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Re: [Fic/Crossover] The New
« Reply #15 on: July 01, 2008, 09:18:58 PM »

Claire, are you psychic?

Nope, that would be Ken ;)

But I'm glad it turned out well, I was starting to think you might not like it.
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Re: [Fic/Crossover] The New
« Reply #16 on: July 01, 2008, 09:19:44 PM »

Claire, are you psychic?

Nope, that would be Ken ;)

But I'm glad it turned out well, I was starting to think you might not like it.

Hehe...Good point.

But, you did get something close to my life too...You're starting to scare me.
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Re: [Fic/Crossover] The New
« Reply #17 on: July 01, 2008, 09:25:06 PM »
Didn't you know? All girls are psychic!  ;D

Already told you over MSN, but I'll say it again. This fic is awesome! I saved Rachel from being car splattered! Yays!  :)
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Re: [Fic/Crossover] The New
« Reply #18 on: July 01, 2008, 10:31:47 PM »
[Authors Note: KA, please forgive me! :P I stole some Animorphs lines, to make it easier to write.]

Chapter Three
Stopping the Animorphs

“Why did you show that to us? And how did you show that to us?” Anna asked.

“To make you believe.” Adam said simply, back in a normal human form.

“Right.” I said.

“You all need to do something for me. You need to stop  5 young teenagers from walking through this construction site. You must stop them.”

“I don’t get it.” Tim said.

“You and me both.” I muttered.

“Go, now and stop them.” Adam said, as he disappeared.

“Anyone else as confused as I am?” I asked.

“Oh yea.” Issam replied.

“Do you think those are the kids we’re supposed to stop?” Ken asked, pointing at a small group of people coming our way.

“Probably.” Anna said. “What do we do?”

“Hey you kids!” Tim yelled. “Get outta here!”

They continued to walk through the construction site, quickening their pace.

“Blahahahahaa!” Tim yelled insanely. 4 of the kids took off running in the opposite direction. One girl, with long blonde hair didn’t start running, so a tall boy with brown hair came back, pulled on her arm and they were outta there.

Tim laughed. “Well, they’re gone now.” He looked back at us, we were all distracted by a light in the sky.

“What’s that light?” Estelore asked, she was pointing at the sky.

I looked at the others. I knew what I thought it was. A spaceship. I didn’t want to be the first person to suggest it though.
“It’s a UFO!” Mike said loudly. Phew. Now he looked like the crazy one.

The light in the sky got closer, it did look like a UFO, it wasn’t at all like the flying saucers you might hear about, it was about the same length as a school bus. The front end was a pod, almost the same as an egg. Extending from the pod was a long, narrow shaft. There were two crooked, stubby winglike things, and on the end of each wing there was a long tube that glowed bright blue.
It looked so cool. At the end of the spaceship, there was a mean looking tail that curved up and forward, coming to a point that looked as sharp as a needle.

“I think it’s about to land!” Tyler said.

None of us moved. I couldn’t speak for the others, but I knew I was scared, but at the same time I just wanted the damn thing to land and get this over with.
“It’s stopping.” Rachel said.

“You think we should run?” I asked.

The ship finally began to descend.
“It’s coming right at us!” I shouted. I really just wanted to run away, but I was stuck, I couldn’t make myself move.
I went silent, as the spaceship landed closeby.

“Should we go and try and talk to it?” Anna suggested.

“You go first.” I replied.

“I’ll go.” Tyler said, walking towards the spaceship. Finally the rest of us decided to follow behind him.

“Do you think they’ll speak English?” Mike wondered.

“Only one way to find out.” Issam said.

“Please come out. We won’t hurt you.” Jen said loudly.

<I know.>
I froze. Okay, I had definitely heard someone say “I know” only... there hadn’t been any sound. I looked at the others.

“Did everyone else just hear that?” Ken whispered.

We all nodded at once, slowly.

“Can you come out?” Nehal asked.

<Yes. Do not be frightened.>

“We won’t be.” Tim said.

“Speak for yourself.” I muttered. The others laughed nervously.

A doorway appeared in the side of the pod. I was totally hypnotized, staring at the spaceship. Something started to step down some stairs, toward us. It looked like someone had crossed a human, a deer and a scorpion together. The alien was covered in blue and tan fur, had an upper torso that looked human, four legs, no mouth, and eyes popping out of the top of his head.
The craziest thing I had ever seen in my life.

“Holy frittatas.” I muttered.

“Hello.” Estelore said to the alien.

<Hello.> He replied.

“Hi” We all said back.

