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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #360 on: May 24, 2010, 08:46:56 PM »
<<Zorish tipped over the container, but didn't actually do anything to Myitt. So yes, she's fine. I'm sorry I let Zorish go, but I will catch her! Just bring Sukohn aboard and I will return with Zorish.>>


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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #361 on: May 24, 2010, 09:00:00 PM »
((You know that a Yeerk will die if it is left out of liquid for too long. It'll dry up))

Zorish is tiring now, his steps are becoming more staggered, but up ahead he can hear voices and movement. He hopes that means that he is nearing a crowd of innocents. Even a bunch of power-hungry Andalites and Yeerk traitors wouldn't shoot into a crowd of helpless humans.

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Far above Earth, on the Blade Ship of Visser Three, a private communications channel begins to beep an incoming message.

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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #362 on: May 24, 2010, 09:03:47 PM »
(Not that Claxter knows that.)

<<Think you can trick me, huh? Well I may have fell for that, but there's one thing my first Prince drilled me on until I passed out from exhaustion. and that's hunting down and wasting Yeerks!>> He taunted. He could see her in the distance, and fired some shots. They were low power because he wanted to keep Tamora alive.


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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #363 on: May 24, 2010, 09:20:33 PM »
((Yup...uh...being on the ground is pretty bad.))

Tara staggers to her feet, clutching her side.  "Oh, Jesus," she mutters, feeling nausea rise up in her throat again.  She clutches her Dracon and looks back and forth before deciding to head toward the ship.  If Zorish had escaped...oh, she could only hope Myitt was okay...

She starts to half-run, half-limp.  "Hey!" she calls out.  "She's getting away!"  She stops by the ship's hull and catches her breath, her side stinging terribly. 


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No, no, no... Myitt dismally tries to flip around into what's left of the fast drying sludgy water.  Don't think about being stepped on.  Don't think about it. 


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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #364 on: May 24, 2010, 09:37:45 PM »
Zorish continues weaving through the forest, using the trees for cover. Quite abruptly he bursts out from a group of trees. Looking expectantly for someone...anyone... his face falls when he realizes that he is nowhere near the city. Instead, he seems to have doubled back without realizing it. There is an unknown Bug Fighter nearby, which seems to have at least one passenger silhouetted in the window. Nearby is an unconscious man. The girl who had shot at him was nowhere to be seen, but in the distance he could make out a glint of The Mirage.

"****," Zorish hisses. With no other options he heads straight for the Bug Fighter, yelling as he does so.

"Hey! Is anyone in there? Open up, damn you! The Andalite's are coming!"

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On the Blade Ship the frantic beeping of an incoming message comes to an abrupt halt. Terenia's quick, nervous thought-speak fills the room, delivering a warning.

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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #365 on: May 24, 2010, 09:43:56 PM »
Sukohn hears something behind him. "Christ." he said, and ran back to the bug. Upon seeing the woman closely, she reminded him of the Human morph of Terenia. "It's a hologram. Get in. Hopefully whoever ran after you is the only person left on the ship. Now move!"

When he started moving into the ship, he noticed the dracons in Marco's cell were going off. Then the door to the room broke open, and a burnt Gorilla came out.

"My, your tolerance for pain is bigger than I thought it would be."

<Let's see how good your tolerance for pain is.>


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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #366 on: May 24, 2010, 09:51:36 PM »
Zorish is about to run aboard the ship when all of a sudden his pathway is blocked by a rather large animal. A rather large animal that Zorish has most definitely seen before on the holo-feeds.

"Andalite!" He hisses, staggering backwards. With no Dracon Beam he is utterly helpless against the beast. Zorish glances at Sukohn, then back to the gorilla, backing away further.

"Yeah, good luck with that," he says, "which way is civilization? I don't have time to fight a damned Andalite bandit right now!"

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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #367 on: May 24, 2010, 10:10:07 PM »
((Chad, I have a suggestion to make. I get the feeling that you're trying to move the plot along much faster than necessary. Your last post is an attempt to wrap up two story lines in one fell swoop, and the way it's written pretty much gives Zorish no choice but to take the hit, and you've already decided that Sukohn will be surrendering. Since no one else has had a chance to post in a few rounds it might serve the plot better to let both the Sukohn and the Zorish storylines go on a tad longer (be a little less linear, if you know what I mean).

Like I said, you don't have to. Just a suggestion. :) ))

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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #368 on: May 24, 2010, 10:19:54 PM »
(yeah, I kind of wish this chase scene didn't happen at all and we could get back to the bar. I'll change the post, though.)

Sukohn started aiming one of his two Dracons at Marco when he arrived. Claxter finally caught up and aimed his shredder, but Sukohn trained the other on him. "I can't believe how much my plan has gone to pot."

<Drop the weapons and surrender. Both of you are coming with me.>

"I don't know your name, or why you were captured, but I'll try to hold these two off. The town is back behind the bugfighter. Just go."

Marco was trapped in the doorway, and Claxter couldn't afford to take his shredder off Sukohn. They were in a standoff.


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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #369 on: May 24, 2010, 10:27:53 PM »
((Thanks, Chad. I appreciate it. :) Maybe it would help if you viewed this not as a 'we have to get back to the bar as soon as possible' type of thing. We all (mostly) have characters in the bar already, so it isn't as though there's a massive urgency to fly through the storyline. Remember, the destination isn't the important part - it's how you get there. That's what writing is all about, and all rping is is writing.

Anyhow, that's my soap box. Thanks for modifying. I'm off to bed after this post. See y'all in the a.m.))

