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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #255 on: December 24, 2012, 04:12:42 PM »
<<What?>> Keslin asks, drawing back in horror. <<No, that...that can't be...>> His chirps fade into silence as the weight of Reven and James' death hits him. His palps droop with the weight of grief and he drifts away a little.



"Keslin," Chris breathes, looking down at the pool. He swallows. "They need time to feed," he says, sounding as if he is convincing himself more than anything else. He is fairly desperate to get his friend back, but he settles for squeezing Tess' hand.



Terenia doesn't respond to Tara or Daniel, sliding down the wall to the floor, looping her arms over her knees and staring at the ground. She isn't crying anymore. Nor is she doing much of anything.



Efaen stares at Claxter. "I don't care about honor," she says flatly. "I was being sarcastic. I don't give a **** about who you were to me before the memory wipe. That person didn't deserve friends, and if you associated with her I do not want to associate with you."

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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #256 on: December 24, 2012, 04:35:25 PM »
Myitt moves toward Keslin again, to console him, but she twists in the water at Illim's voice.

<<You're alive,>> she breathes, swimming to Illim's side and brushing against him in relief. <<Lanath, someone, tell them that Illim is here. Is there anyone else?>>

<<Not to the best of my determination,>> Lanath says stiltedly, scrunch-thrusting back to the transponder. <<War-Prince Ossanlin, or whomever else receives this message, the Yeerk is Illim Seven-One-Eight. Could you kindly tell us who among our human friends is alive and with us?>>



"I knew he wouldn't leave Myitt behind," Tara sighs, pacing away from the wall and from Terenia, intertwining her fingers with Daniel's. "Daniel." She squeezes his hand. "Reven and James are gone, I don't know where Corliss and Mike are, I...I don't know how we can possibly begin to inventory the dead."


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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #257 on: December 24, 2012, 09:49:14 PM »
Ossanlin watches as Lanath once again finds his way to the interface.  After he disconnects, Ossanlin once again removes the chip and interfaces it with his ARC, listening to the translated "voice" of Lanath.  <Another confirmed identity in the Yeerk pool...Illim Seven-One-Eight.  Tara, if you have a moment, would you join me at the pool please?  Lanath has requested the identities of the humans present.  I do not know most of your names.>

He glances at the murky surface of the pool.  <Of those I know, there are Tara and Terenia.  I do not know the rest of the names present, I have asked Tara to join me poolside to assist with that task.>  He places the chip back into the recording apparatus.
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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #258 on: December 25, 2012, 03:59:05 PM »
<I know you were being sarcastic. Who told you that the old you didn't deserve friends? Why are they your friends now? I didn't like that the old Efaen was speciesist, but that didn't make her a complete monster. She was speciesist against Yeerks, and I assume you're aware of what most Yeerks are like. Now you're still apparently speciesist, since you dislike me just for being an Andalite. Did they say it's ok to do that as long as it wasn't against rebels? I said I was your friend, but that doesn't mean we spent time talking about how we hated the Yeerks.>

<We talked about how neither one of us was the kind of warrior the military wanted. We talked about each other and ourselves.>


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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #259 on: December 30, 2012, 11:04:28 AM »
Efaen licks her lips, looking a little uncertain. "I don't know who that 'myself' was," she says in a quieter voice. "The person you befriended is gone. And she--she committed terrible acts of terrorism against the rebels. She destroyed large numbers of them when they were helpless just because of what they are." She inspects Claxter cautiously. "I do not hate all Andalites. There is at least one Andalite I consider my comrade, if not my friend. I just do not trust them easily, considering how I have been treated since Ossanlin took me from my home."



Terenia looks up long enough to watch Daniel and Tara head towards the pool, then she drops her gaze again, eyes on her knees as she sits against the wall, expression blank.



