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Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #165 on: December 29, 2012, 01:10:48 AM »
You're not the only one here. Once I get free time I will write a RAFfic.
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Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #166 on: December 29, 2012, 03:25:56 AM »
In the words of an author we all know and love:

"I'm so sorry for getting you into writing.  What a horrible thing to inflict on you.  I should have just sold you crack." -K.A. Applegate

Lol.  But, on a more serious note, I'm honestly kinda touched that my RAFfic might inspire others.  Considering that mine was itself inspired by another, it would kinda seem like passing the torch, you know?  I look forward to reading whatever you guys write.  :)

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Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #167 on: December 30, 2012, 07:46:41 AM »
Yeah, well, I've already begun jotting down points, and the whole escaped-from-the-internet things plus Cloaky's glitch has given me a logical (so to speak :) ) background for my fic, so I thank you from the bottom of my heart :)

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Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #168 on: January 03, 2013, 04:23:01 AM »
I made the first chapter of the first story, but deleted it after I realized the plot was too close to Seal's story "Revenge of the banned." I might still post the story, but don't complain if it sounds at some points like it is unorginal.
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Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #169 on: January 03, 2013, 08:16:43 AM »
Gotten through 2 chapters. Hopefully it's original, coz it's my origins anyway. Will do background research!

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Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #170 on: January 03, 2013, 01:50:55 PM »
There is a chapter with you in it in mine Saffa.
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Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #171 on: January 04, 2013, 09:33:39 AM »
Of course, I have to spread my awesomeness around.  ;D I'm pretty sure I can get you a role too!

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« Reply #172 on: January 10, 2013, 10:40:36 PM »
Chapter Fifty-one

Unable to approach the battle even briefly enough to talk to Cloaky and Estelore, the other RAFians instead decided to hunt down Estrid.  It had been settled, despite some half-joking protests from Demos, that Estrid would make a mirror-wave call to inform the fighters that Seal was alright.

Seal had insisted that such important news not be kept from any RAFian, under any circumstances.  Even if it meant that the RAFians might lose the advantage that they'd briefly had against Pootang.

Estrid stood at the edge of the battlefield, readying her mind to project her thought-speak across the distance.  <GUYS!  SEAL IS ALIVE!> she called out to all of RAF at once.  A definite note of triumph could be heard in her voice, the joy of proclaiming good news in a time when there was so little to be had.

The reaction to the news, however, was immediate and shocking.  Estelore's fire suddenly went out, and they fell from the air, plunging towards the ground as if they'd taken a hit.

Although it hadn't been obvious while they were fighting, it was now suddenly very apparent that the effort had taken an extreme toll on their human avatar.  And so, as soon as they had lost the anger that had been keeping them going, they simply collapsed, spent.

"ESTELORE!" Seal yelled as she bounded forward, her heart pounding in her throat.  But she couldn't get close.  Cloaky's energy pulses were still emanating from that direction, holding back the RAFians like a blistering wind.   Phoenix glanced upward, checking to make sure Estelore's star was still in the sky, and breathed a sigh of relief.  The sun was there, burning as bright as ever.

"Estelore's okay, guys," Phoenix reassured the others.  He pointed up at them to illustrate, and as each of the others nervously looked up, they seemed to calm somewhat.

Pootang was still reeling from the assault he had just endured.  He was looking around in nervous confusion, wondering why his attackers had suddenly stopped.  Yet, for the moment at least, he was still leery enough of his surroundings that he seemed unwilling to approach any of the RAFians.  As though he now feared what they might do to him.  Parker and the other Spartans were keeping an eye on him anyway, their guns trained in his direction, knowing that the momentary peace would not last.

Cloaky, meanwhile, had stopped moving when he'd heard Estrid's call.  Simply stopped.  He stood like a statue, as if in shock, slowly and incredulously looking around at the devastation around him.  Like he was seeing it for the first time.  Like it had been someone else who had caused it.

After a long pause he shook himself back to reality, and grabbed his cloak which was laying on the ground nearby.  He loosed a snarl, but not at anything in particular.  It was like he was cursing himself.  He put his cloak back on, carefully adjusting it to cover every last inch of him.  Then, he swirled his cloak and vanished, wanting to distance himself from the destruction of his own making.

The Realm Walker hadn't gone far.  The other RAFians quickly spotted him again at the top of a nearby hill.  But it was obvious that he was keeping his distance from the other RAFians, his back turned to them.

