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Re: A Kind Heart and a Wolf's Courage (Semi literate) Filled
« Reply #285 on: March 23, 2010, 05:57:40 PM »
((Dude, Wolf was not four feet away when they said those things. He's part wolf, he heard what they said. Please edit.))
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Re: A Kind Heart and a Wolf's Courage (Semi literate) Filled
« Reply #286 on: March 23, 2010, 10:48:22 PM »
~~I kind of have to agree with Parker. Wolf would have been able to hear that even in the other room. Hearing senses are great......~~

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Re: A Kind Heart and a Wolf's Courage (Semi literate) Filled
« Reply #287 on: March 31, 2010, 01:07:09 PM »
((Tyr's left the room, so he can't respond to Wolf.))

Tyr stood on the front porch with is arms wrapped around his chest. He enjoyed the sensation of the biting cold, but didn't want his body to go in shock. As he breathed out he watched his breath swirl in the slight breeze. The small gust of wind crept in through his collar and caused a nice chill to shake his body. He loved the cold. It was one of the main reasons he moved to this region after the death of his family. He remembered fighting with his wife over his wanting to move to colder climates. That memory made him feel conflicted. He still loved his wife and wanted to honor her memory, but he couldn't deny the feelings he had for Natalya.
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Re: A Kind Heart and a Wolf's Courage (Semi literate) Filled
« Reply #288 on: April 01, 2010, 03:09:42 AM »
~~I still call for a post edit, Shorty.~~
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Natalya finished her breakfast and went to the wash stand beside the bed, to spalsh water on her face to help wake her up completly. The water was warm, but the air had been a bit chilled, which helped her. She dried her face, and went to brushing her hair.
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Re: A Kind Heart and a Wolf's Courage (Semi literate) Filled
« Reply #289 on: April 01, 2010, 01:41:41 PM »
((Yeah Shorty, I think a whole re-write is needed. You might want to do some back reading to get back in character. I know that helps me a lot. Sometimes I have to re-read the previous posts a few times before I can think of a proper response.))

Post Merged: April 01, 2010, 01:54:04 PM
Tyr watched as the sun revealed itself from its partial cover behind the distant mountains. We waited too long, they could be here by now. Tyr shook his head clear of such thoughts. This wasn't the village Geoffery would've told them they had gone to. So they still had time before those chasing them would arrive. Not a lot of time. Tyr nodded his head and went back inside the inn.
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Re: A Kind Heart and a Wolf's Courage (Semi literate) Filled
« Reply #290 on: April 05, 2010, 12:56:34 AM »
Natalya had brushed her hair and washed up. She was trying to tie the laceup ribbon on her shirt that had fallen loose, but with one hand in a sling and a promise not to move it, she was a bit frustrated.
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Re: A Kind Heart and a Wolf's Courage (Semi literate) Filled
« Reply #291 on: April 15, 2010, 05:42:28 PM »
((Shorty, do you still want to be in this RP? I was gone for a week and you still haven't posted anything except your re-write.))

Tyr walked back in the room and noticed Natalya redressing. He instinctively turned away and said, "Oh, sorry. I'll uh, let you get dressed in private."
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Re: A Kind Heart and a Wolf's Courage (Semi literate) Filled
« Reply #292 on: April 16, 2010, 09:31:48 AM »
((wow. was just about to quit. sorry for the delay but I'm gonna have to quit for now.))

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Re: A Kind Heart and a Wolf's Courage (Semi literate) Filled
« Reply #293 on: April 17, 2010, 01:16:26 AM »
~~What's up shorty, why do you have to quit?~~
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Natalya jumped as he came in and then laughed when he turned around. She wore a longskirted dress one of the workers had brought up for her since her other clothes were torn and not warm enough for the weather in her condition, as they had left other clothes for the others as well. She laughed and said to Tyr, "You are fine, I am only trying to tie the ribbon, otherwise I am dressed." she smiled.
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Re: A Kind Heart and a Wolf's Courage (Semi literate) Filled
« Reply #294 on: April 17, 2010, 01:24:23 AM »
Tyr turned back around and asked, "Heh, did you need any help?"
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Re: A Kind Heart and a Wolf's Courage (Semi literate) Filled
« Reply #295 on: April 17, 2010, 01:26:54 AM »
She gave a frustrated sigh as she looked down at her ribbon and blew the hair from her face in aggitation. "Would you please?" she asked with an aplogetic smile.
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Re: A Kind Heart and a Wolf's Courage (Semi literate) Filled
« Reply #296 on: April 17, 2010, 01:41:19 AM »
Tyr walked up to Natalya and tied the ribbon she was reaching for. "Healing can be so inconvenient. We better leave soon. We've been here too long."


((What should we do about Shorty's character? Shorty, if we have the inn raided, would you stay, or are you quiting for another reason?))
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Re: A Kind Heart and a Wolf's Courage (Semi literate) Filled
« Reply #297 on: April 20, 2010, 05:01:55 PM »
((I'm quiting because my thought process for this rp is nothing. I vertially forgot about this rp and my computer is gone. It just blew up so until i buy another I'm at the library. Gotta ration my time. Sorry.))

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Re: A Kind Heart and a Wolf's Courage (Semi literate) Filled
« Reply #298 on: April 20, 2010, 05:26:46 PM »
((That sucks man, your comp just really didn't like you, huh? ;D

((Mythica, so should we advertise that his spot is open; should we control his character for the time being; what do you want to do?))
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Re: A Kind Heart and a Wolf's Courage (Semi literate) Filled
« Reply #299 on: April 21, 2010, 10:48:04 PM »
Natalya smiled. "Very inconveniant." she agreed, then nodded as he said it was time to go.

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