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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #1170 on: February 18, 2014, 02:21:31 PM »
<A government that values honor and duty over selfishness and greed is one that it not corrupt.> Ferxal said, though it was possible Neffit meant the question to be rhetorical. <Unfortunately many governments, given power over laws, forget that they are meant to serve the People. Not rule over them.>

He's unfamiliar with shaking hands, but tentatively reaches out his hand in the same manner and waits to see what Neffit does. <I suppose being here is not ideal for you. Prince Ossanlin said he had tried for years to develop trust within that group. Do you and your friends trust him?>


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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #1171 on: February 18, 2014, 05:25:09 PM »
Varit waits, his breathing growing shallower and shallower. His sensors are flickering in and out of usefulness, and he begins to wonder if he might be hallucinating the bugs that seem to crawl out of the deck and his flesh, but that have no flavor at all.



Aetheas steps purposefully from his quarters, moving quickly towards the dome. As he steps in, he cranes all four eyes upwards, drinking in the curvature, and the main Shredder beyond it, searching out details he's never noticed before. With a stalk eye, he skims a data pad that he now has in his hands.

<Hmph,> he says. <I guess it really is designed that way. That seems... inefficient.> Since he's been given access to many of the Tyrennian's classified files and logs, he's been frequently checking parts of the ship, or comparing what he sees to his notes, or studying past tactics and battles of the Mark III dome ships to verify that the craft really have the advertised performance.

<Unless...> he comments, his eyes now tracing the Shredder down, past the point where it's no longer visible. He turns and walks briskly towards the dome's exit, flipping through the data pad as he goes. He pays no notice to the Warrior and the rebel engaged in conversation as he walks by.

<Aha,> he says, stopping in his tracks. The Shredder was designed to draw slightly more power and coolant than necessary directly from the main line, and though he can't find anything explicitly stating the reason, he's beginning to suspect, thanks to the circulation route it takes, that it's used to both allow the Shredder to overcharge itself if necessary, and to add stability and rigidity to the tail-like structure via slight magnetic and centripetal forces. Some of the ship's systems have this mark-- this almost elegant artistry-- taking into account variables he would never have thought of. Though he knows the ship had been designed by a dedicated team of engineers, he imagines a single master designer, and he imagines himself getting to know this mysterious, brilliant Andalite better the more he knows the ship. He often finds himself holding conversations in his head with this imaginary engineer, gushing endlessly or asking questions for which the imagined Andalite could only give him the answers Aetheas himself already knows or suspects. It isn't terribly productive, he supposes, but it does help him to shift his own perspective of the why behind many of the Tyrennian's design decisions.

He calls up the ship's current log and mechanical stress schematics. The Tyrennian is indeed accelerating, and he watches with fascination as the tail-like Shredder resists the flexing effects of the motion slightly more than they would given material strength alone. Or... so he supposes. He'd have to run simulations later to be sure there was any effect at all.

Finally, his eyes catch sight of Nefitt, and... and... and an Andalite he doesn't recognize. There aren't supposed to be other male Andalites in the Rebellion, and they certainly hadn't docked or he'd have been informed. Wouldn't he? So here, in the middle of space, where could this newcomer have come from?

A quick glance around reveals that the newcomer is, in fact, being watched. Interesting. A stowaway would be in the brig, but this... this must be... what then? His mind, still preoccupied by the days and days of endless study, seems to be moving very slowly with regard to everything else...
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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #1172 on: February 18, 2014, 09:52:42 PM »
"I cannot speak for my friends," Nefitt says, grasping Ferxal's hand and giving it a firm, brief handshake. "But no, I do not trust him. I do not trust any Andalites." His grim smile returns. "No offense meant, of course."

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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #1173 on: February 18, 2014, 10:09:20 PM »
Ferxal put his hand back to his side, figuring he had just learned what a standard Human greeting was. <I take no offense. I have been given the choice to stay or leave when my ship is repaired. I suppose a dutiful Warrior would return to his people and resume his mission of defeating the Empire, but an honorable Warrior might investigate this accusation of corruption. Both duty and honor are important for my people, as I'm sure you're aware, though there have been famous cases where those things are thrown aside because of hatred or arrogance. Or both. I pride myself on not giving in to such vices.>

<Perhaps the trust Prince Ossanlin spoke of was the trust of leaders within your rebellion. I suppose if the time has not yet come, a moment of decision will happen where the Yeerks and Andalites on this ship may depart or stay together.>


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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #1174 on: February 18, 2014, 10:24:00 PM »
"Maybe," Nefitt says, shrugging. "I'm not one of the leaders, and I don't make those decisions. I'm a medic. I go where I'm needed."

He licks his lips, eyes flickering up and down the Andalite's body. "If you think your government is free of corruption, you are a fool," he says, bluntly. "No government is free of such things, regardless of its initial intentions. Duty and honor are as false of pretenses for the Andalites as freedom and righteousness are for my people."

