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Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #1350 on: February 05, 2013, 08:37:05 PM »
That sounds like some outfit I got. Lol

Love the new chapters. This is fun sounding!

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #1351 on: February 05, 2013, 10:43:40 PM »
Oooh, this is interesting!  Excellent chapters, Cloaky!

I kind of wonder, how the balance of power will shift, with the RAFians missing their powers.  Granted, yes, the RAFians still far outnumber Malice and Queen.  But Malice is a clever foe, she'll probably find a way to cope with not having powers pretty quickly.  And the RAFians are used to being nearly invincible thanks to how powerful they are.  So, if Malice wants to take them down in anything resembling a fair fight, right now is probably the best chance she's ever going to get.

The one major setback I see for her will come if Malice and Queen try to cooperate with each other.  Both will want to call the shots and be obeyed without question, but I certainly can't see either one of them ever bending to the other's will.

P.S. This is all just me thinking out loud.  Don't tell me any spoilers.

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« Reply #1352 on: February 06, 2013, 01:31:59 AM »
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #1353 on: February 06, 2013, 10:08:19 AM »
Really, Gaz?  Somehow I find that scary.

And Dino . . . you REALLY put a lot of thought into that.  Some of it makes me a bit uncomfortable . . . because -- oh, never mind.

And Sakki, what?

