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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #390 on: May 19, 2012, 07:44:58 PM »
Just one more chapter, as I'm not sure if I'll have time to come on tomorrow.

CHAPTER EIGHTEEN:
The Fall of the Forum

"Wow.  Just . . . wow.*" Flores said.

"It was an awful time in RAFian history, it's true," Aquilai said.

"Yes," Aila continued, "the Malice started to infect the populace with those Babistarro parasites and using the Genedrome xenocytes to convert beings she considered useless into Genedromes."

"Took a matter of months." Aquilai sighed.

"We had to go underground," Aila said.

"Our Marks protected us from infection from either, but we were too few in numbers." Aquilai stated.  "We set up multiple headquarters, in case of raids.  This is the Alpha one, as you know."

"Right," Aila added, "and no one joined up with us since that incident.  You two are the first new RAFians since the incidents."

"Gee, that makes me feel all fuzzy inside," Screamer said sardonically.

"But why?" Flores pressed.  "Why us?  Why were we chosen to bear these Marks?"

"We don't know," Aquilai asked.  "But things happen for a reason.  There must be a reasoning behind it."

"I still wish I knew why we were so special," Flores sighed.

"All things in due time, young one," Aila said, gently and softly.  "It probrably will be made clear soon enough."

"Are we done with storytime?" Shadow snarled.  She did not like having to relive her uncle's death.  She still, in part, blamed herself for it.

Aquilai and Aila were aware of the internal struggle that was going on within Shadow, so they offered no hostility to this statement.

"Yes, Shadow," Aquilai confirmed.

"Good," Shadow replied.  "Someone wake Demos.  I think we may need to break into the Archives."

"The Archives?  Why on earth do you want to do that?" Aila looked shocked

"A gut feeling."

Silence.

Shadow explained further, "That's the place that chronicles the history of the 'Net.  Malice hasn't got her greedy little paws** on it.  Yet.  There's something we need to check out."

"Like what?"

"Like just how Malice created those parasites."

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*Yeah, I stole that little statement from you, Dino.  :P Sorry!

**Malice is a Tasmanian devil-form Realm Walker -- have I mentioned that?


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #391 on: May 19, 2012, 07:53:36 PM »
Why am I not suprised she is a Tasmanian Devil?
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #392 on: May 19, 2012, 08:06:17 PM »
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #393 on: May 19, 2012, 08:08:39 PM »
Why am I not suprised she is a Tasmanian Devil?

This is the reaction I hoped for.  I had to hope to make it obvious that she was.

What happened to the Lost Lan -- er, Lost RAFians (;))?  Find out in about three more chapters.

CHAPTER NINETEEN:
Tome Raider

"You think you can discover that at the Archives?" Aquilai asked.

"Yep," Shadow said, a flicker of her youthful self shining through.

"Will you be coming back here, Shadow?  Should we be expecting you?" Aila asked.

"Oh, you misunderstood me," Shadow said, her cheeky smile faltering.  "YOU'RE coming with."

"What?"

"You heard me.  'Bout time you got out of this stuffy tomb."

"But . . . who will guard the history of RAF?  And the remains of our former comrades?"

"Who said they needed guarding?  What interest could Malice possibly have in them?"

Suddenly, Demos snores stopped abruptly as his startled cry echoed slightly.

"Butter biscuits!!"

***

There was no arguing with Shadow once her mind was made up.  It was that stubborn streak that was the hallmark of her family.  Aquilai and Aila came along, and fortunately Aquilai had practiced his earthbending, so he wasn't rusty at it.

They snuck past the Genedrone guards by going underground, Bugs Bunny-style.  When they surfaced, it was dark out.  Unfortunately, Shadow's night vision wasn't nearly as good as her uncle's -- she was a monkey, and Cloak was a tiger.  But, fortunately, Cloak taught her earthsight.  She could see with her feet as easily as with her eyes.  Aquilai never mentioned if he had learned this technique, but it would seem that he could.

They easily bypassed the Archive's security, and it was at this point that Shadow became uneasy.  The security was TOO easily bypassed. . . . But she didn't say anything, put it off as mere mission jitters.

