I've never read a helmacron book so I can't judge that yet, and the ending's been done to death so....what would I change about the series....I would have liked for David to have stayed on the team a little while longer, maybe have a book where he narrates. Even though I didnt like him, David was a interesting character and it woulda been nice to see how long he'd last on the side of good. and then once he did turn bad I would have wanted to see him as more of a recurring villain. not really showing up in like every book but maybe every 5 to 10 books. just have him pop every now and then like drode and crayak