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#5 the Predator
« on: July 11, 2008, 12:00:11 AM »
duff says he's done. he just needs everyone's lines.

let's see we need all the main characters:
mrguy36
anna
shanker
touquie
mrlarry
lostincyberspace

we'll need your lines

we'll have to find a new visser one...
and someone to do the clerk at radio shack
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and duff will continue the list cuz I don't know for sure
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Re: #5 the Predator
« Reply #1 on: July 12, 2008, 06:05:06 PM »
Mmk. I've got 'em all recorded. I just need to sort 'em out and upload 'em.
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Re: #5 the Predator
« Reply #2 on: July 12, 2008, 10:28:06 PM »
all right. that's one. where are the other 6 cast members and some other people...where are we gonna find a visser one?

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Re: #5 the Predator
« Reply #3 on: July 13, 2008, 10:09:34 PM »
i've got a few chapters recorded. It'll be a while before I can upload em though.


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Re: #5 the Predator
« Reply #4 on: July 18, 2008, 08:19:30 PM »
All right, I got a message back from touquie and shanker. touquie says she's fine. shanker, though, he says he's nowhere near a computer (in a hotel), so I said we'll wait a couple of weeks for him. Haven't heard from mrguy36 or lostincyberspace just yet.

Edit: AniDragon has agreed to do visser one, or Eva to be more precise, since the yeerk will obviously sound different.
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Re: #5 the Predator
« Reply #5 on: July 21, 2008, 02:15:31 PM »
I've got Visser One's part recorded, though I'm not sure how good it is... My Mic's not the best. *shrugs*

http://www.mediafire.com/?tncmjtdmcjz

Also I'm not sure if I sound threatening enough. I'll let you guys be the judge of that.
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Re: #5 the Predator
« Reply #6 on: July 21, 2008, 03:22:42 PM »
i like it, especially the last line, good job

this is great, but if you want some constructive criticism, you could do it a little slower and colder you know, but for her first book it will work

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Re: #5 the Predator
« Reply #7 on: July 21, 2008, 03:29:02 PM »
Thanks! ^_^. I can work on the whole sounding colder thing, though it'll have to wait for tomorrow morning. (And when I say morning I mean early afternoon... lol)
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Re: #5 the Predator
« Reply #8 on: July 21, 2008, 06:35:23 PM »
I don't know about colder, but slower would probably be nice.

Not bad though.

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Re: #5 the Predator
« Reply #9 on: July 23, 2008, 12:35:21 PM »
K, I'm just going to PM Duff seperate chapters.  I'm not done them, but it shouldn't take too long.
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Re: #5 the Predator
« Reply #10 on: July 23, 2008, 12:52:34 PM »
sweet thanks touq, I'll listen to them in a few minutes and start editing them in

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Re: #5 the Predator
« Reply #11 on: July 23, 2008, 09:24:32 PM »
Hey, my brother said that he wants to do some random extra lines :P

He can do both the clerk and Hork-bajir if it's availible.  We'll just pitch shift his voice down for the hork-bajir :)
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Re: #5 the Predator
« Reply #12 on: July 23, 2008, 11:17:32 PM »
I actually already recorded both of the clerks and the hork-bajir, before I got the part of Ax.

However, I recorded the chapter where Ax is in human morph at the mall, and the voice for his human morph is almost indistinguishable from the clerk at starbucks. I was just going to re-record those lines with a different voice, but if your brother wants to do them, that's cool.


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Re: #5 the Predator
« Reply #13 on: July 24, 2008, 09:47:29 AM »
Nice gong, Anidragon. You sound, rather, annoyed at Visser three's lack of knowledge about earth wildlife. Your voice has Arrogance, contempt, and superior. All that a major Yeerk Visser needs.
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Re: #5 the Predator
« Reply #14 on: July 24, 2008, 08:51:31 PM »
That's an awesome recording AniDragon. I love the tone of your voice. I definitely can see the hatred of Visser Three.

The only thing I would say is that you sound rather young for a woman in her 40's. Did you use audacity? Dropping the pitch by a factor of about .5 might make you sound a bit older without garbling it. I do the same thing in reverse when I'm recording Loren (since she's 13 and I'm 22) and it works pretty well.

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