  • Book XXIV: The First Master
Cloak meditates alone in a forest, and has a vision about the first Master . . . the first Elements Master.
  • Book XXV: RAF -- The Musical
The RAFians find themselves trapped in a musical where everyone must burst into song occasionally.
  • Book XXVI: Outage Outrage
The RAFians find themselves losing their powers.
  • Book XXVII: Infinity and Eternity
The Infinity Gems and the Eternity Stones make themselves known.
  • Book XXVIII: The Virus Rings
The RAFians are attacked by foes they never thought they'd see again.
  • Book XXIX: Soul-Suckers
The RAFians are attacked by Dementors, which have a rather large effect on Cloak.
  • Book XXX: Mayhem of the Music Miser
Cloak recalls the RAFians' previous confrontation with the Music Miser three years ago.
  • Book XXXI: The Metal-Maker
The RAFians must save their own from a Roboticizer.
  • Book XXXII: Richard is Missing
The RAFians must cope without Richard.
  • Book XXXIII: Emotional Food
The RAFians must confront a different kind of vampire.
  • Book XXXIV: Transformation Confrontation
The RAFians must confront some strange machines.
  • Book XXXV: Richard's Horn
The RAFians must get Richard's Horn, a mystical musical instrument, back from Malice, who received it from a RAFian traitor.
  • Book XXXVI: Feral Scream
A Wildwethel-centric book, he must deal with his feral side.
  • Book XXXVII: Predators and Prey
The RAFians are being preyed upon by some sentient predators.
  • Book XXXVIII: A Protean Problem
The RAFians must deal with a powerful snot-nosed kid who, quite literally, can do whatever he wants.
  • Book XXXIX: The Horsemen
Four RAFians are captured and converted into four Horsemen of the ancient, rogue Realm Walker Cataclysm.
  • Book XL: Sizeable Pain in the Necks
The RAFians must deal with Heinlein aliens.
  • Book XLI: RAF's Nightmare
The RAFians must survive their own nightmares.
  • Book XLII: Unlucky Charms
The RAFians must contend with a rather bloodthirsty leprechaun.
  • Book XLIII: The Piper
The RAFians must contend with a pied piper.
  • Book XLIV: Starlight Desire
The RAFians race Malice, Abomination, and the Banned to a wishing star (no, not Estelore).
  • Book XLV: A War of Armor
Parker is outraged to see knockoffs of his rather unique armor and what they're being used for.
  • Book XLVI: The Worst Plague
The RAFians must weather the worst plague to ever existed -- the Hate Plague.
  • Book XLVII: Little Alien Napoleons
The RAFians are caught in the middle of a war between Helmacrons and Fmeks.
  • Book XLVIII: Go Away!
The RAFians must deal with the paparazzi who are all of a sudden interested in them.
  • Book XLIX: RAFian Tales
RAFians tell various RAFian-themed stories across a lunch table.
  • Book L: Maul
The RAFians must deal with the result of one of Demos's experiments.
  • Book LI: Erised Orbs
The RAFians must face their greatest desires.
  • Book LII: RAFians Alive!
Read the "Mummies Alive" parody in the RAFize songs thread.
  • Book LIII: The Pain Reliever
The RAFians must deal with an elderly Vulcan styling himself the "Pain Reliever".
  • Book LIV: Beyond the Veils
Aquilai and Aila must confront old foes while the other RAFians must put up with a Czarinian bounty hunter.
  • Book LV: Dangerous Deals
Demos meets up with his half-brother, Shenecron, who has a perchant for making deals.
  • Book LVI: Of One Mind
Malice seeks out the Unimind.
  • Book LVII: The End of Time
The RAFians must contend with two Kryptonians (who think they're Time Lords) and prevent them from ending time altogether.
  • Book LVIII: Hematomimic
The RAFians must capture a Plasmavore and put up with it's rather stupid Judoon jailer.
  • Book LIX: Sins of Youth
Estelore, Richard, Parker, and Cloak must survive when the entire city and forum have been reduced to two-year-olds.
  • Book LX: The Replacements
The RAFians must contend with the fame-feeding Eidolon Consciousness.
  • Book LXI: Arachnoids
The RAFians must contend with the Arachnoids and finding a cure for one of their own that was poisoned before it's too late.
  • Book LXII: Personal Tissues
The RAFians must contend with some one misusing Bibliophaetos's discarded book shell.
  • Book LXIII: Memory Today, Gone Tomorrow
The RAFians lose their memory and must find a way to regain it.
  • Book LXIV: Appliance Armageddon
A superintelligent computer controls all electronics, and the RAFians must stop it.
  • Book LXV: Prodigy and Composite
Some RAFians are merged into two separate entities.
  • Book LXVI: The Merging
The Universes begin colliding and merging.
  • Book LXVII: Be A Doll
The RAFians are confronted by a Super Chucky.
  • Book LXVIII: They're Such Cards
The RAFians are sealed into cards, which end up trapped in an ancient leather-bound book, and it's up to three kids to free them.  An out-of-continuity book.
  • Book LXIX: Dinosaur Island
Everyone, except those that bear a Mark, begin turning saurian.
  • Book LXX: Corrupted
The RAFians must deal with the son of Cataclysm, Corruptor.
  • Book LXXI: Artificial Skins
The RAFians must deal with symbiotes.
  • Book LXXII: Separation Anxiety
The RAFians must contend with an ethereal virus.
  • Book LXXIII: A Thing About RAFians
The RAFians must contend with Seekers, which home in onto their Marks.
  • Book LXXIV: A Planted Idea
The RAFians must contend with a floramaniac.
  • Book LXXV: Vacation Photos
The RAFians are sucked into a Polarisoid camera.
  • Book LXXVI: A Personal Gremlin
The RAFians must contend with gremlins.
  • Book LXXVII: The Rust is Silence
The Rafians must deal with an oxidation ray wielded by a criminal.
  • Book LXXVIII: The Toyman Cometh
The RAFians deal with a Toyman-esque character.
  • Book LXXIX: RAFian Idol
Yes, just another excuse to put in more of the (as of writing) nearly 800 parodies.
  • Book LXXX: Savage Heart
Cloak battles an ancient being called Garrotik.
  • Book LXXXI: Slave Islands and Juggernauts
Three RAFians are taken prisoners by the Knights and sold into the slavery of New Genoshia, while the others deal with a juggernaut.
  • Book LXXXII: Shredding a King
The RAFians deal with a demonic Shredder-like ghost called Regiphaetos.
  • Book LXXXIII: RAF -- The TV Show
The RAFians are forcibly recruited to Mojo's programs.
  • Book LXXXIV: The Drinker
The RAFians must contend with a Spirit-Drinker.