Keslin says nothing for a long moment, lost in the shock of Reven's death. Finally, though, he moves forward again, trying to gather his wits. <<We need to organize,>> he squeaks. <<Figure out what is going on. Lanath, I--I need to make sure that Tess and Chris are okay, and then we need to come up with some sort of plan.>>

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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #260 on: December 30, 2012, 11:40:50 AM »
<I won't say what you did wasn't wrong, though I do wonder what happened in that year that would make you suddenly decide to mass murder the Yeerks. I understand if you can't answer those kinds of questions, but it's quite the mystery. Your original personal mission was to spy on them, and see if they were really just as bad as the empire, or worked for the Empire. I wonder what sort of information you might have come across. I thank you for talking to me, Efaen. I will leave you and go get some rest, assuming Prince Ossanlin has no current need for me.> He says, and leaves the room.

When he leaves, he looked at Daniel, the Human who had helped Efaen get to the ship. He wondered if he cared anything for Efaen, but didn't really feel like barraging him with questions right now. He took his gaze away, and walked to the flight deck for some quiet time.

When he entered, he gave a cordial nod to Leskel and Enorryma before finding a corner to close his eyes and relax.
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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #261 on: December 30, 2012, 11:45:50 PM »
Joanne nods nervously in response to Myitt's hurried, frightened reply. ....she didn't know. She didn't know anything. Kess could be dead or alive: the information was simply hanging in the air. Joanne bites her lip and clenches her fist tightly, trying to focus. Rebels. Freaks. Bounty hunters. The layabouts and cast-offs of society all gathered by an Andalite Prince of all people, quivering like pathetic shells of themselves. It was a nightmare. And what about Ossanlin? What had he risked in his warped little society to pull this rescue off? She hated to admit it, but thanks was in order. Joanne hated owing debts, let alone to someone she fought with.

Ossanlin picked that exact moment to assist Myitt in....ah. Trying to figure out the very question Joanne had wanted the answer to. Joanne couldn't help it: she followed the two of them to where they were going. She had to know. Kess's possible death felt like a weight on her chest. She attempted to keep herself far enough away that she looked like she understood that Myitt didn't really want her around. Nobody wants a bounty hunter right now. Don' bring nothin' but trouble. Joanne seems to drag her body along the ground instead of her usual fleet-footed steps, a fish out of water.

But then she hears it: Keshin's latest name. He was alive. Perfectly alive. A wide grin of relief breaks out on Joanne's face. Kess was okay and it wouldn't be long before the turelek was whole again.
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 Keshin drifts through the water, noting Lanath's transmissions to their rescuers but of course could not intercept them. It was frustrating. Keshin could not gauge what his next move would be if he had no idea where he was or what had happened in the first place. Not having a host for so long was an incredibly limiting experience. 

<This is Keshin,> states Keshin in a ping sent to Lanath. <Do you know what happened yet? The identity of our benefactors?>


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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #262 on: January 03, 2013, 12:24:55 AM »
<<Apparently it is the young War-Prince Ossanlin,>> Lanath replies to Keshin, twisting in the pool to respond to him. <<A friend of Myitt's, though I am by no means close to him.>>

To Keslin he says, as gently as he can, <<Let me persuade these people to return us to our hosts. Surely they did not rescue us to keep us apart.>>

He swims to the newly replaced transponder and gently lays his palps against the metal interface.

<<When you have the identities confirmed,>> he tells the device, <<if you would please allow us to reunite with any of those who may know us? Our human friends?>>

He pulls back, waiting for the broad thought-speech reply.

Myitt stays next to Illim, unable to leave his side.



"Ah, yeah, Ossanlin, give me a sec," Tara calls, squeezing Daniel's hand and letting go reluctantly. She makes the short trip to the pool room in a daze.

At the sight of her friend in his natural form, Tara almost has the heart to smile, but it doesn't quite surface.