Flores noticed a red, blue, and yellow stone over to the side of the computer console.  She picked them up, and pocketed them, without knowing really why she was doing this.

They had brought a disc with them, to download any pertinent information.  They quickly made their way to the computer console, and began to access it.  But they were soon vastly disappointed.

"Nothing!  The whole mainframe's been wiped!" Aquilai cried.

"I knew the security was too easy." Shadow hissed.  "We have to get out of here."

"May I kill some Genedrones on the way?" Demos asked.

"No, Demos!!  MOVE IT!! NOW!!"
« Last Edit: May 19, 2012, 08:42:18 PM by CloakedFigure »


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #394 on: May 19, 2012, 08:34:24 PM »
Poor Esty.  At least she died awesomely.

Yeah, I seem to remember hearing before that Malice was a Tasmanian Devil, and yeah it fits.

And yay I contributed a teeny bit to the story!  :D

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #395 on: May 19, 2012, 08:43:40 PM »
Oh, you'll contribute a bit more before the book is done . . .


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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #396 on: May 19, 2012, 08:55:46 PM »
Please tell me the second last panel of http://www.giantitp.com/comics/oots0449.html this comic will happen in this book?
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #397 on: May 19, 2012, 09:00:54 PM »
Now, Blaze, that would be telling!!  So I'm neither gonna confirm or deny that.

Gonna be a shortish chapter.

CHAPTER TWENTY:
Escape from Malice

The RAFians fled, running as fast as they could.  Stopping outside the perimeter of the Malice's stronghold.  But Shadow knew they still weren't safe.  They weren't safe until they got to the nearest HQ spot.  It wasn't the Alpha HQ, but the Gamma HQ.  So they went there instead.

It was located beneath a dying holly tree, but when they discover six strange stones.  Orange, green, indigo, violet, gold and silver.  They took them with them as they decended the steps into the Gamma HQ.

"I should have known that Malice would have deleted the files," Shadow raged. "Uncle would have."

"You're being way too hard on yourself," Aquilai said, "Cloak would have been the first to admit that he's not perfect.  And he's made his share of mistakes, too, you know."

Shadow folded her arms, broodingly.

"And what about these strange stones?" Screamer asked.

"Oh, and I found these three in the Archives," Flores said.

"What could it mean?" Aila asked.

"I don't know," Demos said, serious for the first time, "but these stones . . . they have a familiar energy, I don't . . . I don't know why."

"Somehow, that's not comforting, Demos," Shadow said, bluntly.

Then Shadow approached the table where the stones were gathered, and she was surprised, too.  She felt a familiar energy that she couldn't put her finger on.

"Wait . . . are these all of them?" Aquilai asked, hesitantingly.

"Yeah, I think so," Screamer put in, "why?"

"I can't describe it, but it feels like six or so more are missing . . . this is beyond strange."

"And for us," Aquilai added, "that's saying something."
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #398 on: May 19, 2012, 09:23:56 PM »
My powers of deduction tell me your writing that in as I type.
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #399 on: May 19, 2012, 09:27:47 PM »
Nope.  I actually came up with the ending a week or so ago, and I ain't changing it.  This is gonna be the longest book yet.

Wondering about those Lost RAFians?  Well, let's find out what happened!!

CHAPTER TWENTY-ONE:
The Lost RAFians

Over the next four months, the RAFians managed to collect a diamond, a pearl, a violet stone, a black stone, a white stone, and a gray stone.  There were now fifteen stones in all.  Aquilai, Shadow, Alia, and Demos now agreed that they now had all of these special stones.

"But why are they so special?" Screamer questioned.

"I still don't know," Shadow said pensively.

Flores, however, was thinking hard about the history that Aquilai and Alia related to them months ago.  "Wait a minute, weren't there fifteen Lost RAFians?"

"Yeah, considering we managed to recover Ken and Anna's bodies." Aquilai said, surprised at the question.  Then he realized what Flores was getting at.  "You think these stones are somehow related?"

"Yes."