  • Book LXXXV: The Last Laugh
The RAFians must face Joker Gas.
  • Book LXXXVI: It's A Mad, Mad, Mad Villain
The RAFians must contend with mind control cards which are ineffective on them.
  • Book LXXXVII: Sight Unseen
Six RAFians are rendered functionally blind, optically-speaking.
  • Book LXXXVIII: Don't Let It Snow
The RAFians must face a second Ice Age caused by a Diznee Ice Ifrit.
  • Book LXXXIX: The Rachel Toxin
The RAFians must find a cure to a toxin that increases the fearlessness, hostility and aggressiveness induced in people which the Mark cannot protect the RAFians from.
  • Book XC: Virus Alert!
The RAFians face a dangerous virus seeking a host.
  • Book XCI: A Youthful Thief
The RAFians face a creature that siphons off the youth in its victims, provided they're younger than him.
  • Book XCII: Calendar Creep
The RAFians face the Calendar Creep, a criminal whose crimes are holiday themed.
  • Book XCIII: The Branding
Faerie fights a witch-boy named Salem (and his magical black cat, Saberhagen) for a magical branding iron in Faerie's possession.
  • Book XCIV: The Void Zone
Nothing like a "Subspace Emissary" parody.  Sorry.
  • Book XCV: An Epic Yarn
The RAFians' world is turned into yarn and fabric.
  • Book XCVI: RAFian Gladiators
RAFians are kidnapped by Gamesmaster, another rogue Realm Walker, and force to participate in gladiatorial games.
  • Book XCVII: The Box
The RAFians must cage thirteen Revenants released from Pandora's Box -- each representing and amplifying a particular feeling (i.e. hatred), while looking for the perfect host.
  • Book XCVIII: From the Shadows
The RAFians must save their shadows and the shadows of everyone else from being absorbed (eaten) by the Umbraraptors, but not everything is what it seems.
  • Book XCIX: Grimm Prospects
The RAFians discover Malice controlling several "wesen" with control collars akin to April's in "Catwoman from Channel Six" and get stuck in one-on-one battles to the death with them.  One will die.
  • Book C: Loop-De-Loop
Everyone's trapped in a temporal loop, but the only ones that realize it are Cloak, Aila, and Aquilai.
  • Book CI: Get 'Em, Shaw
The RAFians face a creature native to the planet Gossamer, who's under the control of Malice.
  • Book CII: Threadfall
The RAFians must exterminate an epidemic of Thread.
  • Book CIII: Siren's Song
The RAFians must deal with a siren and her alluring song.
  • Book CIV: Resistance is Futile
The RAFians must deal with a hybridization of the Borg and the Hive chips (Ben 10: Alien Swarm) -- which the Mark cannot protect them from, nor the Unity energy can destroy.
  • Book CV: The Titan
The RAFians must contend with the Titan serum and its effects.
  • Book CVI: A Stony Glare
The RAFians must deal with a hungry Stone-Biter and a petrifying venom of a Diznee Stone Ifrit.
  • Book CVII: Spritely Pests
The RAFians must deal with irritating sprites, which Faerie has had some rather tenuous experiences with.
  • Book CVIII: Destroy All . . . What?
The RAFians must contend with a Furon incursion, and it turns out the Nyacs have knowledge of Furons. . . .
  • Book CIX: Going Backwards
A grievious malfunction in Aquilai's TARDIS causes time to reverse its flow and flow backwards.
  • Book CX: Death Takes A Holiday
The RAFians must convince Death to take up his role again.  A RAFian will die in this book, and it is within the continuity.
  • Book CXI: High Price Stakes
Shanker and Gaz must flee and elude Daphne, the vampire hunter.
  • Book CXII: A Killer Housing Market
The RAFians must survive and either destroy or escape a killer house.
  • Book CXIII: A Silenced World
The RAFians must cope with a world that has become muted and a young sorceress, Melissa Spellman.
  • Book CXIV: The Bureau
The RAFians must save their own from the insideous Bureau of Lost.
  • Book CXV: To Tell the Truth
Broken's apprentice, Melissa, accidentally casts a spell forcing everyone to tell the truth.
  • Book CXVI: Skin Crawlers
The RAFians, repulsed and revolted, must contend with Hundred (who eventually becomes Thousand, then becomes Million, then Billion, and then, finally, Trillion).
  • Book CXVII: School of Stepford Lies
The RAFians must save the children from a school that turns them into Stepford students at Terenia's school.
  • Book CXVIII: Ol' Salty
The RAFians must deal with the Salt Man.
  • Book CXIX: The Great Race
The RAFians hold a race that Aloth cons himself into.  Who will win?
  • Book CXX: Ape Escape
The RAFians must help super intelligent apes -- Caesar the chimp, Brutus the gorilla, and Maestro the orangutan -- reconcil their misanthropy.
  • Book CXXI: A Different Kind of Unity
The RAFians must contend with a parasitic "unity".
  • Book CXXII: The Great Brain Robery
Someone is stealing brains for an unknown purpose.
  • Book CXXIII: The Bounty Hunter
The Knights, in their hypocricy, hire a Tsul'Kalu bounty hunter to collect select RAFians (to taxidermy).
  • Book CXXIV: New Controllers
The RAFians confront Zirconians.
  • Book CXXV: Creeping Crystal
A wave of crystallizing energy is sweeping the land. . . .
  • Book CXXVI: The Element Feeder
The RAFians deal with a creature who feeds on a specific element and matures to a different element each time as it matures. . . .
  • Book CXXVII: The Rider and the Walker
The RAFians come up against the Ghost Rider.
  • Book CXXVIII: Headhunters
What will happen when RAFians lose their heads?  Seriously.
  • Book CXXIX: The Color Purple, Man!
The RAFians confront the Purple Man, who manages to turn the entire government against them . . .
  • Book CXXX: The Nemetrix Beetle
The RAFians confront the Black Beetle with Nemetrix properties.
  • Book CXXXI: It's Tought to Be A Mod
The members of a primitive forum declare Demos and Blue to be mods. . . .
  • Book CXXXII:Who-Zilla?
An energy reaction begins turning RAFians into monstrous creatures in 3013.  Out-of-continuity book.
  • Book CXXXIII:Well, Techadon-ally . . .
The RAFians confront Techadons who assign them qualitive quatilities, and refuse to acknowledge any defeats.
  • Book CXXXIV:The Mind's Eye
The RAFians face Spellbinder and his realistic illusions.
  • Book CXXXV:Bas-ic Instincts
Bas awakens and attempts to take control of Cloak and other felines.
  • Book CXXXVI:Midas Duck
The RAFians must contend with a very strange golden idol and a greedy sneak-thief.

