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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #4620 on: August 18, 2015, 09:38:08 PM »
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #4621 on: August 19, 2015, 12:00:42 PM »
Damn. This is bad.

Oh, and I forgot to upload the PDF of the last one, so here it is:

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #4622 on: August 19, 2015, 02:18:54 PM »
Yes. And thanks once again, Saffa!

New book ideas.

  • Book DCCXC: "Mark-Destroyers" -- The RAFians come across a strange parastitic creature that has the capability of breaking their Marks.
  • Book DCCXCI: "Lichen Likening" -- The RAFians discover an ancient secret about several celebrities.
  • Book DCCXCII: "Sins of the Father" -- The RAFians must face a strange creature -- the Progeny-Hopper.
  • Book DCCXCIII: "First Time Capture" -- The RAFians must rescue a quantum lichen.
  • Book DCCXCIV: "Chakra-Blocked" -- A parasite can block the chakras of people, and the RAFians must find a solution.

All titles are not final, and may be changed or altered. Tell me what you think.


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #4623 on: August 19, 2015, 02:20:21 PM »
  • Book DCCXCI: "Lichen Likening" -- The RAFians discover an ancient secret about several celebrities.

So, the RAFians discover the Illuminati? :P

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #4624 on: August 19, 2015, 05:59:42 PM »
Uh, no. The Illuminati analogue is in a different book.

Anyway, I'm sorry, but I don't think that I can post up a daily chapter today. Time just got away from me, as well as I got called into work earlier today, which required me to take a nap when I made it home.

:edit: New chapter.

CHAPTER ELEVEN:
Verily, Verily on Our Way

"This isn't working!"

"Calm down, Parker," Phoenix said.

They were on Yarin's ship, and the team consisted of Shadow, Cloak, Parker, Abby, Gaz with Laserbeak, and Phoenix, with Yarin piloting. They were trying to trace the others by their Marks, but this was a rather tenuous tactic. The Marks themselves tended to be untraceable, as one of their many protections, and odds of trying to track the others by them are effectively nil.

"No. I will not bloody calm down!" Parker said, approaching very dangerously near hysterics. "My girlfriend is in possible danger and I am --"

"Hysterical." Cloak supplied unwanted and unbidden. "Parker, you're allowing your emotions to cloud your judgement."

"And you don't allow yourself to feel emotion at all!" Parker retorted, rather savagely.

Cloak could have been incensed, could have been offended, but the Realm Walker found that he was not. It actually surprised him a bit. Probably because he knew it to be true.

"You know very well why I keep my emotions in check," Cloak said, tonelessly. "You do Helen no favors by being hysterical and panicking. It does nothing constructive or helpful. So, Parker, calm down or do not expect us to take you seriously."

"Don't you lecture me, Walker," Parker said, deathly serious.

"Well, someone had to," Gaz said, as Laserbeak gave a concurring squawk. Parker glared at her, which she returned with one of exasperation, "Parker, we're your friends. More to the point, we actually do care about the others, too."

"And that includes Helen too, Parker," Abby said.

"Hurrumph," Parker said, rather petulantly.

"Don't be like that," Shadow said.

Parker growled and turned his back on them. Only to discover . . . something very . . . odd.

***

Meanwhile, at the gladiator ship, Underseen lost a match with a Necrofriggian, who froze him solid. Underseen was sent to be repurposed.

Helen managed to save him from this fate as much as she could. She continued to think of Parker . . .
« Last Edit: August 19, 2015, 06:52:09 PM by CloakedFigure »


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #4625 on: August 20, 2015, 03:19:39 PM »
New chapter. Sorry about the brevity.

CHAPTER TWELVE:
Down, Down, Dooby Do Down*

Gamemaster watched the matches from a private box, and the fighters only got a good amount of sleep when he did. Realm Walkers require sleep, like many other species, though not all dream.

