instinct, but with no visible threat that could be fought.

Rad and Blue waved as they spotted Dino.  Blue was munching handfuls out of a box of popcorn, which he offered to Dino.

"Where'd you get the popcorn?" Dino wondered, confused.  "I haven't needed to eat anything since we got here."

"Just because you don't need to eat, doesn't mean you can't," Blue responded dryly.  "I found it on a cooking website.  It's some kind of white cheddar thing.  Try some, it's good."

Dino grabbed a handful and tried it.  He was right, it was good.  "So what are we gonna see?" Dino wondered as she grabbed another bite.  "Looks like we've got lots of options," she added, gesturing at the enormous billboard of titles.

"Most of that is trash," Rad commented.  "You know, random Youtube clips, idiots doing dumb stuff."

"We could always watch something from Comedy Central," Bear said with a shrug.

"I've got some good anime I know of," Blue added.

"I wonder if there's any Stargate on Youtube," Rad thought out loud.

They argued back and forth for a while about what to watch, but eventually decided to watch one of Blue's anime shows first, and maybe some Stargate afterward.  Bear conceded that he wasn't all that set on watching Comedy Central.

There was a moving sidewalk leading from the front lobby to the theatres themselves.  The four RAFians stepped onto the conveyor belt and were swept along at a rapid clip, even though they felt none of the inertia that should have gone along with their speed.

As they entered the main part of the cineplex itself, they couldn't help but stare in awe at the vast space within.  The entrances to the various theatres were stacked up above one another in rows and rows of balconies, spiralling upwards as far as the eye could see.  Escalators connected the sidewalks on the various levels, escorting visitors efficiently to their destinations.  The moving pathways and escalators were surrounded by lit billboards for other movies, apparently based on whichever feature a particular path was headed for.

The whole place seemed oddly empty, though.  Perhaps it was the fact that the space was so vast that it dwarfed the people within it, but there were none of the crowds that Dino had been expecting to see.

This was the internet, after all.  Surely it should be packed.  Facebook had been.

But, actually . . . now that Dino thought about it, she realized that Facebook hadn't been as crowded as it should have been, either.  During her wanderings with Tony, she had encountered crowds, but they had seemed to be centralized within a certain area.  At the time, she had written it off as some kind of central hub of activity within Facebook, but the more she thought about it, the more she realized that there shouldn't have been any one area of the site that should have been more crowded than any other.  The people on Facebook should have just tended to hang out with their own friends, but why would there be more of those friends in some areas than others?

And here, too, Dino noticed certain theatres that were more crowded than others.  But here it made sense.  Some videos were bound to be more popular than others.

But still, something didn't seem quite right about it all.  Even the people Dino did see, nearly all of them seemed dull and listless.  Outerworlders?  But then, why were there so many of them?  Where were all the innerworlders?

Dino wrote off those daydreaming concerns, as they finally arrived at theatre number four-thousand nine-hundred and fifty-one.  The four RAFians filed inside, into the dimly lit rows of seats within.

They had the entire theatre to themselves, so they quickly selected the ideal spots.  Close enough to the front to get a good view, without being so close as to get neck cramps.  The seats were comfortable red plush, and the floor had none of the stickiness and trash of a real-world theatre.

The show quickly started, as if the theatre itself had sensed their presence.  It was just like being at a real movie, the wide-screen scenes quickly immersing the RAFians within the plot and the action.  For the next half-hour, they were able to forget their troubles.  They laughed and talked during the show, happily unconcerned about other moviegoers, who weren't there.  Every now and then the screen would suddenly freeze, and there was a jarring moment as they were pulled out of the action to realize that Youtube needed to buffer, but they just laughed it off and commented about the 'curse of Youtube.'

Even so, the film was over much too quickly.  They all wished that they had opted for a full-length movie instead of a show, as they quickly filed out of the theatre and off to the next.

And so went the rest of the afternoon and into the evening.  Movie to movie, show to show, they talked and joked.  It was nice.  It was one of those simple but priceless joys of life.

As the night wore on, they each slowly realized they would have to return to RAF eventually.  But somehow, they felt a lot less disheartened by the dismal RAF situation, now.

Being among friends, had reminded each of them, that some things were worth it to be afraid for.