Seal wasted no time, bounding toward Estelore as soon as Cloaky had replaced his cloak.  Logically she knew that they were okay, but it was still harrowing to see their human body fall like that.  She kept telling herself that they were fine, that the human form was really nothing more than a convenient method of interacting with other RAFians without setting them on fire.

But as the RAFians approached the human Estelore, it was difficult to believe that they would be alright.  They were barely conscious, and their body was an awful sight.  Estelore's human body was designed with extreme heat in mind, of course.  But nothing short of their actual star body could have taken those supernova temperatures and hoped to survive intact.  Their skin was crisped from their own fire, with burn scarring so severe that in places their flesh resembled melted wax.

Even though they knew that the human form was only a tiny fraction of Estelore's true form, it was hard to look at that crumpled human body and not think that they were grievously hurt.  It went against every instinct, to try to convince themselves that that human body, the 'person' that they had talked to every time they talked to Estelore, was just an expendable puppet of a much larger entity.

"We're fine," they reassured, their voice rasping but coherent, as they looked up at the worried faces of the other RAFians.  They smiled brightly at Seal, still giddy that she was not dead.  But then they sighed with resignation, as they quickly began to realize the full implications of their predicament.

"Well, this is inconvenient, isn't it?  We'll have to design a new body, it seems.  No idea how long that's going to take.  This one came pre-made."  They chuckled at the strangeness of that sentence, but went on.  "None of us has ever built a body before."

They sighed a second time, liking their situation less and less the more they thought about it.  'Inconvenient' had been an understatement.  "Needless to say, but we'll be on the bench until we can manage it.  We can't exactly fight as a star.  At least, not without destroying RAF.  Our apologies, but you'll have to find a way to maintain without us."

Estelore winced, not in pain, for they could easily choose to tune that out, but because they realized just how much their friends needed them right then.  But there was nothing they could do about it now.  Several of them mentally cursed their earlier haste, their determination to overexert themselves in their anger.  If they hadn't been so foolhardy, they wouldn't be in this situation.

The other RAFians shared looks of disappointment mixed with fear.  They hadn't even considered the possibility that Estelore would no longer be able to fight.  Estelore and Cloak's awesome powers had finally turned the battle in their favor, and now even they were out of commission?  What were any of them supposed to do now?

Seal tried, too late, to hide the disappointed look behind a mask of relief.  "I'm just glad you're okay.  We're all glad.  Right guys?"

But this was no time for anyone to hold a discussion of their thoughts.  Even as the RAFians spoke, Pootang seemed to be slowly coming around, returning to his former confidence.  The monstrous apparition was already looking down at Estelore's broken human body, vengeance blazing in his eyes.  Parker tensed as he realized that their brief window of calm was already closing.  "Guys?" he said, tightening his grip on his rifle, even though he knew full well how little use it would be.  "I think we should be somewhere else."

As Pootang continued to stare at Estelore, he opened his mouth as if to roar.  But he remained strangely silent.  Then, a slight reddish glow seemed to be building at the back of his throat.  At first it seemed like a trick of the light, as though it was just glinting off his tongue, but soon it was impossible to ignore the fact that the inside of his mouth was actually glowing redder and redder.

Blue realized instantly what was about to happen, flared his wings, and urgently shouted, "MOVE!"

The RAFians moved.  Blue picked up Seal as he flew, and the others hastily followed, scurrying quickly to a safe distance.  From there, they watched as the red glow from Pootang's mouth grew brighter and brighter.  The ominous red light seemed to shift inward on itself, like the monster was inhaling the glow from the air itself, as Pootang powered up what Blue had realized could only be the monster's massive laser.

But Estelore was not lying idle as they waited for the attack.  They summoned the very last ounce of their body's strength, and lit themselves aflame once more.  There was nothing left to lose, and they were not going to go down without a fight.  They rose slowly to their feet, trying their best to recall the raw emotion that had fueled them before.  It was wrenching, but as they thought of what could have happened, and how close Seal had come to . . . it wasn't hard to be angry at the monster that was responsible.

With that burst of rekindled strength, Estelore took flight.  At the same moment, Pootang unleashed the power of his laser, the enormous bright red beam making a horrifying discordant noise as it exploded the spot that Estelore had been moments before.  Nearby buildings cracked from the shock wave.

Estelore landed, unable to stay in the air for more than a few seconds in their weakened state.  Pootang recharged his laser, the red light building much faster the second time.  Estelore sent a burst of flame towards the monster, the unexpected attack interrupting his concentration and causing the stored red light to disperse.

