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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #5505 on: December 11, 2009, 09:01:26 PM »
In a blink of an eye, Parker rushed over and grabbed the "cop", pinned his arms behind his back with his left hand, and held his combat knife to his throat with his right hand. "Don't move, dumbass." He dragged the guy over towards Morgan and Asda, "How is she?"
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #5506 on: December 11, 2009, 09:02:23 PM »
(Oh my God, he got the doctor!)

Claxter rushed towards the man and put his blade against the intruder's throat. "Do not move." He said with menace. "Are any medical professionals nearby?" He asked of the room.


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #5507 on: December 11, 2009, 09:04:53 PM »
((Parker, you'll have to modify that so you give Gaz's dude a chance to deflect your attack.  Even though he's a bad dude.  Unless that's okay with Gaz...sorry.))

Mike starts and turns toward the scuffle, his ears ringing from the gun's loud report.  He pulls Corliss' tupperware container closer in almost a hug, pushing the glass of water he'd been drinking aside.  "Jesus!" he yelps, staring at Asda as she crumples to the ground.  


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #5508 on: December 11, 2009, 09:05:50 PM »
(I missed Parker's post while posting. Oops.)


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #5509 on: December 11, 2009, 09:07:56 PM »
Terenia also jerks at the sound of the noise, even though she had already been watching the scuffle. She is glad that she doesn't have to answer Mike's question. Instead, she turns towards the scene of the action, hovering on the outskirts, tail ****ed. She keeps her distance, seeing that Parker seems to be trying to get everything under control.

<It seems that you have made many unwise decisions here tonight,> Terenia tells the human blandly.

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #5510 on: December 11, 2009, 09:11:33 PM »
The man scowled, but was finally smart and didn't try anything.

Morgan carefully pulled aside the bottom of Asda's shirt and looked at the wound. "Someone hand me a cloth so I can put pressure on this!"

"It doesn't look good," he said grimly. "This needs to be taken care of as soon as possible. It looks like a stomach wound."

Morgan carefully reached a hand under Asda and felt her back. He sighed and shook his head.

"There's no exit hole," he said. "The bullet is still in there."

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #5511 on: December 11, 2009, 09:12:48 PM »
((Parker grabbed him after he had just been decked by Morgan, I figured he wouldn't be in any shape to resist. Though I'll change it if Gaz wants me too.))

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #5512 on: December 11, 2009, 09:13:33 PM »
(It's fine. You don't have to change anything.  ;D)

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #5513 on: December 11, 2009, 09:16:39 PM »
"Oh, God, mate, I mean...we've got painkillers in the ship...but the best I can do is...well, not that," says Mike, blanching at the sight of Asda's wound.  He looks around at the people in the bar.  "Isn't anyone in here a proper medic?"  

Besides 'er, poor lass, he thinks, looking down at Asda.

He grabs a dishtowel from the bartender, who glares at him, and he walks over to Morgan.  "What can I do?"  He glances back to make sure Corliss is still okay, sitting as he is between a number of friends and a number of enemies.



((Okay...sorry for being all policey guys, gah, thanks :D ))

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #5514 on: December 11, 2009, 09:17:19 PM »
((Thanks. :D No prob, Myitt, I understand.))

Parker starts to squeeze the "cop's" throat, not enough to choke him, but enough to make it hard to breath, and asks Morgan, "What do you want done with this guy?"
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #5515 on: December 11, 2009, 09:24:34 PM »
Morgan was putting pressure on Asda's wound in an attempt to control the bleeding. He was silent for a moment.

Asda, despite serving on a pirate ship, was one of the kindest beings he knew. Whether or not the shot was accidental, Morgan was past caring.

Asda moaned softly and opened her eyes weakly.

"Captain," she said quietly.

"Hush," Morgan said, "save your strength.

Suddenly Asda looked distressed. "Why...why did he..."

"Shh," Morgan said, "the bad man is being taken care of. You got a lot of friends here, darlin. They're lookin out for you."

"Didn't know your name was Odysseus, Captain," Asda managed to say before she passed out again.

Morgan took a deep, angry breath. In a voice that was emotionless, but still sent shivers down the spine said, "Do whatever you want with him."

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #5516 on: December 11, 2009, 09:28:54 PM »
"But what...what can we do with..."  Mike looks back and forth from the bar to the man who had shot Asda.  He gets a sudden, crazy idea, and quickly walks over to the tupperware container sitting on the counter.  He fishes Corliss out and walks over to the man.

"Maybe he knows how to pull a bullet out of a wound.  At least this way we'll get some bloody answers," Mike growls, holding Corliss up to the right ear of the man who shot Asda.  

((Rachel if you hate this idea I can totally change it  ;D ))


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #5517 on: December 11, 2009, 09:31:37 PM »
Parker looked to the cop and said, "you better pray she survives, 'cause otherwise I know a couple of Orks who'll love to meet you."

Mike approaches the "cop" and Parker puts his knife on the guy's neck so he twists his head to expose his ear.
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #5518 on: December 11, 2009, 09:32:46 PM »
(It's fine with me! How will this work? You'll write for Corliss and I can write what the guy is thinking?)

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #5519 on: December 11, 2009, 09:37:35 PM »
((Sure! :D ))

Corliss starts slithering into the man's ear.  The whole process takes a few minutes as the Yeerk worms his way through his ear canal and slowly starts to sink around his brain.  Mike watches worriedly, unsure if he's made the right decision.


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