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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #9450 on: August 01, 2010, 09:00:04 AM »
Elayne nodded to Ossanlin in gratitude and, once he was engaged in another conversation, she ordered a glass or red wine and a pint of beer from the bartender. Then, a drink in each hand, she turned back to where Mar was waiting and took a seat beside him. The wine sloshed in its glass as she slid it across the rough tabletop towards the Highest, but her eyes were on Swordson. "What do you make of the newcomer?" she asked quietly.
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #9451 on: August 01, 2010, 08:34:00 PM »
Terenia's comm link beeps at her waist and she glances down at it irritably with one stalk eye. She pulls the device from her holster and looks at the message. It appears to be from The Director, detailing concerns about Tamora and a bounty hunter. A frown in her eyes, Terenia deletes the message and replaces the comm.

<<She is an endless source of hindrance,>> Efaen says. Terenia ignores her, continuing on her path towards the bar. She pauses briefly outside the door, checking that both of her weapons are still in their holsters, before pushing through and into the bar.

As soon as the door is open, Terenia almost turns right around and walks back out. The bar is packed, busier than she has ever seen it, and a good number of the people present she is on poor terms with. She spies her sister in a dark corner of the bar, talking with Keshin. She also notes that Myitt seems to be a drink or two deep, looking miserable next to Corliss.

Terenia shifts uneasily in the doorway, uncertain what course to take now that she is inside the bar. She wants to deal with her sister, but not in a bar full of enemies. She wants to go to Corliss, but he is certainly still furious with her. By now he probably has told Ossanlin and Myitt about her betrayal.

<<Move.>> Efaen prods. Terenia sighs and approaches the opposite end of the bar from her sister, a move that takes her closer to Myitt and Corliss. Without looking at them she orders a fermented grass drink.

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #9452 on: August 01, 2010, 08:43:58 PM »
Claxter noticed Terenia enter the room in her Andalite form. He looked at Efaen, longing to see Terenia out of her head for good. When she walked over to Tamora he eased over a bit to try to catch anything they might say.

"If you want to eavesdrop, be a man and just go over there." Cody said.

<Silence. I am not eavesdropping.> He said, though obviously lying.

"You dig that chick, don't you?"

<I don't know what you just said.>


Temrash saw Terenia come in, and kept a careful eye on her. She had been quite volatile, and the Human was likely at the center of it. He decided to see what happened before doing anything, but he had doubts it would be anything good.


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #9453 on: August 01, 2010, 08:53:26 PM »
((Chad, Terenia went to the opposite side of the bar from Tamora. She's by Myitt and Corliss, not her sister. :) ))

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #9454 on: August 01, 2010, 09:35:24 PM »
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #9455 on: August 01, 2010, 10:33:08 PM »
<thanks for the advice, sorry Ive been out of the writing game for a few years now.>

Swordson looked at the Andalite and said in thought speak "so your race can use thought speech as well interesting. I must admit though I rather prefer your race out of morph you are better equipped to handle the violence that may happen. As for me looking for violence, I am not quite sure if that is true. Merely airing on the side of caution here as I know none of the customs of this universe. Forgive me," He held out one hand to Ossanlin. He turned his thought speech towards Temrash and said "In this case I will keep my blade sheathed until it is needed."

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #9456 on: August 01, 2010, 11:10:18 PM »
Alic was trying to find a way to respond to Swordson that wouldn't take longer than a few minutes, but ended up not having to caution about the yeerks because he became distracted with the other people in the bar. He'd learn soon enough. If there was an alternate universe where there were nothing to worry about like the yeerks, Alic wished she could go.
"Yeah.." Alic eyed his knife. "Be careful with that thing. Someone may find you threatening and you may find yourself missing a limb." She finished her drink and set it on the bar and smiled at Ossanlin. She had been avoiding him through the trip back and felt guilty about it.

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #9457 on: August 01, 2010, 11:25:33 PM »
<Ok thanks to some advice, I am writing my ooc before my actual post, the universe and all of that where my new character was stranded is that of my other character, Swordson. Also as per the same advice Swordson's weakness or flaw is that he can be killed by another of his kind or of his DNA type so feel free to make one or find a way to acquire him or one of his kind>


Kato-Adism-Tattuye sauntered into the bar, the normal blue Andalite Fur that was on his body was more of a golden color due to his time spent in the Aparies universe. He seen a fellow Andalite talking to a Sunion, and another creature on two legs wearing nothing on its hooves. He sauntered over his tail held high and and at the ready. "Brother be careful of this one and his species, they are dangerous and crafty, add to the fact that they lie for a living," he said in a privet thought speech. He turned to the other two and held a hand saying " I am Kato-Adsim-Tattuye, greetings."

