Fanfiction Comments and Feedback

[Phoenix004]

I haven't worked on my fic in a while, mostly been working on my RP, but I'm starting to write more of my fic again so I don't get behind in it. I can't wait until some of the parts I have planned for later on, but I guess I have to get there first! Should be posting in the next few days.

[Hunter]

omg! mike, the update rocks! well worth the wait... keep it comin man!

[Gumby]

Can I have some feed back on my fan fic, please?

http://animorphsforum.com/forum/index.php/topic,481.0.html

[Phoenix004]

Thanks Terry, glad you liked it. 

The basic idea behind it is interesting Gumby, but it might be a good idea to leave a line between paragraphs (including after each person talks) so that it's easier to read.

[Gumby]

Yeah, I know. I wrote it about a year ago, but never got around to editing it.

Yet.

[Gaz]

If anyone else wants to check it out, my fanfic Animorphs Enter the Beast Wars is finally complete!

Took me around a year to finish it.

[tta269]

@Phoenix: I think letting Mike being bitten is a nice touch. It shows him that altering the future is unpredictable. The concept in this chapter is brilliant: Mike altered the story, saved Marco so he had to take his fate instead. It's like yin and yang. I think it would be cool if Mike took Jake's position in The Prisoner. It'll be fun to see how the Yeerk will react when he is exposed to Mike's knowledge of the future.

[Phoenix004]

@Phoenix: I think letting Mike being bitten is a nice touch. It shows him that altering the future is unpredictable. The concept in this chapter is brilliant: Mike altered the story, saved Marco so he had to take his fate instead. It's like yin and yang. I think it would be cool if Mike took Jake's position in The Prisoner. It'll be fun to see how the Yeerk will react when he is exposed to Mike's knowledge of the future.

Thanks, glad you liked it. In fact, that's pretty much exactly what I had in mind in terms of Mike's impact on the series. Altering timelines is unpredictable, if he changes something, then something else has to happen in its place. It's something you're likely to see more of if I continue the series.

The Prisoner? I assume you mean book 6? That was called The Capture here, maybe the name was different in your country. I've had a few people suggest doing that book, along with a variety of ideas to go with it. I won't spoil anything, but I will tell you that it's a book I've been looking forward to writing for a long time...

[tta269]

Ah yes I meant The Capture. It's cool to know that you want to write it. Keep up the good work Mike.

[Phoenix004]

Yeah The Capture is one I've planned on writing since the start, I've got some cool ideas for that one. I'm probably going to be writing The Capture once I'm finished with The Message. As much as I like The Predator, I can't really think of anything to change in that one.

[Gumby]

Nice work on ani travels 2 phoenix, cant wait for next update.

[Phoenix004]

Thanks Gumby. I've written a decent amount of the next chapter already, but I don't know when I'll be updating as I don't want to post it as soon as it's finished. I'd like to try and get ahead of myself in chapters so that if I go through a bad Writer's Block again, I'll still have something to post.

[Phoenix004]

Just had an idea concerning my fic. I'm not too far off finishing the plot of #4 but I've currently got less than half the word count I had with the first story. So I came up with an idea: what if I merged #4 and #5 together? After Mike and the others rescue Ax and take him to the woods, I could go straight into the plot of #5.

This isn't confirmed yet, but I'd still like to here what my readers think of the idea. Should Animorphs Travels #2 consist of books 4 and 5? Or should I just stick with book 4 for this one and then go straight onto book 6 for Animorphs Travels #3?

[Nateosaurus]

Skip book 5. That's what I'd do. I can't really remember what happens in that book anywho

[Phoenix004]

I'm not sure yet, but I think I probably will skip book 5 Claire. It's Marco's first book where they sneak into Chapman's house as Ants and meet Visser 1 (Marco's mum) for the first time. I really like this book, but I suppose that's because it was the first Animorphs book I ever read. It would be kind of a shame to skip it.

On the other hand, I REALLY want to write my version of book 6! I have some great ideas and it's one I've wanted to write since I first started the series. Besides, I can't think of what I'd change in book 5 anyway, so it makes sense to skip it.

So unless anybody really wants to see me write book 5, I'll go ahead and skip it. If anyone does want me to write book 5, feel free to send me a PM with possible plot ideas.