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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8040 on: April 14, 2010, 12:32:09 PM »
Elayne sighed and nodded in response to Mar. "Alright, we'll wait for this stimulant to wear off first. He'll just have to get some relief from the pain later, I guess. Thanks for warning me." She turned her head down to read the labels again and saw that the man's eyes were open. Sticking the bottles of painkillers in a pouch on her tool belt, she turned her full attention on the injured man.

"Hey, you with us?" Elayne asked him, watching his eyes. She waved a little to get his attention, as his gaze seemed out of focus. Glancing over her shoulder at Mar and Belzar, she shrugged to them and looked back to him. "Do you think you can move? We need to get you off this ship and to somewhere safe."
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8041 on: April 14, 2010, 01:43:45 PM »
The man stares at Elayne blankly for a moment, seemingly uncomprehending. He seems unsur whether or not Elayne is real, and after a moment he absently reaches a hand towards her, touching the skin on her face wonderingly.
"Am I-" he cuts off, coughing, and tries again, "Am I dead?"

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8042 on: April 14, 2010, 01:50:56 PM »
Mar sighs tiredly and then wanders toward the young man, leaning over him so that the man can see him but not so close as to bother him. Mar then shakes his head. "Ordinarily yes. But in this case, no you aren't dead. Which is something of a miracle and and of itself considering the size of the gash in your head."

Mar then mutters, "Are you Treyliss? Someone who has moved on was asking about you and requested our assistance. I hope you at least catch that first statement."

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8043 on: April 14, 2010, 01:56:14 PM »
Elayne's eyes widened when the man reached to her, then she sighed, taking his hand and putting it back down at his side. She looked to Mar and rocked backwards a little so she was crouching on the balls of her feet rather than sitting beside the man. "You'll be fine... I think," she told the man. "I mean, I don't really know anything about medicine, but you're in a heck of a lot better shape than that other man."

Looking back to Mar, she wondered aloud, "Think the robot can carry him gently? He must be the one who righted the ship, but I wonder if he has the delicacy to carry an injured human."

She turned her head to look at Belzar consideringly. Then she mimed holding a person, giving a questioning expression, not even sure if he understood enough about gestures of organisms to interpret her actions.
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8044 on: April 14, 2010, 02:23:46 PM »
Elayne started making gestures, and Belzar got the idea she wanted him to pick up and try to move the Human. He moved over and tried to be easy, noting the softness to the alien flesh when he touched it. He worked his arms under the Human and began to slowly lift him up. To him, Belzar's arms would feel like large pipes at room temperature. Belzar figured they would want to reenter the bar with the Human, which he'd rather not do for fear of the tentacle creature, but he turned to walk out the door with the Human.


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8045 on: April 16, 2010, 12:12:31 AM »
((Guess it's up to me. No Terenia. <<; And still no Hunter...))

Mar watches as Belzar carefully maneuvers the man who is probably "Treyliss" out of the door of the spaceship. Considering how confused the robot has seemed thus far, he's doing pretty well with the body. I hope dearly that there was some point to all this mucking about. Perhaps information this fellow has will be useful.

Mar nods at Elayne, glancing awkwardly about himself. "I suppose that we can now get out of this hideous wreck and follow the robot. The longer I stay here, the more I become convinced that one of the two of us will get hurt. Let us move quickly back to the Bar."

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8046 on: April 16, 2010, 02:25:13 AM »
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8047 on: April 16, 2010, 06:19:40 AM »
Belzar walked carefully to the Bar. Once inside he placed the Human down on a cleared off table to make him easier for someone to get to in order to fix him. The other Human had not stirred since Belzar had left, which made him think the alien had shut down.


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8048 on: April 16, 2010, 07:08:31 AM »
((Thanks, Zombz. Also Brian told me that Jessi got back home last night, so hopefully we'll hear from her soon.))

