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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8775 on: June 11, 2010, 10:28:08 AM »
"May the Kandrona shine and strengthen you." Temrash said nicely as Elriss left. These weren't the Emperials of his time. It was obvious from their attempts at tact and professionalism. However, there was obviously someone under fire. He took a look outside, and noticed it was Terenia's ship doing the firing. "Why would Terenia be firing on the emperials? She's kind of supposed to be one of them." He said, not really caring if Elriss heard.

(I can edit if Terenia's ship is still supposed to be cloaked.)


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8776 on: June 11, 2010, 11:37:36 AM »
((Al, Asda is female.))

When the female inspector commented to Parker, he tighten his grip on the hilt of his sword, ready to activate the blade and swipe her head clean off. In a boat full of outlaws, Parker felt the need to protect Silver's family. After the recent loss of Fletcher, this little inspection was really bad timing. Feeling protective, and the loss of a team mate really had Parker on edge, and the inspector's comment definitely did not help calm him. He decided to follow her to be sure she left peaceably. When they reached her exit, Parker stayed inside near Temrash and the door. When she left, Parker turned to Temrash, "Temrash, what was that? This ship is full of outlaws, and you authorized an inspection when it's not even your ship? Bad form, soldier." Parker shook his head in disappointment and walked away back to the med bay.
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8777 on: June 11, 2010, 11:43:32 AM »
((right, sorry. I fixed it. I'll get all these characters at some point >.<))

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8778 on: June 11, 2010, 11:51:40 AM »
((No worries. ;D I often have to back read and reread old posts so I don't make little faux pas. We all make mistakes. Just keep at it, you'll get everyone eventually. ))
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« Reply #8779 on: June 11, 2010, 11:52:29 AM »
Asda glanced up and acknowledged the woman's presence, but continued her work. A moment later she finished bandaging Cutter's ankle.

"I know what you mean," Asda said with a small smile. "There never seems to be a shortage of things happening. Your ankle will be fine, but take it easy for a few days. The stitches will dissolve on their own."

Morgan had been standing in the entrance to the medical bay when he said, "Before we take care of Fletcher's last rites, I propose we step into the bar and drink to Fletcher's sacrifice."

"You all go ahead," Asda said, "you know I've never been a drinker. I have patients to attend to. Besides, I want to do a post-mortem scan on Fletcher. Have a drink for me though."

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8780 on: June 11, 2010, 11:59:45 AM »
Parker replied, "I'll raise a glass, but I'm not taking my helmet off with all of those soldiers out there. No offense, I regarded Fletcher as a teammate, and I certainly mourn his death, but I don't like the looks and attitudes of these guys."
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8781 on: June 11, 2010, 12:10:18 PM »
((Chad, Terenia's cloak was disrupted temporarily, but it's still active right now. He'd be able to see where the weapons fire is coming from, but it would look as though the shots are materializing out of thin air. Of course, if Temrash remembers that Terenia's ship had been parked there he'd be able to deduce that it is her ship firing))

The small Bug Fighter rocks as one of the Hork-Bajir's return-fire makes contact with the shield, slightly disrupting the cloaking device again. Efaen's hands scurry over the controls that are designed for a Taxxon or a Hork-Bajir hand and she widens the beam, hoping that she'll be able to hit a wider range of targets. At this point, any innocents outside are mere collateral damage to her.

<This ship is not designed to operate while stationed on the ground,> Efaen says, ignoring Corliss' plea for her to inform Terenia of what was happening, <I need to take her up or else the resulting friction of weapon fire and running the cloaking and shields mechanism will overheat the main engines and result in detonation.>

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Trey yelps at Mar's voice and, when he realizes who it is, a deep flush of embarrassment spreads across his cheeks. He looks from Elayne to Mar, suddenly feeling a bit like a child that is the focus of a parental argument. He wants to intervene, but his mind keeps flashing back on the soldiers that he saw, advancing with such military precision. The thought makes him nauseous as he realizes just how helpless he is.

