One other thing...
Gorillaman and BlazingAngel, could you try to use puncuation more often? You're both doing a great job with dialog, but your characters barely ever break in their sentences. For instance,
Hi my name is Sean this is my friend her name is jessi
Hi, my name is Sean. This is my friend; her name is Jessi.
These two sentences are very different. If you don't use punctuation nobody will know how you are stressing your sentences. It just sounds like they're magical men who don't need to breath so they ramble on and how are you what's your name you look familiar.
Just a suggestion.