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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #915 on: September 13, 2012, 11:18:50 AM »
Yes.  It's an alternate future though.  The next book will be back in the normal continuity, at the normal time.  Sorry, I have habit of being vague like that I'm afraid.

Again, new page --

  • Book XVIII: Hostages Wild
  • Book XIX: The Clone Wars
  • Book XX: The Darwin Gun
  • Book XXI: Other Side of the Tracks
  • Book XXII: Pits of Terror
  • Book XXIII: RAF Comix
  • Book XXIV: The First Master
  • Book XXV: RAF -- The Musical
  • Book XXVI: Outage Outrage
  • Book XXVII: Infinity and Eternity
  • Book XXVIII: The Virus Rings
  • Book XXIX: Soul-Suckers
  • Book XXX: Mayhem of the Music Miser
  • Book XXXI: The Metal-Maker
  • Book XXXII: Richard is Missing
  • Book XXXIII: Emotional Food
  • Book XXXIV: Transformation Confrontation
  • Book XXXV: Richard's Horn
  • Book XXXVI: Feral Scream
  • Book XXXVII: Predators and Prey
  • Book XXXVIII: A Protean Problem
  • Book XXXIX: The Horsemen
  • Book XL: Sizeable Pain in the Necks
  • Book XLI: RAF's Nightmare
  • Book XLII: Unlucky Charms
  • Book XLIII: The Piper
  • Book XLIV: The Wishing Star
  • Book XLV: A War of Armor
  • Book XLVI: The Worst Plague
  • Book XLVII: Little Alien Napoleons
  • Book XLVIII: Go Away!
  • Book XLIX: RAFian Tales
  • Book L: Maul
  • Book LI: Erised Orbs
  • Book LII: RAFians Alive!* -- an out-of-normal-continuity book
  • Book LIII: The Pain Reliever*
  • Book LIV: Beyond the Veils*
  • Book LV: Dangerous Deals*
  • Book LVI: Of One Mind*
  • Book LVII: The End of Time* -- another out-of-normal-continuity book
  • Book LVIII: Hematomimic*
  • Book LIX: Sins of Youth*
  • Book LX: The Replacements*
  • Book LXI: Arachnoids*
  • Book LXII: Personal Tissues*
  • Book LXIII: Memory Today, Gone Tomorrow*
  • Book LXIV: Appliance Armageddon*
  • Book LXV: Prodigy and Composite*
  • Book LXVI: The Merging*
  • Book LXVII: Be A Doll*
  • Book LXVIII: RAF Captors* -- yet another out-of-normal-continuity book . . . unless I change my mind.
  • Book LXIX: Dinosaur Island*
  • Book LXX: Corrupted*
  • Book LXXI: Artificial Skins*
  • Book LXXII: Separation Anxiety*
  • Book LXXIII: A Thing About RAFians*
  • Book LXXIV: A Planted Idea*
  • Book LXXV: Vacation Photos*
  • Book LXXVI: A Personal Gremlin*
  • Book LXXVII: The Rust is Silence*
  • Book LXXVIII: The Toyman Cometh*
  • Book LXXIX: RAFian Idol* -- yes, just another excuse to put in more of the (as of writing) nearly 800 parodies.
  • Book LXXX: Savage Heart*
  • Book LXXXI: Slave Islands and Juggernauts*
  • Book LXXXII: Shredding a King*
  • Book LXXXIII: RAF -- The TV Show*
  • Book LXXXIV: The Drinker*
  • Book LXXXV: The Last Laugh*
  • Book LXXXVI: It's A Mad, Mad, Mad Villian*
  • Book LXXXVII: Sight Unseen*
  • Book LXXXVIII: Don't Let It Snow*
  • Book LXXXIX: The Rachel Toxin*
  • Book XC: Virus Alert!*
  • Book XCI: A Youthful Thief*

Again, the (*) denotes a book I have yet to do the chapter-by-chapter notes for.
« Last Edit: September 13, 2012, 11:21:52 AM by CloakedFigure »


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #916 on: September 13, 2012, 11:25:51 AM »
I actually like the out-of-continuity books. I am big into alternate realities.
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #917 on: September 13, 2012, 11:27:25 AM »
Good -- because, as you can tell from the list, there are gonna be two or three more.