"What...who are they?" he whispers aloud, barely aware that he has spoken, "What do they want?"

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8782 on: June 11, 2010, 12:11:00 PM »
"Morgan didn't object. besides these aren't the emperials I'm familiar with, and the sooner they leave the better. I don't want them swarming in thinking we have something to hide." Temrash said as he followed Parker back to the medbay. "They shouldn't return now. There are a lot of them, and I'd rather not start a firefight, though someone else seems to have started it without us. I know this place is full of people with bounties on their heads, but the last thing we need on this ship is troopers storming around for no reason."

"I'll drink to Fletcher, though I'd rather not drink until things calm down."


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« Reply #8783 on: June 11, 2010, 12:20:42 PM »
Morgan nodded. "You have a point. It would be nice if everyone could join in comfortably. In that case, Asda will go ahead and do her scan and we'll take care of the funeral first. Now that I think about it....it might be better for some if we do that first."

Gaz had been standing by Fletcher's body while Asda walked over and began her scan. After a full scan of the torso, Asda had a readout of what had happened.

"It was bad," she said while shaking her head slowly. "The bullets passed through major organs. Depending on when he was shot, I'm surprised he was able to hold on as long as he did."

Asda closed the files and said, "I just needed that for the computer record. You can take care of the funeral now."

"Whoever those soldiers are," Morgan said. "I'm sure they won't begrudge us laying a crew-mate to rest."

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8784 on: June 11, 2010, 01:00:31 PM »
Three Hork-Bajir were incincerated as the ship widens its beam, their faces showing surprise for a split second before they disappeared. The rest of the troops quickly retreated, hiding behind other craft for cover. For a moment, it looked as though the cloak was coming down, but it held as they scattered. Two of the troops, a Hork-Bajir and a human, hastily cranked their weapons to full power and each took aim around the corner without exposing their heads, allowing the images from the end of their guns to appear in their "monocles." They opened fire with shots designed to be able to demolish unshielded vehicles and small buildings. At the same time, one of the heavy Dracon cannons from the drop ship began firing.

One of the Hork-Bajir spoke a communique Yeerk troops nearby, and the parked Yeerk spacecraft, "Hold fire! Hail them again. Inform them that if they surrender, we'll let them live. Keep the Bugs ready in case they have friends. If the target is onboard, we don't want to incinerate him."

The forces stopped firing, many of them seething with anger, and all of them now turned their weapons to full power. This was not how they were used to doing business.

Ikakek noticed the increased activity, and thought some commands to his tiny ship, which lifted into the air and cloaked. No sense in risking his ship today, too. He kept his attention focused... everywhere, because of how his eyes were arrayed, but mostly he was watching the door to the bar.

Thienal dropped to a kneeling position to better steady himself on the bar's roof, keeping an eye on the gunfight now taking place through his scope.

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((Ready? >:D))

The Yeerk commander was a little unnerved by the smile this man was giving him. Was there something he'd missed? There was no way he'd been here long enough to lay a trap, was there?

At the now-louder sounds of Dracon-fire outside, the commander glanced out the window. This was all the distraction the cloaked man needed. He quickly drew his cloak over his eyes. As he did so, one of the tiny, silver pellets that had fallen from his cloak exploded with a deafening boom, instantly shattering every window in the bar, and flash so bright it seemed to penetrate one's skull. The other pellet began discharging a cloud of white smoke into the bar. The man drew his bulky-looking pistol from under his cloak, and as he did so, three scythe-like blades snapped into place from their position above the barrel to locations evenly spaced around the gunspout. He fired two quick bursts at the Hork-Bajir in the bar as he sprinted for the nearest broken window, dropping them to the ground. For the hell of it, he took a potshot at the robot who he suspected of having sold him out as he dove through what remained of the glass. Before the troops outside could recover from the effects of the exploding pellet, he dove into a nearby bush, and his cloak changed color to match, so that he blended in almost perfectly, weapon still in hand, watching the troops now shaking their heads to clear them.

