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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8730 on: June 10, 2010, 04:31:39 AM »
((Wow, what a recollection Marie! Good job.

Parker is a SPARTAN-II. He stands 7' 6" and his armor is the green Mk. VII Hayabusa armor. He has a Katana crossing his back, and over the Katana, he has a Battle Rifle, a shotgun, and a .50 cal sniper rifle. On his hip, he has a hilt for an energy sword.

Thordon is basically human except for the second pair of arms underneath the usual pair. His second pair have scalpulas covering and protecting his kidneys. His hands are slightly odd, as they have a pattern on them that glow when he uses his mastery over energy/electricity. He's a pacifist, so he won't be involved in any fights. He stands to a full 6 feet. He looks to be a tanned Caucasian, moderate build, but his muscles are well defined and toned. He wears a simple black short-sleeved tee shirt and black jeans. He has light dirty blonde hair that is about 3 inches long. His eyes are a vibrant, bright blue; and, if you look carefully, his irises almost seem to have arcs of electricity travel around their circumference.


The Director is a Time Lord. He looks exactly like a human (Although technically Humans look exactly like a Time Lord, they were here first). He's 5' 9", short brown hair, and is wearing a black trenchcoat and black jeans.))


Parker stood over Fletcher, "I'm sorry. By these scans, if I carry him, I could cause him more injury. ..." After a few moments of silence, Thor's hologram disappeared, "Thor's detected a large ship landed nearby. I'm sorry, but we're not safe here."



After Trey brushed passed, The Director followed behind. He watched as the large ship landed and the troops poured out. "Oh, well that's not good. Alright, back inside for me." He turned about face and walked back in, heading to the bar, talking loudly as he goes, "No, no, not touching that one. 50 men with guns, not a good thing." He ends up sitting next to Thordon. After ordering his drink, he looks to Thordon. "Oh, you're awake."

He looks to Joanne and says, “You might want to keep your hand away from your gun. I don’t think the troops outside would like you pulling yours.” He takes a swig of his newly poured drink.


Thordon clarified to Joanne, “I was unaware of your status. I do know of your Yeerks, though I did not know you were of their ranks.” After The Director made mention of his awakening, Thordon turned to him, “I was not sleeping. I wa-“

The Director interrupted him, “Yeah, you were in a trance. Out of body experience. Projectin’ yerself out yer body and travellin’ the universe. I know.”

“Well, if you knew…”

“Why’d I say you awoke? ‘Cause it was easier than saying, ‘Oh, you’ve returned to your physical form from an astroprojection journey to other planets.’ See wot ah mean?”

Thordon sat quietly, nodding.
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8731 on: June 10, 2010, 05:01:36 AM »
(oh yeah, Paul, the character of mine that is outside is a StarCraft Marine with black painted armour that has a slight pearl tint, with "Black Angels" Written on the shoulder pads in bone white. underneath his armour he's a touch under 6 foot, has a military style black mohawk and some rough stubble growing from his chin)


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8732 on: June 10, 2010, 07:08:08 AM »
~~Wow, you guys can get chaotic. Keiko had screamed in the med bay and nobody reacted, talk about busily ignored. XD And Here are my characters Kit Optimus Prime.

Silver: Daughter of Morgan and Andromeda. She was born and looks human, but she is a Hologramer now. She can throw illusions to look like anyone or thing she wants as well as images around her. Right now she is in her true form, human looking.

Keiko: She was human, but she had been experimented on, so she will change her appearance. I'm going with Chad's idea of making her like a cat with ears tail and such. When she changes I'll give the description in the post.