Estelore fearlessly faced the towering threat, even as he refocused his wrath.  They pointed their palms upward towards the monster, channeling all of their strength into their fire, the spout of flame flowing forth like a blazing bright liquid stream.  Pootang grunted from the pain, but its fractured body glowed only slightly as it seemed to absorb the fire.  Estelore gritted their teeth as they focused more and more fire towards the monster, the roar of the flames becoming nearly deafening as billows of bright white fire poured from their outstretched hands, engulfing everything in their wake.  Pootang opened his mouth as he began to charge his laser once more, this time willfully ignoring the distraction of Estelore's attacks as he drew in red light.

Estelore felt no pain in their human avatar, but they could still sense that the fire they were channeling was quickly becoming far too much for their already-damaged body to survive.  Their hands were charred almost black, but still it was not enough power to truly damage Pootang.  Bright white fire shot forth from their hands, the thundering beam of flame now larger than their human form, blinding them as their eyes were filled with nothing but glaring white.  They could feel their human body disintegrating, torn apart by the violence of their own onslaught.

Pootang screamed in pain as he was engulfed in white fire, a hundred screams issuing forth from one mouth.  But still the monstrosity somehow remained on its feet, unbowed even by Estelore's fearsome might, as he continued to draw the red light into his mouth.  He opened his mouth wide and fired his laser once more, the thick red beam piercing effortlessly through the billowing clouds of bright flames.

It was over in a flash, no time for Estelore to move or even think about moving.  When the flash cleared, Estelore was gone, their body completely vaporized.  Only a darkened crater was left where they had been.

Pootang was hurt, too.  Estelore's final burst of flame had gone directly into his exposed mouth, and he choked and coughed for air as he inhaled superheated plasma.  He stumbled, disoriented both by pain and by lack of oxygen.  But as he drew a shaky breath, he seemed to recover his strength.  And now he was angry.  He roared, a sound that came out of his scorched throat like a savage hiss, and looked around for a target to take out his fury.

He saw the six remaining RAFians.  And now there was nothing, no force that they possessed, that could keep his rage at bay.

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Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #173 on: January 12, 2013, 12:16:01 AM »
Seems like a Godzilla  movie...
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Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #174 on: January 12, 2013, 08:53:20 AM »
Finally, you've updated! Great thing to come back to.

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Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #175 on: February 18, 2013, 04:53:42 AM »
Will you continue this?
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« Reply #176 on: February 23, 2013, 04:00:42 PM »
Oh sorry for the late reply!  I just didn't see your post.  My muse has been absent so much lately that I never bother to check my own fic anymore.  :P

Anyway, the answer is yes.  I definitely have plans for this, and don't want it to sit unfinished forever.  The problem is that, while I know where it's eventually going to go, I haven't decided yet what's going to happen immediately next.  And, well, trying to write epic legendary battle scenes, puts a lot of pressure on a muse.

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Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #177 on: February 23, 2013, 10:43:42 PM »
I know that feels
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« Reply #178 on: July 04, 2013, 07:26:05 PM »
Oooh, that is a bad feeling when you go to post in your own fic and you get the 'Warning: this topic has not been posted in for at least 120 days,' message.  Ouch.  :-X

Anyway, I've done a lot of assuring (months ago, lol) that I would finish this thing.  It's time to finally put my money where my mouth is.  I've been all kinds of inspired for the second book I'm gonna write (thinking of titling it, "End of RAF"), so I need to finish this one so I can actually write that one.

Don't really expect there to be anybody still reading this, but whatever, it's just something I need to do.

Chapter Fifty-two

"RUN!" Phoenix screamed as Pootang roared vengeance at the RAFians.  Blue was still carrying Seal, and he flew as fast as his Ketran wings could carry him.  Phoenix quickly took his own advice and rose into the air alongside him.

From the ground, Parker called out, "Split up!  He can't get all of us!"

Phoenix nodded, and veered away from Blue.  With a fearful pang, he realized Seal would still be Pootang's main target.  But if they could keep Pootang distracted from her, they all might, just maybe, be able to make it.

With his heart in his throat, Phoenix turned to face Pootang, his momentum propelling him backward as he continued to fly, and unleashed a fireball.  Even though the flaming orb was only a pinprick of pain to the monster, Pootang still roared in sheer rabid fury at the insolent insect who would dare to hurt him when he was already in pain.  Phoenix's heart beat fast in his chest as he turned away from the raging beast and redoubled his speed.

