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Re: RAF The Movie: Rise of the Yeerks
« Reply #15 on: June 15, 2008, 10:50:58 PM »
i love it! just a question, is it on fanfiction.net?
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Re: RAF The Movie: Rise of the Yeerks
« Reply #16 on: June 26, 2008, 09:06:19 PM »
May I humbly request that I be added somehow? :) ;)
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Re: RAF The Movie: Rise of the Yeerks
« Reply #17 on: June 27, 2008, 08:49:20 PM »
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Re: RAF The Movie: Rise of the Yeerks
« Reply #18 on: July 01, 2008, 09:41:54 PM »
i'm saying this now, i love it, and i can't wait for more!

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Re: RAF The Movie: Rise of the Yeerks
« Reply #19 on: July 10, 2008, 01:59:39 PM »
WRITE MORE!!!!

Also, if you don't mind, I'm going to write a sort of prequel to this piece, involving my first meeting with other RAFians, in person.

Of course, I'm going to write it either way, but I prefer that you don't mind. ;)
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Re: RAF The Movie: Rise of the Yeerks
« Reply #20 on: July 12, 2008, 04:25:03 PM »
Grrr...where IS Crazy ???
Crazy must write >:(

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Re: RAF The Movie: Rise of the Yeerks
« Reply #21 on: July 13, 2008, 06:57:47 PM »
D's busy writing a full novel. Starting tomorrow I'm going to start taking over.

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Re: RAF The Movie: Rise of the Yeerks
« Reply #22 on: July 13, 2008, 07:00:03 PM »
Hulk happy :)
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Re: RAF The Movie: Rise of the Yeerks
« Reply #23 on: July 13, 2008, 07:05:12 PM »
D's busy writing a full novel. Starting tomorrow I'm going to start taking over.

Cool, hope everything goes well with the novel!
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Re: RAF The Movie: Rise of the Yeerks
« Reply #24 on: July 15, 2008, 07:03:07 PM »
D's busy writing a full novel. Starting tomorrow I'm going to start taking over.
So does this mean he's not writing in the RP anymore either?
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Re: RAF The Movie: Rise of the Yeerks
« Reply #25 on: July 15, 2008, 07:30:23 PM »
D's busy writing a full novel. Starting tomorrow I'm going to start taking over.
So does this mean he's not writing in the RP anymore either?

That's a good point. Please let me know if he's dropping out of the RP.
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Re: RAF The Movie: Rise of the Yeerks
« Reply #26 on: July 16, 2008, 10:49:15 AM »
So, it's the 16th...what's the deal?
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Re: RAF The Movie: Rise of the Yeerks
« Reply #27 on: July 16, 2008, 02:01:26 PM »
It's been a tough couple days for me, certain things started yesturday and I'm going to need some time.

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Re: RAF The Movie: Rise of the Yeerks
« Reply #28 on: July 21, 2008, 02:25:14 PM »
(Yeah, I'm back. Here goes nothing.)

Chapter two

Jax

Everything went white. All around me I could hear yelling and fighting and gunshots.

"Claire, get Jax!" I heard Tyler yell. Suddenly I felt someone grab me, followed the the sensation of being lifted.

"What the f-"

"Don't worry, I'll  get outta here." I heard a voice say, a female Australian voice.

"Claire? What's going on, I can't see a thing."

"I'm really not sure. For now just hold on, you're kinda heavy and it takes a lot of focus to keep us in the air." That's when I realized how hot it was. Oh my God, Claire was flying! I wrapped my arms around her neck and held on for dear life.

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"Alright, I want an explanation, and I want it now!" I yelled at Tyler.

My vision had returned and Claire, Tyler, Estelore, and myself were all standing in an abandoned church. One filled with weapons and computer equipment.

"I'm not the one you should be asking." Tyler said, nodding towards Estelore. I turned to her and looked directly into her eyes, those strange eyes that shouldn't be.

"I must admit that this has all gone a bit wrong." She said with a sigh. "This experiment was meant to give this planet some protection from... Well that's a conversation for a later time." She trailed off.

"What experiment?"

"I attempted to create a Quoltec loop." She said.

"A what?" Claire said.

"It is a way to bring forth certain traits in individuals, traits that they imagine themselves having. Unfortunately, because of what it is, it can also bring forth some... undesirable conseqences."

"You mean to tell me you created something that brings fictional things to life?" I half-yelled.

"I suppose that would be a way of putting it I suppose." Estelore said calmly.

"So that's how I got my super powers." Claire commented.

"Why is Claire the only one with-" I was cut off when Tyler shifted his form right in front of me. I nearly had a heart attack. Instinctively I put my hands on my chest.

"As you can tell, it's not just Claire." He said. But I wasn't listening, I wa a bit focused on my heatbeat, or rather heatbeats. I looked up a Estelore.

"I'm not..." I said. She shrugged.

"The loop effects different people differently. It made you a Time Lord. But there's more. The reason Teslar wanted you was because the loop has centered itself on you."

"What?!"

"It's possible that this may bring about somethings from your mind."

"Oh my God! We have to get Jayne!" I said.

"Your friend is a controller, Jax. Visser 2's host at that." Tyler said.

"You don't understand. If things from my mind are coming true, then Jayne is going to become a center for supernatural energy. If Teslar figures out how to control it... Well it's going to be very bad for everyone."
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Re: RAF The Movie: Rise of the Yeerks
« Reply #29 on: July 21, 2008, 02:53:27 PM »
NICE!!!  :happy30: :hyper: :happy34: :headbang:
Got 'me' to a T!!
Lovely writing. Keep it up, please!
The universe is, instant by instant, re-created anew. There is, in truth, no Past, only a memory of the Past. Blink your eyes, and the world you see next did not exist when you closed them. The only appropriate state of the mind is surprise. The only appropriate state of the heart is joy. The sky you see now, you have never seen before. The perfect moment is now. Be glad of it.

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