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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #885 on: September 10, 2012, 07:08:59 PM »
Well, I did wonder why there wasn't some sort of RAFian comic book, Underseen.  I mean we have enough storylines and artists to make it a reality, right?  Well, Sakki is working on that animation thing (which I am still excited about and I can't get ahold of Shadow to tell her).

Speaking of which, Sakki, will the final product be on YouTube or Devinart or what? :huh:

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  • Book XVIII: Hostages Wild
  • Book XIX: The Clone Wars
  • Book XX: The Darwin Gun
  • Book XXI: Other Side of the Tracks
  • Book XXII: Pits of Terror
  • Book XXIII: RAF Comix
  • Book XXIV: The First Master
  • Book XXV: RAF -- The Musical
  • Book XXVI: Outage Outrage
  • Book XXVII: Infinity and Eternity
  • Book XXVIII: The Virus Rings
  • Book XXIX: Soul-Suckers
  • Book XXX: Mayhem of the Music Miser
  • Book XXXI: The Metal-Maker
  • Book XXXII: Richard is Missing
  • Book XXXIII: Emotional Food
  • Book XXXIV: Transformation Confrontation
  • Book XXXV: Richard's Horn
  • Book XXXVI: Feral Scream
  • Book XXXVII: Predators and Prey
  • Book XXXVIII: A Protean Problem
  • Book XXXIX: The Horsemen
  • Book XL: Sizeable Pain in the Necks
  • Book XLI: RAF's Nightmare
  • Book XLII: Unlucky Charms
  • Book XLIII: The Piper
  • Book XLIV: The Wishing Star
  • Book XLV: A War of Armor
  • Book XLVI: The Worst Plague
  • Book XLVII: Little Alien Napoleons
  • Book XLVIII: Go Away!
  • Book XLIX: RAFian Tales
  • Book L: Maul
  • Book LI: Erised Orbs
  • Book LII: RAFians Alive!* -- an out-of-normal-continuity book
  • Book LIII: The Pain Reliever*
  • Book LIV: Beyond the Veils*
  • Book LV: Dangerous Deals*
  • Book LVI: Of One Mind*
  • Book LVII: The End of Time* -- another out-of-normal-continuity book
  • Book LVIII: Hematomimic*
  • Book LIX: Sins of Youth*
  • Book LX: The Replacements*
  • Book LXI: Arachnoids*
  • Book LXII: Personal Tissues*
  • Book LXIII: Memory Today, Gone Tomorrow*
  • Book LXIV: Appliance Armageddon*
  • Book LXV: Prodigy and Composite*
  • Book LXVI: The Merging*
  • Book LXVII: Be A Doll*
  • Book LXVIII: RAF Captors* -- yet another out-of-normal-continuity book . . . unless I change my mind.
  • Book LXIX: Dinosaur Island*
  • Book LXX: Corrupted*
  • Book LXXI: Artificial Skins*
  • Book LXXII: Separation Anxiety*
  • Book LXXIII: A Thing About RAFians*
  • Book LXXIV: A Planted Idea*
  • Book LXXV: Vacation Photos*
  • Book LXXVI: A Personal Gremlin*
  • Book LXXVII: The Rust is Silence*
  • Book LXXVIII: The Toyman Cometh*
  • Book LXXIX: RAFian Idol* -- yes, just another excuse to put in more of the (as of writing) nearly 800 parodies.
  • Book LXXX: Savage Heart*
  • Book LXXXI: Slave Islands and Juggernauts*
  • Book LXXXII: Shredding a King*
  • Book LXXXIII: RAF -- The TV Show*
  • Book LXXXIV: The Drinker*
  • Book LXXXV: The Last Laugh*
  • Book LXXXVI: It's A Mad, Mad, Mad Villian*
  • Book LXXXVII: Sight Unseen*
  • Book LXXXVIII: Don't Let It Snow*
  • Book LXXXIX: The Rachel Toxin*
  • Book XC: Virus Alert!*
  • Book XCI: A Youthful Thief*

Again, the (*) denotes a book I have yet to do the chapter-by-chapter notes for.
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Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #886 on: September 10, 2012, 07:12:16 PM »
By the way, how much space does all of this take up on your computer?
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #887 on: September 10, 2012, 07:16:51 PM »
I don't have it on my computer.  I've literally written all the chapter-by-chapter notes by hand (although those consist of a vague one or two line -- usually -- description).  Then I sit down and write it out in the "post reply" box.  Some ideas just come to me on the fly when I sit here and type it.  This computer actually doesn't have a word processor.


