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« Reply #2130 on: June 08, 2013, 01:20:55 AM »
Are we having a sudden alien invasion?
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« Reply #2131 on: June 08, 2013, 01:29:05 AM »
Well, we've always wanted to believe, haven't we? ;)

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« Reply #2132 on: June 08, 2013, 01:49:51 AM »
Yes, very true.
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2133 on: June 08, 2013, 08:31:39 AM »
>:(>:(>:(

Sorry, no chapters today! I wrote a nice long one, then my damn internet ****S UP. And I lost it all.


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« Reply #2134 on: June 08, 2013, 08:48:28 AM »
I hate it when that happens. Good luck getting it sorted out. We'll be here.

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« Reply #2135 on: June 08, 2013, 12:29:04 PM »
I'm sorry Cloak. Good luck with your stupid Internet.
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2136 on: June 08, 2013, 08:58:07 PM »
Well, gonna give this another try. If this chapter's brief -- well, you'll know why. It won't be as good as the first one, I'm afraid.

CHAPTER THIRTEEN:
The Interrogation

The six RAFians were in a control center type of place -- location classified -- with a cranky General D. Day and the motley assortment of scientists and technicians. The teen was bare-chested, restrained and facedown, sedated heavily. The boy's parents were informed, and, while welcomed to attend, advised not to. This wasn't the kind of experience that any parent -- a decent one, anyway -- would enjoy. It would very likely reduce them to paroxysms of grief and emotional pain.

Cloak understood the rationale of that. He didn't, however, really understand this. He had told them everything he knew. Cloak had a sneaking suspicion though, that the hard-nosed General did not believe him, something that rankled the Realm Walker.

"Wake him up," the General commanded, his voice having a somewhat imperious lilt to it.

The teen pop star lookalike awoke rather jerkily. Cloak seemed the only one to notice the ever-so-slight movements of the Heinlin's proboscis. Then again, he had feline eyes, and feline eyes are atuned to movements.

"What are you?" the general asked haughtily.

"We are you," the teen replied with a sickening smile. But it was clear that he wasn't anything but puppet with strings being pulled.

"I told him what they are," Cloak sighed. "Asexual-reproducing exoparasites with total and complete control over their host species and limited telepathic contact with each other via fiber optic-like minitentacles, as well as all functioning as a part of a superorganism."

"How many are you?" the general asked, not having heard the disgruntled Realm Walker.

"One," came the controlled teen's reply.

General motioned to one of the technicians, and a shock was delivered to the Heinlin. This caused the parasite to seize up momentarily and return control to the teen, who cries out, "Oh, God!"

Then, with a sickly, sticky sound that only seemed to be heard clearly by Cloak, the Heinlin reasserted its mental dominance over the boy.

"That hurt."

"Good," the General said more smugly than was warranted. "That's the general idea. Tell us what we want to know and we won't do it again. Now, how many are you?!"

"One," he replied again.

The General indicated that the technician give him another zetz. It squealed with pain.

"Why does it keep saying that?" Sam asked. "There's obviously more than one."

"Think ants, Sam," Cloak answered. "Or termites. In any case, the General is gonna get that boy killed. The Heinlin is in enough control to stop the poor boy's heart at will."

"R-really?" Underseen asked.

"I've seen it very nearly happen . . . last time. In a different Realm. . . ."
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2137 on: June 08, 2013, 10:30:10 PM »
Okay, I am currently planning out the chapters for "A Fractured Mind", and I'm very nearly through.

CHAPTER FOURTEEN:
A Meeting of Top Minds

After the interrogation, where the Heinlin was killed and very nearly took the teen down with him. It would have succeed had Cloak not flagrantly ignored the General orders and intervened.

"I told you civilians to stay back," he growled.

"One, you don't give us orders. Two, we don't have to follow your orders or even be required to respect you." Cloak snarled back. "Three, you're really willing to sacrifice the life of an innocent boy?"

"The loss of one pales in comparison of the many!"

"Oh, I'm sure his parent would be real understanding of that line of thinking, of that purely militarily-minded logic."

"I'm a soldier, and --"

"And he is not!" Cloak said, as the technicians were preping the dead Heinlin for dissection -- clearly disregarding all the information Cloak's already put forth. "Why should he be sacrificed for your ambitions?"

"I'm doing my duty and protecting my country."

"Cut the crap, you don't fool me." Cloak replied coldly, easily able to discern the minor deception in such a statement. "You're really hoping for a Medal of Honor or some other pointless accolade."

General D. Day had nothing to say to this, because there was some truth to it, from a very selfish part of him.