Elayne nodded in agreement with Mar. The ship was clearly unstable, both in its own internal workings and in its awkward landing position. She imagined it was only a matter of time before the whole thing collapsed on its side or some of the spray of sparks caught fire to something flammable. Navigating out of the ship was easier than entering it, now that the light from outside illuminated their path. She stepped over cables and boxes and debris, glancing behind her to make sure Mar was following, then carefully stepped down the ramp and back onto the gravel. The robot was far ahead of them, already passing through the door of the Bar, but she wanted to wait for Mar before she followed him.
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8049 on: April 16, 2010, 07:05:04 PM »
((Sorry about the absence, guys. Work trip took over my life briefly, but I am back. :) ))

The man looks surprised when Mar moves forward, and even more surprised when he speaks. His eyes are still having difficulty focusing, and when he finally manages to keep Mar in his range of vision he is surprised yet again by the sensation of someone - or something - picking him up.

"Trey," the man mutters, more like a correction than a confirmation. He passes out again as he is being carried out of the ship, but regains consciousness quickly. His eyes focus quicker this time, finding the strange machine that is carrying him.

"Wha-who....what is..." Trey sputters incoherently. He struggles in the machine's grasp, but his movements are still weak.

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8050 on: April 16, 2010, 07:35:57 PM »
Belzar goes to Terenia, who is the only person in the bar that can understand him. "We brought this one in, and I would like him to remain still on the table. Can you convey the message to him so he doesn't injure himself, Terenia?"


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8051 on: April 17, 2010, 12:02:34 AM »
((No problem everybody! Glad I got the message! :D Thank you Zombz! And...what are we all speaking? Common, like in Middle Earth? XD English? Or is it Galard? That's my thought. Consensus?))

Keshin stands there waiting for the Marine's answer, but the Marine seems more concerned with his drink than he is with Keshin. Keshin groans and rolls his eyes, slumping back down in his seat. <And I thought I was grumpy.>

<Some people don' like ta talk much, Kess. We can chat up Terenia if we want.>

<Yeah. That's...better than nothing. Though she isn't the most agreeable person I've ever met.>

But before Keshin can say anything at all, the robot he met with Terenia comes back inside carrying a man with a gash in his head. He looks almost half-conscious, and not as wounded. Keshin throws his arms up in the air. "Great, another injured guy. Because that's exactly what this Bar needs."

Keshin frowns as the robot makes his strange chirping noises again. He then looks at Terenia. "What's this guy saying? And for that matter, where is he from? That weird guy with Elayne is definitely not a local, but even he speaks perfect Galard. Though..you probably don't know..."
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Mar quickly floats out of the ship and eventually comes to "stand" beside Elayne. He then smiles warmly at her. "Oh, how cute. You waited for me, my dear. Well, come along. We must catch up with the robot and that Treyliss fellow."

Mar then moves forward towards the Bar, checking to see that Elayne is beside him. Despite the hassle, he's suddenly interested to see how this develops. The injured man seemed a bit confused when Belzar began to take him out of the room. Mar wonders dimly what his problem was...


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8052 on: April 17, 2010, 12:06:50 AM »
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8053 on: April 17, 2010, 08:01:20 AM »
((Yay Cody!! I've never RPed with you -- I'm excited!! :D Jessi, I'm sending you a PM regarding Treyliss. All, I won't be back online until possibly pretty late this evening, so hopefully I won't hold up the Bar. Feel free to Yeerk Elayne around as need be.))

Elayne laughed and shook her head in amusement at Mar. "Yes well, I thought it would be the courteous thing to do, especially seeing as you came out here to help because I asked it." She walked beside him, her eyes on the Bar ahead. "I wonder if those two were friends or otherwise," she murmured to herself but loudly enough that he could hear her. They reached the Bar's front door in short order, and she pushed it open and stepped inside, immediately spotting the robot and injured man, walking towards them.
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8054 on: April 17, 2010, 05:57:50 PM »
Trey finally begins to gain a stronger grip on his surroundings as he is set down on the table. One hand trails up to his head and he winces when he touches the gauze that is already turning red. He sits up slowly, looking around at his surroundings. As his gaze falls on Elayne, his expression turns to one of slight confusion, as though he is trying to remember her from somewhere. At that moment, though, he drops his gaze to the floor where the dead man was lying. Trey blanches and nearly falls off the table, eyes as wide as saucers as he stares at the dead body.

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Terenia looks up when the group re-enters the bar, but looks away again quickly. They have someone new with him - an unconscious someone. She turned back to her drink, not wanting to involve herself in any other problems at the moment.

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