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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #888 on: September 10, 2012, 07:26:05 PM »
 :o DANG! I thought you go to Word and make them and then paste them into the reply box... That is talented!
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #889 on: September 10, 2012, 07:28:19 PM »
Thank you, Underseen.  I did have a book on my old laptop that exceeded 200-pages, though.  Then it went ka-put.

Anyway, I might post a new chapter, or wait until tomorrow.  Haven't quite decided yet.


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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #890 on: September 10, 2012, 07:44:50 PM »
Youtube for animations
Deviantart for model previews.
But you guys don't have to worry about trying to find these accounts, they will be all posted on here
I am trying to figure out "sliders" which are basically additional parts to a model I can
take away and add mid video. I am also working on finding effects that'll help for things like magic and chiz like that. I can basically find any weapon in existence.
Also things like: Stages, music, ect

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #891 on: September 10, 2012, 07:48:33 PM »
Ah, 'kay.

And I've decided that I'm a little TOO brain-dead right now to post a decent chapter.  Sorry, guys.


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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #892 on: September 10, 2012, 07:49:48 PM »
It's okay.

Sakki, what programs are you using?
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #893 on: September 10, 2012, 10:06:41 PM »
MMD PMDeditor and plug ins such as MME

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #894 on: September 10, 2012, 10:50:20 PM »
Thanks! I thought so when I saw your model....
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #895 on: September 11, 2012, 09:30:11 AM »
Okay, chapter time. . . . What chapter were we on?  Oh, yes, I remember.

Just note -- I may very well post more than one chapter.  I realize that it'll make it harder for people to catch up, but . . .

CHAPTER TEN:
The Chiropteran Skunk

"Sire, I told you --"

"You tread dangerous ground, Magnus," Rotiart snarled.  "You'd best to back off."

"But sire, I must insist -- AAAAHHHH!"

He was electrocuted by his very own circuits.

"Sorry . . . sorry, sire . . . I . . . I overstepped my boundaries."

"Yes, you did.  And all three of you best remember this."

Rotiart activated the shock for all three of them, which caused them to withdraw from Rotiart and cower.  This, however, amused Rotiart slightly.  He had the power to dish out punishment to uppity lesser beings, a power he never had as a RAFian.  Of course, now he'll make them pay for daring to exile him.  For daring to Ban him!  He noted briefly that the data was received from Sakki's fight with the berserker.

"This one had better not fail.  This one had better kill its intended target," Rotiart said, more for his own benefit than his involuntary lackeys.  He was spiralling down the pit of insanity, but he seemed not to be aware of it.  There was only one beast left, and Rotiart seemed to think that it was the greatest -- well, except for the other one in the considerably larger tube.  It remained in shadow, but bits of red, blue, white, yellow and gold seemed to eke out in the dim lighting.  "If this doesn't work, then the Onslaught will begin. . . ."

"Sire . . ." Slicer spoke up from the corner, ". . . what if . . . what if . . . what-if-it-doesn't-work?"

"It cannot fail, fool.  It's the ultimate contingency plan!"

His lackeys seemed to doubt it.  Apparently, Rotiart hadn't noticed their doubtful looks and body language.

"Computer," Rotiart said with a snap like that of a trodden twig.  "Is the Realm Walker nearby."

"Designate CloakedFigure Mark-signature is at these coordinates."

"Excellent," Rotiart cackled, "launch the chiropteran skunk."

"Complying." the cool female voice replied.

"Excellent.  This time it cannot fail.  Cloak will finally meet the fate that he deserves.  He will die!" Rotiart said with megalomanical relish.  He was apparently unaware that Realm Walker can only be killed at the hand of another Realm Walker.  Rotiart took out the transparent, cylindrical canister that held the swirling energies that he procured a while ago, right after Cloak slayed Malice and Abomination. . . .

***

Cloak was sitting on a rather comfortable rock in the middle of a forest, by a bubbling stream with a slight waterfall to his left and a few feet behind him.  He had allowed his cloak and tail to drape over the edge of the rock, while he crossed his legs so that his left heel touched the right side of his hip.  He had balled his hands into fists and had the knuckles touching each other.  He was sitting straight up, and his eyes were closed.