To my surprise, the alien staggered. Tyler and Tim tried to help him stand up, but he fell out of their grip.
“Look, he’s hurt!” Anna cried. She was pointing at a burn that covered the aliens right side.

<Yes, I am dying.>

“Can we help you? Call an ambulance or something?” Nehal asked.

<No. I will die. This wound is fatal.>

“No! You can’t die! You’re the first alien to come to Earth!” I don’t know why I was so upset.

<I am not the first. There are others, many others.>

“Other aliens? Like you?” Tim demanded.

The alien shook his head from side to side. <Not like me.> Then the alien cried out in pain, a silent sound that echoed in my mind.
<Not like me. They are different.>

“Different how?” Anna asked.

I will remember his answer forever.

<They have come to destroy you.>

No one suggested that he was lying to us, we all just seemed to believe him.

<They are called Yeerks. They have no body, like yours or mine, they live inside the bodies of other species>

“Like... worms?” Issam asked, raising an eyebrow.

I almost burst out in laughter despite the situation.

The alien closed his eyes, and seemed to be concentrating. An image popped into my head of a grey-brown, slimy thing like a snail without a shell.

“I’m guessing that’s a Yeerk.” Rachel said.

<They are almost powerless without hosts. The Yeerks are parasites. They must have a host to live in. In this form they are known as Controllers. They enter the brain and are absorbed into it, taking over the host's thoughts and feelings. They try to get the host to accept them voluntarily. It is easier that way. Otherwise the host may be able to resist, at least a little.>

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Re: [Fic/Crossover] The New
« Reply #19 on: July 01, 2008, 10:45:58 PM »
And, of course, Rachel stays. That was kind of funny. And the Classic Elfangor scene.
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Re: [Fic/Crossover] The New
« Reply #20 on: July 01, 2008, 10:52:39 PM »
haha that was funny, loved how i scared them away, yea classic rachel

loved the chapter of everyone getting the powers too

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Re: [Fic/Crossover] The New
« Reply #21 on: July 02, 2008, 08:20:39 PM »
I just read it and I love it!!!  I kept smiling when I was reading it :D

When you're narrating about people I picture them and how I think they look like (from pics or from their discriptions) but when you talk about me I still picture the Rachel from the series XD

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Re: [Fic/Crossover] The New
« Reply #22 on: July 03, 2008, 03:07:15 AM »
[Thanks for all your feedback, guys! You all rock! Now I know you all know this story, about the Yeerks and whatnot, but yea it's necessary. So in the next chapter, we'll go get some morphs, sound good? :P]

Chapter Four.
Gaining more power

“They take over human beings?” Tyler asked.

<We had hoped to stop them,> the alien continued. <Swarms of their Bug fighters were
waiting when our Dome ship came out of Z-Space. We knew of their mother ship and were
ready for the Bug fighters, but the Yeerks surprised us - they had hidden a powerful Blade
ship in a crater of your moon. We fought, but . . . we lost. They have tracked me here. They
will be here soon to eliminate all traces of me and my ship.>

“How can they do that?” Nehal wondered.

The alien seemed to smile with his eyes. <Their Dracon beams will leave nothing behind but
a few molecules of this ship, and . . . this body> he said. <I sent a message to my home
world. We Andalites fight the Yeerks wherever they go throughout the universe. My people
will send help, but it may take a year, even more, and by then the Yeerks will have control of
this planet. After that, there is no hope. You must tell people. You must warn your people!>

“No one would ever believe us.” I said sadly.

<I don’t have much time> The alien said. <Go into my ship, You will see a small blue box. Very plain. Bring it to me, quickly.>
I looked at the others. I thought it would be cool to go and get it, but I was kind of scared at the same time.

“I’ll go.” Mike said.

<You will find the box->

“It’s okay, I know where it is.” Mike said, and he walked off into the spaceship confidently, but I was sure he must have been scared too.

Mike came back a few seconds later holding a box. “What does this thing do? Does it shoot lasers?” He handed it to the alien. “Here’s your box.”

<Thank you. There is something I may be able to do to help you fight the Yeerks.>

“Um, we actually... have super powers.” I said lamely.

The Andalite stared back at me.

“Um.. you know, like Spider-man?” I said.

“Claire, you’re an idiot.” Issam laughed.

"What, just because he's from the planet Krypton or whatever, he might still know what Spider-man is."

<I can give you a power. A power unlike any other. It is a piece of Andalite technology that the Yeerks do not have,> the Andalite explained. <A technology that enables us to pass unnoticed in many parts of the universe - the power to morph. We have never shared this power. But your need is great.>

“So what do you mean by ‘morph’?” Ken asked.