Demos, who was running along in the same general direction as Phoenix, but getting farther and farther away to his left as he ran, immediately saw what Phoenix was getting at.  He slowed, turned, and unleashed a fireball of his own.  "HEY UGLY!" he yelled with far more confidence than he felt, making sure he got the monster's attention.  It worked.  Pootang sharply turned the full force of his rage towards the new target as he charged towards the RAFians, anger blazing in his eyes.

His anger was a weakness, Parker quickly realized.  He would focus his attention on whoever presented the most immediate target, too lost in his own rage to think clearly.  The RAFians could use that.

Parker had run in the other direction, and was now several football fields' distance away from the other RAFians.  He fired off a round.  Pootang loosed a frenzied scream and whipped around, turning towards the source of the new annoyance, bounding forward to make up the distance.  But his heated rage was now driving him away from the other RAFians.

Suddenly, Phoenix saw what Parker had already seen.  That the blindly furious Pootang seemed only capable of focusing on whoever had last attacked him.  "Hey, guys, anybody remember the first Megamorphs book?" Phoenix yelled out, the sound of his voice catching Pootang's attention, causing the monster to turn his head slightly away from Parker.  Phoenix rose higher into the air and lobbed another fireball at Pootang.  Not enough to truly hurt the monster, although it would certainly have hurt or killed any normal creature.  But it was enough to draw the creature's ire, and send it lumbering in Phoenix's direction.  "TAG!" Phoenix yelled in adrenaline-fueled glee before shooting away from the monster once more.

Blue was now nowhere to be seen.  Phoenix hoped he and Seal had found somewhere safe.

Cloak, from a safe distance away, was still anxiously watching the scene.  Wanting desperately to help, but afraid.  Not of Pootang.  Well, yes, that too.  But, mostly, he was afraid of himself.

He knew that it was only luck that had kept anyone from being hurt, or killed, when he had lost control of his emotions and removed his cloak.  He had no illusions about that fact.  It had been only pure dumb luck that the other RAFians had been able to get far enough from him in time.

He wouldn't have been able to live with himself, had that not been the case.  If a RAFian had died because he had lost control . . . no, no, he couldn't even think about that.

Of all the times to forget how very fragile a life could be!  He had just watched a fellow RAFian, one of his best friends, fall into the mouth of that giant beast.  Thinking that she had to be dead.  That awful pain of loss threatening to tear him apart.

And how had he reacted to that terrible thought?  By seeking vengeance.  Vengeance at any cost.  Recklessly bloodthirsty, heedless to the other lives around him.

This was one of Cloak's darker moments.  But this was not the time for self-reflection, and he knew it.

The other RAFians needed him, right now.  They could die if he did nothing, too.  They could die by his hand, or by his inaction, and it was his choice.  He knew he wasn't a coward.  But he couldn't bring himself to abide even the smallest chance that he could become a murderer, either.

He shivered slightly, feeling paralyzed by that heavy weight of deadly responsibility on his shoulders.  Knowing he needed to do something.  But his mind too weighed down by the dire importance of what he needed to do.

The sun, Estelore's star, loomed larger and larger in the sky above the Realm Walker and the other RAFians.  It seemed that Estelore wanted to be as close as they dared to their friends, even though they knew they could do nothing to help.  The bright sunlight permeated the forum, glinting off of the buildings, and infusing all of RAF with the comforting hopeful warmth of a summer's day.  The sunlight seemed to renew Cloaky's courage, as though Estelore was lending him their own resolve.

Pootang was growing frustrated by the other RAFians, a terrible bloodlust in his eyes.  The beast had been hurt, and he would not be calmed until he had returned that pain, tenfold, upon those who would dare to injure him.  As Cloak watched, his mouth began to glow that hideous red.  It was now or never, he knew.  His friends needed him.

Cloaky stood up tall, feeling the sunlight permeate his body even through his cloak.  He pulled his cloak tight around himself, and walked back into the battlefield.  His walk soon quickened into a run, as he felt the weight of inaction slipping from his shoulders.

As soon as he was within range, he pointed his palms up at the creature and focused his energy with all his might.  "LEAVE THEM ALONE!" he roared, a flare of golden-scarlet light flashing from his hands.

