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Re: GESB: Shadow Dimension
« Reply #375 on: April 15, 2011, 11:25:32 AM »
I flew up a few meters.

"If they're being healed and returned to the fight, there will be no end to them!"

I returned to the ground, and spun with my arms wide as a group of the animals I decided to call Wy'ched-Z'jeyrt converged on me.

I chopped the head clear off three or four. It was disrespectful to the living and the dead, but it was the only way. One or two I had merely injured disappeared. The four I had decapitated...were reduced to ashes.

"It worked!", I lept to the edge of the crowd, letting my 2 foot metallic claws work their magic.
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Re: GESB: Shadow Dimension
« Reply #376 on: April 15, 2011, 01:54:19 PM »
((Lol see? Lots of power.  A godling is struggling to hold his own, and yet your cutting em down lol.))

Suddenly Thor roared so loud as to equal hurricane winds, which began to beat against everyone. The beasts were quickly flung away like they were nothing.
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Re: GESB: Shadow Dimension
« Reply #377 on: April 15, 2011, 02:23:44 PM »
((I didn't say he was having no trouble...plus, he just started, and isn't being attack by as many. And yea, why would a godling strugle against even a big crowd like this if you can call down lightning and stuff?))
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Re: GESB: Shadow Dimension
« Reply #378 on: April 15, 2011, 05:15:38 PM »
((Because even if he has all of the powers of Thor, he is human. He cant completely chanel all the energy through his body because it is to much. He can call his speed and strength anytime, but calling lightning and thunder takes ALOT outta him to do any of his attacks))
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Re: GESB: Shadow Dimension
« Reply #379 on: April 16, 2011, 11:54:56 AM »
((Hmm...well as I said, I didn't say he wasn't having any trouble. And he was just starting to fight. Plus, he really wasn't using his powers; just his claws. My original Ke myth was that if one got in contact with the Ke they would be omnipotent. I tried to change that for this thread, but since I've always pictured it another way, I'm having some trouble. Will work on toning it down...))

Myriads of the Wy'ched-Z'jeyrt surrounded me, piling in on me. And not just around me, but in a three dimensional assault. The climbed on eachother and jumped in on me. Each time I flew a little higher, but one or two had grasped my legs. Then the other climbed up them. Eventually, I simply flew too high for them to get to me, but too high for me to get to them.

"How do you propose to vanquish these Wy'ched-Z'jeyrt!?", I screamed. I disregarded the fact that they had no idea what "Wy'ched-Z'jeyrt" meant. There was nothing else it could've meant.

Then I remembered something, "Artemis! You can control the elements, correct?"

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Re: GESB: Shadow Dimension
« Reply #380 on: April 16, 2011, 03:30:09 PM »
Thor slowly turned and saw that his new friends, the people he vowed to himself to protect were quickly being overtaken by the beasts.

Having a second alone, he looked to the skies...

Then he softly murmured, ''Shazam...I take your offer...''

Immediately the air shifted and seemed to crackle with electricity. It was so potent that even the beasts stopped their assault, to look at Thor.

He kept his eyes on the sky, and he took a deep breath slowly...then exhaled...and dropped to the ground clutching his chest crying in agony.

The pain coursing through his body nearly made Thor beg for death. Tears slowly coursed down his face as he continued to groan then call out in pain.

Within moments, the pain dissipated, and he weezed for a moment.

As he caught his breath he slowly stood...

And on his chest, burned deep into his skin, was a lightning bolt that continued to glow a soft sky blue.

His entire appearance was completely altered. Instead of his blonde hair, it draped down over his face in a jet black

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Cover. His eyes had also been shifted, and were a very exotic lavender, seeming to be capable of staring into ones soul with such an intensity to match the care in them.

His entire body was clearly changed too. His arms were so huge, they resembled a gorillas more then a humans. His legs were a very strong equivalent to. His torso had bumped out so much that it stretched his vest to the very limit.

{{I have, as you have noticed, changed myself. Years ago, my older brother Shazam, The God King, made me an offer. He would take away some of human side, and trade it with more of my own God side. I declined because I felt I would be cheating myself out of the Trials that would make me into the God I was destined to be...but seeing this group of attackers even being capable of defeating myself nearly, made me realize. The only one beside myself capable of even coming close to the power needed, is Vogefac. And myself and him alone are not capable of handling this. So I had to cheat. Now...I'm going to put my new

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Powers to the limit.}} He called out mentally to his friends as he held his arms straight out.

Gathering his energy, he literally vanished from sight to begin pounding through the group.

His power had increased immensly since he accepted the deal, but the group still seemed to never end.
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Re: GESB: Shadow Dimension
« Reply #381 on: April 17, 2011, 06:43:04 PM »
Silver had been hauling boulders and trees and such and blasting some away with the wind. She heard her name and turned. "Yes but not by much yet. I'm still learning!" she called and then cried out when something hit her in the back. She fell to the ground. She looked up in time to catch the lavender in Thor's eyes before she was hauled upwards and seen the group getting smaller. She couldn't move it caused tooich pain. Soon she blacked out.
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Re: GESB: Shadow Dimension
« Reply #382 on: April 17, 2011, 10:26:57 PM »
I watched Thor become more God...and start pounding on the horde.