"I thought so," Cloak commented acidly, as the teen was taken to the infirmary. His tone remained icy, as he said,  "It's easy to discount someone if they're not someone you know personally, isn't it? But just imagine Day, if that was your son upon that table. Or your brother. You may be a soldier, but it's made youe heart hard . . . or nonexistent, for that matter. . . ."

Feeling that he'd made his point quite clear, Cloak turned his back and walked away.

***

All six of the RAFians attended a meeting with the military and Prez. General D. Day rose concerns about their clearance, and the President said they were cleared, and Cloak added that the six of them had far more experience with this sort of thing than he did with 26 years of service. He bridled at this, thinking it presumption instead of cold, hard fact.

Soon, the meeting was underway, and Cloak was starting to become really, truly irritated. They were simply rehashing everything that he told them in the first place, and presenting it as their own findings! But Cloak, though he did not know how, held his tongue, though it was apparent that he was getting incensed.


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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2138 on: June 08, 2013, 11:40:50 PM »
At least the POTUS isn't a jerk to us.
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2139 on: June 09, 2013, 02:23:40 AM »
Well, he's theoretically the highest authority, so I guess it's his subordinates who have to do the bristling and the whole state-secret-so-keep-away thing to keep him clueless. Hell, I'm pretty sure there are government organisations who know far more than the President does.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2140 on: June 09, 2013, 06:06:18 AM »
True, in a way, Saffa. That and no government, no matter how big and "almighty" as they think themselves to be, is immune from corruption and incompetence. And those that think that there is are fools.

CHAPTER FIFTEEN:
The Military Strike

"I've organized a surgical strike to the area we believe the hive to be," another general, a benign one by the name of General Gulliver Imperio, said.

At this, Cloak facepalmed. "You sent more people down there? General, have you not paid attention to any we told you?"

By the way the General's face grew taut, he didn't like people questioning his decisions. Cloak didn't care. It needed to be said.

"Why are you guys so impulsive?" Cloak asked, genuinely asked. "Why do you think that acting without fully considering consequences is acceptable? You just sent the Heinlins more bodies. You're own inability to foresee this risk has just bolstered the ranks of the enemy! In addition, providing them crucial intel!"

"You go too far, alien!" General D. Day snarled.

So there it was. All out in the open now. General Day was a closeted xenophobe.

"I have a name, General," Cloak said, his voice even. He was attempted to accuse him of being a Knight of Humanity -- which was essentially a xenophobic terrorist cell now. But now wasn't the time. "And I'm not the one who chooses to disregard lives as pawns."

"Cloak is right," Parker said, standing, "this isn't a chess game, people. We're dealing with real people with real lives. You can't just disregard them at your earliest convenience."

The other four RAFians stood beside their fellows, They needn't have said anymore. Then they got some u expected support.

"They're right, Daryl," said General Mills. "We're being too detatched. Our actions, our decisions, affect more than ourselves. This isn't a country without her people. Disregarding life doesn't make us strong -- it makes us dictators, tyrants."

***

The military unit stormed quietly into the city which was disturbingly quiet. Clearly the roadblocks and quarantine organized by the local police failed spectacularly. Clearly, they were taken.

Still, the unit approached with a dull roar. It looked like the city was completely deserted.

"No way . . ." a PFC mutered without thinking.

Before them was a wall of children. Or, at least, they used to be children. Before they were ridden, before they became puppets ridden by their puppeteers.

"Wh-what do we do now, sir?" another private asked, clearly not wanting to hurt children.


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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2141 on: June 09, 2013, 10:39:56 AM »
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2142 on: June 09, 2013, 12:46:36 PM »
Right. And it's not gonna get any better.

A brief (possibly) chapter.

CHAPTER SIXTEEN:
I ALREADY TOLD YOU THIS!!

The RAFians were feeling rather disgruntled as facts that Cloak already presented the group as a whole were re-presented as new facts. Cloak's tolerance of this was being stretched incredibly thin. He was being pushed to the breaking point.

He was also getting antsy. While they sat here while the military validated Cloak's claims more and more people found their freedoms, and their very bodies, wrested from them. It was the bureaucracy and the majority of the General's mistrust at fault here, but Cloak couldn't help but feel like a caged animal. He did not how much the bureaucracy slowed things down. At this pace, they'd be ablento make a move in a month -- and, by then, it'd be far too late. The Earth would be overran with Heinlins. His adopted home destroyed.

The only free humans would be RAFian humans, though they were the most numerous RAFian species, if Cloak was not mistaken, but if all the other species were added together, they made a relatively small number of RAFians. They'd be the remnant of a conquered species. Eventually, the Heinlins would become to numerous here and the numbers of the hostless would outnumber the amount of the hostless, and they'd take off to find another suitable host for there species, while keeping enough here to subjegate Homo sapiens, taking hosts at three or four years, when they are large enough to support these perverse puppetmasters.