And, incredibly, Pootang actually did back off slightly.  It was obvious that the creature was still afraid of what the Realm Walker had done before.  The physical damage was mostly healed by Pootang's regenerative powers, but the memory of the onslaught was slower to mend.  Cloaky lowered his hands for a brief moment, and looked up at the beast with something like pity, or maybe guilt, in his eyes.

Fear.  The monster was afraid of him.  He knew he shouldn't care.  Pootang was a beast, a rabid animal.  It didn't matter that he feared the Realm Walker.

Cloaky shook off those thoughts.  He'd done too much thinking along those lines as it was.  No, the time for thought was over, now was the time for action.

Cloak barely dodged the laser that Pootang had been able to charge while he'd been distracted, his cloak fluttering in the heat and the shockwave from the blast as he nimbly rolled away.  The charred crater behind him smoldered with waves of heat.

With all the grace of the tiger he was, he began to dart back and forth, staying always out of Pootang's reach and aim.  With every movement, he drew away from the other RAFians, hoping to draw Pootang after him.  But he knew it was only a holding action, as much as he hated to admit it.  Even with Estelore and himself combined, it had only ever been a holding action.

Blue was back, no longer carrying Seal.  He fired a beam of ice at the monster, drawing his attention away from Cloak.  Pootang turned, his anger blinding him to the fact that he was wasting time by chasing after the flitting Ketran.

Holding action though it may be, Cloak mused to himself, he had to admit it was a pretty effective one.

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Re: Enter RAF
« Reply #179 on: July 04, 2013, 07:39:38 PM »
Gonna go ahead and post the next chapter since I have it ready.

Chapter Fifty-three

The RAFians, the ones who had stayed out of the battle, had moved from the central armory to the hangar, as the Champion of RAF began to take shape.  The entity they were creating was much too big to fit in the room they had been in before.  He, or it, or they, towered above the RAFians, larger than life.

Richard was diligently typing at his computer, writing as much and as fast as he knew how, as he entered in the descriptions that the other RAFians were constantly giving him.  He had each RAFian's account open in a separate window, for they had dutifully allowed him full access.  He was posting each of their entries under their name, writing each RAFian into the aspect of the Champion that they had created.  Or, perhaps, writing the Champion into each of them.

The being that stood before them was human, or at least humanoid.  Several different humans seem to have been overlain with one another, in much the same style as Pootang, but with none of the monster's grotesque horror.  The human aspects ranged from a noble paladin emblazoned with the insignia of RAF, to the familiar visage of Chuck Norris, to another familiar face, that of K.A. Applegate.

But it wasn't entirely human, either.  There were other species captured within the being, too.  All humanoid, but not all human.  An Andalite, but with fangs, and blades on his joints, and armor like a force field.  A cartoonish figure that looked like it was made of gravel and stone.  Another almost saurian form that was red with intricate black markings.  A gigantic robot made of iron and steel.

Still other aspects were the most familiar beings of all.  RAFians.  Blaze's fiery wings extended from the entity's back.  Cloaky and Parker and Estelore's human form were overlain with one another, cloak and armor and sundress all melding together.

The RAFians, even as they wrote, had begun to notice something strange about the Champion.  Well, it was a strange feeling to most of them, at least.  But it wasn't unfamiliar to Rad, who had already encountered the phenomenon, the ineffable link between her human self and Ma'at, like two halves of a whole.

The rest of them could now sense that same connection with the Champion.  Like they were each a part of this entity that they were creating.  Literally part of it.  As though each RAFian's consciousness were stretched across two bodies.  One half in their own body, their RAFsona, the other half in the Champion.  Yet, the half that was in the Champion, was not a confused hive mind composed of half of every RAFian's thoughts.  It was all one mind, yet that one mind was also a part of each and every RAFian.

It was an indescribable feeling, yet, on some level, it felt almost natural.  It felt right.

"Okay, now PUNCH!" someone called out.  The RAFians had all been taking turns to yell out such commands, training the Champion to fight, and themselves to fight through him.  After a fractional delay, the Champion swung his giant fist through the air, dealing a powerful blow to some imagined target.

It was still Richard who had to guide the Champion's movements with his keystrokes, although he had gotten more and more skilled at reacting quickly to what the RAFians told him to type.  Think and speak and type and react, until it really did feel like it was the RAFians themselves guiding the Champion.  A lagged connection, like an old video game that took a little longer than it should before responding to the player's moves.  But they were getting better, and faster.  And they would need that ease of practice before there was any hope of going into battle.

That delay between action and reaction, though, that would give Pootang an edge.  It was hoped, however, that the Champion could be made powerful enough to overcome that edge.