EDIT:  Okay, I was wrong about finishing off the book today.  That'll fall to tomorrow's work.
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Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #918 on: September 13, 2012, 12:07:43 PM »
I'm fine with that. You made Massacre seem amazingly powerful in the last chapter, so I would wonder how you will defeat him.
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #919 on: September 13, 2012, 12:14:20 PM »
Who says that I'll defeat him? ;)

I may post again after I go and get the mail in about 45 minutes. . . . Haven't decided yet.


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Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #920 on: September 13, 2012, 12:43:42 PM »
Well, with you and Estelore left you basically said it yourself.
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #921 on: September 13, 2012, 01:28:18 PM »
Well -- granted.  But I still think you'll be in for a surprise.  I'll post another chapter in a bit.  Got some stuff to do right now, but I start working on it in . . . thirty minutes, probably.  Shortish chapter . . . probably.

CHAPTER EIGHTEEN:
Then There Was One

Estelore and Cloak managed to get a safe distance away from the monster.  Cloak was in great pain, but he hid it from Estelore.  The time will come to drop the bombshell, and now wasn't quite it.

"Everyone . . ." Esty said, tearfully, seating herself on a solid rock protruding rather indignantly from the loamy soil.  It was rather disconcerting and heartrending seeing Estelore so tearful and morose.  Just knowing that Cloak would be adding to it, didn't make him feel better.  "Everyone is . . . is . . ."

"Gone," Cloak supplied, his hidden pain making his voice sound rough and grizzled.

"What are we gonna do now, Cloak?  We both cannot take that thing on.  As powerful as we both are, we cannot do it alone. . . ."

"And there's one more thing," Cloak said, unable to hide his pain any longer.

"Cloak . . . you're in pain," Estelore said, standing up.

"More than that, I'm afraid, Esty," Cloak said, struggling with the words.

Estelore got his meaning instantly, and rushed over to Cloak.  "Oh no!  Not you too, Cloak!"

"Alas, Estelore, it's true.  I'm dying." Cloak said.  "I'm just holding myself together through sheer will.  I'm . . . ah . . . stubborn like that."

"But this . . . this . . . this is impossible!  Realm Walkers are the only ones that can slay a Realm Walker -- you said that yourself."

"And Massacre was enough Realm Walker to accomplish it," Cloak said.

"What?"

"I felt familiar energies within Massacre." Cloak said, reclining now.  "It was the essences of Malice and Abomination."

"Malice and Abomination are controlling that thing?!"

"No, I did not say that.  I said it was the essences of them."

"Wha -- what are you talking about?"

"It's a rare occurrence.  Sometimes, when a Realm Walker dies, the essence -- a compilation of the Realm Walkers knowledge, skills, and strengths -- remains as the mind and soul go on." Cloak said.  "It's not really known why or how this occurs.  Most call it a 'deux es machina'."

"That makes no sense."

"Probably not," Cloak agreed.  "But it's the only way that . . . that you can beat Massacre."

"What are you talking about?" Estelore said, wondering if Cloak had gone delirious.

"When I die, and I will, perhaps this will occur," Cloak said, breaths getting ragged now.  "And then you must absorb the essence, the culmnation of all my knowledge, skills and strengths will be at your disposal, as well as boosting your own powers beyond their usual zenith."

Cloak coughed.

"The decision is yours to make my friend," Cloak continued, determined to get the message to her.  "But it just may work.  It's the only shot we got."

With that Cloak shut his eyes, and spoke no more.  Moved no more.  His body began to dissolve into soft golden scarlet energy, and a wisp got flung off, and Esty, without really thinking, snagged it from the air, and absorbed it into her being.  He powers increased to a point where she knew she could take on Massacre . . . but she remained herself.  She looked at the rather empty cloak, and she bundled it up.  Then placed it aside . . . Shadow would deserve to know what happened to her uncle -- to know of his death.

