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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2925 on: January 03, 2014, 02:42:25 AM »
Argh, hate it when I miss the edited post. But what a finale.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2926 on: January 03, 2014, 06:43:32 AM »
There is still one more chapter left, Saffa. But yes, it is winding down. The next book will focus primarily on Aquilai, I believe.

Anyway, this closing chapter probably will be short.

CHAPTER TWENTY:
Old Wounds and Acceptance

It was going to be a long trip home. They sat mostly in silence, but about halfway through, Estelore parted with them. She wouldn't say why, but it was apparently to clean up more of Fred's messes. Such a burden to bear . . .

Cloak couldn't help but dwell on the images that Spork showed with his mind mist. Just because he accepted the fact that the events happened, does not mean the wounds had healed. That would take time, a considerable amount of time, before it happened. If it ever did -- some wounds never quite heal completely. One thing's certain, he will never trust mother so explicitly again. Never again.

It is complicated also by the abject knowledge that his mother, Ursa, was not sorry for what she done. She was not remorseful or regretful for her actions, instead goes to lengths to justify them, coming up with some certainly laughable scenarios.* In grander scheme of things, it is not just sad, but really pathetic. Cloak wasn't feeling so much pain from this relationship as much as he was feeling extreme pity for her.

How can you honestly go through life blaming your faults on others? Refusing to believe in your kwn fallibility? Only fools seek absolute perfection, as anyone with a well-organized mind knows perfection is an impossible goal, and can only be achieved in one's mind by ignoring or denying the imperfections, the things that don't mesh with the falsified version of reality.

Cloak sighed quietly. His mother needed help of the psychiatric kind, but he knew that she was too proud, too arrogant, too narcissistic to get it. This actually filled him with a sense of sorrow. No matter how you sliced it, the fact remained. She was still his mother. Nothing could change that, and nothing ever will.

"Cloak," Saffa asked gentlely, looking at him, "are you okay?"

Was he? Was he really okay? After everything he had been forced to endure?

The answer surprised him a little.

"Amazingly," he began, albeit heavily, "yes."

"You sure?" Gaz asked.

"Yes," Cloak said. "Yes, I am. It's true it wasn't an idyllic past, an ideal childhood. But it wasn't all bad . . . fishing with my grandfather . . . learning the elements from him . . . Shadow . . . Faith . . . no, it wasn't all bad."

With that, silence once more eclipsed the cabin.of the ship, as they sped off to RAF.

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*Referencing the fact that she told my youngest maternal aunt that the aunt who rescued me (the penultimate eldest, with my mother as the eldest sister) had "kidnapped" me from a halfway house. ::) Not a word was true, of course.
« Last Edit: January 03, 2014, 08:29:25 AM by CloakedFigure »


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
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« Reply #2927 on: January 03, 2014, 10:55:19 PM »
Okay, apparently the last chapter fell victim to the "modified post syndrome", that is to say that it is still hidden from those that don't look at my sig. ;)

But let's start this book, now shall we?

BOOK LIV:
BEYOND THE VEILS

CHAPTER ONE:
Menial Maintenance

It was a brillant, if blustery, day. Most RAFians, unable to take advantage of the sunny day due the chilling wind gusts, took to indoor pursuits. Gaz with her Recaps, others with their RPs, and such. Only Az and Horse seemed to enjoy the weather, their cryokinesis imparting a higher cold tolerance than the others.

Cloak and Aquilai were deep in the bowels of the forum. They were updating the species database, expanding it it to include every species that the RAFians had ever encountered. Thus far, it just basically included species with RAFian members, with just a smattering of non-RAFian species.

"Present Mark for scanning," said a cool female voice.

They complied with this. Cloak cracked his knuckles and the two set to work.

Cloak was beginning to write an entry for the Czarnians -- a humanoid species with human-like hair and chalk-white skin. Save for one or two, they were fundamentally extinct. It was a species that Cloak had just the briefest of encounter with one of the last surviving Czarnians. He wasn't sure if it was in this realm, though. He was reconsidering this entry.

"Czarians? Never heard of them." Aquilai commented, conversationally.

