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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #7305 on: February 07, 2010, 01:06:01 PM »
(I could still post in here. I left Fletcher behind at the bar. Debating on whether or not to bring him in. He's out at Gaz's ship.)

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #7306 on: February 07, 2010, 01:11:43 PM »
((Go for it! The bar itself is a tad empty right now))

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #7307 on: February 07, 2010, 01:43:29 PM »
((That's totally fine, post in my absence whenever you need to :)  And yes!  Please keep the bar alive! XD))

Myitt again watches in relative silence, absorbing Terenia's feelings as well as her memories. 

"I'm starting to understand why this whole endeavor has taken so long," she says finally, grimly.  "But how can you convince us all that you really have attempted to free your sister, and that you will be successful, even if it means your own death?  Let's see some of those memories.  And why, by the Kandrona itself, will you not accept our help under such circumstances?"


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #7308 on: February 07, 2010, 03:19:35 PM »
Terenia sighs as bits of her attempted rescue missions stream by in fast forward. Attacks, morphs, failed manipulations. All end with her being caught, all end in Visser Three's torture chamber.


The scene stops on one particular undertaking.

Terenia is in human morph, walking down the halls of the Blade Ship. The Yeerks that she passes give her a wide berth, knowing not to touch the pet of Visser Three. She arrives at a door and a look of confusion sweeps across her face. She seems to shake it off, opening the door and walking through.

The room she enters is huge, the size of a ballroom. In the center is the ship board Yeerk Pool. Cages ring the sides of the room, occupied by defeated hosts who stare blankly. At the far end of the room there is a cozy little area, set up with plush couches and several circular tables. A Gedd in an apron is taking orders. There are very few occupants, almost off of which are Taxxons or Gedds. Almost no Hork-Bajir, except for those on pier duty. Terenia's eyes alight with wary hope as she approaches one of the tables. A girl is sitting there, eating a cheeseburger. She looks exactly like Terenia's human morph.Terenia plops down next to her and pulls a Dracon Beam from under her shirt. Keeping the weapon hidden under the table she presses it against her sister's thigh.

"Alright, Yeerk," Terenia hisses in a whisper, keeping a wary eye on the Gedd waiter, "follow me and we won't have any problems."

The girl fixes Terenia with a sympathetic gaze, "Teresa," she says, "my Yeerk is currently feeding."

Terenia almost drops the weapon in surprise, but she regains her composure quickly, "what? Tammy, you mean you're free? We don't have much time, then. Come on, we have to go!"

Tammy's eyes remain sympathetic as she pops a fry in her mouth. Slowly it dawns on Terenia that her sister is free, but isn't in a cage. Slowly, she realizes what that means.

"Tammy..." Terenia pleads, "Tammy, come on. Let's go."

"No," Tamara says, taking a sip of her Coke and slamming it down on the table harshly.

"But...I don't understand...why?" Terenia grabs her sister's arm, as though she is going to drag her out of the pool room.

"You left us," Tamara said, the sympathy in her expression morphing into something else. Hurt. Betrayal. "You ran away and you
promised me that you would come back. But you never did. We waited for you, and here you decided to go off and fight in some interstellar war. You didn't even try to come home."

"It wasn't that simple," Terenia hisses, "I didn't
ask to get abducted, it just kinda happened."

"No, but you chose to let some fabrication return in your place. You think I wouldn't see through that?" Tammy accuses. When Terenia's face pales, Tamara nods grimly, "yeah, I've seen some of your file. I know why Visser Three finds you so interesting."

"Tammy, we have to go. Now. Before he sends his guards..."

"Teresa, you killed Danny," Tamara says. Terenia drops her hold on Tamara's arm, eyes widening as though she has been slapped.

"I had no choice," Terenia says, tears welling in her eyes.

"You abandoned me," Tamara's voice is raising above a whisper now, and she is beginning to draw attention, "you left me alone with that
bastard of a father of ours and then to top it off you killed our brother! And now you want to save me? Now? Now that it's convenient for you? Why? Because it will help heal your wounded pride?"

"Tammy, no, I want to help you!" Terenia cries, tears streaming silently down her face.

"Go to hell," Tamara says scathingly.

"But the Yeerks...they're destroying Earth. How can you support that?"

"What has humanity ever done for me?" Tamara asks, eyes narrowing, "our father beat us, our mother was a coward. My sister abandoned me and my brother, the only decent person I ever knew, is dead. If that's what humanity is, then it deserves to rot."

"Tammy..."

"Go away, Teresa. You aren't wanted here," Tamara presses a button on her watch and a shrill beep sounds. A moment later the door to the pool room opens up and Visser Three steps through, looking positively giddy. Terenia's stomach drops as she realizes that the entire situation - the lack of guards, her sister being one of the only voluntary hosts in the area - was a set up.

<I believe that counts as another failure, Terenia.> Visser Three says, an evil glint in his eyes. Several Hork-Bajir warriors advance forward. Terenia jumps up, the chair clattering behind her as her heart fills with dread.