Cloak had hoped to come out here to meditate, to hopefully contact his grandfather's spirit.  He sought solice from the horrible grief, the dagger of remore that had lodged into his heart.  He hoped for his grandfather's wisdom, something he still felt that he had not inhereted from his mentor.  But his mind was so full . . . too full.  He couldn't concentrate properly.  He was also getting rather antsy, as well.

Cloak noticed that he was feeling really restless of late, but could not explain why.  It was as if he felt a deep, dark shadow of the future flowing over to him, eclipsing him.  It was not a pleasant feeling.  Cloak continued to try to calm his mind and focus on the mediation.

He sensed it before he smelled the odoriferous beast.  It stunk worse than skunk fumes, a Gloom, an uncleaned toilet, a Muk, rotten eggs, a Stunky, rotting meat, a Skuntank, soiled baby diapers, a Trubbish, the worst kind of gym socks, or a Garbodor.  It stunk worse than all of those things, enough to bring tears to Cloak's eyes, though Cloak managed to leap up and behind the creature, where it turned and he got a good look at it, albeit with watery eyes.

It appeared similar to Stinkor with the colors of Stinkbomb.  It had broad, bat-like ears, and broad, flapping bat wings on its back, as well as a fluffy, tongue-shaped black tail with a centralized white stripe.

Cloak could barely breathe -- much less speak, due to the awful stench.  Then it opened its mouth -- Cloak took note of two overlarge upper canines -- and unleashed a blast of sound of which a Howler would have been jealous.  It was only the sheerest luck that Cloak managed not to be hit.  Cloak was effectively immobilized by the stench.  And the howl, for lack of a more fitting term, screwed up his Earthsight.  Not that it would have mattered anyway, because it remained airborne.

Cloak attempted to fight back using the Air Element.  But the howl rendered that effectively useless in this condition.  He daren't use the Fire element, lest he burn down this entire forest.  Attempted to fling the boulder that he had sat on at the creature, but it managed to howl at such a frequency that the boulder shattered into gravel.  Cloak didn't want to use his energy -- because that's rather akin to a human picking up dog droppings with their bare hands.

Cloak glanced at the waterfall -- maybe that would clean this monster up.  Cloak flung the water from the falls, as if fired from a firehose, at the skunk.  He had hoped to lessen the smell.  And it worked . . . to a degree.  It still smelled to high heaven, but it was more tolerable now.  But unfortunately that just also gave the creature an opening to fire a howl directly at Cloak and hit him dead-on.  The pain was intense, but he compartmentalized it.

But then a blur appeared in the trees.  Flitting from branch to branch with unbelievable skill and agility and athletism.  It caught the creatures attention, and Cloak managed to fire more water its way before falling to his knees.  The blur leaped from the tree and landed, gestured at the nearest tree, which stabbed one of the creatures wings -- skewering it completely.  Without flinching, the creature ripped off that wing, which concealed into nothingness, only the merest hint of its stench remaining.

"Sh-Shadow . . ."

"Don't worry, Uncle, I've got this."

It attempted to use it's howl at her, but Shadow possessed far more agility and less bulk than her uncle.  She was a far smaller target, and she deliberately used this to her advantage.  The howls could not seem to land at her.  Cloak realized, as he summed up his wounds, that Shadow's sense of smell was not as acut as his, and the stench, thereby, has less of an effect on her.

Eventually, she skewered its other wing, and then finally delivered the killing blow.  The beast congealed into nothingness, its ever-fading stench its only legacy.

"There, that's done.  You okay, Uncle?"

"I'll be fine." Cloak said.  Standing up, and it was clear that he wasn't fine.

"Uncle!  You're hurt!  Let's go to Meemaw's*."

"No, Shadow."

"But Uncle --"

"No, Shadow.  I'm never going back there."

"You're hurt, Uncle.  Surely --"

"Kelly can heal me, then." Cloak said, knowing full well that Kelly couldn't.  Or else she would've when Cloak was on his deathbed**.  "But I will never go back to the Nexus.  Never, if I can help it."

Shadow looked crestfallen.

"I do thank you for your timely assistance, Shadow.  And I do love you.  But I have no home there.  My home has been, and always will be, here.  I'm sorry, but this is the way it is.  You should go back though.  Your mom is probably waiting for you."

And, with that, Cloak began to walk off, although there was no hiding the limp in his left leg.

---
* That's Shadow's name for my mother.  I don't know if this had come up before.  Possibly in Book I.

