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#55: The Following
« on: July 24, 2014, 01:41:28 AM »
Still very much a WIP, so title and content are subject to change at my every slightest whim.  Let me know if anything seems off, dialogue/character-wise.  The beginning infodump is kinda cursory because I'm still not sure whether I even want to include it or not.

EDIT: I'm removing the chapters from here and linking to the Google Doc so that y'all can read it the way I wrote it.  To find chapters, just ctrl+F/cmd+F the word "chapter" followed by whatever number you're looking for.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DCgGxwEBcg2kpNtt68smJUhLCibioKp18SBh7ulk2u8/edit?usp=sharing

EDIT 2: Adding a PDF version.  Download below.

EDIT 3: FINISHED!  Or at least, the first draft is in a fully continuous state as of now. 

YAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYY

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Re: #55: The Following
« Reply #1 on: July 24, 2014, 08:30:30 AM »
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Re: #55: The Following
« Reply #2 on: July 24, 2014, 08:58:19 AM »
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Re: #55: The Following
« Reply #3 on: July 24, 2014, 09:14:48 AM »
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Re: #55: The Following
« Reply #4 on: July 24, 2014, 01:56:23 PM »
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Re: #55: The Following
« Reply #5 on: July 25, 2014, 03:26:45 PM »
I....like it!  :thumbsup:
Yet seeing your post made me think, "omg, I've never thought of that, you are an evil genius".

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Re: #55: The Following
« Reply #6 on: July 26, 2014, 12:06:45 PM »
I....like it!  :thumbsup:

You may like the next chapter somewhat less, once I get it edited and posted.  Things get bad.   :P
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Re: #55: The Following
« Reply #7 on: July 28, 2014, 03:11:11 PM »
CHAPTER 6 (Added)

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Re: #55: The Following
« Reply #8 on: July 29, 2014, 10:57:28 AM »
CHAPTER 7 (Added)

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Re: #55: The Following
« Reply #9 on: September 30, 2014, 12:11:04 AM »
Loving this! Can't wait for more! :)

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Re: #55: The Following
« Reply #10 on: September 30, 2014, 01:33:17 PM »
Thanks!   :D

I'm a tiny bit stalled at the moment, because dream-like sequences are tricky to get right.   Should be smooth(er) sailing after that.
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Re: #55: The Following
« Reply #11 on: October 30, 2014, 08:20:33 AM »
Awesome, can't wait for more!

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Re: #55: The Following
« Reply #12 on: November 18, 2014, 09:25:39 PM »
((Gah.  I have a hard time writing Marco.  Still not happy with this chapter, but whatever.  This is first draft, and I just want to get it out.))

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« Reply #13 on: December 05, 2014, 01:17:13 PM »
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Re: #55: The Following
« Reply #14 on: December 15, 2014, 01:56:33 AM »
I'm not entirely sure what's happening, but I like it! :D

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