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8733 on: June 10, 2010, 08:12:30 AM »
((Elayne is a 24-year-old 5'6"-tall human of average build with dark hair, blue eyes, and a medium complexion. She has a neutral American accent and is currently wearing black, somewhat baggy pants, black scuffed boots, a blue collared shirt that is smudged with engine grease and blood, and a belt that is arrayed with various tools and a Dracon. And that might make her the most normal person in the Bar... at least superficially. :P))

Elayne rested her elbows on the tabletop and leaned forward to properly hear and be heard by Mar over all the noise outside which never seemed to stop escalating. "Maybe so, but they had a lot to take care of," she shook her head, giving what he hoped passed for an encouraging smile. "Not only did they have to repair my timeline -- which it seems like they were successful in doing -- but they were doing something involving Terenia, as well. I didn't catch the full gist of it. I'm sure they're just busy. I'm sure she'll be back soon, and your friend Ossanlin with them." She twisted in her seat to look towards the door, but she could not see outside from her vantage point. That's probably for the best, she told herself.
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8734 on: June 10, 2010, 09:48:02 AM »
Asda walked back over to Cutter when he said his leg was going numb.

"Good," she said, "let's get started. You just let me know if there's any discomfort."

Asda double checked her scans to pinpoint the exact location of the bullet.

"Good," she commented, "it's not too deep. Still very near the surface."

Asda then set to work removing the bullet.

Back in the CG ship, Gaz couldn't believe what she was hearing. They couldn't move Fletcher? Is that what Parker was saying? That wasn't right! There had to be something they could do! Fletcher was Gaz's only living blood relative. At least, the only one that hadn't abandoned her when she had been deemed an outlaw and rebel to the Central Government.

Gaz shook her head in disbelief, it was becoming impossible to hold back the flood of emotional distraught. She had always believed she would be prepared for something like this....but who ever is?

"No," she managed to get out, "Don't...there just has to...I can't leave him!"

"Why are you yelling?" Fletcher managed to get out weakly.

Gaz looked down at him. "Fletch, you idiot, you're not allowed to die. You still owe me for stealing my ship."

Fletcher chuckled quietly before coughing, which looked like it pained him greatly.

"Never gonna let me forget that, are you?" he asked with a small smirk.

"Get out of here," Fletcher said. "If there's danger...don't need anything happening to you too."

"Fletch...." Gaz started to say something, but it would never be said. At that moment Fletcher smiled one last time before dying from his wounds.

Gaz was stunned into silence for a moment. After recovering from the silence she expressed her feelings the only way she could. Gaz let out an anguished cry.  :'(
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8735 on: June 10, 2010, 10:10:10 AM »
(Aww, poor Fletch. :()


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8736 on: June 10, 2010, 10:27:38 AM »
((You guys are amazing ^_^ And yeah, poor Fletch... I guess I won't be meeting him...))

The cloaked man walked up to Trey and Belzar at the door, and, catching a glimpse of what appeared to be a bar inside, muttered something barely intelligible about being there to drink as he slid past them to get inside.

***

Team 1 made their way cautiously towards the large, grounded craft, though they seemed a little unsure of what to do with themselves with all their weapons holstered. One of the humans noticed Paul standing there, and motioning to some of the Hork-Bajir in the group to watch his back, began walking slowly towards him, his hands in the air to clearly show that he had no intention of attacking this... whatever it was. The rest of the group continued to keep a sharp eye out around them, nervously staying close to potential cover.

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Team 2 began knocking on spaceship hulls. Each time, three or four others would fan out, focused on the door, fingering their now-holstered Dracon beams. At the same time, the large landing craft began scanning the area, attempting to get a look inside some of the landed craft. Two of the Hork-Bajir marched over to Temrash, making a point not to reach for their weapons. They weren't sure what the commander was so worried about, but they'd learned to trust his instincts.

"We're looking for a fugitive. A human. Have you seen any suspicious newcomers lately? Is there a commanding officer we could speak to?" Asked one of the black-and-crimson-banded Hork-Bajir, in flawless Gallard that made it sound like he'd gone to Princeton. The other was watching the area, being sure to keep Temrash in his peripheral vision.

***

Team 3 made for the bar, carefully watching each other's backs, though again, it was clear they were used to moving with weapons drawn. A few of them moved in what could almost be martial-arts stances, but most of them just trekked forward noisily, keeping a wary eye out around them. One of the humans bent to pick up a small, burnt piece of electronics near where the cloaked man had crouched, and raised his eyebrows at one of the Hork-Bajir watching him. He put his finger to his lips, and made some motions with his hands. Even though there wasn't any way for most of the team to see him, they all fell silent and began to fan out around the bar, fingers drifting towards their Dracon beams.