Only the RAFians would remain, bearing witness to this, burdened with the awful knowledge that they did nothing to prevent this, to stem or stop the Heinlins' rise to dominance. . . .

Cloak had had enough, "I ALREADY TOLD YOU SIMPLETONS THIS HOURS AGO!!!" Cloak roared, a tiger's roar intermingling with his words. "Stop presenting it as new intel. It is what I told you. A smart idea would have been to listen to the guy who TANGOED WITH THESE THINGS BEFORE!! But no . . . no, you insist upon wasting time with pointless dissections and verifying facts thatnare obvious and evident."

Cloak glared at all except General Mills, who had the right idea from the start. But, with a lot of the generals being misogynist creeps, she was ignored.

"But, no," he said, his voice quavering with emotion. It was through sheer force of will that his powers did not go out of control. "No, you're content to sit back and turn to conventional means to squash this threat. Instead of listening to the people with experience in this area of aliens and the supernatural, you decide to deride and criticize us. Instead of being the people of action that you claim, you're content to sit back and feel your backsides grow."

He was interrupted when the generals received a report that they lost contact with the contigent of soldiers sent to secure the city. All contact.

Parker stood by Cloak, saying, "Congratulations, gentlemen. You've lost more people not only their freedom, but their bodies."

"But you don't care, do you?" Helen accused with narrowed eyes. "You're nice and safe in your hidey-hole."

"Forget it, guys," Sam said. "They're doing more damage than help."

"C'mon, then, guys," said Cloak, sweeping from the room, "if they aren't going to stop this menace, someone's got to."

"Stop! I order you to stop!" General Day commanded with ringing tones, bloated on his own power. "You don't have any right to speak to us like --"

But the RAFians did not acquiesce, and kept on walking.


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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2143 on: June 09, 2013, 02:26:03 PM »
The military is painfully annoying towards us.
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2144 on: June 09, 2013, 03:38:49 PM »
Well, I'm not saying there aren't some good eggs amongst the bad, but when you get overconfident into your capabilities, lax in your good sense, allow yoour power to go to your head and become carelessly reckless -- you'll get your butt handed to you. I know all generals aren't like this -- I wager some are downright likeable -- but sometimes the whole "America's-the-absolute-best-at-anything-we-do,-thereby-we're-better-than-everyone" line of thinking (quite prevalent during George W. Bush's presidency, I've noticed) irks me to no end, as well as being an statistical improbability -- no one and nothing is perfect. That's where I stand on it. But, I digress.

Anyway, let's not get too political (granted this book got a little more political than I originally planned :facepalm:), and get to the next chapter, if I can. Thunderstorm, you know.

CHAPTER SEVENTEEN:
The Heinlin Hive

The six reported back to RAF, and briefed everyone. Asmo immediately declared the generals' behavior has shameful and embarrassing.

"Yarin, Goom, and Aquilai," Cloak said, glancing at Richard, who gestured him to get on with it. "We need you to devise some sort of encephalitis bombs."

"But we'd need a sample, a culture of it," Aquilai pointed out, feeling that this was an essential necessity. "We can't just conjure up --"

"We procured a sample from the lab," Underseen said. But he did not elaborate further, but handed it off as the three went to work.

"And the rest of us?" Abby asked, clearly eager to do something about this infestation.

"We must find out the location of their hive," Cloak said promptly.

"Hive?" Saffa inquired.

"Just like Yeerk congregate around their Pools," Cloak said, "Heinlin's have hives. They have, essentially a hive mind, remember?"

"Oh, right."

"Do we have idea where to start?" Richard asked.

"If I could hazard a guess," Phoenix said, rubbing his pensively, "I would suppose it would be near a source of water. They might not need it, but humans most certainly do."

"It's a starting point, anyway." Richard shrugged.

"And I think that only Parker and myself should go in, once we do." Cloak said.

"What? Why?" Helen said at once.

"Because this mission will call for stealth, so a small team is best." Cloak replied without batting an eye. "Parker is possibly the RAFian most experienced with explosives."

<But if you're caught,> Noelle pointed out, <if you're found out -->

"Then we would have to be careful." Cloak said.

But Parker was listening to Tyr, who was appraising Parker over a feature that the Walker tech apparently afforded him, a War modification that lingered.

"Apparently, I can block their telepathic signals -- they won't be able to detect us, provided we're not seen." Parker said.

Cloak seemed to know that this was a leftover War modification, as he was the one who gave Parker the Realm Walker tech that allowed him access to the Ride Armors.

"Now that that's out of the way," Cloak said, snapping his gaze from Parker to the room at large. "let's get a move on. Time is against us."


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Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
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RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.