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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #6210 on: December 31, 2009, 12:18:32 PM »
<Thanks.> Zoshonel said. He had gotten his hand to twitch, but also felt her gaining ever more control over him. It was interesting. The thought accured to him that he might be able to see her memories. He tried to see if he could feel anything out, but didn't get anything. Maybe it wasn't possible, or he was doing it wrong. He decided to put force into moving his wings next.


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #6211 on: December 31, 2009, 01:21:51 PM »
"Andalites, teaching a Yeerk to take an involuntary host?" Corliss says with mock surprise.  "I'm shocked!  I would've thought that was an evil, Yeerkish thing to do."  He picks at his bandages, smiling at Efaen.  Then he looks back at Terenia.  "So, you have your temporary host.  And you can hear my extremely beneficial contributions to the conversation!  I'm sorry, Zoshonel, it must be uncomfortable, but it will only be temporary.  Terenia, forgive me for being so blunt, but what would keep Visser Three from just chaining you up and killing your sister, anyway?  Especially knowing how volatile he is, it could very well happen accidentally.  Did you have some sort of escape plan?  He could easily keep you in stasis so you didn't try to off yourself, I'm sure you're aware.  He must need Tamora, or at least her Yeerk, for some other reason.  Or are you simply that valuable to him as his little guinea pig?"


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #6212 on: December 31, 2009, 02:31:21 PM »
"Hi, there. May I call you Odysseus? How are ya'? I'll tell ya', I've been many places in the last few decades, but I've never seen a bar quite like this... And I must say, I haven't seen a Minotaur in... Well, ever, actually. There were a few back home, but they were all long gone by the time I came around." He says with a glum expression.

"And very nice to meet you, too, Asda." he shakes her hand with a smile, all traces of any sadness gone.

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #6213 on: December 31, 2009, 02:34:14 PM »
<Those Andalites had clearly been corrupted in some way,> Efaen snaps at Corliss.

"Her Yeerk is....relatively important," Terenia says, looking uncomfortable, but powering through. She ignores Zoshonel's attempts to gain control. She has a tight grip over his mind for the moment, although it uncomfortably warm. "He...his name is Zorish 5-9-7...he is one of the leading tacticians aboard the ship. He is invaluable to the attack on Earth. I certainly have little value to Visser Three, beyond a form of entertainment. Although he is rather against my presence being leaked to the general public, Yeerk or otherwise, he never once suggested I receive a new host. I do not know why. I suspect he enjoys the fact that I must spend every day fighting Efaen."

<She isn't telling you the whole story,> Efaen says, glaring at Terenia/Zoshonel. <Why she really hasn't done anything to free her sister, and why her attempts to get her transferred have failed.>

"The rest isn't important," Terenia scowls, "and it certainly isn't your business to be telling anybody."
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #6214 on: December 31, 2009, 02:39:25 PM »
<Is it because of your brother's death?> Claxter asked. She had mentioned her brother before, and that may be the reason. <Unless...unless you like Torish in some way?>

Zoshonel decided to quit resisting for now.


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #6215 on: December 31, 2009, 02:51:56 PM »
Terenia pauses for a second and then bursts out laughing, "I know you've got your head in the clouds, Andalite. I saw the way you looked at Efaen, before I was even out of her, and I certainly know how she feels about you-"

<Terenia!> Efaen blushes.

"-but no, sorry buddy, that isn't how the world works. It doesn't revolve around hapless love. There's no Romeo and Juliet story here, sorry to dissapoint." Her laughter dies and her eyes grow dark, "And no, it has nothing to do with my brother."

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #6216 on: December 31, 2009, 02:55:24 PM »
"I was unaware there were any natural minotaurs," Morgan said. "See...what I look like is the result of genetic experimentation. Done by the Central Government. It's a long story."

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #6217 on: December 31, 2009, 03:35:45 PM »
<Oh, but love makes the world go round, don't you see?> Zoshonel said in a mockingly childlike voice. <Tra la la. Oh boy, I remember when I used to think like that. Then I grew up.>

<I don't get it then.> Claxter said. <You're obviously hiding something, and trying to keep it hidden doesn't make you look good at all. Though I suppose you don't care what others think of you as long as you are alive, and Tamora's body is kept safe. You keep saying things aren't so simple, and that we are wrong, but you do nothing to explain why we are wrong and justify it by saying it's none of our business. I'm really beginning to lose any concern I have for you and your sister.>

<I hope this doesn't start another fight between Parker and Claxter.>

<You know, I just had a thought.> Zoshonel said. <what if we saved your sister, and you used her as a body? That would solve the host problem, since you seem to only care for yourself and your sister. Anyone else would likely be involuntary, which people including myself dislike. Slavery being what it is, you know.>

(Darn, I thought that was it. I feel like I'm not getting any closer to figuring Terenia out.)
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #6218 on: December 31, 2009, 05:10:08 PM »
Corliss nods.  "There must be a more powerful reason for wanting to remain within Visser Three's grasp.  The Empire might be providing protection for her.  After all, Terenia, I wouldn't be surprised if you made quite a few Andalite enemies in the process of acquiring Efaen as your host."