Offline Darth Revan

  • Master of the Star Forge!
  • Gold Donor
  • *********
  • Posts: 15291
  • Karma: 408
  • Gender: Male
  • Now you see the true Dark Lord of the Sith!
Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #82 on: June 16, 2012, 05:36:52 PM »
Aw... very cute chapter.
RAFengaged to Midnight_Huntress


Offline Blazing Angel

  • God
  • ********
  • Posts: 7258
  • Karma: 94
  • Gender: Male
  • Back to the original.
Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #83 on: June 16, 2012, 07:20:48 PM »
Inworld youtube sounds fun.
I am a Blazing Angel. Master of deviant traps and authentic barbecue. Brothers to Rukh the banner maker, Squall the Lionhearted and Underseen the generally sort of okay.


Offline Horsefan1023 (Seal)

  • RAF's Resident Tumbleweed Hater
  • God
  • ********
  • Posts: 8808
  • Karma: 273
  • Gender: Female
  • TO THE BATMOBILE!
Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #84 on: June 17, 2012, 05:54:48 PM »
Y'know what?  I'm gonna do a long post about this and NOTHING IS GONNA STOP ME.  In spoilerz for lengths

[spoiler]First off, I love the concept.  Getting stuck in the Internet is an idea that's been used quite a few times, but you added this horror spin--Pootang, Richard, limbo, being downloaded.  You turned what would either be really awesome in the first place (being able to enter the Internet) or something quite mundane (downloading stuff) and made it scary.  So props for that right off the bat.

I also love how you have so many people.  In my fanfics, I always felt bad when I gave certain characters more focus than others, because they were based off of real-life people and everyone wants their screen time.  But you weren't afraid to establish yourself as the main character--which is good.  Write what/who you know.  And it keeps you from trying to give everyone a ton of "screentime" and please everyone, which can't be done.  Having too many main characters just drives you mad.  I've done that too.  :P  But everyone does have their moments of awesome, and it's balanced pretty well.  That gives those people something to enjoy a little extra, while keeping the story moving.

Ax.  Yes.  Good.  XP

I also like how the latest chapter helps to balance out the overall darker tone of the story, though it did keep the despair present, which is...good?  :P  Tone is really important, and you kept it going even with a much fluffier chapter.  So well done to that.

Overall, this is excellent.  It's hooked me right in, took a direction that I didn't expect, continued to surprise me, and I can honestly say I have no idea what's gonna happen next--which I love.  :D  Keep it up![/spoiler]

Yeah, um....no idea where that came from.  I guess I wanted to review something?  o_O
Most Insane Member/RAFian Writer 2010!

Thanks to Bear!
Blue is my WonderTwin, Myth, Blocky, Jess, Kayla, Demos, Tony are my siblings, Shorty is my cousin, Bear is my RAFsupercodetective! (Yeah awesome!)
RAFdating Ghostie! :D
:raftrophy: RAFian Writer and Most Insane Member 2011!

Offline DinosaurNothlit

  • Pixellated Prehistoric Paradox
  • Gold Donor
  • *********
  • Posts: 14066
  • Karma: 521
  • Gender: Female
  • RAWR!
Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #85 on: June 17, 2012, 11:14:09 PM »
Wow, thanks for the review!  Hearing in-depth about what my story has (apparently) done right has filled me with warm fuzzies.  :D

Chapter Nineteen

"It's getting late," Dino finally voiced aloud.  "We all need the sleep.  As much as I'm not looking forward to another night," she added with a grumble.

"What's wrong?" Bear wondered.  "Trouble sleeping?"

"Yeah," Dino admitted.  "My profile thread feels so, I dunno, lonely."  And too many demons in there, she thought silently to herself.  Left over from all the nightmares of the past two nights.

"You know, a lot of us have been bunking in the armory," Bear pointed out.  "Thick walls, lots of weapons, easily defensible.  And having other RAFians there to look out for each other, it helps."

"What, really?" Blue asked, raising an eyebrow.  "Come on, guys.  Are you really that scared of the big bad Richard?"  He crossed his arms, a show of false bravado.  "You think you all need to sleep in some kind of fortress?  And it's not like it would even help, anyway.  He has access to everywhere that we do."

"It helps," Bear insisted.  "It's a lot better than nothing."

