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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #645 on: May 27, 2013, 06:48:56 PM »
"I agree to that. Not all of our people realize that you are better than the Empire." Claxter said. Exactly how much better was arguable, he thought, glancing at Efaen and thinking of Terenia. "The Andalites are not unanimous in its decisions, any more than Yeerks are."

"It is good that you are friends with Efaen. She needs help keeping her spirits up. I am not sure if I thanked you for it yet, but I really appreciate you helping her get aboard the ship during the rescue. She means a lot to me."
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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #646 on: May 28, 2013, 04:20:53 PM »
"I don't know," Keslin says, moving closer to Tess, reaching up to gently touch the child, though he pulls away quickly, nervously. "We'll think of something, though. We need to find the other survivors. There have to be some." He smiles faintly at her. "I guess this means I don't get that vacation I was hoping for."



Efaen is silent during the initial exchange, although her shoulders stiffen a little when Claxter mentions that she means a lot to him. "It is rude to talk about someone as if they are not within hearing range," she says flatly, raising her eyebrows.

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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #647 on: May 28, 2013, 04:42:43 PM »
"I'm not excluding you, Efaen. I'm just conversing with Illim and Daniel." Claxter said with a smile. "What would you say to doing something today to take your mind off things?" His initial thought was maybe a round of drift ball, but he thought asking her to play an Andalite game may put her off. He wasn't sure what kind of things Humans liked to do, though. "I just need some ideas, and we could make it happen."
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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #648 on: May 29, 2013, 06:26:33 PM »
"People are dead," Efaen responds flatly. "And more people are going to die, myself included. I should be preparing for the worst, not distracting myself from it." She tilts her head a little. "Shouldn't a warrior such as yourself, on a ship that is without a significant number of its crew, have far more pressing matters to attend to anyhow?"

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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #649 on: May 29, 2013, 06:39:22 PM »
"I haven't been called to begin my shift yet. If you want to gather information regarding the surgery, we can look into that. You shouldn't really think of it as you dying. It's just a complicated surgery attempt that carries a large risk, but is possible to live through. We can find out who is going to perfom the procedure, and research any means of raising the success chance. Get up, and let's get the day started productively."
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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #650 on: May 30, 2013, 09:39:55 PM »
Illim raises his eyebrows, looking rather sharply at Efaen. "What's all this?" he asks. "You sound certain you're dying. Not sure I've ever expected that level of pessimism from you, yeah?" He gives an encouraging smile, although his forehead is wrinkled in concern.



"Unless your idea of vacation is a Dome Ship... I guess not," Tess sighs and wipes a few residual tears, holding her child--James--close. Her eyes fall on the second child back in the makeshift crib, and she shakes her head. "We... we should name him too. It's not right to bury him without a name. We... we loved him just as much." A few tears roll down her cheeks at her words, and she squeezes her eyes tight shut. "Oh Chris..." Her voice breaks.
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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #651 on: May 30, 2013, 09:47:48 PM »
Claxter hadn't given Illim the details about why Efaen felt she would die, and wasn't sure if she would be ok with him spilling everything. Especially since she already mentioned she didn't like him talking about her when she was right there. Not that Illim was asking him about it anyway. Hopefully she wouldn't be angry about what he already said in front of Illim and Daniel.
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« Reply #652 on: May 31, 2013, 06:18:48 PM »
Keslin slips out of control, and Chris immediately slides onto the force field bed, ignoring the strange sensation of floating in thin air. He sits beside Tess, gathering her into an awkward sideways hug, careful not to jostle James too much. "Of course he needs a name," he murmurs of the other child. "And a proper ceremony." He kisses the top of Tess' head, working hard to keep himself from breaking down again.

<<Chris...>> Keslin murmurs, regretfully.

He sighs outwardly. <<I know.>>

"Tess, Kes needs to talk with Ossanlin, so that we can figure out how...how to proceed," he says with a shaky smile. "We're still in a dangerous situation here, and I...Kes and I..." He trails off, feeling like complete dirt for having to turn back to his role as a leader during a time like this. He has never in his life wanted to lead less. Unfortunately, his people have never needed him more.

<<We will not be gone long,>> Keslin promises.