Those doubts were pushed out of most RAFians' minds by a slight commotion at the edge of the room.  Saffa had returned to the hangar.  She had been selected for a special task, because she was bold enough to do what was needed, yet at the same time, it was hoped, her natural red-tailed hawk form would be nonthreatening enough to allow for diplomacy.

Only one figure followed behind her, though, not the six that everyone had hoped for.  He was multi-form, like the Champion.  All his forms were teenaged, perhaps even a young teenager, but his eyes looked much older than the rest of his face.

"Your friend explained the situation to me," Jake said to the RAFians who were expectantly eyeing him, nodding to Saffa as he spoke.  "I'm here to make sure this isn't a trap.  I might not even have come at all, but, it seems, you guys were the ones to finally take down Visser Three.  We are grateful for that.  At the same time, the last thing any of us want to do is to underestimate you.  So, for the time being, it's just me."

There was some surprised murmuring at the mention of Visser Three's death.  Who had done that?  Nobody in the room seemed to have heard anything about it.  Whichever RAFian was responsible, then, had to be one of the eight currently fighting Pootang.  Cloaky?  No, probably not, that wasn't like him.  Demos?  Parker?  Maybe.

Jake brought up some sheets of paper that he had been clutching at his side.  "I did have the others jot down a few ideas for you before I came, though.  Not sure if that helps."

Richard stepped forward to accept the notes.  "It helps," he said, as he rifled through what the Animorphs had written.  Marco's account was rambling and repetitive, as he listed historical figures seemingly at random, throwing in a few standard-issue superpowers, but it was more like he was just babbling to fill space.  Rachel had written a much more knowledgeable piece, almost as if speaking from experience, listing such things as mechanical gears and claws, the ability to change size, morphing instantaneously, responding automatically to outside influences and threats, in essence, an effortless adaptive mechanism.  Tobias's version described basically a birdlike creature, able to move faster than a falcon, and with talons like scimitar blades.

Ax's report was precise and to the point, dry and tactical, noting the importance of speed and predictive ability, as well as stating, rather un-modestly, that an Andalite would be the obvious best choice of physical form.  Cassie's was about a more natural sort of warrior, a human but with a combination of senses and attributes from various animals, the eyes of a hawk, the reflexes of a cat, the stamina of a wolf, the stealth of an owl, yet unlike the others she made no mention of actual fighting ability or any sort of weapons.  Jake himself had written about a creature with a rotating waist that could never be thrown off-balance, and eyes that could see an enemy's weak points.

Richard looked through the various accounts, his face inscrutable, as the other RAFians all leaned in to peek over his shoulder.  There were a few confused frowns at the incoherent ramble that Marco had written, but overall the atmosphere was hopeful.  These aspects sounded excellent.  Especially Rachel's.  Of course, they should have guessed that she would bring Super Rachel into the mix.

Nobody knew if the Animorphs' help was even going to work, though.  Could beings who were, themselves, created, go on to create another entity?  Well, in any case, they needed all the help they could get, and they didn't have much to lose.

Richard, still sitting at his computer, used his admin powers to create six new accounts for the Animorphs.  He wasn't sure if even that would work, either.  It hadn't for Pootang.  But maybe, since the Animorphs had given their permission for this, it would be different.

Their original names were almost all taken, of course, but he was able to create variations that were close enough.  He wrote entries detailing who they were.  Those posts would be the link, he hoped, which would bind them as their RAFsonas.  He'd never really been much of a writer, but practicing with the Champion had honed his skills, and so he was able to summarize the Animorphs with relative ease.

Within RAF, a gasp went up through the crowd, as the RAFians saw the effect Richard's move had on Jake.  The overlayered images that comprised his form began to blur together, like someone adjusting the focus on a camera.  After a second or two, as Richard finished his description, the image resolved into one clear coherent face.

Jake was no longer just a program.  He was a RAFian.  He looked down at his body, clearly sensing that something was different, but he didn't seem quite sure what, exactly, it was.

One by one, the new forms that had been described by the Animorphs merged into the Champion, as each Animorph became a RAFian, and thus each was bound to the Champion of RAF.

The Champion was ready.  Win or lose, their chances were not going to get better than this.

Hesitating, knowing that his friends' lives were now more than ever in his hands, Richard began once more to write the Champion's actions.  As he typed, the Champion of RAF took slow but confident steps forward, out of the hangar, towards the battlefield.