"So far we have...um...there's me, Daniel Feldstein, Terenia Rerin, Tess Franklin..." She pauses so Ossanlin can repeat if he needs to. "Chris O'Hearn." That name makes her swallow back a fresh lump of tears. "Um. Um...****." She presses a hand against her mouth, eyes shining. "Sorry. There are more. Dominic, Aya, I saw Niko...**** I can never pronounce his last name...and Joanne. Whatever her name is." Her expression sours from grief to irritation, but it is half-hearted. Tara LaFauci hugs her arms and nods at the floor. "I think that's it."
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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #263 on: January 03, 2013, 02:58:29 AM »
Ossanlin trots closer to the pool.  <Tara has confirmed the following identities...Tara herself, of course...Daniel Feldstein, Terenia Rerin, Tess Franklin...>  He pauses and continues as Tara does.  <Chris O'Hearn...Dominic, Aya, Niko...and Joanne.>

Ossanlin turns and nods at Tara, noting the grief in her eyes.  He lowers himself to his knees and, in a very un-Andalite gesture, wraps his arms around Tara's shoulders, hugging her gently.  He can't explain why he's done it...it just seems like the right thing to do.  <I am so sorry, Tara.  I never wanted any of this to happen.>  He closes his eyes for a moment before releasing Tara's shoulders and standing back up.

Ossanlin notes that Lanath has once again interfaced with the nodes.  He pulls the data chip out and interfaces it with his ARC for a third time, listening to Lanath's message.

<If you feel that you have fed for long enough, you may be reunited with your hosts any time you desire.>  He places the chip back into the assembly.
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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #264 on: January 03, 2013, 07:31:42 PM »
Enorryma stood quietly to one side while Leskel worked the ship's controls. Z-Space was visually lacking in landmarks, but the ship's readouts showed a different picture: a complex and contoured landscape with anomalous folding through multiple dimensions, visible on one of the screens as a curving topography projected onto a grid. This particular jump was taking them past a series of trans-dimensional folds which had a readout shaped similarly to an Andalite's ear.

Norry began to wonder if anybody else ever looked for shapes in the Z-Space topography, the way children would look for shapes in atmospheric clouds. The comparative lull after the mission left her contemplative, and she found herself glad that she had not used any of her stim capsules: she would have still been tense and craving to run, to fight, to do anything other than stand here and silently read pictures in the marshmallow-white void outside the ship. On a ship as small as the Mirage, that urge to move would force her to interact with the humans, and she did not feel ready for it.
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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #265 on: January 03, 2013, 07:48:39 PM »
After ten minutes or so, Claxter stirred again. He stretched, and looked around the room, and off into the whiteness of Z-Space. He walked over to look at the controls, which were a bit different from his fighter. <Does this ship feel much different to fly than a standard fighter, Leskel?> He asked, mildly curious. He took in all the screens and buttons, wondering how it would feel to fly it.


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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #266 on: January 03, 2013, 08:10:09 PM »
Enorryma blinked as Claxter approached, surprised that he was showing an interest in the ship's operation.

<Forgive me for interrupting, but if you would like me to give you a summary of the operation of this ship and how it differs from current fighter models, I would be happy to assist, and we would be able to leave Leskel to his work... unless he would like for me to take over the helm instead, of course.>

She swiveled her stalk eyes questioningly to Leskel. Z-Space navigation with large vessels demanded careful and attentive focus; while a smaller ship would have no trouble with dimensional folding, larger vessels' mass made for a much higher potential risk of emerging in the wrong location. Norry didn't think it likely that anybody would try to navigate Z-Space and hold a conversation simultaneously, when a bit of inattention could mean exiting Z-Space right next to a neutron star or in the gravity well of a red supergiant.
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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #267 on: January 03, 2013, 08:22:54 PM »
<Thank you ma'am. I would appreciate that.> Claxter said. <I've flown a fighter a few times, and it's one of the more enjoyable training sessions I've been through.> He had never really enjoyed blade to blade combat very much, mostly because it put him at greater risk of injury. Though he didn't want to let the TO know he was more afraid of pain and death than a typical Warrior should be. <Obviously the Mirage is not a standard ship, and that itsself adds a layer of interest as well.>


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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #268 on: January 03, 2013, 08:35:03 PM »
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Leskel glances over at Claxter as he enters the flight-deck, but doesn't comment as the Warrior lies down.  When Claxter addresses him, he points a stalk-eye in his direction.  <I apologize, Claxter, I was never a fighter pilot.  I believe there would be no-one more qualified to enlighten you than our TO, if she would like to.>

He points a stalk-eye at Enorryma as she speaks.  <If you should like to assume the helm, you are welcome to do so, sir.  However, it is not necessary.>

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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #269 on: January 03, 2013, 09:10:55 PM »
<Thank you, Leskel; please continue as you were.>

Enorryma assumed a more relaxed posture, her stalk eyes drifting toward the entrance of the control room as she spoke.

