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Re: Animorphs Book 55: The Difference
« Reply #30 on: January 28, 2009, 08:06:21 PM »
Chapter 30 (Ax)

The mechanics ran, knowing themselves outnumbered. They were obviously not trained warriors, as were all the Kelbrid we had fought before. Prince Jake called out orders in thought-speak, <Ax and Marco, get us into one of those ships! Tobias, you and I are going after those two, try to catch them before they can call for back-up. Go!>

Prince Jake and Tobias took off after the fleeing mechanics, while Marco and I headed for the nearest ship, powering our wings for altitude to reach the hatch. As soon as we got there, I looked for a control pad to open it. I ran my hands over the hull of the ship, searching.

Nothing, nothing . . . there! My hands slid across a tiny groove in the metal, and I pried it open. Underneath the lid, there was an assortment of buttons and knobs, and a screen. I worked the controls, trying to find the code that would open the door. I deactivated the error message, and quickly hacked the system. The hatch opened.

<Hey, forget those two!> Marco called to Prince Jake. <Ax got the door open! Get in, get in!> Prince Jake and Tobias turned around, abandoning their chase, and powered toward the ship. They reached us just as the first few Kelbrid warriors began to appear at the hangar door.

<Geez, they got here fast,> Marco commented as he spotted them.

<They were probably expecting us,> Tobias pointed out.

Marco and I flew inside the ship, with Prince Jake and Tobias close behind. I went immediately to the main controls of the ship, puzzling over the unfamiliar interface to find the controls for the hatch. I flipped a blue switch, and the hatch closed.

Marco was helping now to power up the ship, which made me a little uneasy. Where had he learned to fly a ship like this? I recalled that he had piloted Yeerk ships during the war, and that he had done fairly well for a human, but I wasn't sure I trusted a human behind controls that I myself barely understood.

Still, he seemed to know what he was doing. Perhaps he had learned a little about piloting alien craft in the years since the war. In any case, the ship was now hovering above the ground, and turning to face the exit. Which was, of course, rapidly closing.

<Ax!> Prince Jake said shrilly, as though letting me hear his anxiety would cause me to work faster.

I pulled a lever.

FWOOOM!

The ship kicked forward, lunging at the closing opening.

As we blew past, I thought I saw other ships powering up and lifting off, ready to give chase as we tried to escape.

We dove, the belly of the ship nearly scraping the ground as we tried to fit into the opening below the hangar door.

SCREEEEEEEeeee . . .

The top of our ship scraped against the door, nearly stopping for a terrifying moment that must have felt much longer than it was, as I wondered whether the door might close with enough force to crush us. I turned a knob to give more thrust to the engines, and we powered through. We were free!

But now the door was opening again, and the other fighters were quickly catching up to us.

<Marco, take weapons,> I ordered, indicating the area I believed the weapons controls to be. He saluted me and took the joystick.

I steered our ship for the nearest cluster of Kelbrid dwellings. We were all in the same model of ship, it seemed, so I reasoned that just as they wouldn't be able to outrun us in a straight chase, neither could we outrun them. So the trick would be to fly through areas that the Kelbrid would be hesitant to follow. I took advantage of the open design of the Kelbrid buildings, darting in and out of the open spaces, flying perilously close to walls, columns, and the occasional Kelbrid passerby. And it was working; the Kelbrid ships were slowing down, being far more careful than I not to hit their fellow citizens.

Perhaps this was a 'dirty' move, as a human might say. Perhaps I should have been more respectful of the lives of Kelbrid civilians, myself. But at that point, I was entirely too aggravated by all that their species had put me through to care.

"Kuldir, we order you to halt immediately!" came a voice over the ship's intercom. Prince Jake stepped forward and shut it off without even bothering with a response.

We flew for a long time, twisting and turning through the Kelbrid city, putting a little more distance between ourselves and our pursuers with each passing moment. We knew they wouldn't fire with so many Kelbrid citizens and structures so close, and they couldn't catch up to us for the same reason. There was nothing they could do except watch our ship getting slowly smaller in their viewscreen.

