Okay, I'll add you. My msn is glittergirl1021@hotmail.com I'll email the chapter to you when I finish. You can edit it if u like. Umm, about how long should it be and how frequently should I alternate PoVs and if you gave me a basic outline (what is happening, fight, conversation, epic fight; bios for the characters, very basic, nothing extravagant; who should win; if someone dies; new characters; you get the picture) that would be excelent.