Efaen shrugs her shoulders, dropping her attention back to the grass. "It isn't pessimism, it's realism. In order to deactivate the tracker that Ossanlin inserted in my bloodstream I have to die. If I can be tracked, that puts this entire ship in danger."

She says it simply, succinctly, without any evident emotion. The corners of her eyes tighten imperceptibly, though, and her lips thin. "Ossanlin says he can revive me," she adds, a little more quietly. It is clear from her tone that she does not believe his promise.

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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #653 on: May 31, 2013, 09:09:29 PM »
"That's the hope you have to cling to, then. You're a good person, and you deserve some happiness. One bad thing doesn't make you a bad person, as long as you don't do it again. Feeling regretful and striving to do better is the mark of a good person, after all."

Claxter reached down a muscular arm to pull her up. "Take my hand, and let's start looking into this. We won't improve your odds sitting on the grass. How long have you been in morph, anyway? It may be time to demorph. Given Terenia's death threats towards you, it may be safer to stay an Andalite. Stalk eyes and a tailblade would surely make her hesitate."
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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #654 on: June 02, 2013, 02:41:48 PM »
Keshin's search does not go well. He wanders the Dome with an aimless eye for a little while, but finds nothing but Claxter and the strange person called Efaen. Efaen....all that he knew for certain about her was that she had caused a great deal of trouble for the rebellion. And even that was only on the grapevine. <I don't want to interrupt their conversation, but we're going to need to work out where the food is now.>

<Yep, just ask.>

Keshin wanders closer to Claxter and Efaen, hearing eerie strings of an intimate conversation. Claxter appears to be giving some kind of counsel to the girl, who looks afraid and frustrated. The quiet kindness of the incident makes an emotion squirm painfully in Keshin's chest. How many lives has he passed but never entered? How many opportunities have the turelek pair lost, in their quest for life? He vaguely remembered pushing Myitt's offers to him at a place in the rebellion away, and a part of him regretted it.

<What's wrong, Kess?>

<....nothing. Just a few stray memories.>

"Claxter," says Keshin, getting his attention. "Do you know where the protein supplements are? Ossanlin has limited us to this Dome and our quarters, and we can't eat the grass like you can. We're sorry for interrupting, but...well, you've been an enormous help to everyone so far. Including us." 

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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #655 on: June 02, 2013, 02:47:53 PM »
"You know, I didn't pay much mind to where they took the food." Claxter said. He grabbed a communicator out of his belt, and called Ossanlin. <Prince Ossanlin, this is Claxter. Can you remind me where the protien supplements for the Humans went? My thoughts were elsewhere when we got here.>


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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #656 on: June 02, 2013, 05:14:32 PM »
Ossanlin's communicator chirps to him in private thought-speech.  He keeps a stalk-eye on Enorryma...she'd remained stoic for a good deal of time after his most recent comments.  Certainly she must be going through some difficult moral dilemmas.  He'd asked a lot of her, after all...more than most, considering her well-set preconceptions.

Ossanlin commands the communicator's channel open and listens to Claxter's message, glancing around the dome.  <<Myitt has charge of the nutritional supplements, both human and Yeerk.  They are stored inside the quarters which I assigned to herself and Illim.>>
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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #657 on: June 02, 2013, 05:41:19 PM »
<<Thank you, my Prince.>>

"He said it's in Myitt's room. I suppose I could talk to her about it if you would rather not do it yourself." Given that Terenia had been with Myitt and Illim, he considered demorphing before approaching near her. However, he was afraid that might put Efaen off. He still had his shredder, of course. If she tried anything, he could blast her and have her thrown in a holding cell.


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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #658 on: June 02, 2013, 05:48:21 PM »
~ STORY NARRATION~


Back at the Corvus Facility, a sleek craft which appeared to be made for speed touched down in the main hangar.  The craft had weapons and technology unlike anything ever seen by most Andalites.  Its black hull seemed ominous, but the color of its skin did nothing to rival the color of the soul within.