Little did either of them realize what true power could come from this.  How powerful and dangerous the Mark had become.
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Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #922 on: September 13, 2012, 02:26:59 PM »
*edge of our seat!*
The universe is, instant by instant, re-created anew. There is, in truth, no Past, only a memory of the Past. Blink your eyes, and the world you see next did not exist when you closed them. The only appropriate state of the mind is surprise. The only appropriate state of the heart is joy. The sky you see now, you have never seen before. The perfect moment is now. Be glad of it.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #923 on: September 13, 2012, 02:57:09 PM »
Wow, no wonder it is an alternate future.
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #924 on: September 13, 2012, 05:15:24 PM »
-waits for Shadow to come out and be all awesome-

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Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #925 on: September 13, 2012, 08:16:30 PM »
Taken out on a bad joke. That's a horrible way to go.

Great chapters! This is exciting.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #926 on: September 13, 2012, 09:30:06 PM »
-waits for Shadow to come out and be all awesome-

Sorry, Shadow had already done her part in the story, and Estelore is still a Realm Dweller.  Nothing can change that.  But you'll have to find out more about this tomorrow.  My brain is far too sluggish to post another chapter right now.

(At least it gives me something to take my mind off of waiting for my White 2 game to come -- next month -- as well as that new Heroes of Olympus book.)
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Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #927 on: September 14, 2012, 01:18:04 AM »
Holycrap holycrap holycrap.  I just got caught up and that's pretty much my only coherent thought about current events.  Well, holycrap, and EPICNESS.  :D

Definitely have to agree with Underseen about the alternate realities thing.  I've noticed that you allow your stories to be much darker when you're writing in an alternate-future timeline.  I like to read stories with an edge to them, and doubly so with stories that are as action-packed as yours always are anyway.

As mentioned in the karma I just gave you, I also very much enjoyed the fight scene between me and my bane towards the beginning of this book.  Might be inspired to draw it, even.  Dragosaurus vs Ankylotyrannus, does it get more epic than that? dumb question.  Obviously it does.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #928 on: September 14, 2012, 07:33:12 AM »
Thanks, Dino.  :-]

Anyway, I probably will finish off this book today.  I just need to wake up a bit -- tough time going to sleep last night.  Might be be a short chapter, but probably not.  The battle had begun.

CHAPTER NINTEEN:
Unity Obliteration

Estelore flew towards Massacre, seemingly unaware of the golden-scarlet energy that seemed to amplify her avatar's natural beauty and power, and that rolled off of her in tongues of energy, before dissipating.  Unlike Massacre, who fed on terror and fear, Estelore pulsated an energy that, had anyone been around, would have increased the level of hope in their hearts -- effectively nullifying any terror or fear on which Massacre could feed.

Massacre remained in the rubble that was once RAF, sitting with crossed legs, like a pouting child.  It pained Estelore to see the forum she adored reduce to ruin like that.  But the forum was built due to the RAFians, the sense of community, that was found there.  Without the other RAFians, even if the buildings and threads were still intact, it would be cold and lifeless.  It greatly pained Estelore to realize this.

She descended and found that she was now of equal size as Massacre -- both standing as tall as the smallest Megazords.  It was some time before Massacre deigned to recognize her arrival.  Estelore realized Massacre was nothing more or less of a spoiled brat.  But, then again, the same could have been said of both Malice and Abomination.

"Rise," Estelore said.  She spooked herself a little when she heard how ethereal her voice sounded now.  "Rise, you rotten, evil, little brat.  Rise, and pay for your crimes!"

"Crimes?" he said, with a chuckle.  "What crimes?"

"Genocide, for one?" Estelore said, voice quite cold and hard.

"Genocide?  I cannot be guilty of that!" he replied with a laugh.  "You cannot be genocidal when you slay insects!"

"They were sentient beings," Estelore said.  "And you killed them.  For what?  Enjoyment?  Entertainment?!"

The golden-scarlet energy stopped appearing so benign and flared into a fiery corona around Esty.  But, yet, it did not damage the earth or the nearby trees or incinerate the atmosphere.  It was apparently just a cosmetic change.  Massacre noticed this and did not seem impressed.  Yet he stood up.

"What?  You want to fight me?" he said, as if the merest idea of such a thing was ludicrous and suicidal.

