The Experiment (#28) - Epilogue

[Dogman15]

I wrote and published my first fan fiction in years.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/48056665/chapters/121174033
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14247305/1/The-Experiment-Epilogue

My first stories were written when I was in high school, but I don't think my writing abilities (in terms of plot and dialogue) have improved all that much since then. I know my spelling and grammar are generally pretty great, though. Anyway, I'm looking for constructive criticism on how I could have done better. I can't guarantee I'll modify or edit this story in any way, but it's possible I might depending on the feedback.