Iksilon sighed as his transport touched down at the Corvus facility.  Of course he’d gotten word mere hours after the facility had been raided.  Odd, that.  The raid, not the fact that he’d received word of it so quickly.  Of course, the Corvus facility was one of Sector Seven’s more open operations, or at least one of the better-known ones.  That didn’t change the fact that it was supposed to be a secret from nearly everyone.

That oaf, Kyran.  How could he screw up one of the easiest assignments in S.S.?  This was the last straw…he’d be dealt with, and Iksilon had half a mind to take care of the idiot himself.

He descended from his transport behind his escort of personal guards…some of his most-trusted confidants.  Of course he wouldn’t trust them with his life…he wouldn’t trust that to anyone but himself, but they had shown remarkable loyalty in the past.  Kyran wasn’t even there to greet him.  The fool was truly ignorant.

Two guards saluted as Iksilon walked past into the dome proper.  Most of his fellow male Andalites looked at him with at least mild disdain.  Iksilon was small for a male, in fact, he was often mistaken for a petite female from a distance.  That didn’t bother him.  Oh it used to, back when he was younger.  Most of the males were much larger and more physically imposing in the Academy, but Iksilon thanked fate for that now.  It had trained him to use his mind instead of his body to achieve his goals.  Why fight, when you could manipulate someone else to do it for you, or better yet, manipulate your enemy into doing what you wanted without any fighting at all?  And now…now he was perhaps the most powerful Andalite alive.

So many Andalites were blinded by the propaganda, they were easy to manipulate, and even easier to predict.  Iksilon’s predecessor had been responsible for the inception of the anti-Yeerk propaganda campaign…it had been the saving grace of that particular being’s career.  Iksilon admitted to himself that the propaganda had been a wonderful idea.  That hadn’t stopped Iksilon’s predecessor from experiencing an unfortunate accident at the shipyards, but Iksilon had actually felt something akin to regret at ending the male’s life.

He trotted up the path to the main facility, his four guards flanking his rear on either side, and stepped into the large central foyer.  The facility looked benign, as well it should.  What better way to hide secrets than by disguising them with simple facades?  He trotted to the central elevator, a few security staff passing by him on their way to various duties.  He smiled.  It wasn’t pretty.  They all underestimated him, to a person.  That was one of his greatest advantages in life.  Simple facades.

He and his body-guards stepped onto the central lift and descended to the first basement level.  They stepped into the hallway and crossed, entering the central control room for the facility with its large holographic displays.  There was Kyran, standing near the front.  His main eyes darted up at the sound of the door, and he frowned at Iksilon, turning his attention back to the two individuals he was talking to.  Iksilon knew Kyran’s type.  Large, imposing, using their size and musculature to attempt intimidation.  The young male to which he was speaking looked somewhat flustered.  A good actor, Nirdran was.  He’d bristled at being stationed on Corvus, and Iksilon understood his frustrations, but Nirdran was and always had been much more competent than Kyran.  He would be the one to inherit control of the facility.

Iksilon and his guards trotted up to Kyran and Nirdran.  Iksilon stretched and just as Kyran turned his main eyes on him, Iksilon threw all of his weight into a backhand to Kyran’s cheek.  The impact left his left hand stinging.  Kyran’s eyes widened in shock, and then flared in outrage…certainly not from any sort of pain that Iksilon might’ve been able to inflict, but from pure anger at the backhand’s audacity.  Iksilon’s guards merely raised their weapons, and Kyran’s posture relaxed a bit, though his flaring breathing slits betrayed his anger.  Nirdran merely watched on, now impassive.

<You’re a fool Kyran.  An idiot.  How did you ever earn the rank of War Prince?>  He stared at Kyran’s face, utterly calm.  <Don’t bother answering, it was a rhetorical question.>

Some of those in the facility looked on, stunned.  Others merely glanced at the confrontation and went on about their business.  In the military, Iksilon’s rank was merely Prince Lieutenant, but those in Sector Seven knew that Iksilon truly outranked Kyran, though even those didn’t know by how much.