Swordson took his hand and said "greetings Andalite, I see that you are of a different color care to explain why, or does your race come in many colors."  Kato ignored him turned to the other two legged creature that was there.

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #9458 on: August 02, 2010, 04:57:52 AM »
((Not a problem quick...just to give you a run-down of the general symbology that we use while writing.  When character's speak in thought-speech, we generally denote the sentence with less-than/greater-than symbols.  <This is thought-speech.>  Simply because that's the way KA denoted it.  When we send private thought speeches, we usually use double-symbols.  <<This is a private thought-speech for you.>>  And generally we make it obvious whom we are addressing with the private thought.  Normal audbile speech is denoted by quotations.  "This is audible speech."  And finally, with our OOC posts, we usually use double parenthesis.  ((I'm talking OOC.))  And as Myitt mentioned, we do usually post OOC at the start of the message.  These are the symbols everyone here knows...and I think it would be especially useful in the case of your assassin character since he is capable of thought-speech and regular vocal speech.  It will be less confusing.  

As a quick ref again... <thought-speech>   <<private thought-speech>>  "audible speech"  ((OOC post))  

Cool?  Welcome aboard.  :D))



Ossanlin ****s his head and shakes the stranger's hand, watchful of any aggressive moves he might make.  <We generally try to resolve our...differences.. .peacefully.>  He looks at Alic and shakes his head slightly...always the aggressor.  He still smiled a bit fondly, he couldn't help himself.  it seemed like she was the only light in what had become a very dreary portion of space.  He looks up as another Andalite walks in and squints a bit.  Golden fur?  That was different.  The only time he had seen fur colors on an Andalite aside from shades of blue or deep purple were the times he had come into contact with a Silver Blade...or when he himself was in his Silver Blade form.

Ossanlin raises his eyebrows and mentally shrugs.  He didn't know why he continued to be surprised in this place.  He listens to the new-comer Andalite's private thought and nods a bit, sending a private thought-speech back.  <<I see...I don't believe I am familiar with his species...he claims to be from a different multiverse...that's certainly more than possible in this place, and given that you know of him...and your unique coloration, I must assume that you are from his multiverse as well.>>
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #9459 on: August 02, 2010, 08:33:45 AM »
(I guess I misread the post then. I do that sometimes.)


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #9460 on: August 02, 2010, 08:39:52 AM »
(mythica: there's trouble at the ok corral. Gaz was looking for Silver because something is wrong with Andromeda. *gasp*)

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #9461 on: August 02, 2010, 11:12:24 AM »
Alic turned at the arrival of another Andalite. Golden? She guessed it could be possible, but it was still shocking to see, and she wasn't sure if she trusted him. Reluctantly, Alic shook his hand just briefly and stated her name. "Alic." She turned back to the bar, feeling uneasy with the two strange newcomers just inches away.  "Bartender? Another 'rita please." A minute later she was sipping out of another crazy straw.

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #9462 on: August 02, 2010, 12:42:40 PM »
((Sorry for the lateness, guys. Especially poor Terenia. :P ))

Keshin frowns a bit and then smirks, leaning in more than he was. This conversation is suddenly taking a far more interesting turn. "The going rate entirely depends on who exactly you want me to kill. I require a considerable sum if it's somebody important in the Empire, unless you happen to have any vials of a certain medication. The cost then goes down from there in order of rank or difficulty in the case of rebels."

"If you're interested, I'd be happy to accomodate you," states Keshin clearly. "I haven't had much business in this Bar. Too many old enemies."
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Mar glances over Swordson carefully, scanning him for danger levels. At closest guess he's not precisely human, but he doesn't seem nearly as dangerous as someone like Ossanlin or Thordon. Mar then shrugs. "He seems terribly sure of himself in an almost arrogant way, coming from someone who is arrogant himself. I do not think he is a threat given our company, if that's what you mean. We have many useful associates in this Bar."

"I suppose..." Mar pauses, taking a sip of the wine Elayne offered to him. "...we'll have to see how he reacts to the others to determine his purpose here."
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #9463 on: August 02, 2010, 05:39:53 PM »
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #9464 on: August 02, 2010, 05:46:11 PM »
(sorry, I didn't have time to be more clear. Ok to elaborate what's going with Morgan & Co: They're in a far corner of the bar, Asda is going into full doctor mode and Morgan is getting ready to fly off the handle. Andromeda wasn't just drugged, she was in some kind of stasis. She's in the early stages of being affected by the same serum that changed Morgan, it was dormant so thats why Asda didn't notice it. She's trying to find a counter.)