Then I heard artemis cry out. I looked to her, but she wasn't there. I looked up...and she was being carried away by...nothing...and yet something. I could hear it's thoughts. But I could not see it.

I jumped, ignoring the Z'jeyrt attacking me. I tried to fly after her, but she was gone. And so was the Gege as I called it.

"Thor!" I screamed helplessly.
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Re: GESB: Shadow Dimension
« Reply #383 on: April 18, 2011, 03:01:15 AM »
Thor turned and spotted Vogefac pointing skyward, so he looked...

..''No! Come back!'' He roared as he spotted Silver being taken hostage
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Re: GESB: Shadow Dimension
« Reply #384 on: April 19, 2011, 11:37:30 AM »
I looked back at Thor. Then back at Artemis as the Gege took her. I scowled, growling audibly.

"Dor'sok Gege tusok'dae n'ku khizt keje vew e kyke'jaa'wo!!!", I screamed in Reptilise. I was helpless, and there was nothing else I could do.

"Dys'r khun'k kyw Wy'ched xa'leyr!"

I sighed, breathing heavily. I landed back down and absorbed the energy from anything around me I could. Then I released that energy in the form of pure psionic power as energy pulses in rapid succession.

In the Military Academia one of the first things we're taught is that psionic energy is the purest, and one of the most powerful forms of energy in the universe. The average reptilinod adult produces enough psionic energy in 10 seconds to compare with the energy released in a collision between a gram of matter and a gram of antimatter. Which is massively powerful.

I focused my psionic pulses on the horde of Z'jeyrt. In a matter of seconds, I wiped out a seventh of the horde. Then I had to stop before I lost my sentient, sapient mind and with it my ability to generate more psionic energy. And to think.

I flew into a tree and huffed as I landed on a high branch.
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Re: GESB: Shadow Dimension
« Reply #385 on: April 19, 2011, 04:00:05 PM »
Thor quickly gathered energy and shot into the air so fast, it left a crater in his wake.

He quickly gained speed, closing in on the pair...but then suddenly the ship Thor had sensed appeared and blasted him hard with a giant beam of silver energy.

He barely had enough time to block his face before the beam struck him and threw him hard into the ground where he blacked out from the pain...
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Re: GESB: Shadow Dimension
« Reply #386 on: April 21, 2011, 07:07:22 PM »
Silver struggled slightly against her assailant. But she was to weak at the moment. She felt a painful shock run through her body and she cried out in pain with a horrid scream as she was pulled into the ship. The last thing she seen was Thor blasted away and the door closing as her world went numb and black.
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Re: GESB: Shadow Dimension
« Reply #387 on: April 27, 2011, 09:24:13 AM »
Thor slowly staggered to his feet, his clothing torn beyond repair. Each of his limbs were shredded, and bleeding.

Teatering for a moment, Thor slowly wiped the blood from his lip, then spat to clear the blood from his mouth.

Turning slowly, Thor realized that he was watching a group of the beasts from before charging directly for him!

Looking slowly to the nearby ship, owned by Vogefac if he wasnt mistaken.

He nearly looked back down, before he jerked his eyes back and groaned softly, ''Duh.''

Thor hurled his hand at the ship and called the electricity down towards his outstretched palm. And as soon as he could feel the energy begin to make contact he called harder.

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Re: GESB: Shadow Dimension
« Reply #388 on: April 30, 2011, 03:49:41 PM »
((I would hope my ship wouldn't be powered by electricity, but we'll let it slip lol. :P. And I'm not sure where to go from here...))
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Re: GESB: Shadow Dimension
« Reply #389 on: April 30, 2011, 04:19:20 PM »
((lol well i didnt know if it would be powered by electricity. But either way it was more him pulling the energy down towards him hoping it would work like electricity))

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Thor slowly seemed to feel more like himself then hurled a massive bolt of lightning, effectively draining a great quantity of his power once again..

But it knocked a great deal of the beasts down. And with his shallow gasping breaths he muttered, ''Shazam! Save us!''

And from the clouds came a thunderous, ''Very well Thor. But you are using your bloodties to get over on the trials!''

Thor was so caught off gaurd he went so far as to stand straighter and call back, ''Keep your help older brother! I dont need it!''

The answer that came in turn, seemed to drip with smugness so much it rained on the friends, ''As you wish. I knew you wouldnt cheat!''

Thor glared at the sky, absolutely sure his brother had a massive grin on his face as he watched his little brother struggle.

''Ok..I can do this.'' {{Computer. I need you to trace my telepathic signal and hail in myself along with my friends. Hurry.}} He muttered then shouted in thoughtspeech.

Almost instantly there was a blinding flash of...dark light. Then

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The group found themselves in a dark cave on a desilate planet...with the doctor next to them? And their ship on the ground void of energy?

{{Computer?...COMPUTER! RESPOND!}} He called then sighed.

''Computer placed us obviously on a nearby...planet? Maybe an asteroid. But whatever it is it somehow is blocking my telepathy along with all power.''
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