***

The commander walked towards the tiny craft. As he did so, the ****pit opened, and a creature climbed out unlike anything he'd seen before. As it continued to emerge from the craft, it seemed ridiculous that it had been crammed into a ship so small. It was nearly fifteen feet tall, and light brown or dark tan in color. It had an almost humanoid torso, with four spider-like legs. It had four long, thick arms, and coiled at it's waste were five of what almost looked to be coils of razor-wire, except that they  were part of its anatomy if one looked close enough. Its head was almost human-shaped at the base, but at the top it split into two lobes, giving the head a V-shaped appearance. On the outside of each lobe were three black compound eyes, looking in all directions. The lower portion of the creature's head, its pointy "chin," contained its mouth, which was ringed with razor-sharp teeth, and had two insect-like pincers at its sides. The commander sighed. What had it called itself? Zong?

At the same time, Thienal caught up to him, gasping out "welcome, commander!"

"Hello, Thienal. Hello, Ikakek. I believe this is the end of the line for our little fugitive friend," the commander said.

The large creature spoke in a hissing tone that made his Gallard hard to understand unless you were ready for it, "Look at all of this. Look at this motley collection of spacecraft. I bet I could collect a dozen bounties here."

The commander laughed shortly "No, you overgrown insect. We are after one thing here. If we can capture this fugitive, I can convince the Council to let me move the Empire out of the dark age its stuck in. If you screw this up for me, I will have your ugly head mounted on my wall. You can come collect bounties on your own time."

He then began receiving concise reports from the teams scattered about. A few of them were running into locals, and wanted direction. To each communication, he simply responded "proceed with caution," until one came in from the landing craft itself. Apparently the sensors had picked up what might be a cloaked ship.

"See if you can hail them. Keep the Bugs powered and ready."

Finally, the team that had moved towards the bar contacted him. One of the humans spoke softly, "commander, I believe we have him."

"I'm on my way," the commander said into his communicator. Sighing, he looked at Thienal and Ikakek. "You're with me, I guess."

The two creatures fell into step behind him as he walked purposefully towards the building.

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8737 on: June 10, 2010, 10:33:43 AM »
(Yeah. *sniff* It was a hard decision about Fletch. But things like that happen. Doesn't make it easy though. I've got ideas turning in my head, just have to decide if they would be too corny. lol)

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8738 on: June 10, 2010, 10:34:07 AM »
"I just came back recently from a trip, and haven't seen any new people." Temrash said. "There isn't really anyone in charge around here, unless you count the local bartender. He never speaks, though. May I ask what he's wanted for?"

Belzar noted the man walking in, but made no comment. He was more concerned with the multitude of controllers coming towards the bar and beginning what looked like a search. "This could get ugly. Now I really wish all my systems were operational."


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8739 on: June 10, 2010, 10:47:51 AM »
The Hork-Bajir speaking to Temrash shook his head. "I'm afraid that's classified." He glanced down at Temrash's twin Dracon beams. "I suggest you keep those holstered. We don't want trouble." The two Hork-Bajir walked away to join the rest of their team in searching the parked ships, putting in a call to Team 3 to make sure and question the bartender.

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8740 on: June 10, 2010, 11:27:00 AM »
Paarker stood over Gaz and Fletcher.  He turned his down down a hallway as he saw blips on his motion detector. He whipped his head baack around, "Gaz, I'm sorry, but now isn't the time to mourn his death. I have a mass of bodies on my motion sensor heading in our direction. Now with the trend of arrivals from this Yeerk and Andalite universe, it's safe to say they'll have Dracons. 10 plus draaacon beams will end us both. sure i could take a few out before my shields and armoe give out, but in this ship, I wouldn't stand a chance. I could take them out if i were in the open, but not here. We have to move."
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8741 on: June 10, 2010, 11:59:00 AM »
Efaen is preparing another scathing comment towards Corliss, but just then the communications link beeps. Shooting the Yeerk a warning glare she moves the short distance to the controls. It appears to be coming from an unidentified craft and she frowns, telling the computer to ignore the call. Just as she is about to turn away from the computer and refocus on her target she happens to glance outside through the view screen.

