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Offline Liz

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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #225 on: November 11, 2008, 02:48:42 AM »
Quote from: musicman88 on November 10, 2008, 09:52:21 PM
Quote from: Liz on November 10, 2008, 05:54:12 PM
What?  That sucks.  If they don't want 3 word long fic why don't they make a minimum word limit when you submit or something?  >(

They did.  It was in the rules somewhere.  It said no one or two line stories, paraphrasing of course.

Oh.  Pfft.  I'm all for concision, myself. xD
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #226 on: November 11, 2008, 03:11:38 PM »
any news on the last chapter of this story?
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #227 on: November 11, 2008, 04:09:41 PM »
It's coming.  I recently finished the actual mating part and all I really have left is to wrap some stuff up.  I don't think it should take that long, but I always underestimate things like that.  And since I'm going to see Blue Oyster Cult tomorrow it kind of screws up my week a bit, but I'm working as fast as I can.
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« Reply #228 on: November 11, 2008, 04:15:02 PM »
im not trying to rush you just wondering where things are, thanks
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #229 on: November 20, 2008, 10:26:35 PM »
ALRIGHT!  THE FINAL CHAPTER IS UP!  It's about damn time!  Read and enjoy!


I just want to thank everyone who waited patiently for me to finish writing and everyone who thoroughly enjoyed the story and understood (at least partly) what it was all about.  And even if you didn't like it for whatever reason I still thank you for at least giving it a chance.  I was tired of everyone doing the same "brand new Animorph" or "if Rachel lived" stories, so I wanted to mix it up a bit.  And judging by everyone's responses I sure did that pretty well...

So, what's next for me?  Well, Nohensen and I have something planned that you'll be hearing about shortly no doubt.  We have a little story competition that's slated to begin.  It won't be anything mature rated though, I promise.  But that doesn't necessarily mean that I'm done with mature rated stories (although I really need a break.  My mind's starting to scare me...).  There's always the possibility that I can go back and write a scenario where Ax learns something new.  Take for example everyone asking why he didn't want to mate as a male and some other things like that.  Also, I've been thinking recently (Uh oh...) that we've seen what Macro and Ax do to mate (kinda I guess), but what about R/T and J/C?  Perhaps a few weird things worth writing about go on there as well...  But for now I really want to get back to "normal" stories for a bit and that's what you can expect from me next.  Hope to see you all there!
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #230 on: November 20, 2008, 10:27:01 PM »
nice work. i liked your story, ax is an interesting character.

hahaha!
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You sick bastard!” Tobias interrupted quite suddenly. “What the hell is wrong with you Marco?!?”

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lol, rachel and cassie. :-*
« Last Edit: November 20, 2008, 10:54:32 PM by goom »
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #231 on: November 21, 2008, 12:12:12 AM »
Great end to the story!

I have a lot of other comments to make, but I guess I'll wait till later to post them so I don't spoil it for others. xD
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #232 on: November 21, 2008, 12:22:55 AM »
I liked it. You wrapped things up well. Good job.
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #233 on: November 21, 2008, 01:20:59 AM »
not a bad ending, i predicted the rachel cassie thing.  I figured you play the marco ax thing up a little more but it was kinda subtle.  Not a bad end to the story,  jake made me lol, I kinda predicted that as well.  Tobias though, was the pure gem of the end though, I was loling quite alot.
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #234 on: November 21, 2008, 03:03:26 AM »
I was laughing so much through this chapter.

*keeping open mind*

I didn't picture any of their reactions being like that, but meh its your story, lol.
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #235 on: November 22, 2008, 08:32:51 AM »
Thanks guys, glad you liked it.  I don't think I'm all that great with endings, but as I was reading through this one I actually liked it myself (that almost never happens with anything I write).
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #236 on: November 22, 2008, 07:22:47 PM »
The whole Tobias thing is so freaking hilarious.
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #237 on: November 23, 2008, 03:33:40 AM »
I found the Jake thing even more hilarious, myself.

He's our fearless leader, it stands to reason he would be good at everything! xDD
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #238 on: November 23, 2008, 06:38:27 PM »
Quote from: KATE on November 23, 2008, 03:33:40 AM
Well, Rachel began with a happier tone, let’s just say that Cassie and I found our own way to have a good time…

I was about to inquire a bit further, but I suddenly realized what Rachel most likely meant. The only thing powerful enough to take Rachel’s mind off something that serious was mating

I so called this on the chat room one day
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Re: Ax the Prostitute
« Reply #239 on: December 01, 2008, 03:29:51 PM »
Quote from: †Guide† on November 04, 2008, 03:21:20 PM
Quote from: Estelore on October 10, 2008, 07:27:49 AM
WOW.  :o

Look what I miss when my modem is down! HAhahahaha!

Yes, I am female. Boobies? Jeeze. Yes, that, too.
I am also a freakin' star, as Azguard put it.

Pretty hot? I leave that to individual opinion. Hotness is relative and subjective. :)

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Hmm...the story was funny in the context you use as funny, but I still can't see the Ani's reactions being that way (other than her explosion). . .

9/10 for the *shocked* factor, 10/10 for originality, 6/10 for believability. Good job  ;)

I maintain my earlier observations, only modifying the believability from 6/10 to 5/10.
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