<<The Alpha-Lord will hear of this…your death will->>

<<Will he, Kyran?  Will he?  I would be more concerned about my own standing with the Alpha-Lord were I you.>>  Iksilon’s smile made Kyran take a step back.  <<I happen to know the Alpha-Lord personally, Kyran…and he is very, very displeased with your performance.>>

<<My performance?!  I have done nothing but->>

<Nothing, Kyran?>  Iksilon changed to open thought-speech so the rest of the operations room could hear.  <You have all but ruined my facility.>

<I…>

<You are responsible for what happened here, just as much as those who perpetrated this attack.>

Iksilon could see the rage growing hotter in Kyran’s eyes.  So much rage…no one embroiled by that much emotion should ever be put in a position of power.  <I assure you, Prince Lieutenant, that we are doing everything we can to ascertain what happened.>  He couldn’t even keep the edge of anger from intruding upon his tone.  What a joke of a Prince.

<And how did they get in?>  Iksilon kept his main eyes glued on Kyran…intense, yet calm.

<We…believe that it was the service pad.>  Kyran shifted his eyes back and forth.

<<It was the service entrance, Lord Commander.>>  Nirdran never indicated that he was speaking at all, though his words were directed at Iksilon alone.  Indeed, a good actor.

<The service entrance is to be locked down whenever it is not in use, Kyran.>

<They gained entry and proceeded to the service level.  There were multiple groups…three groups of at least six apiece.>  Kyran’s gaze grew sure again.  He was gaining confidence as he went.

<<There were three groups, Lord Commander…but I would be surprised if any one of the groups consisted of more than two or three members.>>  Nirdran appeared to be looking down at the floor.  Yes, there was a lot of potential in that one.

<All of the assailants were Hork-Bajir Imperials.  They had a decent plan, I’ll give them that, but they still only managed to free five of their kind from captivity.  We still possess the others.>  Kyran’s posture straightened, pride coming through his tone of thought, as if he had been the one to keep the raiders from freeing any more of the prisoners.

<<They were Hork-Bajir, Lord Commander, but they were all outfitted with ARC projectors and modified ASARs.  Every captive freed was originally apprehended from the Yeerk Rebellion attack.  The captives that remain were all apprehended at other times.>>

<They hacked the central computer and knocked out power.  I will not be held accountable for Nirdran’s incompetence.  He was the one in charge of the control room.  If he’d been competent, he would’ve been able to stop the computer hack.  Without that, the Imperial raid would’ve fallen apart.  I plan on discharging the Command Warrior and am recommending full disciplinary action.>

Nirdran’s main eyes tightened at that.  A good actor, but not perfect.  <<The hack happened nearly instantaneously, Lord Commander.  They uploaded a virus with a mutable spectral wave-form.  It was incredibly precise, locking each and every door that wasn’t being used by the raiders.  They disconnected the singularity chamber immediately thereafter, and disconnected the secondary computer power supply.  The entire facility was frozen.>>

<The Imperials blundered around the facility.  They freed the human hosts, surely as a distraction, though the hosts followed them.>  Kyran’s face twisted with distaste at that.  Ah yes…the propaganda at work.  <They even went through supply rooms and the weapons labs before they found the Yeerk holding cells.  The secondary security systems helped cut them short.  They used explosives and incendiary to cover their escape.  We lost only one life.  The rest of our personnel are accounted for.>  By the time Kyran was finished with his account, he was dripping with confidence .  He thought the footing firmly beneath his hooves once again.

<<Their attacks were precise and coordinated.  They knew exactly where to cut through the floor, and every room they visited had a purpose.  They took large quantities of human supplement and Kandrona generators as well as the Yeerk mineral supplement.  They recovered all of the weapons and personal possessions confiscated from the Rebellion humans, and armed them before making egress.  They used non-lethal options on our Warriors.  And the female, Efaen, has not been found.  It is my opinion that she fled with the Rebels.>>  Nirdran was still looking at the floor, the perfect image of a chastised Warrior…the perfect image, were it not for the anger in his eyes over Kyran’s utter incompetence.

