Mythica's Poetry <3

[HiImshort]

Wow. I wish i could write poetry like this. Nice work yet again.

[Midnight_Huntress]

Aww thanks.....and not all of my poetry is good....eesh when I was younger it sucked...

[Darth Revan]

That last one was cool, It sounds even better when read to the music of Metallica's "Sad but true".

The Horned One totally sounds like The Devil. Even though it wasn't meant to be, it'd be cool if it were. Though the character you based your poem on may have been based on The Devil. So who knows. Six degrees and all that.

[Midnight_Huntress]

Thanks love. Yeah I was thinking....idk I guess story wise and I kept going. I was on microsoft word and at a 12 point font I had almost 2 full pages and had to make myself stop...

[Darth Revan]

Yeah, there's a point near the end where you can tell the phrases got away from you.

[Midnight_Huntress]

^///^ what can I say? I like to write. Lol
Post Merged: October 15, 2010, 12:45:46 AMWinds blow softly
Summer Breeze
Crisp clean air
Within the trees
Moonlight glows
Upon my home
I know now
I'm not alone
She cares for me
Loves like no other
Some would say
She was my mother
in a way
This is true
With the darkened sky
Of Purple and Blue
She is my watcher
Soft yet Strong
Keeping my heart
And my life strong
I will return
Upon the moonlight
And soon I, too
Will become like the night.

[Darth Revan]

That's cool. Odd, but cool visuals.

[Midnight_Huntress]

Thanks love. Since autumn is here I get more colorful. Gunna paint a fall scene somwtime as soon as I get canvas.
Post Merged: November 04, 2010, 01:11:37 PMI would never do it, I'm not you...
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I would never tell my only daughter that I could not wait until her graduation and 18th birthday to kick her out of the house.
I would never smack and tell my own son that he can't do anything because he is too stupid to do so.
I would never go around saying "I hate kids" in a sing song voice.
I would never do it, I'm not you.

I would never go around when my family said "I love you," and give the response "I love ME, too."
I would never hurt someone and then tell them to suck it up.
I would never claim that I am always right and never wrong.
I would never do it, I'm not you.

I would never blame my spouse on things that may be wrong with my children.
I would never get on to someone and say we had plans to do something fun together then decide not to do it just to make them feel worse about getting into trouble and call it punishment.
I would never leave my son outside at 11:00 at night, locked out of the house, for my spouse to let back in after I have gone to bed.

I would never do it.

Thank Goddess, I'm not you.

 
 
((Got into a fight with dad again....))
Post Merged: November 04, 2010, 01:16:06 PMSkin like ice
Voice like a winter song
Eyes that pierce the Darknees
Colors vivid and dark
Teeth sharp and long
Wit is cunning
Incredibly strong and fast
Beautiful beyond compare
Willing to be there
A thirst like no other
She is a woman of the Night
Love her like no other.
Post Merged: January 26, 2011, 05:56:02 PMAck!!!!!!!!!!!!
Its been too long since I had a decent poem!
Post Merged: March 09, 2011, 03:24:59 AMWhere have my poems gone? Its been too long.....

[RAFrukh]

Late post: Very nice work! I'm not really good with rhymes. The only thing I've ever written was an Our House parody about Sloppy Joes. XD. I'm more of a novelist myself, although I've never finished one in my life.

But again, great job! Hope you get inspired soon again!

[Midnight_Huntress]

Thank you. I was starting to think this forum was doomed to dust on time. I'll have another eventually. I just need the right dream is all. ^_^


Colors bright against the green
And so lives another Spring
Warm summer air with its gentle song
And, oh, how the days are long
I wander off through the trees
Are you there? Do you see me?
Gold with brown greens and blues
Eyes with shifting fusing hues
Voice that giggles laughs and plays
Heart that is big in everyway
Dancing running singing out
How the spring and summer make me shout
Share my wonders speak to me
Tell me what your eyes now see
Feel the sun hear the song
Know with me it will last long

[RAFrukh]

Very nice!

Would've replied earlier, but my email isn't notifying me anymore... 

[Midnight_Huntress]

Sorry about the e-mail thing.

I night be starting to get my flow back again, but I'm not gunna push it incase I lose it again.

[RAFrukh]

Take your time, it's worth the wait. 

[Midnight_Huntress]

Thanks. This next one I don't remember writing at all but its in my notebook in my hand writing.


Broken spirit
Angel's wing
Lost love
Painful sting
Searching soul
Wandering part
Beating drum
Wounded heart
Reconnection
Forever vow
Needed push
Starting now
Dearest friend
Hurting past
Needed love
Forever last

Heart pounding
Stomach tight
Eyes bright
Beasting sight
Soothing wind
Angel's song
Feeling wild
Lasting long
Lost and found
Def and blind
Promise made
Not left behind

[RAFrukh]

Very nice!