Zorish freezes in surprise as Claxter emerges from the trees. Andalite in front, Andalite behind. The situation was rapidly deteriorating.

"Sub-Visser Fifty-One," Zorish grunts to Sukohn as he backs away from the stand-off, "call on me if you get out of this alive. I'll make sure you are rewarded for your help."

With that, Zorish turns and runs, making his way behind the Bug Fighter so that it could serve as cover while he made his escape.

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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #370 on: May 24, 2010, 10:34:04 PM »
<<I have found the real Sukohn! Zorish is getting away, and I am in a standoff. I require assistance!>> Claxter yelled.

<You didn't tell your subvisser what you knew about me?> Marco asked.

"She would just take the credit. For what it's worth, I lied about taking your friends."

<And I'm supposed to believe you?>

"I can't prove it."



« Last Edit: May 24, 2010, 10:37:32 PM by Chad28 »


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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #371 on: May 24, 2010, 11:52:29 PM »
Ossanlin curses under his breath and sends out several personal thoughts to get control of the situation back.  The first one goes to Tara.  <<Tara, get into the Mirage and make sure Myitt is okay.  Get her back in your head and man the Mirage controls, I need someone ready to blow this bug to bits if it lifts off, I would also appreciate it if you kept an eye on Zorish's position.>>

The next one he sends to Alic.  <<Aliciania, Zorish has just fled towards the city.  You're in your human form, you know the culture, and you can contact me with thought-speech.  Please chase Zorish and apprehend him.  I do not know how he escaped, but it's not important at the moment, we need to get him back into custody.  I need to deal with this Imperial.  And take care of yourself, you better be alive when we come to back you up.  I'm sending Hadrin after him as well.>>

<<Hadrin, please chase that Yeerk, you know him better than anyone else here.  Perhaps you can anticipate his movements.  Aliciania is also chasing him, meet up with her if you can, she's our communications line.  I need to go take care of this Imperial.>>

The final one is to Claxter.  <<I'll be joining you Claxter.>>  That was all he said as he quickly ran into the clearing, Shredder aimed levelly at Sukohn, setting on stun.  "Give up Imperial, you're outgunned and outnumbered.  You will not be upsetting the timeline today."
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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #372 on: May 25, 2010, 12:03:03 AM »
Hadrin hears the silent thought-speech directed towards him, and nods, although no one can really see it. 

"Alright, here goes nothing," he whispers aloud to his host, Justin.  They start off in the direction of Zorish's trail, having seen and heard her run through the woods.

Tara steps on board the Mirage, her heart in her throat.  She glances at the med bay, noting that of course it is empty.  Her gaze next falls upon Myitt, squirming on the floor and drying up next to the discarded and empty tupperware container. 

She rushes forward, holding her side, and gently picks up the Yeerk slug, stroking her back.  "Shh, it's okay, old buddy," she says, wincing as she holds Myitt up to her ear.  The pain in her ear canal, in her head, is fleeting, numbed. 

In a few moments Myitt begins to feel the dull ache of pain in Tara's side, and then the full force of the pain hits her.  She staggers to her feet, hitting the console as she regains control of her host, and is barraged by the active memories of the last hour or so. 

For what seems like a long time Myitt stands there, staring blankly at the controls, before she looks up and taps at the few feeble manual controls. 

"Weapons," she whispers, grimacing as another stab of pain hits her side.  "Okay.  Okay."  The rush of Yeerkish fear hormones from flying across the room is still surging through her body, and Tara's tensed up state isn't helping.  Her breath comes in short gasps, and desperately she thinks, Weapons, access weapons.  Eventually the basic controls appear and she is able to manipulate them, although the Andalite characters are familiar yet alien, much like Japanese versus ancient Chinese.  She starts to panic again, trying desperately to read through the control options, and keep track of Zorish.  How?  She manages to perform a broad scan of technology, the controls weren't too different for that sort of thing, but her human heart was still pounding in her throat.  She kept forgetting to breathe. 




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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #373 on: May 25, 2010, 09:04:48 AM »
"That's it, I guess." Sukohn said as the standoff ended with Oss showing up. He dropped his weapons and raised his arms in surrender while his host screamed in his head pleading in silence not to die.

Cody began regaining consciousness, but was in no position to run or fight. "Oww. My back!"

<I feel like I'm missing chunks of the story here, but you guys seem to have things covered. I'm going to go make sure all my friends aren't controllers now.> Marco said and began leaving.

<I am sorry Prince Ossanlin. Zorish said his host needed to relieve himself, but I was in an unfamiliar body. The hatch was still open, and I was trying to be nice, but now I'd just like to fry him! No more nice Warrior!>

"Not even sure why you guys are nice in the first place. what's in it for you anyway?" Sukohn asked.


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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #374 on: May 25, 2010, 09:56:47 AM »
Myitt manages to lock in on Sukohn's Bug fighter, but there's no visual of Zorish outside.  She curses at the convoluted computer system.  

"Why can't you cooperate like a normal computer?" she hisses, hastily pushing a strand of frizzy hair behind her ear.  "Silprek ne oto ****ing thought speech commands...heat signals, yes, very good, you wretched machine!"  She manipulates the holoscreens in a huff.  

"What the hell is that?" she whispers, picking up Marco's hulking heat signal as he retreats from Sukohn's ship.

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Hadrin steps out into the clearing where Claxter had been in the middle of his standoff.  He trains his Dracon on Sukohn's now visible form, his new host.  It must be him...

He glances at Ossanlin and Claxter.  "Let's get moving," he says tersely, sneering at Sukohn, "before my finger starts itching."
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