The four of them logged back onto RAF, returning to their RAFselves.  Rad decided to come along with Bear and Dino to the armory, while Blue disdainfully stayed behind, to go back to his profile thread.

The three RAFians headed for the Roleplaying Board, where Rad pressed the button for 'RAFarmory,' and the glass ship blazed easily through space.

The ship arrived at a squat but sprawling building nestled within the other buildings of yet another possibly-alternate version of RAF, and the three RAFians went inside.  Racks of guns and munitions of all kinds, from all different universes, were mounted along matte white walls.  There were dracons and shredders and zat guns, plus a few that Dino recognized from Men in Black, and many many others that she had no clue about.

Being in a room with so many forms of destruction made Dino a little uneasy, but then, she trusted most of her fellow RAFians not to suddenly turn gun-crazy.

And the three RAFians weren't alone.  Several other RAFians were already in the armory.  Parker was standing casually, chatting with Tyler and Demos.  A few other human-looking RAFians stood apart, trying, but mostly failing, not to stare at Demos's horns and tail.

The RAFians knew, of course, that the added security of the armory wouldn't do much against Richard, who would have access to any area that the RAFians did, but at least did something towards eliminating Pootang from their worries.  The foot-thick steel walls wouldn't hold such a monster at bay indefinitely, but they would at least certainly slow him down.

And there was a certain comfort in knowing that their friends were close, knowing that they were all in this together.  It was a kind of comfort that was, in some ways, better than the soft beds and blankets of their own profile threads.

Bear led the way through the various wings of the complex, passing by room after room filled with weaponry, still more rooms with armor and other equipment, and even something that looked a bit like an aircraft hangar, before finally reaching the girl's bunker.  He waved goodnight with a paw as he padded off to the area where the boys were staying.

The bunkers looked like standard military-grade quarters, with bunked beds that would accommodate most of the more human-like RAFians.  Several RAFians seemed already to be asleep.  Seal, and a few others that Dino didn't recognize, were standing on watch, armed with dracon beams and shredders slung onto holsters around their hips.

Dino was disappointed to see that there wasn't much in the way of sleeping accommodations for an Ankylotyrannus, but Rad and Seal seemed to notice her dilemma and quickly got to work laying out some blankets on the floor for her to lay down in.

<Thanks,> she said as she curled up on the layers of padding.

She almost didn't see Tocade come in, until the smurfette wandered over towards where Dino had laid down.  The blue-skinned RAFian was only about a foot tall, yet she had an even smaller RAFian, AmberKatira, a helmacron, perched on her shoulder.  Nevertheless, Tocade fearlessly approached Dino, and leaned a hand against the wall of bony armor that was her back.  "Hey," she said in a terse French accent.  "You know, you laid down right on top of my bed."

<Oh, man, I'm sorry,> Dino winced.  <Er, I didn't see it.  I'm really sorry.>

Tocade sighed and shrugged.  "I suppose it's no big deal.  It wasn't much, just a few blankets folded up, probably hard to notice.  I can't really use a normal-sized bed, you know."

Dino nodded in agreement.  <Yeah.  I hear ya, there.>  She moved over a few feet, making room for Tocade.  <There's plenty of floor, and I've got more blankets than I need.  You're welcome to share?>

"Thanks," Tocade said, and Dino wasn't sure if she was being sarcastic or sincere.  Tocade set Amber down as they all prepared to go to sleep.

It seemed like only a few minutes later, that Dino was awakened again by something poking her side.  She breathed a low growl as she was rudely wrested from unconsciousness.

"Hey, you know you snore, right?" Tocade was saying grumpily.  "You woke me up."

<Sorry,> Dino replied.  <Well, I am a dinosaur.>

Dino was only just drifting back to sleep again when she heard a distant fractured animal sound penetrate faintly through the silence.  It was coming from down below, and the only reason she could hear it at all was because her head was resting against the ground.

She shivered, knowing what it was.  Surprised that she could hear the creature from this far away.  And she hoped that the forces they had amassed here would be enough to face that inevitable threat.

But she reminded herself that training would officially begin tomorrow morning.  Then, they would all see what RAF really had to offer.

