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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #3315 on: August 09, 2009, 09:29:36 PM »
The slime which constituted of many different kinds of Rot and Disease rippled and shook, a long claw slit through it and pushed outwards, revealing a long slime dripping arm. That arm was joined by a thick tentacle that widened the gap, what began to pull itself through resembled nothing of what it once had been, the miasma of rot hung around it as the slime was slowly absorbed into the emerging creature.

The Devourer’s its head now turning to take in the morsels; it noted the feline creature near it and lashed out with a powerful tentacle, merely to fling the creature away from it as it finished forming.

Poisonous slime dripped from its maw as it stretched its long serpentine body and took a slow slithering step towards the group of Mortals, its mouth stretched wider then it should have been able to and a word slipped past its teeth “Huuunngerr”

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[spoiler] This one is quite fast when it wishes to be, it is as tall as an Andalite standing on its hind legs and as long two and three quarters of a Hork’Bajir lying down and stretching out to full length
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #3316 on: August 09, 2009, 09:41:05 PM »
Danika leaped out of the way, as more of a reflex than being aware of an attack. Her hair bristled as she came around. The creature was much different now. The orb continued scanning, but it had no further answers to what was going on.

"A strange form of metamorphosis, this. It seems it wants to feed." She said. Metallic claws extented from her paws, and she lashed out at the creature.

(I might let you eat Danika, but only because death is very cheap for her.)
« Last Edit: August 09, 2009, 09:47:05 PM by Chad28 »


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #3317 on: August 10, 2009, 12:11:46 AM »
The huge pile of rot and **** grew and grew. It sprouts arms and a huge head slithers out.

"What is going on? Is this The Blob meets Transformers? Is this thing going to attack or show us its next outfit? C'mon, I'm tired of this ****."

Parker somersaults under Ossaniln's belly and stops in a kneeling position, left elbow on his left knee steadying his sniper's shot. He shoots the beast straight through its eyes four times emptying the clip.

"****," Parker throws his sniper on his back with his left hand, and his right, draws his sword. He primes a frag grenade, and begins to run full out at the monster. Parker throws the 'cooked' grenade on the ground 2 yards short of the monster's head. As the grenade blows up, Parker jumps above it. The shockwave propels Parker even further into the sky. ((Roughly 30 feet))

The energy from his sword pulls Parker toward the beast. Parker's sword skims over its head and pierces its back. The pull of gravity combined with the sword's energy, the sword flies along the beast's back creating a gaping hole. As the sword continues past the monster, Parker twists his body around to land on his feet and facing the monster's backside.

« Last Edit: August 10, 2009, 12:32:54 PM by Spartan 281 (Parker) »
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #3318 on: August 10, 2009, 01:02:25 AM »
((What the hell!? you just completly controlled my Demon!))

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #3319 on: August 10, 2009, 01:04:24 AM »
((that's not nice then... working on post now))

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((post is here!))

Seeing the demon thing turn into a pile of sludge before his eyes then proceed to turn into a giant lizard looking thing, caused Hunter to snap out of the trance he was in.

Making sure that his pistol’s safety was off, he opened fire at the thing. Shooting at its head, Hunter fired five times, hoping that it wouldn't miss.
« Last Edit: August 10, 2009, 05:27:42 AM by Hunter »


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #3320 on: August 10, 2009, 05:05:43 AM »
((Hunter and Parker, you can't control anyone else's character without their permission, and you can't fire a weapon at Zombs' character without giving Zombs the chance to react.  That's powergaming and if it keeps up you won't be able to keep playing.  Instead of automatically hitting, try firing or attacking "at" the demon.))


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #3321 on: August 10, 2009, 05:24:58 AM »
((kk... i'll edit my post soon))

((there... edited...))
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #3322 on: August 10, 2009, 08:40:18 AM »
((Myitt, does your signature seriously have "I'll make you an offer you can't refuse" in it? The Godfather haunts your life! ;D And it looks like I don't have much to do for the moment. ^^))

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #3323 on: August 10, 2009, 08:58:30 AM »
((I secons what Myitt said. Kindly edit, please.))

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #3324 on: August 10, 2009, 12:09:37 PM »
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #3325 on: August 10, 2009, 12:20:45 PM »
((Hey Park, you're still controling her character. Where you say that you 'shot it through the eyes four times but it still stands' and that it 'snapped it's jaws at you' you're dictating what her character is doing. Read what Hunter posted. That's a good example of getting your point acroas without controling another player and giving them enough time to respond. Good luck, let us know if you need more help.))

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #3326 on: August 10, 2009, 12:38:32 PM »
((Really?? You guys are nitpicking 'cause I said, "it stil stands"? It's an undead monster, She's created an indestructible trump-card carrying super-demon that's impervious to bullets. Are you saying that my four shots killed it so soon? C'mon.

This is a quote from her:
Quote from: Zombie
Shoot it if you want, bullets dont do much, and It may change form to better eat you with.

I think it's safe to assume her super-demon is safe from my four shots

Either way, it's edited out.))

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #3327 on: August 10, 2009, 01:07:10 PM »
(Yeah, go easy on Spartan. Though powerplaying is discouraged, there's only one conclusion that can come from him shooting it anyway.)


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #3328 on: August 10, 2009, 01:31:32 PM »
((Sigh.  Sometimes it's hard to determine what power-gaming is.  Just to make a quick example...regarding the sword quote...instead of assuming you hit (even though we accept that it's not going to do much good...) say something like... "Parker's sword skims over, aiming at the creatures back.  Parker attempted to use gravity and his own strength to draw a large gaping whole in the creature's back."  That way zombz has a chance to respond...the creature is quick, it might've dodged, or it might not have.  Generally you want to let the controlling person decide whether their char takes the hit.  On the other side if someone never takes a hit, it's a different kind of powergaming...it takes practice is all.  We're glad you're here Parker and we all want you to stay, all we're asking is that you make an effort, and you obviously are.  Don't worry too much, we'll let you know if we think something goes too far.))


Ossanlin feels Parker's presence and direction of motion even before he starts his maneuver.  Ossanlin spreads his front legs to allow the armored human to pass beneath hiim more easily.  He readies energy and gathers it, raising a hand and focusing powerful light energy into Parker's sniper projectiles as they leave the barrel, increasing their power and causing them to trail streaks of white hot light through the air.  If the human's shot was good and the creature didn't dodge...those projectiles might do some damage.

At the same time he closes his eyes and readies a null-time field with only a hope that it might affect the creature.  If the thing could transcend time itself...it wouldn't do any good, but it was worth a shot.  He opens his eyes, and they glow bright blue as he attempts to freeze the creature in place, attempting to construct a field of void time around the entity.

Ossanlin's distinct timestream energy radiates out from the GESB, undetectable to most, but shining like beacons across light-years to those who could sense time itself.
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #3329 on: August 10, 2009, 01:46:08 PM »
Further anomaly. The orb texted, indicating the Andalite.

Danika logged that away in her mind as she continued her efforts to wound the creature with her metallic claws. If the Andalite was indeed different than most, it would perk her interest. Perhaps he, too, could be examined.


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