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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2865 on: December 15, 2013, 11:23:08 AM »
Well, here's the chapter for the day then.

CHAPTER TWELVE:
Running from the Past

"Oh yeah?" Queen Scarab snarled, pulling out more pearl-like balls. She threw them to the ground as Yarin yelled, "Cloak!"

But was already on it. He swirled using his momentum to power the aerokinetic crescent that easily dispelled the smoke.

"Ah. Cloak knows Defog." Underseen smirked.

Cloak scowled. He knew the reference and was not a fan of the Pokemon technique. "Enough levity. Get her before she escapes again!"

"You honestly think that's my only trick?" the monstrous deformed entity sneered. "Sir Pens!"

"Your other trick is to send your tricephalic serpentine minion after us?" Cloak replied scornfully.

But Sir Pens just turned into a trident with snake heads instead of pointed tips. Queen held him in a way very reminiscent of Jafar.

<I though Jafar held the patent on snake staffs,> Saffa said drily and drolly.

"Please. Jafar wishes he was me." Queen said. Then she went all Lord Zedd and summoned numerous ten-foot-tall shabti statutes, each modeled after a god from Really-Ancient Egypt. They were each made of a different material -- hardwood, obsidian, gold, softwood, granite, silver, marble, platinum, etc. Even now, Queen, was hard to notice in this crowd -- she had reverted back to her human-in-a-Delphox-like-dress form. "This should keep you busy."

She laughed a mirthless, evil laugh as he vanished.

Underseen blinked. "Who would have guessed that if Malice and Queen merged that they'd become such a threat?"

***

Preston ran, and ran, and ran.

My name is Preston , not Richard! he thought desperately. He was fifty feet away from the house when he noticed the strange sigil, glowing with a blue light, on his hand. A stylized "R". He didn't stop running, but his pace slowed a bit.

"What in the world -- d'ah!!"

He had to stop and cradled his head as he slammed his eyes shut. Images flitted across his mind's eye -- blurry at the edges, faint with washed-out colors. A Goomba, that cloaked Guardian talking in garbled, distorted voices. The same sigil flared to life on the Goomba's forehead and the cloaked Guardian's right palm. The images soon faded, forgotten.

"Maybe . . ." he said, thoughtfully, running again. Then, after a few seconds, he should his head. No. No, it was all a lie.
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Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2866 on: December 15, 2013, 06:06:51 PM »
'Kay. Forgive me if there are any errors in this chapter, because I feel full and stupid at the moment.

CHAPTER THIRTEEN:
Fearful Power

There he is, Queen Scarab thought as she spied what she believed to be Preston at a long distance away. He's SOOOO close.

She streaked off after him, with surprising speed in a dress and heels. As she ran, she shifted rather smoothly and horrifyingly into her Greninja-scarab form. This only served to make her a great deal faster.

She leaped onto the boy, saw a flash of light, and held him up by his shirt. Something thunked and the light sputtered.

"What the deuce?!" she snarled.

It wasn't Preston, but Billy. The two indeed looked similar from a distance, but up close, it was obvious the two were different.

"Wh-wh-what are you?" Billy said as he shook with terror.

"Damn!" Queen said, roughly dropping the boy. Under normal circumstances, one would flee the minute they were released. But, in this form, Queen Scarab inspired fear and terror in those unaccustomed to this sort of thing. And Billy was so paralyzed by it, he barely remembered to breathe and his heart was beating like it was trying to abandon his body. It also didn't help that he was cornered.

BOOM!

Queen glanced at the direction of the sound. She wore a look of concern. "I knew that wouldn't hold them for long. I need to accelerate my plans."

Billy began to blubber quietly. Queen Scarab ignored this, as her brain was working fast.

"Richard is in Preston, and Preston is a child, therefore pliant to such whims of a child. So I needn't chase him. I can use that against him . . ." Queen Scarab said. She passively noticed recognition in Billy's eyes at Preston's name, and easily came to the conclusion that this boy may not be so expendible. "Ooh, I have an idea."

Queen Scarab was still not looking or holding on to Billy, who was thinking, Well, so have I!

Billy attempted to run from the monstrous creature. But she easily snatched the boy back.

"Sorry, boy," she said, with insincere sorrow, "but I'll be requiring your services."

She whistled, "Sir Pens! We have work to do."

"Oh, joy," Sir Pens hissed in three-part harmony as he slithered into view. Billy whimpered.

***

<Cloak, you're holding back!> Saffa said accusingly. She had gone ultimate Crabdozer.

The Realm Walker said nothing.

"Cloak, we haven't time for this. You need to let loose!" Yarin prodded.

"I c-can't," Cloak said, attempting to keep the fear from his voice.

