Oh, just wait, Dino. It'll get worse . . . now that I look at it this book's gonna be a bit darker, and less schticky, then I thought.
I'll try to post another chapter after I rest for a bit.
EDIT:
CHAPTER FOUR:
Kidnappings
The Andalites, even the more willful ones, were helpless to defy the music. They were forced to line-dance out of RAF. All the way to a secluded warehouse, which was conveniently wide open, and looked abandoned and full of holes on the outside.
But the interior was a different story completely. It was polished steel and stone, absolutely immaculate. Other than the chains giving off a faint golden glow littering the floor.
These Andalites, exhausted by the forced dancing -- something Andalites were clearly unaccustomed to doing -- were danced into the middle if the room, into the mess of glowing chains.
Suddenly, these chains magically burst to life. They wound and snaked their way around the Andalites But not all these special chains were used.
<H-h-help . . .> Noelle attempted to call out, her thought-speak voice hoarse, as the flute music was snuffed out. <H-h-help. . . .>
"Oh, give it a rest." came Malice's voice, cold, clear, and hard. "You telepathic communication cannot be cast outside this room. It is soundproof, as well."
Several Andalites tried to concentrate, tried to morph, Noelle included. Malice allowed this to go on for twenty minutes with a crooked smike on her face. But nothing happened -- the morphing field could not be created, could not be activated.
"Discovered that your shapeshifting -- your 'morphing', as you crudely put it -- doesn't work yet?" Malice taunted sneeringly. "These are
tylee chains, Dweller fools. If they can bind Olympians, Asguardians, or even my own kind, the is
no chance that you can escape them."
***
With one species captured, the Piper rested for a moment, before selecting another species.
He rose his flute to his lips again, and began to play a slightly different tune. . . ,
***
"Wha -- what the heck?!" Abby cried out.
Suddenly, the forty or so RAFian humans began to square dance. They were no longer in control of their own movements, though their thoughts were still their own. . . .