The commander's head stopped spinning and he could see again after a few seconds, though his ears were still ringing. He looked around- two of his Hork-Bajir were gasping for breath on the floor, and they all seemed equally dazed. He tried to yell to his troops, but realizing he couldn't hear anything other than an awful ringing, he gestured to the Hork-Bajir still in the bar to go search the area. They still seemed dizzy, but they stumbled out. He stumbled over to the bar, his hearing beginning to recover, and gasped out what he hoped sounded like "vodka," glancing at what had once been the bar's windows.

((that was a flashbang grenade equivalent. Chances are everyone in the bar would be momentarily dazed. The pistol would have no effect on Belzar even if it hit him on its current low setting. It's an antigrav pistol, causing matter to accelerate away from the beam. At this setting, all it's really good for is forcing the air from people's lungs.))

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8785 on: June 11, 2010, 01:19:30 PM »
Belzar's hearing device malfunctioned slightly as the explosive went off, and even though the person shot at him it did little against the robot. "Is everyone ok?" He called, though he wasn't sure if anyone could hear him. The cloaked figure was gone, and hopefully the other denizens would no longer be in danger. He wondered what all the firing outside was about, but was afraid to leave the others.


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« Reply #8786 on: June 11, 2010, 02:21:46 PM »
The Director shielded his eyes from the flash, and just waited for the ringing in his ears to stop.

Thordon was completely unfazed by the explosion as his back was turned. And his ears continued to function properly. He just continued to stare at the bar hoping the troops would now leave.



Parker replied to Temrash, "Whether or not they were looking for them, this isn't your ship. That isn't a decision that you can make. You didn't have to turn them away, you didn't have to do anything. What you did do was presumptuous and rude. I still respect you as a fighter, you just need to remember who's ship you're on. What would've happened if Morgan wasn't okay with the search, and they felt lawfully obligated to take action after seeing us? What if they were here for Silver, or Gaz? When I first got here, you were all working together weren't you? What if they were made wanted because of that? Either way, that doesn't matter. The point is, this isn't your ship."
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« Reply #8787 on: June 11, 2010, 02:42:57 PM »
Morgan nodded. "Parker makes a good point. I respect you and I believe I understand what you were doing. However, you were leading them into the ship before I got here. I would have agreed to let them see the ship anyway, as it was I saw I had no option but to agree seeing as how you were leading them in anyway. I only agreed because I have enough problems with my own government coming after me. I saw no need to anger another."

It was then that Asda ran across the room and yelled, "Morgan! Get over here! She's waking up."

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8788 on: June 11, 2010, 02:50:54 PM »
"Did you hear me shouting a question to Morgan, asking if it was ok? Well Morgan didn't really reply, and if he said no I would have told her to beat it. I doubt imperials would be here for people like Gaz who are from another dimension, but even so I doubt the woman would have gotten off a shot. I can move close to the speed of an Andlite tail when I'm prepared, which is about the only way a controller like me even lives as long as I have."

"I don't like the empire, and I certainly wouldn't bend over backwards trying to please any of them, but I'm trying to keep things peaceful. Judging from what a controller said to me earlier about a suspicious newcomer, I doubted they were after any of us or the GC that came here."

"I'm sorry, Morgan." He said to Morgan's remark. "You ran out and beck without saying anything, and since it was just one person I thought it wouldn't be a problem. I'll make sure to get your consent before doing something like that again."


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« Reply #8789 on: June 11, 2010, 03:03:51 PM »
"I appreciate that," Morgan replied. "Don't get the wrong idea, I'm not upset. If you had shouted something to me before, I admit I didn't hear it. I--" and that was when Asda shouted from next to Morgan's wife. She was waking up.

Morgan rushed over and saw his wife's eyelids begin to flutter slightly. He reached out and took her hand.

"Andromeda," he said quietly, "I'm here. Come back to me. Open those beautiful eyes."

"Odysseus?" Andromeda said quietly. "Is that you? Or is this another dream?" Her eyes were still not open.

"If it's a dream," Morgan replied, "then I'm sure it's mine."