"There is no choice," Underseen said, discovering the usual Polymorph trick ineffective against these shabti.

That was a half hour ago. Cloak was trying to rationalize how he could still not use his power. But he could not without being completely ridiculous.

He sighed, "Okay, stand back."

He focused his mind, meditating on control. Then his eyes snapped open glowing a pleasant mixture of scarlet and gold. He radiated power, but in a way that seemed to energize and revitalize his friends.

(Even Preston felt these effects through his Mark.)

Cloak in a swift three gestures reduced the shabti into dust, splinters and congealed metal shavings.

Cloak quickly pulled himself out of this state and saw the aftermath. When he saw the extent of his power, his fear of losing control grew.
« Last Edit: December 16, 2013, 01:11:37 AM by CloakedFigure »


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2867 on: December 15, 2013, 11:15:49 PM »
Well, I got a new idea.

  • Book CCXXIV: "Light Purge" -- The RAFians are confronted by Nyx, who wishes to extinguish all light.

Hopefully, I'm not rehashing anything. I can say that it will introduce a rather significant character, I think. But I can't say any more -- I may have said too much already.

Short chapter.

CHAPTER FOURTEEN:
Untraceable

"Cloak," Saffa said, human again, voice filled genuine concern, "are you okay?"

"I'm fine," Cloak lied a little too quickly. He swiftly diverted attention from it, saying, "Now, quickly before we lose track of Richard."

"Could you just track him?" Underseen asked.

"No, he can't. It's part of the protective illusion Broken crafted." Yarin explained. "I can't telepathically search for him -- theres too much telepathic white noise here anyway -- as part of the protection. We'd have to practically bump into him to discover him if he gets too far away."

"It have a very faint scent of his," Cloak said. Then he adressed Saffa and Underseen, "Go something with an acute sense of smell."

Both went Panuncian.

"Excellent," Cloak said, swiftly and urgently. "Let's get this show on the road. For all we know . . . she's already got him."

<Just a little ray of sunshine, aren't you?> Saffa teased, attempting to lessen the tension.

"No matter, one thing to be sure," Yarin said, thoughtfully, following the other three, "she's definitely scheming. What I cannot say. I feel dirty just probing a mind twisted by Malice."

***

Preston huddled in the doorways of drafty buildings. He managed to scrounge up food so that he wouldn't starve. He was just lucky that it was summer, and had been a warm day.

"I am Preston," he muttered so often it became a chant.  "I am just a regular kid. I am Preston. I am just a regular kid. . . ."

He wrapped his arms around his legs, and touched his knees to his head.

He couldn't stem the random, meaningless images in his head. A black creature with gold trim that covered things. A purplish ooze flooding over everything, congealing into an impenetrable shell with him underneath. A swarm of vampires. A contagion that turned everyone red with black accents and cataract-like eyes . . .

"Argh!" he snarled at the images. "Go away! You're not real! You're not real! . . ."

Preston spent a couple of days there, until he noticed the light. . . .
« Last Edit: December 16, 2013, 01:09:48 AM by CloakedFigure »


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2868 on: December 16, 2013, 12:28:05 AM »
Love the references to the previous books. :D

Oh, and Cloak, I was checking back and I noticed you've made two Chapter Elevens.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2869 on: December 16, 2013, 01:08:26 AM »
God, I knew I would did something like that. :facepalm:

I'll fix it, unless I get too tired.


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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2870 on: December 16, 2013, 02:11:46 AM »
Hey, it happens to the best of us. :)

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2871 on: December 16, 2013, 08:15:20 AM »
Right. Since I'll more than likely be exhausted when I come home tonight, here.

CHAPTER FIFTEEN:
What A Circus

Preston's curiosity got the better of him as he slowly approached the source of the light. He felt fear, sure, but his childish curiosity overrode it. He crept closer and closer to the source of the light. It wasn't what he expected.

It was a circus. Literally, a circus.

The Big Top tent dominating the scene with carts and stands dotted around it. The Big Top tent was strips of alternating green and silver, with a small bloodred pennant fluttering atop at the very tip of the tent. People were milling around, but not as many as Preston would expect.

Preston placed a hand to his forehead, seeing only a blurry image of a the inside of a Skrull ship, but no other image appeared after that.

A small, rational part of Preston wondered how a circus tent and such could be assembled in a mere 24 hours, unnoticed. But, no, that wasn't right. People were here, weren't they? That must mean that it wasn't unnoticed completely. Just by him -- but then again he never heard any sound coming from  this direction all day.

Without really realizing it, he had entered the grounds of the circus. Curiosity can be a very powerful thing -- it can also be a very dangerous thing.

"Preston!" came a familiar voice. "There you are!"

"Billy?"

"Where have you been, dude?"

