I actually really like the way you're playing them- the internal dialogue, the shared control, everything. They're obviously pretty friendly with each other, and pretty heavily affected by the oatmeal dependency, and not really like any other Yeerk/host duo I've seen at the bar. I enjoy their posts ^_^
I checked, and it turns out I've been slightly misrepresenting small parts of Atazin canon. For one thing, the gravity gun Salem's got holstered now is made mostly from ivory and dragon scales, not pure silver. Also, for the microbes, it turns out Flekteon absorb metal and emit energy, not the other way around- I've been using the approximate reverse of that the whole time Salem's been here. I'm either going to have to retcon my few mentions of them into something else, or say they're genetically modified. I'm leaning towards the former.
Cause everyone was paying so much attention to my consistencies with Atazin continuity