I had to admit that it felt very satisfying to finally see the Kelbrid rendered helpless against us. 'The tables had turned,' as the nonsensical human expression goes.

Once we had put enough distance between us and the Kelbrid ships to be out of their firing range, I angled upwards and we shot into the sky.

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Re: Animorphs Book 55: The Difference
« Reply #31 on: January 28, 2009, 08:07:32 PM »
Chapter 31 (Zu)

We hovered behind the wall of a piroth market, listening for any sound from the hangar, but careful to keep out of sight. We could hear our kuldir friends yell “Attack!” in Doua’s voice. But Doua held us back from coming to their aid. “If they need us, they will say so,” she said simply. "That is what we agreed."

So we watched from a distance as they stole a ship. Watched them fly it away from the hangar, chased by a fleet of pursuers. We tried to follow them as best we could, but even Kelbrid wings are no match for engines. So we watched their ship fade into the distance, and when it was a tiny silver speck at the edge of our vision, we saw it streak upward into the sky.

After a while, we saw the pursuers’ ships drift slowly back toward the hangar, defeated.
The kuldir were free. They were going back to their home.

I would miss them.

They had reminded me so much of her. That same stubborn defiance. That same unwillingness to be controlled. What had they called themselves? Humans? They even looked a little like the Trexions.

It was painful to remember, but it was a pain I welcomed. She had been my everything. My Zo’axiel.

A kuldir.

Yet I had loved her. And she had felt the same for me.

I wondered if perhaps, just before they had dispersed the One, the humans had seen her. That monster seemed to love to show her off. Her sweet, beautiful, elfin visage, with that smooth, pale sea-green skin and those dark indigo eyes. Yes, she was beautiful.
She was so beautiful.

The other Kelbrid didn’t understand. Doua, Vuhl, Bahm . . . they empathized with kuldir, saw them as more than just different, more than just the disease from which the word "kuldir" itself derived. But they still didn’t understand how a kuldir could ever be beautiful.

As I gazed, dreaming, at the clouds above, I noticed Vuhl already flying high above the rest of us. Reveling in the wings she had thought she had lost.

Bahm glanced at me and immediately guessed what I had been thinking about. He touched his wingtip to mine, a gesture of comfort. “We will destroy the One someday,” he said. “And when we do, we will take back all the lives he has taken. We will save her.”

I sighed, still looking skyward. I thought of the small winged creature that had been with the humans. There had been something about him, something about the way he talked, something about the way he carried himself when he was in Vuhl's form. Something familiar. Something that seemed almost a reflection of the way I felt.

He had lost someone, too.

"Maybe they were right," I said. "Maybe we aren't as different as we think we are."

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FIN

To continue the story, please read The Rebirth
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Re: Animorphs Book 55: The Difference
« Reply #32 on: January 28, 2009, 08:39:34 PM »
Wow! I was totally expecting a repost of what you already had on FF.net. That was amazing. I'm going to The Rebirth now.

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Re: Animorphs Book 55: The Difference
« Reply #33 on: January 29, 2009, 05:28:08 PM »
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Re: Animorphs Book 55: The Difference
« Reply #34 on: March 23, 2009, 11:51:11 AM »
that was one of the best fanfictions i have ever read!!!.
this comeing from a man who used to spend most of his schooltime reading them. extreamly well done you captuered the characters perfectley.
i can find no faults in it watsoever....

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Re: Animorphs Book 55: The Difference
« Reply #35 on: June 05, 2009, 09:16:36 AM »
is this fan fiction already approved by Applegate? like the starwars expanded universe approve by g. lucas?

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Re: Animorphs Book 55: The Difference
« Reply #36 on: December 02, 2010, 10:35:39 PM »
WOW! This is really great! Animoprhs is one of my favorite books and was a bit sad at the open ended ending.

But this fan fiction is like the real thing! Thanks for making this!