GESB: OOC Discussion

[Chad32]

Just say Tora felt the need to get up to get away from Al, now that he was distracted with Temrash.

[Aluminator (Kit)]

I guess I'm just following the editing parade here. Haha. I'll have Al follow whatever you guys finally wind up on.

[Terenia]

Ditto.....

[KitsuneMarie]

The problem is that I don't think it would be in character for Tora. Even though Tora was getting paranoid, she was actually enjoying talking to Al, and she wanted to know more. She blew up when Temrash came because he started loudly calling her out. Al was keeping it quiet, so she didn't mind so much.

Your next post will make no sense if I change mine, because Tora would have, in no way, incriminated herself as a member of the Rebellion to Temrash (meaning she wouldn't have mentioned her association with Myitt). So how would Temrash know about her allegiance, as he does in your post following the edited one? You're going to have to edit that, too. Also, see my post about Tora pretending to call the Base? In the edited version, she would have no reason to do that. I'm going to have to edit that post, and you'll have to edit the post following it about Temrash not wanting to work for such a boss as Tora.

It makes more sense to leave it as it was. If I edit my post following your edit, it's going to unleash an editing torrent among you and me, and possibly Scott and Jessi, too, to try to prevent character interactions from being halting and awkward.

[Chad32]

Ok. What say we just ignore that part and move back to doing what we were doing? I already removed one post, so I can't put a post back in that spot again. So just pretend I didn't edit and move on as before.

[KitsuneMarie]

Fine, but i'm going to put in an OOC bracket in my post right after your edit just to let folks know the gist of your previous post, because it's going to seriously confuse people who haven't caught up yet if it remains as is.

[Chad32]

Oh yeah. I guess so.

[Terenia]

Yeah, no kidding. That's gonna be super confusing to anyone who hasn't caught up yet. Especially since most people look for things like continuity in stories. At least the people that actually bother reading... 

[Chad32]

Continuity does tend to help stories.

[Terenia]

The Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
Obituaries

*Entries are listed alphabetically by name.

Hadrin 328
Age: 32 Earth years; 15 Generations
Species: Yeerk
Cause of Death: Died along with his host Justin, who was shot by a Dracon beam.

Rerin, Tamora
Age: 20
Species: Human
Alignment: Imperial
Cause of Death: Decapitation

Riley
Age: (Unspecified)
Species: Human
Alignment: Beta Squad (anti-CG)
Cause of Death: Heavy Dracon fire.

Streetman, Cody
Age: 28
Species: Human
Cause of Death: Disintegration

Sukohn 119
Age: 10 cycles
Species: Yeerk
Cause of death: Disintegration

Talmadge, Justin
Age: 25
Species: Human
Cause of death: Dracon shot to the stomach; technically killed by Static Shock (Keshin and Joanne)

Unknown
Age: Unknown
Species: Vampire
Cause of death: Grievous injuries in battle, and getting sucked into a vortex.

Vodran, Fletcher
Age: 32
Species: Human
Alignment: Pirate onboard The Cursed Pride as engineer/mechanic (served under Odysseus Morgan), used to be a CG Operative before going pirate.
Cause of Death: Shot by Desmond (a CG higher-up) protecting Silver (Morgan's daughter).
Next of Kin: Gaz Vodran (cousin)

Wester
Age: (Unspecified)
Species: Human
Alignment: Beta Squad (anti-CG)
Cause of Death: SPARTAN-II Energy sword.

Zorish 358
Age: 46 Cycles
Species: Yeerk
Alignment: Imperial
Cause of Death: Starvation

In pace requiescat...

[warren_bearclaw]

Wait... so ESRP just destroyed the door? Can we demolish the Bar like that?!?

It's always nice to see someone new here, btw. I'm just confused on whether or not the Bar is off limits for desctruction.....

Can I ask how your character got to the Bar door? There are several people outside within sight of the door who would notice him, and that could affect peoples' posts.

[Aluminator (Kit)]

I was under the impression the bar had a tendency to magically repair itself when nobody was looking I broke a few of the windows myself when I brought Salem in. They're certainly not still broken. There's enough to keep track of here already without keeping track of what state the bar itself is in over the hundreds of pages of posts.

Welcome to the Space Bar, Josh ^_^

By the way, Chad, that is awesome timing on mentioning the repair crew, since I was planning on introducing the Fleckteon my very next post anyway

[Terenia]

Yeah, at one point there was a massive hole punched through the ceiling of the bar, the bar counters were demolished and the back wall blown out with Dracon Fire.

The bouncers can handle it. They'll fix the door.

Who's immediately outside the bar right now? I think the only ones in the doorway are Asda, Hunter and Trey. Hunter hasn't posted in awhile, though. I'll make sure Trey notices.

[KitsuneMarie]

Haha, Trey noticed alright!

[warren_bearclaw]

Correct me if I'm wrong Gaz and Mythica, but I'm pretty sure our group (Rayker and his soldiers, Morgan and his crew/family, and Gumby's character. I think that Dara is there, too.) is relatively close to the bar. Maybe not immediately outside (that would be an odd place for a grave... up against the walls of a bar...) but pretty nearby.