Iksilon nodded, glancing around the room once before returning his intense gaze to Kyran.  <So then…a group of Hork-Bajir armed with modified Andalite technology landed at a hangar that was supposed to be secure.  They proceeded directly to the vertical shaft leading to the service level and split off into three targeted teams two or three strong.  With obvious knowledge, foresight, and planning, they attached floor-cutters in the two exact places where they would be necessary.  They uploaded a specifically-targeted spectral virus and then cut power to the facility, locking it down.  They proceeded to free the human hosts, procure human feed supplement, kandrona generators, and Yeerk mineral supplement, not to mention only those weapons and possessions confiscated from the very humans they freed.  Then entered the Yeerk holding cells and freed only those Yeerks apprehended from the so-called Yeerk Rebellion, leaving the rest, and then escaped along with one of your personnel whom you seem to have conveniently forgotten about.  Is that about right?>

Each fact presented looked as though it wielded a physical blow to Kyran, his confidence crumbling into impotent blustering.  Of course he’d known some of the facts…he’d merely spun them to make himself look better, but he truly hadn’t seen the rest.  An idiot truly worthy of the name.

<Where is Efaen-Purinial-Serfit?>  Iksilon’s gaze remained calm, steady and intense, on Kyran’s main eyes.

Kyran’s eyes widened in true shock as he looked around, searching the room as if it would hold an answer.  <I…I do not consider her one of my personnel.  I am not responsible for her.  She probably ran off in the confusion and got herself killed.>

Iksilon remained silent, staring, for a good, long time before finally speaking again.  <Kyran-Mefil-Exton, I formally strip you of your command of the Corvus facility and advance Nirdran-Facil-Kerorat to the position of Corvus facility Commander with a promotion to the rank of Prince-Lieutenant, effective immediately.>

<WHAT?!  You can’t…YOU CAN’T DO THAT!>  Kyran leapt forward with sudden ferocity, aiming a tail-strike at Iksilon’s neck.  Iksilon flowed around Kyran’s attack, taking great satisfaction in the look of incredulity on Kyran’s face, before striking his own tail sideways in a quick swipe that lopped off half of Kyran’s tail, blade included.

The War Prince screamed with shame and anguish mere moments before two stun bolts caught him in the chest, dropping him in a crumpled, bleeding heap, his dismembered tail twitching on the floor next to him.

Nirdran looked up, dropping his chastised act completely.  He smiled briefly at seeing Kyran publicly shamed, and then met Iksilon’s calm gaze.  <<Lord Commander, I thank you for the opportunity, but I must request a transfer.  My talents would be put to better use elsewhere…>>

<<You will stay and assume command of the Corvus Facility, Lord Lieutenant.  I sense your frustrations…be assured that in the near future, your position will become critically important.  I promise that once this comes to pass, you will become a very influential Andalite.>>

Iksilon gestured at Kyran’s unconscious form, glancing at two of his personal body-guards.  <Bring him.>

He turned and started walking toward the central lift again before pausing and turning his main eyes back on the new Corvus Facility commander.  <<And Nirdran, if you ever second-guess me again…>>  Iksilon smiled darkly, and Nirdran’s eyes widened in fear with just a glimmer of understanding.  So…he’d figured it out.  A great deal of potential indeed.

The two guards he’d glanced at had stowed their weapons and morphed goralm.  They picked up Kyran’s limp form and carried it to the lift behind Iksilon and his other two body-guards.  They rode up to the second level and entered the office which used to belong to Kyran.  Nirdran would be moving in soon, but there were still a few things to resolve.  Mainly, Kyran was still alive.
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Re: The Galactic War: Rogue Element
« Reply #659 on: June 03, 2013, 01:42:16 PM »
"No, it's fine," said Keshin in a quieter, more reserved tone. "I can talk to Myitt. Even if Myitt doesn't want to talk to me." Keshin has felt a strange desire to speak to his old foe ever since he entered the ship, and this is as good an excuse as he's found. "Thank you for your information."

Keshin strides quickly through the grass, away from the distraught Efaen and toward the section of the ship where the rebel quarters are located. There was much to think about----The possibility of becoming a human nothlit free of Joanne's curse. Who he could befriend on the ship, and who he couldn't. It was mildly unsettling to Keshin that the Andalites had been more accepting than the rebellion, but only due to lingering racial sentiment---he hadn't tried to kill them quite as often. The disorientation of being in a new place was starting to fade, but his health was little better. Keshin briefly put an arm against the wall, resting, and then proceeded down the hall.