And that was all Cloak needed to  confirm his assumption that they must not exist in this realm. So, they continued on, cataloguing the various species, until they got to the "V"s. Specifically, then entry on the Veils, a reptilian species apparently able body hop into other species. There was a picture, a portrait, of the creature accompanying the file.

Cloak glanced at Aquilai's face, and was surprised to see an uncharacteristic look of rage and hatred on his face. He was glaring at the portrait of a Veil . . . it didn't take a genius to understand why. Aquilai clearly had an experience, an encounter, with one of these Veils. It was obviously an unpleasant one.

Cloak approached the precipice of asking what happened, but bit it back, thinking it to be too personal, too impertinent, a question. If Aquilai chose to disclose the events, then fine. If not . . . well, it's his story to tell as he will. But he had to say something to break Aquilai out of this emotionally-triggered state.

"Uh," Cloak said, in his brilliant opening statement, "need a break, Aquilai?"
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Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2928 on: January 03, 2014, 11:30:50 PM »
Body-hoppers. Brilliant.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2929 on: January 04, 2014, 10:13:56 AM »
. . . No PDF? It's okay, I don't want to sound as if I'm pressuring you, Saffa. I assume it has something to do with school getting back underway.

Another chapter will be along shortly. God, I am glad I discovered how to turn off autocorrect.

CHAPTER TWO:
The Hideaway and the Fugitives

In some rundown, dilapidated part of the city, two figures streaked by. By the looks of them, they were street people. Upon closer examination, they were a man and a young boy no younger than five. The man had the build of Dom DeLuise in his later years, with wild ginger hair sprouting from nearly every inch of shown ski and rather basic, if threadbare, clothing of subdued blues and whites. The boy had dark hair and clothes that looked too baggy on him, with an overlarge orange hat.

"Hurry! Hurry up now, Gynecovyx!" the man snarled at the boy, so that his leonine likeness was more pronunced. "We need to get to a safe place."

"You worry too much, Androvex." the boy said. His voice had a little whine to it, and he seemed to notice. "Ugh, why did I have to get this whiny brat?"

"You were the one that wanted to wear it." Androvex countered. "And I'm right to worry! This is Earth, fool -- this should be good enough. Let's ditch the --"

A bipedal, tailless, reptilian humanoid stepped from the man, who collapsed into an unconscious heap. The possessing creature possessed sharp teeth, scaly skin and somewhat ridged head. A a long pinkish tongue snaked from the creature's mouth and flailed a bit before withdrawing.

"-- the dead weight." Androvex said, as if there was no interruption of dispossessing the homeless man.

"Finally," Gynecovyx exclaimed in the boy's whiny voice. Unlike the man, the boy let a grunt escape as the Veil dispossessed him. Only this one was clearly a female, and slightly younger than Androvex. "That was one whiny brat. I'm glad I gave him blistered feet."

"Gynecovyx," Androvex said, as the two slinked away into the darkness. Their former hosts were beginning to stir. "You know we have to be more careful with who we inhabit. We can't just jump into these humans indiscriminately. We cannot afford to attract unwanted attention, and we cannot afford to be outside a body, because that bounty hunter."

"Oh, he'll never think to look on us on Earth." Gynecovyx said.

"Don't get complacent!" Androvex scolded. "The Czarnian isn't the only concern! He is here. And he has powerful allies, if the stories are true."

They strayed into an ally, and saw two teens loitering, drinking beer and whatever illict goings-on. Androvex turned to Gynecovyx and said, quietly, "Now, choose wisely, because we'll have to wear them for a while."
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Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
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RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2930 on: January 04, 2014, 11:11:06 AM »
Yes, autocorrect is a pain, Cloak. I wasn't actually able to get on my laptop today, as I was out the whole day. But I'll make the PDF a little later and attach it tomorrow. :)

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2931 on: January 04, 2014, 11:20:41 AM »
Ah. The next chapter will be in my previous post. Working on it now.

:edit: Time for a new chapter I think.