He was well aware of the entechment of his old, discarded fighters, having instituted the policy as he didn't want the bodies to accumulate. This was one way that Realm Walkers used to try to prove their innate "superiority" to Realm Dwellers. As Gamemaster's own species do not leave behind corpses, unless counts the cloak. The chimpanzee-form Realm Walker found this facet of Dweller life -- or death, rather, was really uncouth.

He used this as part of his justification in what he was doing. He saw what he was doing as nothing more severe as a ****fight, apparently unaware how a grievous and horrible that pasttime is. But Gamemaster didn't care, as he considered Dwellers as on would consider an ant.

Yet he feared Cloak. He knew of Cloak slaying Cataclysm, though he did not have the details of what happened. Perhaps if he did, he would have dump the five RAFians as soon as he picked them up. Perhaps if he did, he would have deliberately steered clear of Earth. He also believed Cloak slayed Collector -- Malice had deliberately misled him on that account.

Gamemaster started to wonder if he was really safe from the grandson of Sage. As long as he remained in the Prime Universe, there was always the risk of running into him . . . and Gamemaster could not stand up to him, he knew, Cloak's powers greatly eclipsed his own. Though Gamemaster's powera were sufficient to keep his fighters in line.

Gamemaster shook himself from his worry. There was no way that Cloak could find him. He had no way to find him . . . he was bound to the planet . . . the slayer of Cataclysm and Collector could not touch him . . .

***

Sam was having a difficult match.

He was battling a particularly battle-hardened Conductoid. Sam found that he couldn't use concussive blasts without it being absorbed and redirected back at him. All his other constructs seemed to do only marginal damage at best.

He needed to come up with a new strategy. Only he couldn't -- as he was going to get repurposed. . . .



*Got that from a Garfield comic strip.
« Last Edit: June 14, 2016, 09:51:40 AM by CloakedFigure »


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #4626 on: August 20, 2015, 04:01:35 PM »
Wow, what a nice guy.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #4627 on: August 20, 2015, 04:03:13 PM »
Yeah, and, unfortunately, it's not an uncommon mindset in the Nexus.


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
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RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #4628 on: August 20, 2015, 07:53:42 PM »
EW, now Saffa and I are the ONLY RAFians on the spacecraft (who aren't in the queue for being repurposed)!?

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #4629 on: August 21, 2015, 02:19:31 AM »
Yes.

Gonna deviate a bit from my outline -- but, then again, I already have. The original contenders were Underseen, Faerie, Sakki, Azguard, and Ash until I changed my mind for everyone except Underseen.

New chapter.

CHAPTER THIRTEEN:
Battle Hardened

So far, Saffa and GH had faired surprisingly well against opponents that seemed to outmatch them in several conceivable ways. And simply due to their own innate cleverness, their training at RAF, and just a little luck they survived. Even when Gamemaster decided that apparently enough fighters have been repurposed, and were just returned to their cells after their defeat.

Everyone was encouraged to jeer at them for their losses. Not many of the fighters took Gamemaster up on this offer, only the really competitive species.

Saffa had used her morph versatility and clever tactics to take her foes off-guard, and take them down. Outside the Shear Goliath, she never thought to acquire the DNA of her opponents to add to her morph repertoire. Although it wasn't like her opponents really gave her time to do it, and she usually had to morph near immediately, or risk being repurposed, or defeated.

And Saffa wasn't one to give up or allow herself to be defeated so easily.

GH, on the other hand, tended to use a sneakier tactic. He would make his opponents think that he was a simple one-trick pony, and then completely turn the tables on them at the last moment. And when the opponent thought that they were wise to his trick, he threw them another curve ball.

But still they were both lucky. Lucky that their opponents were not used to foes as the two RAFians like them.

Unfortunately, there was a reason behind this.

***

Helen was embarrassed to admit it.

She had forgotten this ability. Forgotten the ability that all Star Sapphires had. She was even more embarrassed when Sam, a Green Lantern, had to remind her. She had allowed her fear at the entechment machine to completely unnerve her . . . but that's rather understandable.