Oh, shortish chapter.  Maybe more today.  Maybe not.  We'll see.

CHAPTER SEVEN:
Super Samurais

When the brillant light vanished, they were not back in the forum, as some of them had clearly hoped.  Damien had said three or four stories, so it was a vain and slightly stupid hope.  But they weren't simply in another film noir setting, it was more like feudal Japan.  They were all dressed as samurais, all with swords.  Their Marks had moved off their body and onto their chests, as their symbols.

"Wait, were there girl samurais back then?" Horse asked.

"I dunno," Gaz shrugged.

"So I may not have been 'historically accurate'," Damien groused, "so sue me.  There weren't anthropomorphic animals or aliens either."

He was indicating Cloak, Horse, and Yarin, who this time retained their strictly nonhuman forms, only Horse was now an anthropomorphic seal.

"Still," Cloak said, "this isn't a bad art style . . ."

They were drawn in some ancient Japanese style that Cloak wasn't too familiar with.  It was like that anime Batman interstitial things in DC Nation.

"We still don't have our powers," Underseen said dejectedly, although he looked like a rather young man just the same.

"We have our blades, though," Damien said.  "Each had a name.  Cloak's is Elements Tamer.  Horse's is Pinniped Tempest.  Gaz's is Laserbeak --"

"What?  Laserbeak?"

"It's probably what Laserbeak would have been had it been feudal times outside this book," Damien shrugged, then continued, pointed to each blade.  "Underseen's is Darkness Bane, Yarin's is Mind's Eye, and mine is Death Brush."

"'Death Brush'?" Cloak asked.  "I see.  Referencing your art."

"Some of those names leave a lot to be desired." Yarin said.

"Hey!  Do I criticize your creations?"

"Yes."

That took him off-guard.

"Yeah, well, I . . . um . . . I --" he stuttered.

"Never mind that," Cloak said, hoping to defuse the situation.  "How do we finish this story?"