CHAPTER THREE:
Past Qualms and Strange Sensations

Meanwhile, back at RAF, life went on at its usual zany, crazy way and its usual pace. Some RAFians gathered under the trees with agood book to read. Cloak sat upon a tree stump, and was meditating. He was having a hard time at it though.

He snapped his eyes open irritably, as he looked to his right. No one was there. He heard the laughing, as the younger RAFians frolicked in the lake, but that didn't bother him. It was the insistent poking on his right shoulder that was bothering him. But there was no source of it . . . It couldn't be from some one invisible, as virtually nothing, if anything, was invisibe to him. Earthsight would have alerted him if any one who traveled upon the ground was doing it. That, added to his acute hearing and sense of smell, made incredibly difficult to sneak up on him.

"D'ah!!" Cloak growled, as he recieved two more pokes. It was like ten pokes now. "Stop it!"

***

In a dark ally, two boys stopped in front and were talking loudly. They were painfully oblivious to the potential for danger the ally presented. One had dark hair and the other was platinum blonde. The dark-haired one was arguing for the two to cut through the ally on their way home.

"Chaz," the plantinum blonde said. "You know our parents don't want us to cut through there. You know this city has an attraction for monsters."

"There hasn't been a monster attack in forever, Ian." Chaz said. "C'mon, it'll cut off --"

The streetlights cut on.

"We're late as is. We need to get home fast. You worry too --AAAH!!"

He screamed as he was roughly grabbed by something. Something hiding, lurking, in the shadows.

"Cha -- AAAH!!" he started, as he was grabbed by a second creature. Their bikes clattered to the ground.

Seconds passed. Then footsteps were heard and the two boys stepped into the light. A pinkish tongue withdrawing back into their mouths. They picked up their bikes, as Ian said, "As I was saying before this opportunity presented itself, I didn't know those two teens were overdosing, Gynecovyx."

"And, as I told you, Androvex," Chaz said, with a slight effeminate edge, "there is no way that the Czarian will track us here. Especially now, as we have the best disguises. At least, this boy isn't as whiny as the first one."

"Remember to keep up the act, though, Ian. We need to remain undercover, and not garner attention." Androvex intoned cautiously.

***

Aquilai was working on his TARDIS, but he was doing it on automatic. He wasn't readly thinking about the repairs. He was remembering the Veils. He scowled at the thought. He remembered his old companion, before he came to RAF. Back when he was a waterbender.

He delighted in showing him the exciting things the universe had to offer. She was estatic, and a very good student. But, in reality, she was more than just a mere companion. Much more.

Suddenly, Aquilai recieved an alert on some strange tracking device. He was surprised, sure of a mistake. They surely wouldn't be foolish to come here, to his adopted home. It was a well-known fact. What could made them think that they could come here and leave unscathed? Especially after they killed . . .

"Androvex . . . Gynecovyx . . ." he muttered savagely, "I will make you sorry for killing her. . . ."
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Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
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RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2932 on: January 05, 2014, 12:48:38 AM »
This felt like a TV show episode with how you described the events.
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« Reply #2933 on: January 05, 2014, 01:23:04 AM »
I've always felt Memoirs would make a brilliant TV series. At least I have my head to play it out. ;)

As promised, here's the PDF of the last book. :)

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« Reply #2934 on: January 05, 2014, 02:55:11 AM »
Wow. After I read this book, I'll be all caught up!! I actually ran out of things to do at my dad's house (which doesn't have wifi) because I caught up. Haha.... Yay! So many things in these makes so much more sense now!! (I hope that makes sense. :XD:)
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2935 on: January 05, 2014, 11:06:19 AM »
Um . . . suuuuure, Abby, if you say so. ;)

Anyway, I discovered that I mispelled Czarnian, so I went back an fixed it. And here is a potentially short chapter.

CHAPTER FOUR:
Czarnian Cometh

Cloak was relieved when the irritating poking had ended. He did not know what caused it, but would not allow it to cause him discomfort. It was probably nothing. What did cause him concern, was Aquilai's rather erratic, uncharacteristic behavior. He was alll broody and reclusive. Clearly something has happened, something that he doesn't want to talk about.