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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #1175 on: February 18, 2014, 11:02:46 PM »
<Warriors often don't have time to think about possible government corruption, though I have always known in the back of my mind that it was possible. Hatred of Yeerks has been so ingrained into us over the decades that many literally think of them as a disease instead of sentient beings with dramatically different lifestyles that may just be victims of their government as much as anyone. Apparently it has allowed Sector Seven to weasel its way into having more power than it should, and I do not wish our people to defeat the Empire, only to be stabbed in the back by corrupt warmongers.>


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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #1176 on: February 19, 2014, 03:08:54 PM »
Nefitt makes a small snorting sound. "It sounds as if you have already made your decision regarding this place, then," he says with a shrug. "And regarding the Andalite that is in charge here."

He steps back, giving himself a little more space, his own discomfort being near Andalites showing. "The question that remains," he murmurs, "is how you feel about us. I certainly have no intentions of being stabbed in the back by another dapsen Andalite." His dark eyes hold Ferxal's gaze, issuing a silent challenge.

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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #1177 on: February 19, 2014, 03:40:52 PM »
<Prince Ossanlin is a reputable Andalite, and I am willing to give him the benefit of the doubt. Unless, of course, I find that his motives are based more on emotion or possibly paranoia instead of rationality. I can't say much about what I feel about Yeerks, aside from what I've already said. I also do not yet know if your rebel faction is doing anything deceitful to ensure that your hosts are voluntary.>

<You seem to be implying that you tried placing trust in Andalites before, and it failed. How so?>


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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #1178 on: February 19, 2014, 09:30:50 PM »
<I do not wish to linger here any longer than necessary.>  Ossanlin glances over at Keslin.  <There seems to be a single fighter at this point...would a transmission from you be enough?>  He begins the sequence to open an audio-only channel with the fighter.
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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #1179 on: February 20, 2014, 10:25:10 AM »
Aetheas wanders towards Nefitt and the new Andalite curiously, trying to get his mind on the situation at hand.

<Who are you?> he asks the Andalite bluntly from a short distance away. His tone conveys neither apprehension nor accusation; this is merely a curiosity.



Varit is startled from a half-sleep by a beep from the console. Where is he again?

Oh, right. Dying in space. He shakes himself to get the blood flowing and takes several deep breaths. It helps. A little. Less than it had earlier.

His ship doesn't recognize the origin of the incoming transmission, but at this point, it hardly matters. He accepts it. It's audio only, which may be good sign-- the Andalites and Imperials tend to like to show their faces. He finds himself hoping that he may have finally found another Rebel. He's been pushing his growing despair down for days now, but with this small burst of hope, it's threatening to break free and drown him. Someone else must have survived...

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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #1180 on: February 20, 2014, 10:32:33 AM »
Ferxal spares a stalk eye for the new Andalite. <I am Ferxal Escoth Dhoraim. I was recently rescued from a critically damaged fighter, and have been left here under watch after your captain told me what is going on here.>

He noticed something was wrong with the Andalite's tail, and gave it a once-over with his stalk eye. <A deformed tail? Such a pity. You seem to be well ranked, though. Out of necessity, I suppose. You must have comeptent skills elsewhere, or this ship is critically understaffed.>
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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #1181 on: February 21, 2014, 09:29:28 PM »
Nefitt laughs quietly. "I assure you, I have done nothing to coerce my host. In fact, technically speaking, he isn't voluntary, though Kevin is a rare case. You will find that most of the humans here are rather close with their Yeerk friends."

His already sour expression darkens further at Aetheas' entrance into the conversation. He glances over at the young Andalite, then back a Ferxal, eyebrows raising. "What does his tail have anything to do with his rank? How often do Andalites resort to tail fighting in a war determined by Dracon cannons and Dome Ships?"

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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #1182 on: February 21, 2014, 09:40:51 PM »
<Tail fighting is the oldest and truest form of combat for Andalites.> Ferxal said. Most andalites would likely swell with pride at this, but as usual his voice and face remain neutral. <I doubt the war will be decided with firearms and cannons. You need ground forces to hold points of interest and supply the deathtraps commonly referred to as spaceships. While they are needed for getting from planet to planet, I somewhat disdain these metal casings that serve to protect us from cold space. I prefer grass beneath my feet and wind against my fur as I charge into battle blade against blade. There is no better form of combat, in my opinion.>

<Forgive my tangent. It is a subject I feel strongly about. Your host either is voluntary, or he is not. If he is not, then why do you inhabit him? What is this "technically" that you speak of?> He wondered if this was one of those insane hosts that Ossanlin spoke of.
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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #1183 on: February 23, 2014, 11:09:09 PM »
Keslin nods, pulling his attention away from the holoscreen. His expression is grim as he glances at the Andalite captain. "An audio hail should be sufficient," he says. He doesn't sound as though he is harboring much hope for the single Bug Fighter.



Nefitt gives Ferxal a thin smile. "That is none of your business, Andalite," he says lightly. "And your tail is no match for my Dracon, I guarantee you that. Old customs and traditions are simply that. Old. You can never hope to win a war by relying on such things."

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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #1184 on: February 24, 2014, 09:37:11 AM »
<I do have a shredder myself, but I have no need to rely on it. I can tell that without your dracon, you would be all but powerless. Perhaps that is why you have such confidence in your firearm skill. What other combat skills would you have against an Andalite or Hork-Bajir?>

He decides not to push the Yeerk on its host. He didn;t know which was worse. allowing a Yeerk to keep an involuntary but insane host under control, or to allow an insane person the freedom to do whatever unpredictable thing a crazy person could do.


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