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Re: Animorphs: A New Beginning (Revived and revamped)
« Reply #210 on: September 13, 2009, 12:33:27 AM »
Oh I'm sorry I feel like a jerk for calling you out like that could you work on making your character less super powerful give him some flaws and tone down his abilities it makes for a better story)  
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Re: Animorphs: A New Beginning (Revived and revamped)
« Reply #211 on: September 13, 2009, 12:42:59 AM »
(rofl yea im a genius! hey Yarin i replied to ur PM mind replyin so i can actually copy and past his major weaknesses so everyone else can see em? And no worries dude i dont mind you callin me out like that)
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Re: Animorphs: A New Beginning (Revived and revamped)
« Reply #212 on: September 13, 2009, 12:52:03 AM »
Yeah I'm trying to help you round out your character he needs an equal balance of strengths m and weaknesses and not just physical or mental weakness but character flaws or perhaps a troubled past these are good staples to go by just trying to help)
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Re: Animorphs: A New Beginning (Revived and revamped)
« Reply #213 on: September 13, 2009, 12:55:04 AM »
(well yea this is to anyone who has the morphing ability, please one of you chose to have a DNA sample of his race but come to find out its the DNA of his father, itd make it easier for the future events of Shadows insanity easier to handle)
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Re: Animorphs: A New Beginning (Revived and revamped)
« Reply #214 on: September 13, 2009, 12:56:23 AM »
(So he's insane? or slowly going mad?)
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Re: Animorphs: A New Beginning (Revived and revamped)
« Reply #215 on: September 13, 2009, 01:30:30 AM »
(extremely slowly going insane. After i started this RPG i was like dude Shadow will become the main villain in this one when he goes crazy.

Anyways this info is for anyone who wishes to see Shadow's main weaknesses. Ill do his strengths in another post.

WEAKENESES:
+most of his morhps are a type of elemantal warriors so they have their enemy element

+Tiranium the metal weakens him to near death if by it for to long.

+this idea is one i now have come up with that i will also post for the other RPers to know, he can use a Class:

D RANK (illusuion progeccsion things like that) 10 times before death or 8 and have about 10 morphs goin on in between


C RANK (mental calculation [when he can completely calculate every attack he will need to beat a person but not have it be exact]) 8 times or 7 with about 9 Morphs in between


B RANK (attack strengthen [ex. when he is Hork M'jir, the base speed is about 300 mph but with a boost he can reach mach 12 (9,132 mph)]) about 5 times or 4 with about 7 morphs


A RANK (the morph others back to base form things powerful like that) about 2 before death or 1 and have a pause of about 2 RP minutes that the person can attack without retaliation)

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Since no one had chosen for him he thought about it and quickly formed the image of the newest morph in his arsenal, the Cryotians, beings that had complete control over ice much like his own race with their Shadow powers.

After a few moments he was a towering 9 ft 8 inch man with light blonde wavy hair with green eyes and a dazzling smile.

He made a line of snow that he used like a slide and rode it around, swirling behind his allies and making it go way above them. <Well shall we??>
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Re: Animorphs: A New Beginning (Revived and revamped)
« Reply #216 on: September 13, 2009, 07:12:22 AM »
(also shadow going light speed on a planet even for s second can have disasterous temporal effects on the local lifeforms and you'd have run off the surface of the earth so can you retcon the speed and lower it to maybe mach 7 or something?)
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Re: Animorphs: A New Beginning (Revived and revamped)
« Reply #217 on: September 13, 2009, 12:42:10 PM »
(Changed it. You were correct on that matter i hadnt thought about it to well. he now goes mach 12)
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Re: Animorphs: A New Beginning (Revived and revamped)
« Reply #218 on: September 13, 2009, 07:23:09 PM »
((Oh...wow...@_@ Now I'm lost again...
Also, if you're gonna do a plot like that, a bit of warning is kind of nice, so we can be prepared. Other than that, the plot looks interesting. xD I've just gotten lost in the convo betwixt you and Yarin. *Blames the fact that she spent most of the weekend studying for her stupid psych test*))
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Re: Animorphs: A New Beginning (Revived and revamped)
« Reply #219 on: September 13, 2009, 08:09:53 PM »
(im taking psych to and i was just helping shadowblade refine his character)
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Re: Animorphs: A New Beginning (Revived and revamped)
« Reply #220 on: September 14, 2009, 03:07:33 PM »
(lol yea dont be confused mainly he was telling me tone down on the testosterone)
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Re: Animorphs: A New Beginning (Revived and revamped)
« Reply #221 on: September 14, 2009, 03:41:58 PM »
"So how's the antidote going, Hu? Anything I can do to help?" cody said, noting the ash on Hu's face. He needed something to do to keep his mind off the other's situation.


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Re: Animorphs: A New Beginning (Revived and revamped)
« Reply #222 on: September 14, 2009, 06:30:32 PM »
(No, I lost the plot in all the testosterone talk. :P)

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Re: Animorphs: A New Beginning (Revived and revamped)
« Reply #223 on: September 14, 2009, 08:36:05 PM »
(read the bottom portion of my post and ull get a glimpse of what i kinda had planned, but uh the main idea was for me ima be a good guy for a few RP months before Visser 4 drives me to insanity with torture, when i emerge i kill a whole lot of good guys, and then you all face me, in a little while ima introduce my second character, Chill, he is of the species Shadow now is, and he is shadows half brother. Once shadow is evil i will mostly use Chill. If any player has an objection please tell me)

Shadow stares down at Visser 4 <so we meet again Visser>

"Aaaah why hello -" Shadow cuts him off with an ice shard that barely misses his ear.

<First one is a warning shot. Next will be ur throat.>

"Ahh fine hello Shadow blade how are you doing?" He said with a sneer.

Shadow sighed and turned to his allies, <Guys meet Visser 4...my fathers captive body to. He is now the king of my race because he stole my fathers body and is now of equal mental strength with me...> Sighing he slumped his shoulders, <And morph capable.>
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Re: Animorphs: A New Beginning (Revived and revamped)
« Reply #224 on: September 14, 2009, 09:31:50 PM »
(ooh i like where this is going)
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