"Uh, long story," Prestin said, clearly not wanting to get into it. "Where did this circus come from?"

"Did you see the flyers all over school?" Billy said, with a laugh. "It's here for seventy-two hours only!"

"That's oddly specific," Preston said, falling into an old rhythm with his friend. Unfortunately, this was the last thing he should have done.

"Eh," Billy shrugged. "They're circus folk, I guess they live by their own schedules."

Had Preston been in his right mind then, he might have noticed something odd about his friend just then. As it was, Preston sensed no danger from neither the circus or his old friend.

"C'mon, 'Ton." Billy said, twitching his head during the tent's entrance. "Let's go in, dude."

"But I haven't any money to pay admission?"

The laughter that usually lit Billy's face faltered for a second before he declared, "Don't worry about it 'Ton. I'll cover you."

Preston should have questioned this sudden kindness. Billy would have never covered Preston for something like this. Unless --

"Let's call it an early birthday gift," Billy smirked impishly.

***

The three RAFians had their noses to the ground, tracking the scent. Cloak was relieved to find the scent was getting stronger.

Then he felt an unbearable chill.

"Richard's in danger." he said. "We gotta hurry!"


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2872 on: December 16, 2013, 08:26:39 AM »
Ai, sheit.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2873 on: December 16, 2013, 10:09:49 PM »
RAF awards 2012: Best Newcomer... It feels good too

Well, Blue is my RAFcousin.
 Blaze is my RAFbrother and formidable rival.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2874 on: December 16, 2013, 10:14:40 PM »
Well, ordinarily, I would post another chapter to prevent the joke of Saffa simply reposting her previous post.

CHAPTER SIXTEEN:
It's A Traaaaa -- Oy

"He was here," Cloak said, holding some debris from this abandoned, mouldering building to his nose before deftly discarding it. "He spent a great deal of time here."

"He must have stayed here overnight." Saffa said, having demorphed. "There are scraps of food everywhere."

"But, still, the scent grows faint." Cloak said quite seriously. "He must have vacated this site a couple of hours ago."

"But why?" Underseen asked, he had gone human again as the armor faded away. "There has to be a reason.

Yarin looked to his left, blinked all six eyes in disbelief. Then he narrowed them. He asked rhetorically, "There, maybe?"

He was looking at the circus that lured Preston away like a moth to a flame. Nothing about it looked overtly sinister, but it just looked like one of your run-of-the-mill circuses.

Cloak scowled. He never liked circuses. Seeing animals perform stupid tricks while the "trainers" act like they have such bonds with the animals (when they usually have to hurt or abuse the animal to do such a thing) -- this never appealed to the Realm Walker. That's not to say there aren't cirus animal trainers that legitimately care for their nonhuman charges, but Cloak suspected that this was few and far in-between.

Saffa noticed this reaction, and said, "Wow, Cloak. If looks could kill . . ."

"You see all those people there?" Yarin said.

"Yeah," Saffa and Underseen said, in unison.

Cloak's expression changed to one of shock. His voice carried the shock. "No . . . no, I don't."

"Huh?"

Yarin nodded. "I don't sense any minds either."

"Wait, I can Earthsight two, maybe three people down there. But that's it." Cloak said.

Yarin nodded, "Yes, the big top there seems to harbor some telepathic barrier or shielding. I would not have guessed such a thing could be disguised in such a way."

"Wait, so all those people we see down there, milling about." Underseen said. "They all are --"

"Illusions, fake." Cloak said, offhandedly.

"Yes, it was a trap." Yarin said, as the group headed toward the circus. "A remarkably well-thought out one."

***

Preston was really enjoying the circux, but did not seem to notice that Billy didn't seem to share the enjoyment. He stole hungry looks at Preston whenever the boy took his eyes off him.

The two sat on the bottommost portion of the stands, as it was packed higher up. One could question how the wooden stands could tolerate such weight -- but twelve-year-olds rarely consider such things.

"Now," called the ringmaster, with a foppish, Eggman-like voice, "time for the main event."

"Indeed," Billy muttered sinisterly.

"What?" Preston asked without glancing back.

"Oh, nothing," he said, deflecting the question. Then he promptly spilled his drink over Preston. Billy spoke with what sounded like genuine sincerity, "Oops! Sorry, Preston!"

Preston's lap, wrists and ankles were no bound to te seat -- wait, seat?

Suddenly, the circus began to flicker, as if it was an ancient hologram.

"Ah, the technological advancements of this day and age," Billy said. His voice sounded the same, but yet older at the same time.
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Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2875 on: December 17, 2013, 11:35:17 PM »
'Nother chapter. Tired, so there might be spelling errors and such.