Offline Blazing Angel

  • God
  • ********
  • Posts: 7258
  • Karma: 94
  • Gender: Male
  • Back to the original.
Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #86 on: June 17, 2012, 11:32:11 PM »
Another great chapter. I do have one question though.  Where is this armory on RAF?
I am a Blazing Angel. Master of deviant traps and authentic barbecue. Brothers to Rukh the banner maker, Squall the Lionhearted and Underseen the generally sort of okay.


Offline Blocky97

  • Jr. Xtreme Member
  • ******
  • Posts: 1601
  • Karma: 20
  • Gender: Male
  • I don't have time to be sane.
Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #87 on: June 18, 2012, 03:50:50 PM »
Read it.

ABSOLUTELY AWESOME!

And I have suggestions. PM time.

Offline DinosaurNothlit

  • Pixellated Prehistoric Paradox
  • Gold Donor
  • *********
  • Posts: 14066
  • Karma: 521
  • Gender: Female
  • RAWR!
Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #88 on: June 18, 2012, 09:00:35 PM »
Another great chapter. I do have one question though.  Where is this armory on RAF?

Well, technically, the RAFarmory doesn't exist as its own thread.  But then, neither does the RAFbasement which houses Pootang and the Yeerk Pool.  However, I figured that these places are assumed to exist, since they've been referenced elsewhere (the basement in RAFTAS, the armory in Intro Rando).  It's kinda like how Pootang and Ax are assumed to exist even though they aren't users, because descriptions of them do exist.

P.S.  All translations, both previous and future, are very approximate.  I have a feeling I'm going to offend speakers of many languages before this story is done.

Chapter Twenty

It was the next morning, and most of RAF was gathered in an open grassy field, surrounded by trees.  Everyone looked antsy for things to get started.

Earlier that morning, Dino had 'adopted' a pair of newbies, Roger and Kristin, as had been suggested at the previous RAFmeeting.  They were too new to be attached to their as-yet-unfamiliar usernames, so they opted to be simply called by their real names instead.  For some reason, that particular touch of normalcy seemed almost absurd to Dino.  They were so . . . so human.  Not just the names, either.  They both were so hopelessly confused and bewildered by everything that was going on around them, as though observing all of it from a distance.  A world apart from the RAFians.

The staff, meanwhile, had decided to begin the official regimen of combat training in a brand-new thread, a roleplay that the staff had created and titled 'Training Grounds.'  A few RAFians had tried to practice within Intro Rando for a while, but in the end it had turned out to be too, well, random, to really get any serious training from it.

'Training Grounds' was a fairly bland field, like an outdoor sports area, outfitted with different pieces of training equipment.  There were targets, obstacle courses, and sparring arenas where robotic opponents of various apparent strengths stood in wait for a challenger.

"Welcome to combat training," Terenia began.  She was still inhabiting Ash's body.  She had decided that she much preferred outerworlders as hosts, where she didn't have to listen to the internal dialogue of a sentient mind under her control.  That was just too creepy.  Ash was technically away from her computer, but she had left her RAF window up and logged on so that her avatar would stay present.

Terenia went on.  "Donut, as the only member with real military experience, should probably help to direct these drills.  Now-"

Bear raised his paw.

"The only member who can speak," Terenia winced.  "Sorry, Bear."

"Actually . . . " Bear began, surprising everyone as a voice crackled from a radio-like device mounted on his neck.  "Goom found me this morning, to give me this translator thing.  He said Aquilai made it, before he disappeared.  He said he meant to give it to me sooner, but kun cxio tiu okazis, li forgesis."

"Hey, is that Esperanto?" Weathel wondered from the crowd.  "Bear, I had no idea you could speak Esperanto!"

Bear growled in his kodiak voice, frustrated.  Goom ambled over towards him, holding what looked like a flashlight in his mouth, which the goomba waved over Bear's neck.

"Hello?  Oh, that's better," Bear said gratefully.  "It keeps switching languages.  Anyway, go on, Terenia."

"Well, then, in that case, I propose that both Bear and Donut be promoted to honorary staff, to give them authority to lead these drills and help get everyone combat-ready," Terenia said.  "I move to vote."

"Seconded!" somebody shouted from the crowd.

"All in favor?"

Hands were raised across the audience.

"Opposed?"

A few hands were raised, but not nearly as many as before.

"Bear and Donut are hereby instated as officers.  As such, they are both to be obeyed during these drills, without question.  As are myself, Estrid, Phoenix, and Goom, as staff."