Cloak actually could understand that mentality. During his transition from being his mother's involuntary servant to being a full-time resident of RAF, he was behaving similarly. He would haunch his shoulders, looking down, and basically looking like the most defeated being in existence. But Cloak could tell that it wasn't defeat Aquilai was feeling, he could recognize the cues of unbridled rage, having experienced it himself.

Cloak worried and fretted about his friend. He knew what such a path of rage and hatred could lead, as it was very nearly a road he took. And such a road is filled with nothing but darkness, darkness and pain.

***

High above the Earth, what can only be described as a Czarnian biker. He wore inky black leather clothing, a bushy mane of black hair, and black markings around his sunken eyes that blended into the blackness of the vast expanse of space, which accented well with his chalk white skin. He was astride a space-flight capable bike with propulsion components of wheels. He also had a pair of sunglasses in his pocket.

In his left hand, which wore a fingerless leather glove, he held a unusually high-tech device that clashed horribly with the whole style and motif he had going on. He studied the screen, looking rather bored. Maybe the lead was wrong, as the scanner wasn't detecting the energy that was unleashed when the Veils took and left a body. Most beings couldn't notice the minute energy given off, but it was there.

Suddenly, an orange dot appeared on the scanner, then blipped out of existence. Then it appeared again and then vanished again. The Czarnian smirked an intimidating sneer. They were here. They were here on this backwater planet, and they weren't being very careful.

***

"Gynecovyx! What did I tell you?!" Androvex said, still occupying Chaz's body.

He was addressing Ian's older, teenagd sister. Ian was unconscious in his bed, and they moved the argument to room next door, belonging to his sister, Valerie. Androvex was clearly livid, and Gynecovyx was churlish, but defiant.

"I was tired of always have a male host." she said, mulishly.

"I told you that we are in hiding, fool!" Androvex snarled. "You realize that the Czarnian can track it when we take and release bodies? No. No, of course not."

"Stop speaking to me as if I'm child!"

"Then stop being as reckless as one!" Androvex countered. "We have to run away now, thanks to your impetuousness."

After a beat passed, Androvex snarled, "What do you think you're doing?! Didn't it just tell you that he could track us if we release bodies?"

"But then how --"

"We'll go on the lam inside these ones," Androvex snarled. "We could have lived here comfortably until the bounty on us expired. But, due to your recklessness, we have to go now. Inside these pathetic creatures."

He sighed heavily.

"This exactly why Earth is so dangerous for us, Gynecovex." he said, his tone more subdued now. "We killed that girl, remember."

"I didn't know that it was his girlfriend, I was just having fun." Gynecovyx protested.

"And your hedonistic urges landed us in this predicament!" he snarled. "Now, hurry up and pack. We gotta get going. This time use your head. Or Valerie's, as she has better judgment apparently."


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2936 on: January 05, 2014, 11:59:34 AM »
Aquilai is giving me the feels.

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« Reply #2937 on: January 05, 2014, 02:30:44 PM »
Um . . .  Is that new phrase amongst the kids now, Saffa? I'm not quite sure what it means.

CHPATER FIVE:
City-Wide Alert

"Alert. Alert. Alert. . . ." came the cool female voice over the intercom.

"Hell's bells," Demos was heard to moan, "what now?"

"Uh, apparently there a hubbub in the city," Saffa said.

"Uh, what is that?" Abby asked, peering at the screen with squinted eyes. "I haven't seen that species before."

Several RAFian glanced at Demos, and he responded, "Hey, not one of mine."

"Of course not," Cloak said dismissively. "He is a Czarnian."

"A what?" Dino asked.

"A virtually extinct species," Cloak explained, "so rare that I thought they were extinct in this realm."

The video captured showed this Czarnian grabbing up humans, which he stood out easily against. He appeared to be scanning them, then dropping them roughly when the scanner didn't detect anything. Yarin noticed this.

"Look at the device he holds in his hand," the Nyac pointed out. "He's looking for something."

"Then it's time for us to be proactive," Cloak said, "those people are depending on his us to come to their rescue, and that Czarnian is behaving atypically from an ordinary Czarnian. He could harm them."

