wow dude I can't believe you've never read the david trilogy before, who are you?
I dno how the animals would look behind them, but its worth a shot, or maybe just make them smaller or something cause they definitely look cramped
I liked the tagline across the center before, it looks weird left aligned, but the new tagline is cool, good call mike
maybe if you put that down the bottom and the David Trilogy title in the middle it would bring out the title more, but i dno you can tinker with it
either way awesome job dude, thats definitely an A
way to piss off the rest of the class you curve breaker haha