But suddenly a streak of lightning -- and two ninjas appeared.

"Let me take a wild guess," Gaz said.
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Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #1354 on: February 06, 2013, 10:40:16 AM »
Tryin' to get three chapters today.

CHAPTER EIGHT:
Collations and Confrontations

"Malice, give up up.  You too, Queen." Yarin said, logically.  "You're trapped in here, same as we are."
 
"Oh, I don't really care about that," Malice said, apparently proving that she could speak.  For some reason, Cloak assumed that she couldn't.  "I just care about making Cloak's life as miserable as I can."
 
"Why?" Underseen asked.
 
"Because I smashed the orb of Ultimate Power." Cloak answered, hand on the hilt of his sword.  He yearned to strike out at the monster, but he held his position.
 
"Oh, that isn't it at all!" she cried coyly.  But Cloak knew the coy behavior was masking the true anger and fury she felt.  She wasn't fooling him with such an act.  However, Cloak was wondering why Queen was remaining silent.
 
"It is, however, unusual." Cloak said, turning 'round to Queen, "for you to be quiet."
 
"Not in this story." Damien said.  "She got into a argument that she should have backed down from.  She lost her voice in that ensuing battle."
 
Queen glowered at Damien, unsheathed her ninjabo and attempted to strike, which Damien easily deflected on his Death Brush.  Malice used this diversion to attempt to slash Cloak in the back, but Horse parried it with her own Pinniped Tempest.  Cloak realized just then how vulnerable he was without his Earthsight.
 
Queen had been disarmed, threw what looked to be a black-painted egg down and vanished in a cloud of violently violet smoke.  Meanwhile, Malice was battling Horse and Cloak, when she noticed the others were drawing their swords to join in.  She snarled, "Your friends cannot protect you forever, Cloak.  You are nothing without your elemental powers.  You hear me?  NOTHING.  Soon this blade will taste your blood."
 
Then she vanished in a cloud of black, shadowy smoke.  Cloak, though he tried to hide it, was unnerved.  Unnerved because he knew.   He knew that Malice was . . . right.
 
***

Queen was standing in a forested area with a quickly darkening sky (which was only noticeable by the shadows and shading).  She was in tears as she ripped away her mask and felt her throat.  She would get that Damien for this insult!  She will see him writhe for daring to portray her in such a shameful way, in such a revolting light!
 
Suddenly, a twig went SNAP and Queen, quick as lightning, unsheathed her ninjabo.  Only for it to, seconds later, wind up on stuck into the ground, point down.
 
"Pathetic," said a voice.
 
Queen's eyes widened with recognition, and then she glared with an accusatory stare.
 
"Oh, don't look at me that way, human." Malice said, still wearing her mask -- mostly out of habit of wearing something around her head.  "I don't come to kill you."
 
Queen glared at her disbelievingly.
 
"I'd admit that it would not satisfy me.  But I still believe that we have common ground -- you hate the RAFians, especially Damien right now, am I right?"
 
Queen glanced away.
 
"Am I to take that as a 'yes'?"
 
Queen gave a quick, curt nod.
 
"Alright then," she continued.  "You want to kill Damien, and I want Cloak to squirm."
 
Queen narrowed her eyes.
 
"I believe we've much to discuss. . . ."


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #1355 on: February 06, 2013, 10:58:03 AM »
Last one today.

CHAPTER NINE:
Assassins and Deals

Then the two sat down to talk, in a manner of speaking.  But Queen remained pitifully unaware of just how manipulative Malice could be.  Malice was at least 600 years or so older than Queen, so it was to be expected.  The initial talks was just Malice measuring Queen's intelligence and triggers, discovering RAF and her Banning were big buttons to push.  She would remember that.

Malice knew negetative emotions, knew how to manipulate them to work for her ends.  Queen had a lot of emotions, and, though she appeared to regulate them very severely, she didn't seemed to have the control over them that Cloak had.  Not surprising, as he was afraid of his own emotions, which Queen clearly was not.

Malice weaved together a subtly patronizing plan for Queen, which would involve Queen taking all the risks, and Malice would recieve all the rewards, though she deliberately remained vague about that part with Queen, using enough platitudes and ego-stroking.  All in all, Malice discovered that, unlike Abomination, manipulating Queen was a challenge.