<The first differences you will notice between fighters and larger ships are the sound and the inertia. In a fighter, your engine is directly beneath and behind you, and you can hear when the secondary engine engages to compensate for maneuvering. The fighter's singularity engine is significantly smaller than the singularity drives on a larger ship, so while combustion-based engines only exist on large ships as back-up systems and failsafes to counter primary engine failures, on the fighter, the combustion engines are how you do rapid fine maneuvering, with the singularity engine being reserved for gross maneuvers, Z-Space jumps, and peripheral systems like traction, cloaking, and shielding. This means that in a fighter or another small ship, you have to be attentive to the richness of your fuel mixture, and you can actually hear differences in the engine noises based on the fuel richness and the demands you are putting on the combustion engine. In a ship like the Mirage, or anything larger, however, the engines are functionally silent. This forces you to watch your instruments more carefully for engine diagnostics, if the ship is under multiple stresses like sustaining shield damage and returning fire along with flight and maneuvers. In a large ship, you may fail to notice a problem which would be apparent immediately in your fighter.>

Norry indicated the diagnostic panel of the controls as she spoke.

<Inertia also comes into play: a large ship is much less agile and will either maneuver more slowly or demand more power to maneuver at the same speed. In a fighter, most of the weapons systems are powered by the singularity engine, and the main conflict to balance is between the strength of your shield, the power of your Shredder, and the linear speed of your craft. In a larger ship, being more maneuverable comes at the cost of your shields being temporarily weaker, or your Shredders temporarily being limited for range and power. Dome ships are a major exception, since newer models have dedicated engines for the peripheral systems, separate from the drive engines. Ships of greater mass are more dangerous to take through Z-Space, because they are more likely to have anomalous interactions with dimensional folds. This screen shows the Z-Space topography, since the naked eye can't interpret these frequencies of light.> She pointed out the grid screen, with its strange curves.

<Most of these anomalies are larger than a fighter, so you do not even need this screen on a fighter, and your only real concern is plotting your exit location accurately. The Mirage is sufficiently massive that the Z-Space topography is directly altered by its presence, so constant attention is necessary to make sure our exit point is still where it was in the moment that it was calculated and plotted. In a combat situation, this ship would need a bare minimum crew of two, because one pilot cannot handle both navigation and weapons systems. In a fighter, navigation is so much less complex that a single pilot can handle both, and even give priority to the weapons systems. Finally, while there are countless other smaller details which make them different, the last two major differences of note are the life support and the controls themselves.>

Norry gestured to the ship's consoles, a mix of old-style joysticks, key screens, and thought-speech interfaces.

<An Andalite fighter ship is designed exclusively for Andalite use, and as a result, it combines a physical joystick with thought-speech commands, intended for simultaneous use. A larger ship may have occasional non-Andalite crew with necessary skills, and so it has multiple methods of interfacing with the ship's computer. Nowhere on a large ship will you find a true full-manual override, because you would need far more limbs than you have to operate the necessary levers. A fighter does have full-manual controls, which you can engage as part of numerous possible emergency situations. The life support systems of a fighter are clearly very limited, designed to protect you from cosmic radiation, heat, cold, and vacuum, and to keep engine fumes out of the ****pit. A ship of this size has to maintain a more complex internal climate including fluid and gas recycling and processing, so the life support systems have their own dedicated section of the control panel. Frequently this section is password protected or calibrated to a limited small group of the crew, for security.>

She stepped away from the life support controls and smiled with her eyes. <There is quite a bit more to it, of course, but those are the main concerns.>
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