CHAPTER SEVENTEEN:
Evil's Clutches

"Billy?" Preston said, fearful. It was amazing just how many times he was terrified in the last few days. You'd think he'd be desensitized to it by now. "Billy, why are you talking like that?"

Billy gave a cruel, mirthless laugh. "I see that you liked my costume, then."

The boy came and stood before Preston, an eeriely sinister smirk on his face. "Fell for it hook, line and sinker."

"Billy, you're making no sense!"

Seemingly changing tact, Billy said, "You wanna see something really cool?"

"Billy, what I want is to be let -- what are you doing?"

Billy had reached into his mouth with his right arm, while holding Sir Penns in his trident form. And it was far beyond was humanly and physically possible. Then he apparently found something that he hooked his fingers around and started to pull. As he did this, wisps of black and bloodred energy escaped his lips.

"How are you doing this?" Preston demanded. How he expected Billy to answer when he was supernaturally pulling something from it, wasn't really clear. "Billy!"

From Billy's mouth, came a black foot. Then a second. Then lower legs, a torso, shoulders, a head and her arms followed. She was being licked with black and bloodred energy. Queen Scarab stepped, in a mincing, menacing, deliberate manner as Billy slumped to the ground unconscious. But he was breathing, he was still alive.

"You," Preston said, accusatorily.

"Yes, good thing too," she said brushing herself, "I couldn't stand that costume's smell."

"He's a living being with thoughts, feelings, and free will!" Preston raged. "Yet you toss him aside like a sack of potatoes!"

"He's served his purpose," Queen Scarab said, distractedly. Then her tone turned grandiose. "And now . . ."

She placed her right handed on Preston's forehead, and the other upon his chest. Black concentric circles formed from black enery, and Queen Scarab began to absorb these rings into herself.

It was not a pleasant or painless experience for Preston.


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2876 on: December 18, 2013, 12:19:31 AM »
That is creepy to visualize.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2877 on: December 18, 2013, 08:04:43 AM »
Which was the point. Yeah, this is a darker book than I originally intended, darker than the tv show I -- *ahem* -- loosely based it off.

CHAPTER EIGHTEEN:
Oh, Snap

"It's all gonna be mine!" Queen Scarab said. "After so long . . ."

Preston would not let a scream escape his mouth as he felt the very life slowly be drained out of him. But then something rather fortuitous happened.

There was no sound -- athough a snap, a crack, a glass-shattering sound seemed appropriate -- as Broken's last greatest magical illusion failed, as it failed.

Queen had killed Preston, but that gave rise to Richard.

***

Five thousand years ago, Richard found himself in a similar situation with who he thought was Queen. He had gotten a bit ****y, due to the number of times Queen's been beaten in the past with little effort.

He did not know she now carried Malice's deux ex machina, that it twisted her heart and mind.

Queen had gotten close to Richard in a rather similar way. Queen wore a disguise of small girl, who was crying. Only she didn't inhabit the body of this girl, for the girl was nothing but an illusion, a disguise.

Richard experienced such pain when she took him by surprise and started to not only leech his lifeforce, his strength, but his very substance.

"Get away from him!"

She was blasted away by hurticane-force gales, before she could siphon away everything from the RAFfather. Queen attempted to get close enough to continue, but by that time, Estelore, Yarin, Saffa, and Underseen arrived on the scene.

"I'll come back and get more," Queen said. 'You can't stop me!"

Estelore frowned, realizing something was up with Queen. "You are not Queen -- not anymore."

"You're right. I'm Queen Scarab!"

Had Cloak put his mind to it then, he might have realized what had happened. But he was concerned for Richard. The five eventually ran off Queen Scarab, but were at a lost of how to help Richard. It looked like he was dying.

But then Broken came along, attracted by the commotion. But by this time, Richard lost consciousness.

***

"I remember," Richard choked out, still in Preston's form, still with his voice.

"Too bad it's too late," Queen Scarab said savagely.

"Haven't you heard?" Richard said, fighting the pain, "It's never too late."


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2878 on: December 18, 2013, 08:15:48 AM »
Jeez, I had to read it twice over before I realized the middle passage wasn't within normal book continuity. :facepalm: Oi, brain, work!

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2879 on: December 18, 2013, 09:53:40 PM »
Yes, yes, that does happen sometimes. ;)

Anyway, two new book ideas. (Yeah, this series isn't really gonna have an end, it seems.)

  • BOOK CCXXV: "Children of Night" -- The Abby, Saffa, Underseen and Cloak must battle a monster from Nyx's brood.
  • BOOK CCXXVI: "The Pit" -- The RAFians must face Tartarus.

The last one, "The Pit", may be noncanonical. I haven't decided.

'Nother chapter a little later. Until I am too tired.


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.