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Animorphs: The Offspring
« on: December 02, 2008, 09:40:39 PM »
***This story is part of a competition between Nohensen and I to see who can write the better story with the premise being Tobias mating with another hawk.  After both stories are completed a new poll will be made giving everybody the chance to vote for their favorite and the story with the most votes wins.  If you would like to participate in this competition with a story of your own please begin it quickly and make it obvious that you want to be part of this competition.***

No, this story has nothing to do with The Animorph meeting the band Offspring, this story is about what happens when a female hawk enters Tobias' life and he loses control over his hawk body. What will Rachel say when she finds out?

I kinda liked hosting my fic just on ff.net because it makes the topic so much easier to go through without having to go past huge blocks of text.  So, unless someone has some major objections I'll keep doing it that way.  My newest story can be found at the following link.

Story link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4692658/1/

And don't worry, this one is rated T not M.  I mean, how many people really want to read an erotic hawk on hawk scene anyway?

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I really need a break...
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Re: Animorphs: The Offspring
« Reply #1 on: December 02, 2008, 10:43:32 PM »
With the way this first part is dragged out, it's no wonder you felt my first part was rushed. I'm just picking, though.
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Re: Animorphs: The Offspring
« Reply #2 on: December 03, 2008, 08:46:18 AM »
Yeah, I have a habit of dragging stuff out and writing much more than I want to...
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Re: Animorphs: The Offspring
« Reply #3 on: December 04, 2008, 06:33:08 PM »
Quote from: musicman88 on December 02, 2008, 09:40:39 PM
I mean, how many people really want to read an erotic hawk on hawk scene anyway?

I guarantee there is someone somewhere on the internet who will be disappointed you didn't include any hawk eroticism.  Haha.

Anyway, sounds good so far.  The introduction is really long, but I guess that opening scene will have some kind of significance later on.
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Re: Animorphs: The Offspring
« Reply #4 on: December 08, 2008, 09:31:25 PM »
Alright, new chapter is up!  Time to finally get going with the actual story!
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Re: Animorphs: The Offspring
« Reply #5 on: December 09, 2008, 02:09:48 AM »
Nice.  I'm curious, how much research did you do for this story?  It sounds fairly realistic in terms of hawk behavior, but then I really have no idea.

Oh, but this threw me for a loop:

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Um… Rachel? I called out to the female hawk just to make sure it really wasn’t one of the other Animorphs playing some kind of trick on me. Ax? Anybody?

The hawk quickly looked around in a vain attempt to locate where the noise was coming from, but she quickly gave up and focused her attention back on me. I didn’t know for sure, but she seemed like a genuine hawk to me just by the way she flew and reacted to my thought-speak.

Can non-sentient creatures hear thought-speak?  I don't remember if it ever stated in the books exactly if they could or not.[/spoiler]
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Re: Animorphs: The Offspring
« Reply #6 on: December 09, 2008, 11:07:09 AM »
In my experiences with fanfics I've picked up quite a bit of info, but later on in the story I'm going to have to do some research.

I would think that non-sentient creatures could hear thought-speak, although they wouldn't really understand what it was.
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Re: Animorphs: The Offspring
« Reply #7 on: December 09, 2008, 08:50:03 PM »
I'm sure nonsentients can hear thoughtspeech as well as spoken speech.

I need to get my next chapter up. I've been busy, but I will finish this one!
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Re: Animorphs: The Offspring
« Reply #8 on: December 10, 2008, 09:39:47 AM »
Don't worry, I still have a bit to write out with mine.  You probably don't need to hurry.
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Re: Animorphs: The Offspring
« Reply #9 on: December 12, 2008, 11:03:10 PM »
New chapter is up.  It's mating time for Tobias!
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Re: Animorphs: The Offspring
« Reply #10 on: December 21, 2008, 05:51:22 PM »
New chapter up again.  Sorry it took so long for such a relatively short chapter, but blame finals week.  Quantum Physics and Differential Equations don't study for themselves!

By my count I only have 3 chapters left.  The next one will be kinda short, but then the last two will probably end up being somewhat long and I might split the last one up if it gets too long.
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Re: Animorphs: The Offspring
« Reply #11 on: December 22, 2008, 09:43:17 PM »
Alright, next (short) chapter is up.  All that remains is Tobias telling Rachel about everything and then whatever happens afterwards.
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Re: Animorphs: The Offspring
« Reply #12 on: January 01, 2009, 12:04:34 AM »
Happy New Year!  And as my present to you I have a new chapter up!  How will Rachel react when Tobias finally tells her the news?  Read to find out!  I anticipate that this is my second to last chapter, so expect just one more until the story is over.
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Re: Animorphs: The Offspring
« Reply #13 on: January 01, 2009, 12:19:31 AM »
Well, that's not like how my chapter went.

I need to get work on my own thing, actually. I put in a quick chapter before Christmas, and haven't done anything after that.
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Re: Animorphs: The Offspring
« Reply #14 on: January 01, 2009, 10:33:18 AM »
Yeah, I've been a bit lazy as well.  I have to do some research for my last chapter so that should give you some time to catch up.
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