What's more, it was a challenge that Malice was enjoying.

***

"So how does this story end again?" Underseen asked.

"When we successfully protect Daimyo Richard from Daimyo Whassis's assassins."

"Daimyo . . . Wassis?" Horse asked, looking at Damien perplexedly.  "As in 'what-is-this'?"

"Clever," Cloak encouraged.

"Oh, don't encourage him, Cloak!" Gaz teased.

"Hm?" Cloak said, having just gotten back from running an assassin ninja through with his sword as Damien and Underseen did the same to an assassin of their own.

As the sun rose, it was clear that the RAFians had made easy work of the assassins.  Gaz stifled a yawn as Horse said, "Gee, I wish there was more of 'em."

"I'll bear that in mind next time, Horse," Damien said, rather flatly.

Then came the FLASH that they all expected.
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Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #1356 on: February 06, 2013, 12:31:40 PM »
About the previous chapter being the last one today?  Well . . .
 
I LIED!

CHAPTER TEN:
Goin' Medieval

"What the bloody hell was that?!" demanded a haughty voice.  It was Queen, dressed in armor reminiscent of Joan of Arc, with a very darker motif.  Queen, surprised at the fact of her voice being restored, gaped in shock for a bit, clutching at her throat.
 
"I would have thought it was obvious," Malice said, with a wheezy, cackling tone.  She was dressed very much like as if someone decided to fuse Morgan le Fey with the old crone from Disney's "Snow White" -- all in all, she was human, but one so borderline in the determination of attractiveness, that one couldn't be sure.  "Clearly the last story's tale was done."
 
"No matter," Queen said, presenting herself in her armor and carefully managed hair in a most arrogant way, "I will get my revenge.  On Damien, and the rest."
 
"Yes, Ms. Queen," Malice said, with a subtle maliciousness to her tone that Queen missed, "yes, I do believe you will."
 
The two stalked off somewhere, on this medieval landscape of knights, kings, and maidens.
 
***

The RAFians awoke to find themselves already standing.  They looked around, and took in the rugged environment -- right out of Arthurian lore.  Then they looked at themselves, all human again.
 
Damien was dressed as a knight, with a rather ornate sword at his side and his armor swaddled in blue revelry.  Underseen was dressed as a young squire, in the form of a young blond boy.  Cloak was dressed rather like Merlin, in sweeping robes of dark earth tones.  Gaz was dressed as fancy noblewoman, with Horse as a younger noblewoman.  Yarin was dressed rather like an archer, without armor, but with his bow slung to his back.
 
"The Middle Ages.  Really?" Underseen said.  Even his voice was young, and he didn't seem too incredibly pleased with that, as he couldn't simply shapeshift into his normal form.  Damien heard his jibe, but shrugged his shoulders which caused his faceplate on his helmet to fall down with a bit of a clatter.

"What's the story here?" Cloak asked, not really minding the sweeping robes, although he did mind the white hair and beard that Damien gave him.

"We have to defeat the opposing army."

"Oh, yes," Gaz said, "nothing like a simple, unconvoluted plotline."

"How was I to know that we'd be sucked into the comic book?" Damien demanded defensively.

"Never mind that now," Cloak said.  "Never mind the inaccuracies, too.  The question, however, is how do we --"

"Die?" said a voice, rather innocently.  "Die a most humilating and slow death?"


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Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #1357 on: February 06, 2013, 12:54:59 PM »
Oooh, seems that my previous analysis underestimated Malice.  Heh, I assumed she would go for a straightforward 'you will obey me!' approach.  Which, if anything, proves I don't know her nearly as well as I thought I did.

I think I have a slightly soft spot for evil characters in stories (not in real life, obviously), because I used to roleplay several.  So, when an evil character is particularly well-done, as Malice is, I respect that.  But, of course, that really just makes it all the more satisfying when they're defeated at the end.  In short, my apologies if my previous overthinking unnerved you.  I certainly was not rooting for Malice.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #1358 on: February 06, 2013, 12:58:36 PM »
It didn't unnerve me so much because of the amount of thought but how close it was to the original plan for it, before I decided to go in a different direction.