There were a few groans within the crowd, but most RAFians seemed to be nodding in agreement with Terenia's judgment.

Under the tutelage of the staff and military officers, training quickly got underway.  Standard-issue shredders and dracons were passed out among those RAFians without their own natural weaponry, and soon the air was filled with the 'TSEEW' and heat of the firing lasers as the RAFians tried to hit the targets downrange.

The Andalites selected a clear area off to the side, to practice tail-fighting against one another.  The intricate darting dance of their clashing tail blades was beautiful to see.

Some newbies and RAFians seemed to quickly get the hang of their strange new firearms, hitting their targets again and again.  A few RAFians took to providing distractions for the more experienced sharpshooters, intent on giving them a better challenge.  Seal, in particular, seemed to take great joy in sneaking up and poking people just as they were trying to make a shot.

Other newbies, however, were not quite so innately talented, their shots going wild and often missing the targets completely.

<Shoulders straight,> Donut instructed the newbie Roger, as the brightly colored macaw flew overhead.  <Remember to sight along the weapon.>

"Sure thing," Roger grumbled.

<'Sure thing,' sir,> Donut corrected.  He came in for a landing on Dino's back, looking down at the newbie.  <I am your military superior.  You're to treat me with some respect.>

Roger had to fight the impulse to burst out laughing.  "No offense, sir, but it feels a bit humiliating to have to refer to a parrot as 'sir.'"

<And why is that?> he asked.  His thought-speak was public, directed at everyone within range.  He only wanted to have to say this once.

"Because you aren't exactly intimidating," Roger replied.  Then, he sarcastically added after a moment's thought, "Sir."

<I see,> Donut said calmly.  <And do you think you are intimidating to, say, a dinosaur?>

<Er, leave me out of this,> Dino said in private thought-speak.

<Or, even, how about that kid?  You think you'd scare him?> Donut quickly added, pointing his wing at Blaze.  Blaze, who had been polishing his sword behind the firing line, looked up and grinned, flaring his fiery wings threateningly, daring the newbie to challenge him.  <Calm down, Blaze,> Donut admonished.

"He looks like he's ten!" Roger said incredulously.

"Hey!" Blaze protested.  "I could kick your butt, newbie."  Looking nervously at Blaze's wings, Roger decided he didn't doubt that.

<Point is,> Donut went on.  <If you should ever outrank him, not that you will, but should that ever happen, you would want him to refer to you with the proper respect, wouldn't you?>

"Yes, sir," Roger said, slowly coming to see Donut's point.

<Why?> Donut asked simply.  <Why should he?>

"Because I would want him to respect me for my abilities and wisdom, and not my physical form, sir," Roger said thoughtfully.

<You're smarter than you act, newbie,> Donut said.

"Thank you," Roger said uncertainly.

Blaze kept his eye on the newbie as Donut left, the macaw flying off to give instructions to the others down the line.  Roger fidgeted under the angelic djinn's glare, but Dino growled gently at Blaze, reminding him that Roger was her charge, and as such he was not to be messed with.  Blaze decided that the newbie wasn't that interesting anyway, but Roger just looked even more uncomfortable, realizing that he was essentially at the mercy of the more powerful RAFians.

He tried to shrug off the worry, as he aimed and fired his dracon, trying to remember what Donut had told him about keeping his shoulders straight.  But he was one of the worse shots, even among the newbies.  Even firing a gun with no recoil, he just couldn't seem to get the target lined up right.

<It's alright, Roger,> Dino said quietly.  <You've only been here for a few days, not even a week.  You'll fit in here eventually.  Almost everyone does.>

"I'm not so sure," Roger replied.  "Most of you guys aren't even human.  How can anyone fit in?"

<I don't know,> Dino said musingly.  <But, somehow, we do.>
« Last Edit: June 19, 2012, 09:42:43 AM by DinosaurNothlit »

Offline Blazing Angel

  • God
  • ********
  • Posts: 7258
  • Karma: 94
  • Gender: Male
  • Back to the original.
Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #89 on: June 18, 2012, 10:31:52 PM »
I'm not 12. But a good chapter.
I am a Blazing Angel. Master of deviant traps and authentic barbecue. Brothers to Rukh the banner maker, Squall the Lionhearted and Underseen the generally sort of okay.