"That's a sound theory," Aila commented.

"If it's true, what do we do about it?" Shadow asked.  "Find a Keyblade* and wave it at them?"

"What's a Keyblade?" Screamer asked.

"Never mind," Shadow said repressively.  Then she realized, as did the other RAFians, that their Marks were growing brighter.  They were beginning to glow much like a flashlight embedded in the RAFians hands.

Then Alia shined hers on the stones, and the others followed suit.  Soon enough, the Mark appeared on all the stones themselves.  After a few seconds, the "flashlight effect" ended.  But the stones did not lose their own marks.

In fact, the stones were growing bigger.  And bigger.  And bigger still!

"Nice," Screamer said, "we collected those stones so they can crush us to death!!"

"No, wait!  Look!" Flores shouted.

The stones had stopped growing larger.  But silhouettes begun to appear within them, before the stones eventually shattered, and fifteen beings stood dazed.

From the red stone, Rad was burst forth.  From the orange, Dino in her compact size was brought forth.  From the green, Green Lantern Sam AKA crossoverfan with a fully-charged ring burst forth.  From the indigo, a weary Noelle burst forth.  From the blue, Cerulan burst forth.  From the violet, Alic burst forth.  From the yellow, Yunyun fluttered forth.  From the gold, Azzy came forth.  From the silver, RYTX burst forth.  From the diamond, ND tumbled forth.  From the pearl, SkyeMorpher flew forth.  From the black, Asmo came forth, shaking his head to clear it.  From the white, Horse tumbled out.  From the gray, Genies stepped forth.

It was the Lost RAFians!

"Wha . . . what happened?" Azzy said.

"You . . . you're alive!" Alia, Aquilai, Demos, and Shadow exclaimed happily.

<Of course we're alive . . .> Noelle said, then she eyed Shadow.  <Cloak, you look different.>

"Noelle, I'm not Cloak.  I'm Shadow," she replied.  "Uncle is . . . is . . ."

Noelle got the gist.

"But how?" RYTX blurted.  "He was alive yesterday!"

"No . . . he wasn't." Shadow said quietly.

"Guys," Aquilai said, "It's 4532 AD."

"WHAT?!" the fifteen said in unison.

"You were somehow trapped in some strange stones," Demos explained.  "We don't know how."

"You must have been in a suspended animation sort of deal," Flore said.

"Who're you?" Alic asked.

"This is Screamer and Flores -- they're new." Aquilai said.

"Two and half thousand years . . ." Green Lantern Sam said.  "And my ring's still fully charged!"

"Perhaps your ring was also in suspended animation?" Screamer suggested.

"Perhaps."

Shadow sighed.  "There is much we need to fill you in on."

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*Referencing where I got this idea.
« Last Edit: May 19, 2012, 10:03:22 PM by CloakedFigure »


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #400 on: May 19, 2012, 10:05:02 PM »
Says the writer who added my sobbing hysterically and complaining that my weapon couldn't become a truck into the story. I'm afraid I just don't buy it. :P
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #401 on: May 19, 2012, 10:08:18 PM »
Think what you like, Blaze.

We've seen one kind of Lantern in this book, soon we'll see another kind . . .


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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #402 on: May 19, 2012, 10:16:08 PM »
Wow, interesting development.  Heh, at least I'm kinda used to being randomly thrown thousands of years through time.  Compared to being 65 million years out of place, a couple thousand years is not so bad.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #403 on: May 20, 2012, 08:59:53 AM »
Which is why you're adjusting the best of the fifteen, Dino.

And I'm sorry, no new chapters today.

EDIT: I lied.  Here's a new, albeit short, chapter.

CHAPTER TWENTY-TWO:
The Neverending Struggle

The six filled in the newly revived Lost RAFians, who still reeled from the sheer amount of events that they missed.  Even Dino, who adapted to the time shift much better than the others, was astonded at the lost of so many RAFians. . . .

But then they recieved a SOS.  The other RAFians were embroiled in a battle with Malice's forces outside the perimeter of the Zeta HQ.  Then the Lost RAFians, the two newbies, and the four other RAFians dashed from the Gamma HQ to join their comrades in battle.