And one must take into account the age difference, as Malice would more experience.
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #1359 on: February 06, 2013, 10:46:51 PM »
Is it bad that I saw us all Asian in the samurai scenes? The way you described me in this chapter reminds me of Arthur on Disneys the sword and the stone and you as Merlin. I'm actually curious how this next fight will play out since the lack of armor on Yarin, who is on of the few of us with weapons.
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« Reply #1360 on: February 07, 2013, 10:59:10 AM »
Well, Yarin was still a Nyac (original species created by him, I assume), Horse was an anthropomorphized seal, and I was anthropomorphized tiger, but I suppose the more racially-sensitive would see it as such, Underseen.  And, well, it WAS set in feudal Japan . . . never mind, let's not get into THAT mire.
 
Now, I'm not sure how many chapters I can get up today, but really don't expect more than one.

CHAPTER ELEVEN:
Sword to Sword, Spell to Spell

"And I have been expecting these two dipwads to show up any time n-- where's Malice?" Gaz started.
 
"You think I NEED that miserable alien?  To destroy you?" Queen snarled.
 
"Pretty much," Cloak said with a shrug.
 
"Yeah," Underseen said, making an irresistible similarity to Wart from "The Sword in the Stone".
 
"You'll all pay for that insult!!"
 
"Uh, she's not serious is she?"
 
"Well, it's possible . . ." Gaz said, a bit nervously, eyeing Queen's double-edged sword.  "She has a weapon.  Underseen, you and me don't."
 
"Neither does Cloak," Underseen pointed out, and Queen didn't seem to like that she wasn't being seen as a genuine threat.
 
"But he's in wizard garb -- you must have some magic, Cloak."
 
"He does." Damien said.
 
Cloak frowned, as he felt the joints on his hand pop with golden-scarlet light.  "I suppose that will suffice."
 
"YOU DARE TO IGNORE ME!!  I'LL KILL YOU ALL!" Queen screamed as she lunged, cutting Gaz's dress, just missing flesh.  Queen ****ed her arm back to strike again, but Cloak interfered by raising his hands, intending to raise a force field shield of magic -- the way he would in the outside world -- and he did create a wall of magic.  Only he accidentally sent it forward with minimal momentum.
 
"Oops."
 
"BIG oops." Yarin agreed.
 
"Hey, it took me years to master the Elements -- I was just given this ability of spellcasting but a few minutes ago!" Cloak said defensively.
 
Then he heard a low chuckle, but its source chose not to reveal herself.  But he knew that it was her.  Then an idea occurred to him.  He had read the "Harry Potter" series several time through.
 
"Accio Malice!"
 
Suddenly, a form burst into view.  An old hag . . . or a beautiful young maiden?  Cloak couldn't tell, but he knew as soon as she broke free of his summoning spell that she had similar powers.
 
"I don't need your help!" Queen snarled to Malice.
 
"If you were paying attention, I didn't want to come out.  The spawn of Sage's spawn forced me with that summoning spell." Malice snarled right back.
 
"Come on, then."  Damien said, smirking.  "Have at you!"


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« Reply #1361 on: February 07, 2013, 11:50:00 AM »
Any magic spells of any time period or modern day Harry Potter with this setting being a renaissance? :P Cool story skipping.
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« Reply #1362 on: February 07, 2013, 11:57:41 AM »
Story skipping?


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« Reply #1363 on: February 07, 2013, 05:58:05 PM »
Story skipping- how the characters are going from the different stories in the comic...Or at least that's my guess. I guess its going to be a three against two fight, which would be more fair than the other fights in this book, but like what Dino said about her soft spot for villains (which I have too) of course they would be the ones to be outmatched. I might be wrong considering there are 2 magic users so that always adds fun to the mix. With me being so young in this chapter the conversation I with Gaz sounded like brother to sister talk. That's just my feedback.
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #1364 on: February 09, 2013, 07:08:32 AM »
A fair assessment, Underseen.

A new chapter on Monday.

EDIT:Now . . . it's Monday.

CHAPTER TWELVE:
Song and Swords

CLANG!!  CLANG!!  SWISH!!  CLANG!!!
 