** All the way back in Book I.


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Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
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RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #896 on: September 11, 2012, 02:07:24 PM »
One more chapter before I trek the 1/4 of a mile walk to get the mail.  Hopefully, I can make it a decent one.  (Oh, and I'll probably write another after I get back -- but don't hold me to that.)  I probably should apologize in advance for the language . . . probably gonna be a bit of a short chapter.

Chapter Eleven:
Rage and Recovery

"WHAT?!" Rotiart roared so loudly, that people on the next planet could possibly hear him.  He was in paroxysms of rage.  It was so palpable that they could practically feel and see it as a dark aura, a purplish-black radiation.  His face seemed to contort in the rage, as if this was some sort of perverse anime gimmick.  "HOW THE BLOODY HELL COULD HE HAVE SURVIVED!!"

Magnus spoke up, in a quavery voice, "Sire, the data has --"

"**** THE DATA!" he raged.  He was like a train which was accelerating rapidly without any breaks -- a collision was inevitable.  It was never clear why Rotiart hated Cloak so much -- jealousy for his powers?  For his veteran status?  It could have been anything, but Cloak's survival seemed to send him careening over the edge of sanity and prudence.  But then he caught sight of the largest cryogenic tube, and he seemed to have forgotten his rage.  He seemed to regain his composure and sanity -- although he still spoke with that insane lilt to his voice.

"No . . . no, you're right." he said, and the three cowering minions stopped for a fraction of a second.  Rotiart said sharply, "I didn't tell you to stop cowering."

The three proceeded to cower some more, and, for some odd reason, it seemed to please Rotiart, and ease his mind.  Clearly, Rotiart's Banning had unhinged some screws free that were already too loose.  He stroked the cryogenic tube lovingly* as a young child would to a teddy bear.  "It's almost time, my dear.  You'll avenge me upon this world.  The final preparations just need to be done . . . to give you life."

***

The RAFians had dragged themselves to RAF, to the infirmary.  Kelly and Goom presided over the six that had arrived -- Parker wasn't injured, just his armor.  He feared that he may have lost Tyr forever -- as such, he worked feverishly to fix it.  The Ride Armor Matrix was damage far beyond repair, and Parker didn't know how to replicate Realm Walker tech.

Kelly had managed to heal the wounds of Blaze, Estelore, and Gaz.  Noelle had already morphed her injuries away, but the problem was Sakki.  Due to her artificial nature, Sakki was still severely wounded.  This was yet another limitation to Kelly's power -- it only worked on organics.  Only a technopath could heal Sakki now . . . and there were no known RAFian technopaths.  Though Aquilai, Goom, and Yarin was taking a crack on repairing her.  And it seemed to be working, but it was going slow.  They were even updating her body with admantium and vibranium and zoodeitium.

Kelly evaluated Blaze and Estelore, and tsked.

"I can heal the body.  But I cannot heal the mind or psyche." Kelly lamented quietly to Gaz.  "That, they're gonna have to deal with on their own, I'm afraid."

No one knew where Cloak was . . . there were rumors that he could have been attacked.  Even rumors that he could very well be dead -- which Horse, Blue, Parker, and Gaz usually stamped out when they reminded everyone -- repeatedly -- that only another Realm Walker could slay Cloak.  The last time in which they did this, Cloak limped into RAF.  Thankfully, all of Cloak's injuries were internal, so his ichor wasn't spilled.

<Cloak! Clo-- . . . Cloak, what happened?> Noelle asked.

"I don't want to talk about it," Cloak said, rather bluntly.  Noelle didn't react at this, Cloak had been rather surly since he slayed Malice and Abomination, so it wasn't out of character for him.

<Cloak,> Noelle said softly, cajolingly, <you don't have to bottle up your feelings.  You don't have to hide anything from us.>

"Thanks for the advice," Cloak said, rather more gruffly than he intended, as he tromped up to his thread to lie down.  Noelle watched him go, thinking quietly to herself, No one blames you, Cloak.  You did what you had to do.


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Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
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RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #897 on: September 11, 2012, 04:11:57 PM »
Good updates!

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #898 on: September 11, 2012, 04:47:53 PM »
Thanks, Gazzy.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #899 on: September 11, 2012, 06:28:03 PM »
The Rachel Toxin sounds pretty interesting. And XXIX sounds like it would be about Apocalypse.
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