***

Richard and the others were sorely outnumbered.  Malice's Genedrone forces were just too numerous.  They were being battered and there really wasn't much that they could do.

Then Shadow, Aquilai, Alia, Demos, Flores, and Screamer entered the fray.  Shadow using all her elemental might to subdue many of the genetic abnormalities.  Demos getting very close to killing many, just remember Shadow forbidding him from slaying them.  Aquilai using his earthbending much in the same way Shadow used her terrakinetic power.  Alia was fighting in expert hand-to-hand combat.  Flores was entangling their foes in trees and vines.  Screamer was using his sonic scream to subdue the armada.

But it was still too much.  Too many Genedromes.  As Malice used a rail thin twenty-something to gloat about.

"You really think a mere addition of six will help you any against my forces of thousands?!"

"Six?" Screamer asked in mock confusion.

"Someone needs a math lesson!" Flores taunted.

It was then that Rad discharged her weapon, subduing five Genedrones at once.  Then followed with a series of four more additional zaps.

Then Dino's deafening, bellowing roar was heard above all the clamor and yells.  She easily headbutted fifteen out of her way, and smacked twice that with her tail.  She unleashed another terrifying roar.

Noelle and ND pranced into battle with their tailblades snapping.  Their eye stalks swiveling constantly.  They covered each other's backs.

Cerulean speeded around, taking about a quarter of all the Genedrones weapons from them.  He easily zipped around the force's attacks with the ease and grace of a gazelle.

Yunyun flew it and slashed at the force with a special, mystical sword.  She showed her aerial expertise in attacking.

The Green Lantern, Sam, flew around, making constructs made of green light.  A hand to slap the forces silly, but also a shield to protect the wounded RAFians.

Azzy arrived upon an ice bridge, mimicking Iceman, with Horse riding shotgun behind him.  The two landed and began to cryokinetically attacking the forces with amazing skill and technique.

All seemed to be turning in the RAFians favor.  The armada was breaking up and fleeing.  But the RAFians were too weary to celebrate this early.
« Last Edit: May 20, 2012, 12:06:37 PM by CloakedFigure »


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Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
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RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #404 on: May 20, 2012, 12:29:00 PM »
Shortish chapter -- we're nearing the end of the book.

CHAPTER TWENTY-THREE:
A Short-Lived Victory

Alas, this victory was not to be.  Soon enough, the Genedrome forces began to regroup and then savagely began to attack the newcomers, viciously and without mercy.

Dino was tied down as if on Lilliput.  The rest were horribly slashed, crushed and beaten.  Sam managed to use his ring to hold the horde off from the wounded.  He poured all his willpower into it.  But he knew . . . he knew this wasn't gonna last forever.  Either he would give out or his ring would.

Shadow, however, stubbornly refused to get behind the shield.  She fought using all her elemental might.  But there was just too many!!  Malice's forces had the advantage of numbers, and she knew that the RAFians would be reluctant and hesitant to kill any of them, because they knew that the Genedrones were just victims of a parasite.

Shadow wasn't as big as fool as she would seem.  She knew that not even a Realm Walker can battle forever.  She was well aware that this battle could outlast her.  But she would not give up.

"That was your calvary?  That was your final battle?  You don't even have an exit stragedy, do you?" Malice crowed through her puppet.  "You must submit!  You must yield!  The battle is lost!  You cannot win against my mighty forces!  You will be destroyed ruthlessly and without mer-- what the deuce?"

As she spoke, the brightest and purest shade of white light appeared in a flash, and remained blinding.

"A ball of light attempts to save these RAFians?!" Malice said through her puppet, with a raucous laugh.  "How pathetic!  How ludicrous!  How --"

"Hey, Malice," a familiar voice said, as several footsteps could be heard landing.  "Shut up."

"No way . . ." Shadow gasped.

"It can't be . . ." Richard, bloodied and bruised, whispered.

Sam was so shocked, he nearly dropped his shield.  "They're . . . they're WHITE Lanterns. . . ."


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.