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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #420 on: May 21, 2012, 03:39:02 PM »
"You guys made the Pootang a White Lantern," Dino said, "and you thought that this might be a good idea?"

:dull:  You better not have done that just to mess with my story.

And Sakki?  THAT'S WHAT SHE SAID.  :XD:

Anyway, nice new chapter, Cloaky.  I like the idea of Shadow finally stepping out of Cloaky's, heh, shadow.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #421 on: May 21, 2012, 03:42:36 PM »
"You guys made the Pootang a White Lantern," Dino said, "and you thought that this might be a good idea?"

:dull:  You better not have done that just to mess with my story.

Nope, I did that because I thought it was comedic.


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
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RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #422 on: May 21, 2012, 03:49:59 PM »
Ah, sorry for jumping to conclusions, then.  What Sakki said probably biased me a bit.  :P

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #423 on: May 21, 2012, 03:54:18 PM »
Ah, sorry for jumping to conclusions, then.  What Sakki said probably biased me a bit.  :P
I was just trying to be funny >_< god i should just stop posting.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #424 on: May 21, 2012, 03:56:43 PM »
No, no, sorry, Sakki, I wasn't trying to be rude or anything.  Just . . . gah, my posts did come out rude, didn't they?  I'm the one who should stop posting.  :-X

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #425 on: May 21, 2012, 03:57:44 PM »
It's alright, Sakki, Dino.  Don't worry about it.

Anyway, I'll post the last chapter of this book soon.  Like now.  I'm gonna tell ya right now -- ain't gonna be a HAPPY ending . . .

CHAPTER TWENTY-SEVEN:
A Bittersweet Victory

The White Lanterns landed next to their RAFian brethren.  The armada was no more, the victims freed.  Flores and Screamer had a touching reunion with Ventus, Wiz and Sonica.  The living RAFians were celebrating, but the White Lanterns were not joining in.

Shadow arrived a few moments later, confirming that Malice was finally dead.  This caused the jubilation to escalate.  But throughout all this rowdiness, the White Lanterns seemed sad, bereft.

"What's wrong with you guys?" Dino said.  "We've won!"

"Yes, we have." Goom said, not looking at her.

"We have freed all these innocents," Parker said, also not meeting her eyes.

"We have fulfilled the need," Gaz said with a morose tone.

"We have fulfilled our . . . our purpose here." Cloak said, deliberately keeping his back to Shadow.

"WHAT?!" she screamed -- a monkey screech intermingling with the word.

"Shadow, we're dead," Blaze said, rather cooly.

"I know that!  But --"

"Shadow," Cloak said, gently but firmly, turning to face her.  "There's an order to things.  You know this.  You know we no longer belong here.  Our time, albeit brief, is over."

"NO!"

This time the voice was all of the RAFians.

"I'm afraid it's true," Blue said.  "We were allowed to come back -- but . . ."

"But only for this one battle." Sakki finished.

Suddenly, a bright light appeared.  Shadow ran forward, determined not to let her uncle go.  But her hands clasped on nothing.

"I love you, Shadow," Cloak faint voice was heard.  "But you don't need me anymore.  You've proven that this day.  This isn't forever -- we shall meet again . . . someday, long from now . . ."

And they were gone.  Shadow stood, still with tears, but with a renewed sense of individuality and strength.  She was Shadow, Elements Master.  Shadow, the RAFian.
« Last Edit: May 21, 2012, 04:15:05 PM by CloakedFigure »


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #426 on: May 21, 2012, 04:05:29 PM »
"You guys made the Pootang a White Lantern," Dino said, "and you thought that this might be a good idea?"

:dull:  You better not have done that just to mess with my story.

And Sakki?  THAT'S WHAT SHE SAID.  :XD:
Anyway, nice new chapter, Cloaky.  I like the idea of Shadow finally stepping out of Cloaky's, heh, shadow.
0-o mother of god, what did I just type...
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #427 on: May 21, 2012, 04:47:40 PM »
Dino and Sakki keep posting.

Anyway...



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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #428 on: May 21, 2012, 07:21:16 PM »
At least I went out by of BADASS!
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #429 on: May 22, 2012, 07:59:21 AM »
Yes, but let's reset the time back to the present, and . . . I'll post a chapter later.  Maybe.

EDIT: It's later.  Shortish chapter.  May be the last one today.  But don't hold me to that.

BOOK X:
CORPS FEELINGS


CHAPTER ONE:
A RAFy Feeling

Cloak strolled and milled around the threads.  He welcomed new RAFians, those that actually posted and weren't regulated to the subpar rank of "Lurker", an Untouchable-type of rank.

Cloak walked by Dino, who was apparently having storytime with the younger RAFians.  The sight was enough to bring a smile to even the most sour of sourpusses.  Since the Horse incident, everything has returned to normal.  Horse even joked about losing five thousand pounds.

Cloak went to his favorite hill overlooking the forum.  There, he began to hone his elemental abilities, as well as his innate energy projection abilities.

***

Meanwhile, Malice watched him impassively.

Yes, she thought, continue to practice that horrid impurity of yours.  Continue on, obviously.  Unaware of the little gift I left your pathetic Dweller friends.  You are the very example of what is wrong with youth today.  Associating with those below you.

She glared at him, and Cloak stopped practicing.  He looked around slowly and suspiciously.  He sensed her innate maleviolence, her in-born cruelty, her natural evil.  Cloak felt off-set.  But he cannot place, could not pinpoint, the location of this evil.  But he was aware of the familiarity to it.

"Malice, I know you're near," Cloak said calmly, "and I know you're planning something.  Give it up.  It won't work.  All of your other plans have failed.  Whatever you are scheming will too.  Save us both the time and energy."

Fool, Malice thought as she left.
« Last Edit: May 22, 2012, 08:19:11 AM by CloakedFigure »


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #430 on: May 22, 2012, 09:12:27 AM »
Om-in-ouuuuuuus.
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #431 on: May 23, 2012, 08:40:53 AM »
I was gonna post another chapter.  But something's come up to cause me to question my place here.  So I'm not gonna.


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
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RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #432 on: May 23, 2012, 09:00:38 AM »
WHAT?! You're serious man?
Your giving up this (amazing) fic for some discussion? There are tons more RAFian that love your work! You can't let 'em down! Haters gonna hate but don't get mad, get even!

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #433 on: May 23, 2012, 09:04:18 AM »
By here, I meant the forum as a whole.


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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #434 on: May 23, 2012, 09:58:54 AM »
If anything you've earned your place here. thousands of posts. Parodies, fanfictions and every roleplay you've ever participated in!
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