"No," Estelore said, now with the merest suggestion of an edge to her voice.  "I want to make you atone for your sins.  I want to prevent you from murdering anymore innocents.  I want to make you pay your dues."

"Well, then," Massacre said, standing up at last, "have at you then!  It'll be your funeral."

Then he cracked a rather childish, yet malicious, grin.  "Oh, wait -- you'll have no one to attend it!"

Estelore charged forward and brought her fist into his gut.  It didn't shatter the armor but it did fragment it -- like a high-impact on a windshield.  Then Esty jumped up and brought her leg over in a perfect martial arts-esque kick.  This shattered some of his helmet revealing copious amounts of wild, tangled, curly, dirty brown hair, but his face was a decayed, dessicated brownish-gray, and his revealed eye was blue with red sclera.

"Ah, not gonna win any beauty pageants, I see." Estelore taunted.  Massacre charged, but she nimbly dodged out of the way.

"STAND STILL!" he roared.

"Um . . ." Estelore said, feigning indecision, "no."

"I'LL KILL YOU!"

"Yeah, you're doing a fine job of that so far," Estelore said.  She knew that half of the battle was psychological, but Massacre seemed unaware of that fact -- being so used to being able to easily overpower everything he came across.  Estelore continued to taunt, "Yeah, I'm so sure you'll succeed."

"SHUT UP!"

"Why?  Doesn't wittle baby wassacre like big, ol' mean Estelore's taunting?"

"SHUT UP!!"

Then Estelore's tone changed from taunting to serious.  "No, I don't think I will.  You think of killing as a game -- something that exists simply for your pleasure.  But you seem woefully --"

Estelore dodged an energy blast from Massacre easily, and then continued in her lecture.

"Seem woefully unaware that each of the people you killed had a life, had a family --"

Estelore ducked and executed the perfect flip over Massacre as she dodged Massacre's attack.  Then she whapped him upon the skull, which caused more of his helmet to flake off.

"I wasn't done!" she scolded.  "Each of the people you killed had loved ones who will now have to grieve."

Estelore thought of Pierce, Venus, Tommy, Troy . . . and Shadow.  They did not know the fate of their loved ones.  Estelore knew that she had to win this battle, to tell them.  But it really wasn't much of a battle.  Massacre clearly had no combat experience, which her life as a RAFian afforded her.  He was nothing more or less than a deranged killer with the mentality of a young child -- a young, BRATTY child.

"SHUT UP!  YOU CAN'T TALK TO ME LIKE THAT!  I'M NOT A KID!  I'M MASSACRE!!"

"Yes, you are," Estelore said, quietly.  "But now . . . now it's time to end this struggle."

"YES, DIE ALREADY!!"

"You misunderstand me.  You're the one that's going to ride on Charon's boat!"

"Huh?"

"Oh, never mind!" Estelore said as she flew up, pointed her right hand -- the hand that bore the Mark . . . the last Mark . . . and aimed it at Massacre, while silently thinking, Man, I hope this works!

Then Pulse energy started to collect around the Mark . . . more energy then would normally be able to.  She was the last RAFian -- so she would be able to use the Unity Pulse without any others here.  But she felt them.  She felt the other RAFians, as if their spirits were still connected through the Mark.

"No . . . they're dead!" Massacre said fearfully, seeing an illusion of the other RAFians, standing at Estelores side, all of equal size.  "I killed them.  They're dead!"

When enough energy collected, Estelore said, "Unity . . . OBLITERATION!"

Then she fired a powerful beam of energy down onto Massacre -- and when the smoke cleared . . . the only thing left was a crater that eliminated the last remnants of what was once RAF. . . .

"It's done," she said, landing, and turning her back on the forum she once called home.  Then she walked away.  She wanted the feeling of walking rather than flying.  It was gone . . . it was all gone.  And she, Estelore, was the Last RAFian.
« Last Edit: September 14, 2012, 08:38:00 AM by CloakedFigure »


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #929 on: September 14, 2012, 07:51:15 AM »
Well, I won't get back on until the RAFparty starts, so I will have a lot of chapters to read! :D
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