Damien and Queen launched into a furious, vicious swordfight.  Queen surprised a bit at Damien's strong swordmanship, but Damien himself was unsurprised.  After all, he had already written this battle.  He knew how it went down, how it HAD to go down. . . .
 
Meanwhile, Malice was crowing, and Horse complained at feeling vulnerable.
 
"Don't worry, Horse.  She can't kill anyone." Cloak said, with his arms crossed.  Then she attacked magically, and Cloak had to somersault out of the way -- not an easy feat in magician robes.  "Of course, you never know what you can live through."

Malice laught most raucously, and taunted, "You were always good for a laugh!"

"Oh yeah?" Cloak said, skeptically,  Then he attacked himself, with a lot of flashy bangs and smoke -- he wasn't too good at this magic thing.  Yet.  "Who's laughing now?"

With her voice magically amplified, she crowed, "Why . . . I believe it's me!"
 
Then she snapped her fingers and a jaunty tune played --
 
"I must admit, your parlor tricks are amusing
I bet you've got a bunny under your hat!
"

Cloak is then crushed beneath the weight of an overlarged stuffed bunny, which burrows his way out beneath it.

"Now here's your chance to get the best of me!
Hope your hand is hot!
C'mon,
clown, let's see what you've got!"

Cloak dodges her card attack, feeling as if he had been sucked into the Yu-Gi-Oh world -- which has actually happened before.  But that's another story, for another memoir.

"You try to slam me with your hardest stuff!
But your double whammy isn't up to snuff!
I'll set the record straight,
You're simply out of date,
You're only second rate!
"

"Am not!" Cloak protested, but Malice continued, conjuring a hoop and a blackboard:

"You think your cat's a meanie, but your tiger's tame!
You've got a lot to learn about the magic game!
So, for your education, I'll reiterate!
You're only second rate!
"

"Okay, I'll admit, I am not the best magician around, but --" Cloak began, then he realized suddenly he was sitting on the palm of a very large hand, on a black background.

"Men cower at the power in my pinky!
My thumb is number one on every list!
"

Then suddenly, everything was back to normal, and Damien was still swordfighting with Queen.  Neither was giving an inch.  Malice continued to gloat through song:

"But if you're not convinced that I'm invincible,
Put me to the test!
I'd love to lay this rivalry to rest!
"

Cloak, tired of this, began to whale on Malice with everything had, missing his old elemental powers greatly.  Malice continued to taunt:

"Go ahead and zap me with the big surprise.
Snap me in a trap, cut me down to size.
I'll make a great escape.
It's just a piece of cake.
You're only second rate!
"

"Ugh," Cloak groaned from sheer irritation, as with a deafening clang, Queen and Damien's blades met again, but they were unable to push either one away.

"You know, your hocus-pocus isn't tough enough.
And your mumbo-jumbo doesn't measure up.
Let me pontificate upon your sorry state.
You're only second rate!
"

"You know, you don't have to rub it in. . . ." Cloak said, he was sweaty and getting miffed.  But he kept his emotions under lock and key.

"Nada-cada-badra! "

Suddenly, Cloak was enclosed in a mirrored room which he shattered, unaware of the Earth superstition, and not really caring.  Then he approached a strange rocking chair that clearly held an elderly human female . . . which turned out to be Malice in disguise --

"Granny's gonna grab ya!"

"This is starting to get old . . ." Cloak commented, but nothing would deter Malice from this song.

"Alakazam-da-mus!
And this thing's bigger than the both of us!
So spare me your tremendous scare.
You needn't struggle or fight or swear.
And I can hardly wait to discombobulate,
I'll send ya back and packing in a shipping crate!
You'd make a better living with a spinning plate!
You're only second rate!
"

"DO YOU EVER SHUT UP?!?!"

It was Cloak that roared that, which caused enough of a distraction for Queen to disarm Damien, but he just rolled back snatched back up his sword.  Then in a swish of power Damien shatters Queen's sword, demanding she yield.  Cloak, unable to keep his emotions in check any longer, unleashed a wave of golden-scarlet energy at Malice, which caused her to start dissolving.  But this energy wasn't his energy, not truly, as it was magical in nature.

"This story," Damien announced proudly, "is done."

FLASH!!
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Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.