<By the Electorate....> she gasps, all too clearly positioned to see dozens of humans and Hork-Bajir emerge from clearly Yeerk craft. Despite herself her stomach flips in a combination of fear and excitement, <They finally came for her,> she says, glancing at the pool where Terenia is swimming helpless, <filthy vermin, they finally came.>

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Trey's eyes widen in shock as he sees the sheer number of aliens moving about outside. What seems to surprise him the most are the Hork-Bajir, moving with their blades being held as weapons rather than tools, with holstered Dracon Beams and with intelligence shining in their eyes. These are no Hork-Bajir from his universe.

Backing-pedaling so quickly that he almost falls over, Trey turns on his tail and runs back to where Elayne and Mar are sitting, almost running into the newcomer in his haste, and grabs Elayne's wrist, his face pale from the combination of fear and blood loss.

"Hork-Bajir..." he gasps, uncertain how to express that these Hork-Bajir were not the tree-loving, gentle creatures he had grown up knowing, "not....not good."

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8742 on: June 10, 2010, 12:03:54 PM »
"Calm down trey. Don't overexert yourself." Belzar said, trying to calm him.

Temrash gave a polite nod to the controller as they left him, and began walking back to where Asda and the others were. He hadn't received any reply from terenia's ship, so he guessed she didn't want to talk. Why did an army of emperials have to show up? He went inside Asda's ship to check on things, and noticed the girl from before was awake.

"Hey there. How are you feeling?"


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8743 on: June 10, 2010, 01:03:39 PM »
The blood drained from Elayne's face almost as quickly as it had from Trey's. Could it be the... what had he called it? The Nothlit Assimilation Team? Were they finally here to finish the attack they had begun on him?

"Come on, I'll protect you," she said in a low voice, lurching out of her chair and tugging him towards the back rooms, searching for a place to hide him. Trey's father could no longer protect him, and his very existence was due to her own cowardice; there was certainly no way she was going to let him die now.

Beyond the main dining room was a maze of doors, each a different size, some leading to closets and bathrooms, others... who knew? No use, she thought in frustration, growling. It all looked so suspicious, surely they'll search it all. "Maybe," she bit her lip, looking at Trey worriedly, "maybe we could get on my ship. Leave by a back door or something. I'm an awful pilot, but I could at least cloak it."
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #8744 on: June 10, 2010, 02:09:29 PM »
The cloaked man stopped for a moment upon entering the bar and glanced around. Most of the patronage appeared to be human. He shivered. With as long as he'd spent among them, he still couldn't help but feel that humans were never meant to group together like this. It made him uneasy. The young man who'd been at the door stumbled backward, almost running into him, and the presence of the Yeerk troops outside seemed to be exciting a lot of activity. He shook his head to attempt to clear it, and looked around. He didn't see anything that looked like it could be an entrance to a basement. Glancing over his shoulder, he saw the commander walking over, followed by the Zong and that awful Kindler half-blood. Through the windows, he caught glimpses of Hork-Bajir with red-and-crimson armbands, fanning out and apparently attempting to surround the building.

Cursing under his breath, he snatched an empty mug from the bartender, apologizing quietly as he did so. The bartender seemed unperturbed, and after a second simply reached for another empty, dry mug and began drying that as well. The cloaked man made for the corner of the bar, drawing his hood tight around his face as he did so. He slid into the empty booth farthest from the door, setting the mug in front of him and trying to make it look as though he'd been there a while. His fingers caressed his pistol under his cloak.

***

The commander received a call from Yeerk landing craft as he walked towards the door.

"The cloaked ship is not answering our calls. There may be no one aboard."

He sighed. This crew was still so green. He had to remember to teach them to think for themselves.

"Are you sure there's something there?"

"No, commander."

"Paint the area with a low-power Dracon beam. We don't want to harm the locals and risk starting a firefight, but that might be enough to disrupt the cloak and confirm your theory. Now, please, don't bother me unless you have something important."

"Yes, commander."
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