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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #10695 on: September 28, 2010, 04:50:04 PM »
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #10696 on: September 28, 2010, 04:55:31 PM »
(I would think if he'd leave two people, it would be Gaz and Fletcher, instead of two thirds of the "full set". Yet he may just be using Morgan and Fl;etch as bait. Who knows what those guys are thinking?)


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #10697 on: September 28, 2010, 05:52:41 PM »
(He's a crafty one. But who knows? Maybe something went wrong and he's yelling at the guy in charge of the transporter. lol. I'll decide which soon enough.  ;D )

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #10698 on: September 28, 2010, 07:40:11 PM »
Dara gathers up his courage and says, "Ok... as long as this wil help my parents, I'll do it. Where is this yeerk?"
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #10699 on: September 28, 2010, 07:49:21 PM »
"Yeerk on our homeworld. I need call him, but friend using my ship now. I must use Yeerk ship, or be very risky. Maybe I talk to Corliss." He said, and looked around for the guy. Unfortunately he didn't seem to be in the room anymore. "Corliss not inside. Maybe we wait. Want to stay inside now."


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #10700 on: September 28, 2010, 07:59:47 PM »
"How do you now Yeerks Jagill, I'm curious?" Dara he something outside."Did you hear laser fire outside? Maybe we should check it out."
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #10701 on: September 28, 2010, 08:19:08 PM »
"Yes. We should." Temrash said, taking charge of Jagill when Cobra mentioned laser fire. He spoke with a different inflection than Jagill did, which Dara may or may not notice. He went to the door and opened it to see what was going on.

One very noticeable thing was a huge ship hovering in the air.

"Oh great. More newcomers."


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #10702 on: September 28, 2010, 08:23:29 PM »
"I really shouldn't be surpised the Jagill has a Yeerk." He says as he notices the change in Jagill's voice. "What's your name?"


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #10703 on: September 28, 2010, 08:29:52 PM »
(Play your character your way. If you want him to be that kind of guy, then that's how it is.)

Temrash turned to look at Dara, a bit awkwardly. "My name is Temrash. Yes, Jagill is a controller, but we really did leave the Empire. I'll get your parents back for you. It should be too difficult to get the guy Jagill knows, because the Visser that has him works for me, which is not coincidental. The other parent might take a bit of searching."


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #10704 on: September 28, 2010, 08:34:56 PM »
"Ok what shuold we do about the big ship?" he asks gesturing at the ship.
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #10705 on: September 28, 2010, 08:45:21 PM »
"That's the big question. I don't know if they're friendly or not, but it looks familiar. Kind of like...CG! It's a CG ship! Definitely not friendly. I had hoped they wouldn't be able to find us after we raided their place, and apparently they brought in some big guns."

"I have no ship to go up there with, and they're positioned to blast us all from up there. Ossanlin! More headache for you. We have enemies out there with a big ship! I need to find Parker and Morgan's crew. I may also need Thordon to help. Dara, what would you rather do? Fight or flee? I can give you a firearm, or you can escape out the back door and head for the trees. Your choice."

"Did I just hear something about us all getting blasted? Hey. Untie me. I don't want to be a sitting duck." Cody said.

<<What shall we do, Prince Ossanlin?> Claxter asked.


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #10706 on: September 28, 2010, 08:50:58 PM »
"I have a dracon, I'll fight. Where should I go I'm not really tactiacally minded?"
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #10707 on: September 28, 2010, 09:14:07 PM »
((Hey Cobra - just a suggestion. We don't really have a word/sentence limit in this rp, but since we spend a lot of time striving to improve our skills a lot of us try to make the majority of our posts at least a paragraph long, if not more. You'll notice some of the posters - Ossanlin, for example - post quite infrequently, but their posts contain quite a bit of substance. Not all of your posts have to be that way, but sometimes you can get a lot across in one post, instead of having the same thing take 20 one-line posts. Which can be helpful for us slow people who can only post once or twice a day.

Like I said, it isn't a rule or anything. Just a suggestion. The more meat you put into your posts the more we can get into the story. :) ))


"Your Yeerk," Tamora says, "Sukohn. What sort of a relationship do you have? Clearly he considers you worth his trouble."

While Tamora waits for an answer from Cody she keeps an eye on Ossanlin, who has moved to speak with the other Andalite. Great, she thinks, sipping from her drink, two arrogant blade-heads within ten feet of me.

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"Love?" Trey asks, looking a little surprised. For some reason he could not picture Thordon as anything but solitary. "You have a partner? Is she...I mean, is she like you?" Trey blushes a bit, uncertain whether or not his question is completely appropriate.

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"Damn it Corliss, wait up!" Terenia cries, but he is much faster than her human form and demorphing would only waste time. She continues to follow the sound of crashing footfalls until they abruptly stop. Shortly after there is the sound of several loud objects impacting the forest floor. Terenia quickens her pace and, in her inattentiveness, catches her ankle on the same log Corliss had jumped moments before.

"Ah!" She yelps in surprise, throwing her arms out to catch her fall. She lands wrist-deep in the mucky water, brown sludge splashing up into her face and covering her thoroughly. Coughing and spluttering, Terenia wipes the grime from her eyes, looking completely bewildered by her sudden faceplant.

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #10708 on: September 28, 2010, 09:23:11 PM »
Cody was starting to work on untying himself when Tamora asked him about Sukohn. "Well...I guess Sukohn is the closest thing I have to a conscience. I mean he's calm, collected, and laid back. He doesn't beat people to a pulp just for being ugly and within arm's reach like me. To him I'm just a voluntary and sometimes entertaining host. I think deep down he does regret being at the bottom of the Emperical ladder, and listening to the kinds of things I'd say to do to those who insult him gives him a chuckle. He'd be vaporized for doing stuff to bossy or bullying superiors, but I can be pretty creative with thoughts of revenge sometimes."


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #10709 on: September 28, 2010, 10:31:24 PM »
((I'll do that but when you're character is having a conversation it's hard to write a lot. I could prebably write more feeling and such so I guess I'll at least give it a try.))

Dara unholsters his gun and watches the ship to see if it's going to do anything. If I'm going to expect help from these people I might as well help them too. I would have have never thought I'd be getting help from a controller to become a controller to break into the empire. If I had heard that before I would have laughed. Dara notices two other ships in the distance he doesn't know if they're friend or foe so he decides to announce them. "There are two other ships in the distance I don't know what they are though." he says to no one in particular.
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