"No," Terenia says, shaking her head, "no, not again." She turns to her sister, but her storm colored eyes are expressionless, "Tammy, please, please! Don't let him...don't..."

She turns and tries to run, but the Hork-Bajir catch her human form easily, restraining her even as she fights with all her strength. She is sobbing as she kicks at her captors, slicing herself on their blades and not even noticing. Terenia cries out for her sister, who watches blankly.

"I
will save you, Tammy! I will!" Terenia cries out through her tears, "I'm going to fix this! I promise!"

Terenia continues to sob as the Hork-Bajir drag her to Visser Three's torture chamber and the memory fades.






The real Terenia is also crying, silent tears sliding down her face in shining droplets.

"It was my fault," she murmurs, almost more to herself than her audience, "I caused this, and I have to fix it. I won't endanger anyone else."
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #7309 on: February 07, 2010, 06:15:06 PM »
Claxter wasn't sure what to say. He didn't really sympathise any more with terenia now than he ever did. She was just a messed up Human trying to get back what was gone.

<There is no sympathy in Tamora's eyes that I can see. You mean nothing to her. If you continue holding on to the past, it will just destroy you. Taking Tamora wouldn't do anything, as you would have to keep her contained just so she wouldn't leave.>


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #7310 on: February 07, 2010, 06:48:34 PM »
"You would give up on those you care about so quickly, wouldn't you, Andalite," Terenia hisses, "I will not lose her too. She's the only family I have."

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #7311 on: February 07, 2010, 07:09:11 PM »
<She has had five years to change her mind. Has she ever shown you kindness in those five years?>


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #7312 on: February 07, 2010, 07:31:37 PM »
"How often has she had the chance to show her kindness, in the last five years?" Myitt adds.  "Terenia, is there anything else you think we should see?"


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #7313 on: February 07, 2010, 08:00:58 PM »
Terenia shakes her head and sniffs, running the back of her hand across her eyes.

"That was the only time I ever saw Tamara free," she says with a sigh, "the first year...that was the hardest. I wouldn't accept defeat, but I also could not win. Eventually, I realized that I needed to be more subtle. I stockpiled weapons, just in case I would need them. I began to become a good little servant to Visser Three, and without realizing it he began to trust me. I was never excused from his...ah...special treatment, but he began to slip up at times. Pieces of information would fall into my hands. I suppose he thought that there was nothing I would be able to do with the information. So...that's what I've spent the past four years doing. Listening. Waiting. Watching. Biding my time and never giving up hope," she says the last bit with a cold glare in Claxter's direction.

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #7314 on: February 07, 2010, 08:11:26 PM »
<Humans must be quite stubborn. It doesn't really make sense to me for you to hold on for so long without just leaving, or getting killed in a certain attempt at "rescuing" your sister.>

Claxter wondered if he didn't understand because this was a Human trait, or because of his own cowardly issues.


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #7315 on: February 07, 2010, 08:59:28 PM »
"Pieces of information which we now have," says Myitt.  "We've been watching selected memories, but the rest of the last five years of your collective lives have been downloaded into the computer.  I think we've seen enough of her suffering."  She pauses, hesitant.  "Ossanlin, if you could please press in the sides of the clip on my ear, and accept the computer prompts, the probe will release itself from me.  Sorry Claxter, I frankly trust my old friend with this more than you.  It could be dangerous if done improperly."


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #7316 on: February 07, 2010, 09:03:32 PM »
<It is alright. I do not know how to fully operate that sort of machine.>


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #7317 on: February 08, 2010, 12:00:54 AM »
Keshin blinks at Sukohn's host, rubbing the back of his head. "Exactly what kind of rules are you talking about here? When I met the guy, he seemed more like a sarcastic weirdo than anything. And he didn't seem to have too much sensitivity to the fact that everyone in this bar's either or a rebel or living on the strange side of the law. Comments like his, with a different crowd, could probably get him killed."

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #7318 on: February 08, 2010, 01:15:46 AM »
After burying her pilot's body and washing up, Elayne caught a quick catnap in her bunk. When she awoke, she found herself exiting her ship and entering the bar as if on autopilot, as if a tractor beam was pulling her. She saw Keshin and gave a nod of greeting before settling at the table she had been sharing with Terenia and Myitt before she had left -- both of whom, she noticed, were no where to be seen. The man who had approached her as she had been dragging her pilot's body, however, was restrained in what appeared to be a highly ineffectual way. "What's...?" she wondered aloud to no one in particular, staring at him as if he were a puzzle she had to figure out.
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #7319 on: February 08, 2010, 02:34:10 AM »
Alic poured herself a shot and drank I quickly. "Him? A psychotic murderous voluntary controller." Alic refilled her glass. "'Scuse me, bartender. Coke please." She had not drinken rum in awhile and really needed a chaser or she thought she would gag.