“You’re the mind-reader.” I said to him. “Shouldn’t you already know the answer?”

<You will only need to touch a creature, to acquire its DNA pattern, and you will be able to
become that creature. It requires concentration and determination, but, if you are strong, you
can do it. There are . . . limitations. Problems. Dangers, even. But there is no time to explain
it all . . . no time. You will have to learn for yourselves. But first, do you wish to receive this
power?>

“This is nuts!” Tim muttered.

“Yea that’s for sure.” I said.

“What’s that?” Rachel asked, looking up at the sky.

<Yeerks.> The Andalite said, and I could feel his hatred. <There is no more time. You must decide.>

“Well, let’s do it.” Estelore said.

<Each of you, place your hand on the sides of the square.>

“Um, isn’t there too many of us?” I muttered.

<There is no time.>

We all put our hands on the square, but we ran out of room fast.

<Do not be afraid.> The Andalite said.

Something that was similar to a shock seemed to run through me. It was very weird.

<Go now,> the Andalite said. <Only remember this - never remain in animal form for more
than two of your Earth hours. Never! That is the greatest danger of the morphing! If you stay
longer than two hours you will be trapped, unable to return to human form.>

“Two hours.” Mike repeated.

The Andalite was now staring up at the sky with his main eyes.
Something else was up there with the Bug fighters.

<Visser Three! He comes.>

“What? What’s a Visser?” I asked.

<Go now. Run! Visser Three is here. He is the most deadly of your enemies. Of all Yeerks he
alone has the power to morph, The same power you now have. Run!>

"No, we'll stay with you," Rachel said "Maybe we can help."

Again it was as if the alien was smiling at us with his eyes. <No. You must save yourselves.
Save yourselves and save your planet! The Yeerks are here.>

We all looked up and sure enough, the two red lights were sinking toward us.
And they had been joined by a third ship, far larger, black as a shadow within a shadow.

“What are we supposed to do? How do we fight them?” Anna asked.

<You will find a way, now go!>

“He’s right, come on , run!” Jen yelled.

We all ran and hid behind a small half built wall. We saw weird monster-like aliens getting out of another spaceship, they were covered in spikes.

<Hork-Bajir Controllers.> The Andalite said weakly.  <The Hork-Bajir are a good people, despite their fearsome looks,> the Andalite said. <But they have been enslaved by the Yeerks. Each of them now carries a Yeerk in his head. They are to be pitied.>

Our attention was drawn away by a new form that crept and slithered out of the Blade ship.

<Taxxon-Controllers,> the Andalite said. I knew he was trying to tell us all he could, even to the end. Trying to prepare us for what we were up against.

<The Taxxons are evil.>

“They look it.” I muttered. They looked like massive centipedes, gross.
They had dozens of legs that supported the lower two thirds of their bodies. The top third was
held upright, and there the rows of legs became smaller, with little lobster-claw hands.
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Re: [Fic/Crossover] The New
« Reply #23 on: July 03, 2008, 08:00:49 AM »
Ooo, exciting :D
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Re: [Fic/Crossover] The New
« Reply #24 on: July 03, 2008, 09:02:20 AM »
Jah. I had a Rachel moment, too! (book-Rachel, not Touquie-Rachel)
Wild! I find this terribly amusing.
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Re: [Fic/Crossover] The New
« Reply #25 on: July 03, 2008, 09:03:42 AM »
Nice use of my power again Claire, even though it was subtle. Looks like we're finally getting to the good stuff eh?

Oh, and it's possible Elfangor may have known about Spiderman due to his time on Earth. Maybe he read them for a laugh!  ;)
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Re: [Fic/Crossover] The New
« Reply #26 on: July 03, 2008, 11:10:47 AM »
Haha...Spider-man....Good chapter, Claire.
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Re: [Fic/Crossover] The New
« Reply #27 on: July 03, 2008, 11:11:38 AM »
Is it possible for me to get offended at myself for called you an idiot, than it is for you being called one? Hmm...

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Re: [Fic/Crossover] The New
« Reply #28 on: July 03, 2008, 11:24:00 AM »
Great so far Claire! Only looks like it'll get better!

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Re: [Fic/Crossover] The New
« Reply #29 on: July 03, 2008, 11:28:42 AM »
That's what I was thinking, when she said spiderman, that he'd get it.

Okay, see, and this would be the point where I'd jokingly go "I wonder what crispy-fried taxxon looks like"  XD sorry, had to say it...considering I'm the pyro of the group...

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