Using her ring, she called upon her deep-seated love. Her love for Parker. She allowed her heart to reach out to him. She opened a portal to Parker, to allow him to come to her . . .


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #4630 on: August 21, 2015, 10:07:17 AM »
  • Book DCCXC: "Mark-Destroyers" -- The RAFians come across a strange parastitic creature that has the capability of breaking their Marks.
Dang. This one sounds really freaking cool.

Yay Parker!!
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #4631 on: August 21, 2015, 02:11:29 PM »
Thought it might be intriguing.

New chapter. Sorry about the brevity.

CHAPTER FOURTEEN:
A Gathering

Saffa and GH hadn't a match for awhile.

They were not aware of any ulterior motives on the part of Gamemaster, who kept his motivations from the fighters. But why would he confide his plans in beings he considered to be mere insects? The fact that they possessed blood instead of ichor, like Realm Walkers, disgusted him. It was as if a human discovering that a creature had no blood but worms instead, or something similar.

Saffa and GH took what little enjoyment they could out of this "break", but they did not know if they would whisked out into battle. They were not given any warning before their mandatory participation in a battle, and not given notice about who or what their opponent was. That would involve work that Gamemaster was just not interested in doing, and it would force him see his fighters as thinking, feeling beings, something he wasn't interested in doing in the least.

The other fighters seemed to know something about this, but said nothing. It was as if they were afraid of mentioning it. As if there was a fear of a heavy reprisal for telling the two of the fact of their next opponents would be.

Gamemaster wanted them to go into the next battle unprepared and unaware . . .

***

Parker wasn't the only one that came through the portal. Cloak, Shadow, Phoenix, Abby, and Gaz with her Laserbeak armor came too.  They landed on the ground as the portal dissipated into nothingness.

Parker was in a violet light sphere, but Helen wasn't fast enough for the others. Gaz's Laserbeak armor actually afforded her flight, though. Cloak landed daintily on his feet, while Abby and Shadow fell on their butts. Cloak was a cat after all.

"Not fair," Shadow complained, a bit miffed on how her uncle didn't fall on his butt.

"Well, that was embarrassing," Abby said.

Cloak wasn't paying attention to that, for he had immediately noticed the entechment machine. He had only read about them briefly, and not in great detail, but he was sure that was what this was. He quickly realized that they were standing on some sort of conveyor belt -- he wasn't sure if he could stop it from moving, and wondered if it was a pointless exercise.

He didn't know if entechment would work on Realm Walkers. He didn't really want to find out. Even academically. He noticed Parker, Helen, Underseen, and Sam floating above the conveyor belt, with Gaz hovering, and he formed an energy disc beneath his feet as Shadow did the same.

"Hey! What about me!" Abby protested. "I can't fly! . . . Well, yes, I can, when in morph, but that's beside the p-- ahhh!"

Cloak had hoisted her up on to his disc, which he enlarged to accommodate. She looked rather rumpled at the sudden lift.

"You could have said something, you know," Abby sighed.

"Quite," Cloak said, more interested in the entechment device. Not as fascinated as Yarin would undoubtedly be -- which reminded him.

"No one tell Yarin of this device," Cloak said.

"Eh, it would be one way to get him to forget about his microwave," Parker said, hand around Helen.

The RAFians could practically hear a nonpresent Yarin shouting, "FOOD YIELD INCREASER!"


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #4632 on: August 21, 2015, 02:24:24 PM »
And the next opponent is . . .
[spoiler]BARNEY THE DINOSAUR[/spoiler]

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #4633 on: August 21, 2015, 04:07:12 PM »
And the next opponent is . . .
[spoiler]BARNEY THE DINOSAUR[/spoiler]
That would be rather terrifying.

I still laugh every time the FYI is mentioned. :XD:
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #4634 on: August 21, 2015, 04:11:50 PM »
And the next opponent is . . .
[spoiler]BARNEY THE DINOSAUR[/spoiler]
That would be rather terrifying.

But wrong. And I worried that I made too obvious. ;) >:D


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.