He looked at the mods, Richard in particular, and continued, "With deference to the mods, I'm going.down there to see what he wants."

"I agree," Richard said, "but take a team with you."

Cloak nodded, "Saffa. Underseen. Dino. Aqu--"

But Aquilai hadn't come to see what was going on. Cloak fretted what he was up to, but there wasn't time to linger on that.

"Az. Come, let's get going."

***

Androvex, still occupying Chaz, and Gynecovyx, still inhabiting Valerie, were in Valerie's car. They were listening to Valerie's presets on the radio.

"Can't believe she likes this noise," Gynecovyx said, which was a bit odd hearing Valerie criticize her own presets.

"Wait, go back." Androvex said.

She turned back to the news station which described the hysteria that the Czarnian's arrival and manhandling caused. Androvex glared up at Valerie with Chaz's eyes.

"What?"

"That was the Czarnian, Gynecovyx!" he snarled. "Releasing Ian and taking Valerie must have attracted him here. I told you that this could happen! I told you we should have been cautious. But no. No, you allow your baser, hedonistic instincts to get ther better of you."

Gynecovyx took her eyes off the road and said, sternly, "You don't have to rub it in!"

"WATCH THE ROAD!"


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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« Reply #2938 on: January 05, 2014, 10:18:56 PM »
Yeah, it generally means sad emotions.

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« Reply #2939 on: January 05, 2014, 11:01:47 PM »
Well, as you can tell if you look to the left there, I came up with a new book idea.

  • Book CCXXXI: "The Chimeras" -- The RAFians must stop chimeras from sucking the life from the populace.

Yeah, I know that it is similar to the Mutates books in the series, but -- and trust me on this -- they are not alike.

CHAPTER SIX:
Confrontation and Desperation

"Czarnian," Cloak shouted, a tiger roar intermingling with his voice. It silenced the crowd a little . . . nont that there were many people remaining there. The Czarnian looked up at Cloak, at being addressed as such. "Czarnian, desist disturbing the peace."

"Being a little formal, Cloak," Saffa said, in aside.

"You're not speaking to the Main Man like that," the Czarnian said in a voice very much like Brad Garrett's dulcet tones.

Cloak raised an eyebrow, as he ****ed his head slightly to the side and folded his arms. "But you're not Lobo."

"Who the frag is Lobo? I'm Bolo." the Czarnian said, in a rather, um, earthy way.

"Greaaaat," Dino said, rolling her eyes. Cloak did not know that she could do that. "We have a perp named after a tie."

"The Main Man doesn't doesn't like that tone." Bolo said, trying to get into Dino's face -- not easy, considering how she towered over him in her true height. He clearly wasn't easily intimidated. Or just lacking common sense, Cloak couldn't tell.

"Oh, don't make me eat you." Dino snipped.

"Oh, stop this ridiculous behavior." Cloak said. He was starting to get annoyed. "What the Veil are you doing here?"

"Exactly," he said. "You know 'em?"

Now Cloak was perplexed as well as annoyed. "You're not making any sense, Bolo."

"They're my bounty, and I've come to collect 'em." he said. "I've got dibs, so don't get in my way."

"You have no idea who you're dealing with, Czarnian." Cloak threathened, not liking the way the Czarnian was taking him lightly. He had his pride, after all.

"The frag I don't," he said, tossing his device rather more carelessly than warranted. "I can track the energy that they give off when they possess people."

Suddenly, Cloak realized what he was talking about. But judging by the looks the others had, they hadn't connected the dots. But they hadn't updated the species database like he and Aquilai did. But there was still the issue at hand.

"We can't let you manhandle the denizens of this planet for your bounty."

"You wanna fight about it?"

"You honestly have taken leave of your senses." Cloak said.

"Who said he had any to begin with?" Az said.

***

Valerie's car had a headlong collison with another driven my middle-aged housewives -- whether they were desperate or not was unable to be determined. Valerie and Chaz were very near death, but Androvex and Gynecovyx abandoned their bodies, being completely unharmed themselves, leaving the two for dead. They took the housewives, with Androvex being the driver.

"You're never driving again." Androvex said, thoroughly distempered.


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.