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #6219 on: December 31, 2009, 05:48:40 PM »
"Really?" Mileak says, with obvious interest in his voice. "If you don't mind, I do have time. Also, if you're interested, after that, I'll tell you of the Minotaurs on my home world." He gestures towards a chair at your table, "May I?"

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #6220 on: December 31, 2009, 05:56:04 PM »
Gelia glances at the other newcomer, also greeting Morgan.  She holds out her hand to him as well.  "As you might have heard, my name is Gelia.  Nice to meet you, Mileak." she says, having heard his name.  Gelia also has excellent hearing. 

Glancing over at the huddled group of Andalites and whatnot, she decides that she would rather just stay here than break up their lovely conversation.  She nods at a different chair and says "May I as well?  I don't particularly have interest in breaking up that...lovely conversation over there."  She lays sarcasm on the lovely. 
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #6221 on: December 31, 2009, 06:59:27 PM »
((haha, it's ok Chad. This is basically her last big secret. For now, at least. :) She's quite a complicated character though, isn't she?))

"Protection," Terenia nods thoughtfully, "I suppose there is that. The Andalites do have a bounty on my head," she glances at Keshin as she says this, "Visser Three may be an oaf, but he also has power."

<Terenia is ashamed,> Efaen says curtly, <She has spent so long fighting for her sister, and there is no hope of her being successful. She failed with her brother. She failed at being a human, failed at being an Andalite. Now she is a Yeerk, and she has failed at that as well. She does not want to admit to her greatest failure.>

"Efaen, shut up you idiot. I'm not ashamed of anything!" Terenia scowls, spreading her wings threateningly.

<You lose your temper and you lose your host,> Efaen says, backing up a step. <And you certainly lose me.>

"You need me as much as I need you," Terenia spits furiously. Efaen turns to look at Claxter and Ossanlin.

<What Terenia is not telling you is the reason why attempting to save her sister will fail. The reason->

"Shut it."

<-why even if we were to rescue her, it would amount to nothing.>

"Efaen, don't." Terenia pleads. Efaen ignores her entirely, keeping her focus on the other two Andalites.

<Her sister, Tamara, is a collaborator, a servant of the Yeerk Empire who promotes their takeover of Earth and other planets. She is a true voluntary controller.>

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #6222 on: December 31, 2009, 07:24:00 PM »
"Ah," Corliss says, nodding.  "Well, I hardly think your sister being a voluntary Controller is your fault, Terenia.  How could it be?  It's her decision, regardless of the driving force behind it."  He looks over at Efaen, smirking.  "I'd remind you that my host Michael is also a 'true' voluntary Controller, if you want to use those terms, although he is fighting for his planet, rather than against it."

The door to the bar swings open and an fair skinned human woman with long, unkempt, frizzy brown hair strides quickly into the room, black boots squeaking wetly on the floor.  She looks left and right, as if expecting something to come flying at her, but continues walking toward the bar, gently rolling up the sleeves of her sliced-up black trench.  The woman has a cardboard box of cereal under her arm.  Underneath the jacket she's wearing a faded, oil-stained green shirt with a picture of the state of Wisconsin, which reads, "Nothing tips like a cow".  Her left arm has a gauze bandage wrapped around her elbow, and her lower right arm is almost totally bandaged up.

She stops near Corliss, glancing at her old friends, at Keshin, then at the two newcomers, and finally at the Andalite she remembers as Terenia.  She also notices a very uncharacteristicall y angry-looking Zoshonel, wings flared.

"Alright, I got your damn cereal," Myitt snaps, setting the box of Australian Coco Pops on the bar counter in front of her sibling.  "Why does your arm look like Swiss cheese?"

"It's fine, Myitt, don't worry about it," Corliss replies flatly.

"No, that's a Dracon wound.  Who shot you?" she presses.

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #6223 on: December 31, 2009, 08:42:51 PM »
"To shorten a long story," Morgan said, "the universe I come from...I'm from a system run by what's called the Central Government. If you find out more than you're supposed to know, you're branded a rebel and taken away. I was locked up for around 6 years. Before I was taken away, a bounty hunter for the CG shot and killed my wife. Government uses those taken as rebels or traitors and uses some of them as lab rats. I was one of them because I was fit and strong. Most likely to survive the process. I was injected with a serum and over the course of a year, I changed into what I am now. Asda helped me and the rest of what's my crew escape. Only job open to us now is smuggling, or pirating, whatever you want to call it."

Meanwhile, outside, The Vagabond had landed and Gaz was standing up from her chair.

"All ashore!" she said. "I'm almost glad to be back at this place. Let's go see what Morgan's been up to while we were away."

Gaz walked out and into the bar.

"Morgan!" she said. "You've been making friends, I see."

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #6224 on: December 31, 2009, 09:37:34 PM »
"Hello, there Gelia."


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